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Current Story Line
By: Ghettoicedtea Date: November 30, 2014, 10:56 pm
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Note: This is nowhere near the final version. This is a very
bland version of the story line and really only shows the major
events. In those events there are sub categories that are not
listed currently.
Intro:
The year is 1904: The country of Celestial is torn in two from
civil war. The rebels of the east where once their own country,
Valencia, was taken over by the Celestial Military in 1894. The
people of Valencia are very strong willed, fierce and loyal to
their country. There were riots amongst the streets for 2 weeks
before the Celestial Military was called in and slaughtered all
of the protesters. One after the war small group of former
Valencia Officers in the Military met up in a mansion 40 miles
north of the former capital of Valencia, Valikut, planned a cupe
de tat to over throw the government and take their country back.
The resistance grew rapidly within the years and on a cold
winter night in 1900 they struck the former capital. After 2
hours of fighting the rebels secured the capital and renamed in
the name of Valencia and they rose the flag on top of the
capital building. The Rebels wasted no time at all re taking
their territory as soon uprisings and revolution struck the
taken over territory. The Celestial Military had enough of their
crap and in 1901 decided it was time to exterminate the rebels.
They sent in solders and caused a stalemate on the border line
of the 19th district of Celestial and the former 31st district
that is in rebels hands. This has been known as the 20th
Parallel that divides the two fronts and has been a massive
bloodshed over and no one is willing to give it up.
A team of scientist in the west side have been curious to why
there was such hatred towards the Eastern country. They created
a way to travel back in time, the destination, the year 1300,
the year that marked the birth of Celestial.
Timeline and events
1300- nation of Celestial born
1304- Celestial began to militarize and invade nations
1308- After 2 years of war, Celestial has conquered the nation
of Habra
1312- Conquest Continues as they invade farther east and started
war with Valencia
1314- Valencia and Celestial made peace, ending the 1st war
between the two nations.
1330- Celestial goes north and starts war with Impansta, the
first Major nation
1365- After 35 years of war, Celestial gains control over
Impansta.
1400- The Celestian Military invent the Gun
1401- Celestian Military conquers the advanced nation of Greklan
within 1 year
1403- The Military knocked over the great wall of Trojan
1470- The Celestian Military created the rifle
1475- Military seized the country of Trojan.
1500- the start of the 100 year war
1550- The slaughter of the eastern sea
1600- end of the 100 year war and Celestial conquered the 4
nations against them
1605- Artillery invented
1630- The celestial Military is the most advanced military in
the world
1650- Celestial invades Valencia again
1651- the Battle of the Ridge
1652- The great offensive
1653- Battle of Saul
1654- The Eastern Offensive
1655- peace made between the two nations.
1670- The native Celestial Purge begins
1673- The battle of the 13th district
1674- Celestial now has 13 districts
1680- 14 districts
1682- Battle of Little Creek
1683- 15 districts now
1689- 16 districts
1695- The northern country sells land to Celestial creating a
new district
1700- Celestial stops the purge of the natives.
1750- Celestial begins to purchase land from the south creating
the 17th district
1770- The purchase of the century creating the 18-23rd districts
1800- The land purchased fully explored
1801- The western Oil Rush starts
1830- War of the south starts
1860- war ends
1855- The first Civil War starts
1865- War ends
1866- Rebuilding of the north begins
1870- The great Arms race begins as tensions on the 21st
parraell a high
1880- The Chili Incedent
1885- The bombing of the capitals
1885- War declared on Valencia
1886- Battle of Casino''
1887- Battle of Tinis
1890- The last offensive of Valencia
1894- VV-day creating districts
1895- the rebellion starts
1897- the purge begins again
1898- districts 24-31 created
1899- Protests in district
1900- The 2nd civil war starts
1902- stalemate created
thats basically what i got. Ill go into more details when i get
the time too.
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Re: Current Story Line
By: Vivid Date: December 1, 2014, 7:14 am
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1904- the Vivid Rifle was found in a futuristic box along with
an alien space saucer ;D
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Re: Current Story Line
By: Loki Date: December 2, 2014, 11:20 am
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I think the story seems cool so far, but I dislike the city
names. I don't know why, but I just don't. Tbh I was thinking we
could go for Greek names...
Here's an idea for a slummed city:
Hepaestia: the city where bots and ships and guns are
manufactured by Imperial-enslaved Rebels, working in a chain
gang.
The story starts with you, the player, in one of these chain
gangs. For years, your fellow CG members have been formulating a
rebellion against the guards of Hephaestia. You weren't
particularly involved with the plan making but are caught up in
it anyway. So the rebellion happens and you run away to a new
city; the hub city, [insert name here]. There you have all your
daily Graalian activities, but not before another story sequence
where you choose to go back to other Imperial-controlled cities
and fight for the Rebels or join the Imperial Army... The
missions you participate in fix your AP to the appropriate
Factions... ;)
-Loki
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Re: Current Story Line
By: Ghettoicedtea Date: December 2, 2014, 12:47 pm
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the countrys were made up on the spot, didn't do any thinking
really about them.
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Re: Current Story Line
By: Loki Date: December 2, 2014, 12:55 pm
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Should think of names together :)
#Post#: 128--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Story Line
By: Ghettoicedtea Date: December 2, 2014, 1:05 pm
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have any good imperial state names?
#Post#: 129--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Story Line
By: Loki Date: December 2, 2014, 1:26 pm
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I just drew something BIG.
A big break through.
Skype me @ lokiofgraal now!!
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Re: Current Story Line
By: Loki Date: December 3, 2014, 6:37 pm
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Valencia is the name of a city in the upcoming MMORPG,
Black-Desert so it is out...
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Re: Current Story Line
By: MBK Date: December 4, 2014, 5:06 am
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I would prefere u going with languages that are either forgotten
or is not very common... The greek thingz getting old now.Lol
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Re: Current Story Line
By: Vivid Date: December 4, 2014, 7:00 am
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Alcaria could be a "state"
I think add some zones like era, so in the meantime think of
some good zone names
Alignments
Think of some alignments -(cop, gangster, thug, civilian etc.)
(Possible) Alignments
Thug
Soldier
Serial Killer
Mafia (something)
Patriot
Time Lord
Time Apprentice
Time Trainee
Gangster
Gang Ringmaster
*( some smaller ranks)
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