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#Post#: 11527--------------------------------------------------
1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: rilee Date: January 18, 2024, 8:35 pm
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OriginalSandman_Builder/ Sr. Captain of GS 20:07:22 pm CST
eryn
favor us with a dance beauty.. show everyone why we dont just
claim but have the best dancing slaves
rilee {OS}~fg~t 20:07:56 pm CST
smiling at eryn
eryn {GS} t 20:09:08 pm CST
yes Master Sandman
smiles as she stands and walks to the sand pits
eryn {GS} t 20:09:26 pm CST
standing in the sand the girl studies the pole. Her mind wanders
as her body sways to and fro. thinking of the thassa she calls
home the girls body mimics the waves. Moving her body sensually
through the sands, crimson silks flowing, and blowing of their
own free will. Raising her arms high she lets her body drift to
the soft tones playing through out the room. Each movement she
makes brings the eyes of the free to a different tantalizing
spot as she moves her hips in hurried circular motions. Shaking
her bountiful breasts as she shimmies her waist.
Bretval: Mentor*Warrior*Scribe*Merchant 20:09:51 pm CST
*straightens up in my seat to watch the show*
OriginalSandman_Builder/ Sr. Captain of GS 20:11:40 pm CST
watching as the beauty enters the sand pit
eryn {GS} t 20:12:50 pm CST
Becoming one with the soft tones from the musicians. moving her
body as she moves through the sand in search of something just
out of reach. looking through the people littering the tavern
her eyes in search of what she doesn't know. A longing takes
over her mind and body as she twist and turns her with body.
With her steady sensuous movements the yearning to be pleasing
and needed over takes her. with wild yet steady twists of her
hips and the bouncing of her breasts the music the girl dances.
OriginalSandman_Builder/ Sr. Captain of GS 20:14:20 pm CST
licking my lips as eryn dances so sensually
rilee {OS}~fg~t 20:14:32 pm CST
smiling watching eryn dance so beautifully...
eryn {GS} t 20:14:44 pm CST
The music picking up a steadier beat her movements become
frenzied. Dropping to her knees in the sand. Falling forward
head in the sands arms above she lets out a soft cry. The
needful cry is carried away in the sounds around the tavern. In
a hurried movement she rips her crimson silks from her body.
watching them float to a pile in the sand. Leaving her soul bear
as she crawls to the pole. lifting herself up to lean her hips
to the wood letting herself loose of the need she has deep in
her slave heart.
Bretval: Mentor*Warrior*Scribe*Merchant 20:15:21 pm CST
* head nodding to the sound of the music... Eyes glued to the
views of the girl in the sand pit.*
eryn {GS} t 20:16:38 pm CST
Hugging the post like a port in the storms of her emotions, her
body finding a rhythm with the sounds of the music and the girls
slave soul. Pushing off the post letting her body go free moving
in hurried movements. Falling to her knees once more, letting
her fingers pluck at the grains of sand watching them fall.
Folding her frame tucking her head into the floor letting it
rest. Letting her behind wiggle and shake in the air.
eryn {GS} t 20:18:32 pm CST
Pushing herself off the sand unfolding her body to stand.
Shimming her chest in time to the beats of the music. Bending
down she scoops up her silks, using them to play peek a boo with
her with body. Spinning round her locks levitating with her
swift movements. A soft sound escapes her lips in her hurried
movements showing the girls need.
rilee {OS}~fg~t 20:20:02 pm CST
feeling every movement... every thought.... every feeling
OriginalSandman_Builder/ Sr. Captain of GS 20:20:25 pm CST
licking my lips as the girl's need shows so strongly
Bretval: Mentor*Warrior*Scribe*Merchant 20:20:42 pm CST
Orders my body to relax and not be taken into the Whirlpool of
desire the dance has given within me
eryn {GS} t 20:22:06 pm CST
Spinning herself back to the post, leaning against it once again
her port in the storm. Rocking gently as if she is folding
herself into a Masters touch. Her body trembles from the heat of
the tavern and her need. Sliding down the post her ass hitting
the sand, leaning forward. Golden locks pool about the girl as
she lays her head on the sand. Is a soft gentle whisper she says
la' kajira
OriginalSandman_Builder/ Sr. Captain of GS 20:23:21 pm CST
thumpingmy shoulder with my fist,, well done eryn.. you are a
credit to our home
rilee {OS}~fg~t 20:23:55 pm CST
~claps loudly~ as she finished her dance... well done sis smile
proudly...
eryn {GS} t 20:24:22 pm CST
smiles as she collects her silks and make her way back to the
serving furs...
thank you Master Sandman
eryn {GS} t 20:24:38 pm CST
thank you mistress ri hugs
Bretval: Mentor*Warrior*Scribe*Merchant 20:24:54 pm CST
Fist hitting left shoulder three times in appreciation 0f a
beautifully done dance
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: phoenix[E] Date: January 19, 2024, 5:59 am
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a familiar dance. but nice none the less.
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: guest141 Date: January 19, 2024, 5:05 pm
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With all due respect Master Brandt. eryn was asked to dance last
minute and there was no issue with a girl using an old dance
that ahe has only ever used once before. If more girls other
than mistress rilee and eryn would dance there would be more
variety and maybe not so many reused dances.
#Post#: 11530--------------------------------------------------
Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: phoenix[E] Date: January 20, 2024, 4:00 am
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eryn,
I will give you that this dance only can be found on the corks
one other time. Your former dance is found more often.
still, for me it was a familiar dance.
I'm glad there was no issue. you danced a good dance, people
enjoyed.
A last minute question could also trigger an impromptu dance.
or, if that is too difficult, a slightly tweaked dance.
A choice the dancer makes, depending on different factors: for
example her abilities, the rt surrounding her and her mindset.
I agree that more girls can and should dance. There would be
more variety.
But, on the flip side, if you know you're called upon often, its
good to have some tweaked dances at the ready.
Perhaps, to be discussed on a later time and with different
people:
only put new dances on the dancers thread to be seen by all? and
if the dance is a "re use", only put up: the slave danced and
all enjoyed. because we do enjoy and there's involvement in the
home.
Brandt
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: OriginalSandman Date: January 21, 2024, 7:29 pm
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As one of the the girl's owner's, I will say the dance was
pleasing to me and pleased all who were present in GS at the
time.
OriginalSandman
Sr. Captain
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: guest141 Date: January 21, 2024, 9:30 pm
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Thank you Master Sandman
eryn is glad to be pleasing and help her home. Thank you for
lifting this girl up. Smiles
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: phoenix[E] Date: January 22, 2024, 5:31 am
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I am glad people (including her Owners) enjoyed.
I never said people didn't.
It's good to keep in focus what was said and what wasn't.
Brandt
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: guest197 Date: January 27, 2024, 7:15 am
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I was not expecting much, but was pleasantly surprised, and
enjoyed this dance.
her sentences became rather choppy and dull in one section
towards the end. The descriptions and comparisons with the sea
towards the sea were very well done. Referring to 'her bottom'
was cringeworthy: ass would have been a much better word - 'her
bottom' is a term for a little girl or a Victorian lady, not a
Gorean slave girl aspiring to be a kajira.
she claims to have a slave heart, yet when Brandt states a
criticism she talks back. Long way to go.
I enjoyed the dance - thanks to her Owner.
~Bosk~
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Re: 1-18-24 eryn dances for the tavern
By: bria_slave Date: January 27, 2024, 8:33 pm
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In reply to eryn supposedly talking back and her use of
particular words....
bria did not view eryn's response to Master Brandt as talking
back at all. On the contrary she was explaining herself to
clarify things. That is not, nor will it ever be talking back.
She spoke eloquently and respectfully.
Now in regards to her using words in comparison to others.
There could be many factors as to such. A kajira is taught to
simmer down a little in the presence of free Women and keep
things a little more on the tame side. So, with that being
said, maybe there were a few free women in attendance while eryn
was dancing? Also, why should it matter what words are used if
the girl is effectively able to convey pleasure, lust, obedience
and so on in her dance?
People need to stop nit picking things and downing each other.
This is why some people (including myself) rarely enter GS or
post things. Because of "Karens" and "Kevins" continually
criticizing others harshly.
Yes this is Gor, but even so, there was at least some leniency
and understanding that women thrown into slavery had time and
grace to learn things. As well as those new to Gor as well.
Not everyone is the perfect cookie cutter slave or free person
some people think of themselves to be.
bria for one, is happily and perfectly IMPERFECT.
That Is all bria has to say on this...
she wishes everyone well and prays people stop being so
judgmental with each other.
bria {GS}
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