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#Post#: 265556--------------------------------------------------
Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: LabPartner Date: July 28, 2024, 1:03 pm
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Here's the current poem:
[quote]A Sonnet
[member=17]AbidingDudev4.1[/member]
So we come to the end of the weekend
And it's only dear Hax and old Amy
The manners kids are not here to offend
And no managers to go all a blame-y
Feel free to go off in any old way
But don't wake the mods til noon
We'll all cheer on whatever you say
Be it on tulips or Wordle or Dune
Be it politics COVID or bees making honey
Or mojo requests for friends and their floofs
We'll all agree to take the billionaire's money
And make all sorts of puns and goofs
So pull up a chair and let it all out
It's Sunday here, you can even shout.[/quote]
The line that [member=5]muskrat[/member] demands should be
changed is bolded.
The potential replacements as suggested by
[member=17]AbidingDudev4.1[/member]
" There's only dear Hax and the new guy
....
And no manager tales to laugh or cry"
Dude's lament:
I am going to miss all a-blamey
The suggestions of [member=134]VanGoghSunflowers[/member]
"There's only Hax and the new Amy" or "there's only Hax and Mr.
Not-Amy" would let us keep all a-blamey...
[font=arial black]Let the crowdsourcing begin.[/font]
#Post#: 265581--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: muskrat Date: July 28, 2024, 5:11 pm
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[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265556#msg265556
date=1722189833]
Here's the current poem:
[quote]A Sonnet
[member=17]AbidingDudev4.1[/member]
So we come to the end of the weekend
And it's only dear Hax and old Amy
The manners kids are not here to offend
And no managers to go all a blame-y
Feel free to go off in any old way
But don't wake the mods til noon
We'll all cheer on whatever you say
Be it on tulips or Wordle or Dune
Be it politics COVID or bees making honey
Or mojo requests for friends and their floofs
We'll all agree to take the billionaire's money
And make all sorts of puns and goofs
So pull up a chair and let it all out
It's Sunday here, you can even shout.[/quote]
The line that [member=5]muskrat[/member] demands should be
changed is bolded.
The potential replacements as suggested by
[member=17]AbidingDudev4.1[/member]
" There's only dear Hax and the new guy
....
And no manager tales to laugh or cry"
Dude's lament:
I am going to miss all a-blamey
The suggestions of [member=134]VanGoghSunflowers[/member]
"There's only Hax and the new Amy" or "there's only Hax and Mr.
Not-Amy" would let us keep all a-blamey...
[font=arial black]Let the crowdsourcing begin.[/font]
[/quote]
i知 hereby promoting you to editor-in-chief.
carry on.
#Post#: 265593--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: LabPartner Date: July 28, 2024, 9:03 pm
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[quote author=muskrat link=topic=2910.msg265581#msg265581
date=1722204711]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265556#msg265556
date=1722189833]
[/quote]
i知 hereby promoting you to editor-in-chief.
carry on.
[/quote]
Ain't my poem, so I ain't changing it. It's like telling someone
to magic marker a mustache on the Mona Lisa.
#Post#: 265595--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: AbidingDudev4.1 Date: July 28, 2024, 9:23 pm
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[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265593#msg265593
date=1722218625]
[quote author=muskrat link=topic=2910.msg265581#msg265581
date=1722204711]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265556#msg265556
date=1722189833]
[/quote]
i知 hereby promoting you to editor-in-chief.
carry on.
[/quote]
Ain't my poem, so I ain't changing it. It's like telling someone
to magic marker a mustache on the Mona Lisa.
[/quote]
It's more like dogs playing poker.
Go ahead and put a pug in it or 4 great danes.
#Post#: 265596--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: acl-ny Date: July 28, 2024, 9:34 pm
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So we come to the end of the weekend
It痴 Hax and the new guy, who痴 not lame-y
The manners kids are not here to offend
And no managers to go all a blame-y
#Post#: 265647--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: animaniactoo Date: July 29, 2024, 9:57 am
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[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265593#msg265593
date=1722218625]
[quote author=muskrat link=topic=2910.msg265581#msg265581
date=1722204711]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265556#msg265556
date=1722189833]
[/quote]
i知 hereby promoting you to editor-in-chief.
carry on.
[/quote]
Ain't my poem, so I ain't changing it. It's like telling someone
to magic marker a mustache on the Mona Lisa.
[/quote]
When you're given permission by the creator of the work to alter
their masterpiece, this excuse no longer holds up.
#Post#: 265691--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: LabPartner Date: July 29, 2024, 12:38 pm
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[quote author=animaniactoo link=topic=2910.msg265647#msg265647
date=1722265068]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265593#msg265593
date=1722218625]
[quote author=muskrat link=topic=2910.msg265581#msg265581
date=1722204711]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265556#msg265556
date=1722189833]
[/quote]
i知 hereby promoting you to editor-in-chief.
carry on.
[/quote]
Ain't my poem, so I ain't changing it. It's like telling someone
to magic marker a mustache on the Mona Lisa.
[/quote]
When you're given permission by the creator of the work to alter
their masterpiece, this excuse no longer holds up.
[/quote]
Well, he gave permission after I denied responsibility. So I
win.
#Post#: 265870--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crowdsourcing Dude's Sonnet
By: animaniactoo Date: July 30, 2024, 9:37 am
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[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265691#msg265691
date=1722274735]
[quote author=animaniactoo link=topic=2910.msg265647#msg265647
date=1722265068]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265593#msg265593
date=1722218625]
[quote author=muskrat link=topic=2910.msg265581#msg265581
date=1722204711]
[quote author=LabPartner link=topic=2910.msg265556#msg265556
date=1722189833]
[/quote]
i知 hereby promoting you to editor-in-chief.
carry on.
[/quote]
Ain't my poem, so I ain't changing it. It's like telling someone
to magic marker a mustache on the Mona Lisa.
[/quote]
When you're given permission by the creator of the work to alter
their masterpiece, this excuse no longer holds up.
[/quote]
Well, he gave permission after I denied responsibility. So I
win.
[/quote]
IIRC he originally granted you the use of the work with a free
license. This includes the freedom to alter. Therefore... nope,
he was just tossing that ball back in your court.
But nice try!
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