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Things Untold { Jack & Colleen Donnelly }
DIR By: Maggie Flannery
Date: September 2, 2018, 4:26 am
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* I'm so so glad you liked God & Monsters! You made my entire
evening. I'd love to know exactly why Jack's terrified of Helene
and would love to explore that further between the two of them
in a thread sometime. Was in a bit of a mushy mood so this is
the outcome of it.*
“What’s the one thing you never told me…about yourself?”
This was a game they’d played since they had gotten together.
Mostly on rainy evenings or when the house was completely quiet,
just the two of them in that rambling place at the very end of
an equally quiet street. The Donnelly’s lived a very quiet
sedate life, if their neighbors knew exactly what Jack did for a
living they never let on but nothing he or his wife did ever
raised suspicion. They went to church on Sundays, donated to
many local charities, and if they got wind that anyone in the
neighborhood needed assistance they offered it, no strings
attached. The only thing that some of the local gossips thought
was strange was that the couple didn’t have a hoard of small
Donnelly’s to call their own. They were both Irish and were both
Good Catholics so what in the world was the hold up?
There was no pitter patter of tiny feet around this house, no.
Only the two of them and two supposedly ‘vicious’ guard dogs/bed
hogs who were currently laying in front of the fireplace at the
feet of their mistress. They were once Jack’s but when Colleen
moved in they swore their allegiance to her straight away. Belly
rubs, ribeyes, and smooches from the dark haired woman went a
long way. She had tamed Jack so it was no wonder she had tamed
his canine companions as well. Contrary to what the local
gossips had said amongst themselves it wasn’t for the lack of
trying in the children department, no. But they had agreed to
put off being fruitful, as Colleen called it, until Jack’s
workload had let up. They currently traveled back and forth to
Dublin and New York almost monthly at this point and in two
week’s time a trip to Sierra Leone was on the books. Jack had
gotten wind of something one of his lesser trusted associates
was planning, a deal that was shaky from the start and he had
highly advised the associate to back out of, and had given word
to the only Ukrainian he truly trusted, Vitaly Orlov, to stay at
the local resort town with Colleen and Jackie Flannery. Yuri
Orlov was going to be made an example of what happens when one
doesn’t follow sound advice and he didn’t even know it yet. But,
Jack honestly didn't want to dwell on that at the moment. He was
home and he certainly never brought his work back to the one
place he felt he could let himself breathe.
“I knew the minute I met you I was going to marry you.”
He couldn’t help but smile, he had felt the same way when he had
spotted her dancing with her best friend Helene that night. He
often found himself wondering what could have happened had he
not agreed to go out that night or had never gotten up the
courage to talk to her. He was genuinely interested in her
reasoning though. So far they had seven years into their
marriage so far and he still couldn’t quite understand what she
saw in him.
“How’d you know? That you wanted to marry me I mean? Surely it
must have been the lighting or something. Maybe it was lust at
first sight?”
She reached out to thread her fingers between his own and she
smiled.
“Not going to lie, there was a smidgen of lust but that came
after I talked to you. It was like something clicked and someone
or something, guardian angel perhaps? Just went ‘Yep, there he
is. Gift wrapped from God straight to you, Colleen Murphy.’ and
that was it. How about you? Surely there were much better
looking girls in that club that night. Why me?”
‘Because I saw you dance and you seemed like you were free as
the wind. The house lights danced on your skin like stars and
you were drunk on life, it was contagious. You had the prettiest
eyes I’d ever seen and the sweetest smile that gave me hope.’
Nope. Don’t say that, you’ll be waxing poetic and sound like an
idiot. His inner voice whispered. His heart wrestled with that
voice. Did he dare tell her the real reason he had stopped into
that club? He knew he should but yet he held back. How could he
tell the woman he loved more than life itself that had he not
met her it would have been his last night on earth? The guilt
over his actions had gotten the better of him, the trip to
Prague hadn’t gone well and had almost ended in a bloodbath but
it was enough to weigh on him, very deeply. So much so he had
divvied up all of his possessions and marked them for his loved
ones and left a note on the side table of the entryway of his
townhouse before grabbing his jacket and keys to go off in
search of the nearest bridge. Bullets or razors would have been
too messy, he had never been one to dabble with any sort of drug
and he was too careful a driver to stage an accident. So that
left meeting his maker courtesy of the water.
“You…gave me hope. The night I met you I was down and out.”
In his search it had started to pour and he had ducked into the
club paid the cover charge and waited out the storm. He ordered
an overpriced gin and tonic which he hadn’t even touched when he
had spotted Colleen. She had walked by him once before and he
found her perfume interesting. In a sea of overwhelming fruity
florals she stuck out, fresh and crisp. Then the more he watched
her the weight he carried lifted. She smiled at him and tilted
her head for him to join her and to his own shock he did.
“But you saved me. It was a cosmic push from something. I’d
never been out on the dance floor until you wanted me to join
you.”
“You’re kidding.”
“I never had the time.”
“You had this contagious joy for life that pulled me in, you
still do. You gave me so much hope that night that I knew that
you were the one.”
You literally saved a drowning man.
Colleen studied him for a moment before she pulled him in close
for a hug, it was almost like she cradling him from the world.
It always amazed him how someone so soft and warm could be so
strong. Not just in a physically but mentally but yet his
Colleen had both in spades even if she was a crier. She was his
enigma, his little piece of heaven on earth.
“Do you remember the name of the club, Jack?”
In the recesses of his mind the pink and orange neon sign
glimmered in his mind as a smile spread across his face and a
chill went up his spine. It hadn’t dawned on him in years.
“The Right Place."
Talk about a cosmic kick on the arse if ever there was one.
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Re: Things Untold { Jack & Colleen Donnelly }
DIR By: Wolfy
Date: September 4, 2018, 2:34 pm
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This is the sweetest little piece I've read in a while. I also
love that Hel was included dancing at the club with Col, too! I
had absolutely no idea that Jack had been struggling so much
prior to having met her and that bit of backstory has warmed
even more of my muses to him and they would each like the
opportunity to meet him. My favourite line in this piece is '
You gave me hope ' and it's one of the most romantic things
anyone could ever say to another. These two are more and more
perfect for each other, the more I learn about the relationship
between them ❤
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