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Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: severus4ever Date: August 16, 2013, 8:49 pm
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The half confused-half nerving girl with the black hair walked
up to the chair below a ragged looking hat that was expecting to
see her,as her headmaster shouted her name. She walked slowly
and reluctantly sat on the filthy leather chair as the
headmaster put the hat on her head. She had deep black eyes with
a lining of blue. The worn out Sorting hat began to sing:
Many a year ago it seems,
The duty fell to me,
To sing my song and bring the news,
Of where students ought to be.
Chosen by the founders four,
To help young students find their way,
When, confused, they stumble in,
On their first Hogwarts day.
Four houses to choose from,
Not one less or more,
Each one by a different founder,
To fill with students they adore.
Gryffindor, loving bravery,
Chose the strong of heart,
While Slytherin, feeling differently,
Thought cunning the greatest art.
Ravenclaw claimed for her own house,
The brainy and the smart,
While Hufflepuff took to her dear house,
The just and kind of heart.
All these students, with their differences,
Are each key to this great school.
And if Hogwarts hopes to stand,
Unity’s the greatest tool.
House to house and hand to hand,
Leaving differences behind.
Only when you work together,
Can your strengths all be combined.
Now at last, the time has come,
For me to send you separate ways.
But remember, our division,
Could bring the end of Hogwarts’ days.
There was no applause,just a blank room as the headmaster
patiently waited for the sorting results.
"Hmm, this one is different. Like her Uncle Snape.
Brave,smart,loyal,and clever. But Very strong and I see many
things ahead of you. You can choose the house you want little
girl,"said the hat wearily. There she sat outraged,"I pick
Slytherin,house of Salazar Slytherin." She wandereed around. The
corridors were empty,the classrooms. Nothing was there left to
see. "Has everything truly changed sinced Voldemort perished,and
of course harry potter died?"she thought. No,she wouldn't let
this happen,Harry Potter isn't gone, and Hogwarts will never be.
She has to be the one, she has to recreate Hogwarts,she has to
recreate the wizarding world. They won't be weak and scared that
harry has gone,A stronger hope has been reborn. Hogwarts will
have Harry Potter Forever......
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: voldedobbydore Date: August 21, 2013, 3:12 pm
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Amazing! XD :o
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: severus4ever Date: August 21, 2013, 7:51 pm
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LOL Thanks! :D I'm trying to make it sorta related to the forum.
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: crystal58 Date: August 21, 2013, 9:23 pm
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Is this like the wizard apocalypse :P its great. How can you
write so long? Don't u get tired of typing...
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: severus4ever Date: August 24, 2013, 10:29 pm
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She stopped walking from the castle when she found herself in
the middle of a big field. She was standing on the place where
the big battle happened, on the stains brave wizards and witches
shed in sacrifice. You-Know-Who was gone and everyone
rejoiced,even the stupid dependent muggles could feel the
presence. But when the time came, and the famous Harry Potter
also disappears alongside,things began to change. Everyone
didn't feel safe anymore, and began to question the defeat of
You-Know-You. "Voldemort,"said the girl. the little village
began to shake a bit. She took out her wand and pointed at the
Castle. She flew toward the Castle and walked toward the door
with chains strapped around it. "The headmaster's
office,"whispered the girl. She didn't know much magic,but she
found herself pointing the wand at the door very conentratedly
and said"Alohamora!" The chains loosely fell off and she
cautiously approached the wooden door. She turned the old and
rusty knob and walked in. The office was filled with cobwebs and
the tile was very loose and creaky. She looked at the front wall
filled with faces she couldn't recognise but on the very top
stood two portraits that obviously stood out. One of them was
covered in a red frame with thick corners carved to make a lion.
The portrait held a face that she could remember. He had an oval
shaped friendly looking face with at least a foot long beard. He
had piercing blue eyes with half moon spectacles over them. He
wore blue robes and a slightly tilted blue cap. He was smiling
kindly and bowing. "Dumbledore,"she said. Below the portrait
were several belongings and descriptions of Albus Dumbledore.
There was a newspaper about his death that she slipped into her
black bag. On top was a full descriptions of his awards and his
achievements which she also took a bit of interest in,but what
interested her the most were the two pieces of parchments at the
very bottom that looked like a will/testimony and a half opened
letter.She took an old parchment that had been placed under the
will and read it:
Dear Professor.Dumbledore,
I'd like to know when term starts again. I have been looking for
you in the evenings and i heard from students you left to do
some convincing in the ministry and from teachers that you
naturally went to get a butterbeer. I simply took a 2 year break
taking the Witch's Intermediate Testing of Careering in
Hogwarts(Witch). I would have taken 3 years off but I heard the
devastating news of You-Know-Who returning and it is quite
public your the only one he fears. With you and Harry being in
the school, I think We'd be quite safe. At least with you in the
school, there are rumours of Harry being "The Chosen One." If he
is, then You-Know-Who would probably march straight into the
castle and take him. Just thinking logically professor, didn't
mean to offend you if I did. I have taken my classes in order to
become a Ministry worker in charge of Education. I did register
for the advanced group as you suggested. Looking for you next
year! I have been fetching the news form a really nice house elf
named Dobby who i heard works in the kitchen castle.
W hi t l o v ol e
a g ee l
The writing faded and the ink got smeared as it was getting
deeper.She rolled up the parchment and gasped. Someone knew
something about how it happened. The problem was...it wasn't
quite clear when the writing got messy. Dobby? Where could she
find him?She took the will/testimony and put it over the dim
light so she could at least make out some of the words. It
simply said everything of his possesion belongs to Hogwarts
except for 4 things. A deluminator for a dweeb called Ron Weasly
who she remembered as the jealous good-for-nothing idiot who
lurks by Harry Potter for attention. The second one was a book
for a smart and humble girl called Hermione Granger who was
easily known as the brightest witch ever known. The third was
for Mr.Harry Potter a snitch for his skill and irreverence. It
was known that Harry Potter was the youngest and the best seeker
to play in a match since he studied in this school. The fourth
one also belonged to Harry, the sword of gryffindor. A
snitch,deluminatorm and a book? Those were the important things
to give to the two most incredible witches and wizards and a
cool deluminator for an idiot? There was the sword of course. It
was meant for something. All of these things have to be
important. Dumbledore wasn't that dumb. Then a thought began to
ring in her mind. Could all these objects be related to the
defeat of Voldemort? She was the only witch or wizard left to
say the name without fear. And She moved over to the next
portrait. It was covered in a green frame with snakes on the
corners and writing she could surprisingly recognize. The man
had a sunken face with long wavy hair to the shoulders. He had
no beard but had the evil,but protective and appreciative look
on his face. His eyes were a shade of red and brown mixed
together and he was clothed in black robes. He wasn't smiling or
bowing,but he had a look of passion behind that face that made
him hard to understand. A burst of lava blew from her stomach.
"Severus Snape,"she said.
Her uncle, the true hero. She had a feeling of revenge, a
feeling of honor and pride looking at his face. She hadn't
really noticed it,but a strip of salty liquid dropped from her
eyes as she began to stare at his picture. Her teeth clenched
and she looked away for the tear to go away and then moved her
long black hair back. She looked below the portrait. There was
nothing there except a piece of ripped parchment with thick ink
saying: never fear the endShe took all these things into her bag
and stared at her wand. It was a 12'' Dragon core wand with a
pheonix hair that stuck up at the end. That's what made her wand
so special. It was a combination nobody dreamed of ever seeing.
It wasn't any Pheonix though. It was the last feather of the
last pheonix to survive. Not any pheonix, but the pheonix of
Albud Dumbledore himself. Pheonix hairs were usually meant for
gryffindors as the wand crafter believed. Dragon core was
obviously the wand for Sltheryins. She walked back into the
Great Hall,which was not so great anymore. She began to turn the
knob of the exit when she got stopped by a voice. "Rachel, tell
me exactly where you think your going?"said her headmaster. She
turned and said,"Out." Her headmaster froze at the response and
her lip turned into a nasty curl. Rachel pushed the creaky door
open and shut it clear behind her. Her heart thumped. Was she
really going to put her life on risk? The answer was:yes.
"Why?"said a voice in her head. "For the truth," replied Rachel.
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: voldedobbydore Date: August 25, 2013, 2:57 am
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Really good!
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: severus4ever Date: September 7, 2013, 7:14 pm
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She sat on the rock and opened her back and reached for the
nearest thing. She pulled out her potions textbook. She forgot
she packed her school textbooks in there too,but it was a lucky
thing she did. She looked inside the bag and looked for what she
wanted. The letter. Dobby? Who in the world knew anything about
this house elf named-Dobby?
"I do,"said somebody.
She turned and was facing a wrinkled big eyed pointy nosed
figure,with nastiness in his voice and disgust in his face. She
was facing what looked like a house elf from what she read in
the care of magical creatures textbook.
"Who are you?"asked Rachel.
"Kreacher,"said Kreacher. "Who are yoouu?" said Kreacher in
reply.
"I'm Rachel Rivera Snape,house of Slytherin,"said Rachel
calmly.
His eyes popped bigger when she mentioned the word "Slytherin".
"Kreacher's masters were all Slytherins, the whole row. Except
for Sirius Black who was the filthy blood traitor he is and of
course Harry Potter,"said Kreacher with a little more affection
toward Rachel.
Her mind started racing unbelievably fast. Did he say Harry
Potter?
"Now, Kreacher remains a lonely house elf with no master,"said
Kreacher looking sadly but eyeing Rachel expectantly.
"Alright I will take you in,"said Rachel urging herself to be
calm. Kreacher's face turned jolly as he stared at Rachel. "So
who is Dobby?" said Rachel.
"Dobby is a house elf. Got freed by Harry Potter. A favorite of
Harry Potter. Worked in the kitchens.Saved Harry Potter's life.
Died saving Harry Potter. Was a very good friend to Kreacher.
Kreacher doesn't know why you want to know. Nobody speaks of the
battle or the heroes ever,"said Kreacher as he neatly sorted out
the junk from Rachel's bag.
"I have a little mission for you Kreacher. Can you track who
wrote this letter?"rachel asked carefully covering up some parts
that would have been confusing to him.
The GirlThe sohnd of a mission delighted Kreacher. He nodded
vigorantly and that snotty look on his face was oddly happy. He
sniffed the parchment carefully and reached out his hand. Rachel
slowly took it. He snapped and their bodies were twisting.
Rachel felt nauseous and once they hit land she was pushes down
hard into the ground. She look around. Kreacher looking pleased
with himself carried his sagging face and slouched with Rachel
as they walked toward a little house. It had been smartly
defended by curses and enchantments. It was a small ordinary
house that could combine well with other muggle houses. The
house was decorated in front with many animal statues. She was
obviously in love with animals. They disgusted Kreacher which
made Rachel laugh shortly. Wait, did she actually laugh? The
first time in years, she heard a shaky sound of laughter.
"It looks okay,"said Rachel quietly.
Kreacher looked at the house, what was he used to?Dungeons?
Kreacher stepped into the house quite normally as his filthy rag
jumped up and down as he ran as quickly as he could from the
statues. Rachel slowly stepped from the gate and was threw back
with an enormous force.
"What the fu**,"said Rachel as she painfully got up.
How did Kreacher do it? Well, the house was obviously protected
in every corner and she wasn't going to go try every corner. She
drew out her wand and said "Alohomoras!"the second time. The
gate was open and she stepped again. She got shocked and hit her
head hard on the ground.
"Merlin's beard, who did these enchantments,"said Rachel as she
was struggling to get back on her feet. She threw out her book
of spells and said,"There has to be something!"she said
frantically.
She heard the creak of the door and waited expectantly. Out came
a frightened innocent looking girl. She drew out her wand by
looking at Rachel,but Rachel was quicker and she pointed her
wand,"Expelliarmus!"she said defiantly. And the wand sort of
magnetized toward Rachel. She examined the wand. It was a cedar
wood with a small unicorn hair. The girl stammered and Rachel
couldn't quite understand what she wanted to say.
"I-Wh-eh-um-ss,"said the defensless girl.
Behind her, a small create nervously came forward. She looked
like Kreacher. Another House Elf. She wore a small blue dres and
quite adorable,but Rachel didn't come here for another stupid
house elf.
"Tell me, who are?"she said raising the wand.
"I wont-no please-no!"said the girl as Rachel was pointing both
the wands at the girl.
Rachel dropped both the wands and they were eyeing each other
then the wands. Rachel cleared her voice,anyway she didn't come
here to socialize.
"Do you know who dobby is?"said Rachel looking at her eyes.
The girl cleared her voice and spoke clearly for the first
time,but she could tell that there were tears pulling back from
her throat. Instead,she just nodded. "Have you heard from
him?"she asked. The girl shook her head and looked at Rachel for
a few moments.
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
By: voldedobbydore Date: September 8, 2013, 8:42 am
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Great chapter!
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