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Re: You
DIR By: Wolfy
Date: June 25, 2012, 3:42 pm
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I love that you picked up on the men's problems, I'm glad it was
portrayed as such. You are very right :] whilst their actions
are not acceptable, it's clear to see why they do such things.
Haha! xD I'm happy that some parts are able to make you laugh a
little, I shall keep trying for that here and there. I shall be
posting an update sometime tonight, I hope.
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Re: You
DIR By: Wolfy
Date: June 25, 2012, 5:37 pm
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Excuse the short update, for I am having a little trouble with
this. I, unfortunately, will be bringing this story to a close
randomly, but will try to make it work at the same time.
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“Arabella, I just want to apologise for half of my men. They are
not so used to having a woman around and of course, their
emotions will battle with their need to remain respectful. I
suppose, though in no way am I suggesting that performance you
just gave was inappropriate, they just couldn’t help themselves.
I’m not defending him at all for what he just tried to do, but
if you allow me to speak with him and sort things out, you’ll
receive an apology” he said.
I smiled warmly at him right through his speech. He returned my
smile, but his faltered the moment he knew I was going to
respond. He was obviously thinking I’d want nothing more to do
with this place and would want to go home immediately, but oh
was he wrong.
Laying my hand on his robed knee, I said “ Ardeth, please do not
worry yourself or your men over me in any way. I understood that
man’s need to go after what he wanted. Whilst I don’t condone
it, I will never reject anyone or embarrass them before their
friends or family. You and your men are very close. I noticed
that much this evening during dinner. I would hate to be the
cause of a falling out. An apology from him would be wonderful,
but please do not feel as though you must treat me in such a way
in order to earn my trust, for you have already won that.”
Ardeth looked at me with a very serious expression for a few
minutes. Not knowing what else to do, I simply sat there and
looked right back at him. His eyes swam around mine as he put
together pieces of the puzzle I had just given him. He barely
even blinked more than twice in all of the time we sat there in
silence. It was beginning to upset my stomach, not knowing what
he was thinking.
He got down on his knees in front of me and held my hands in
his. Mine started to shake, fearing he would say something I
wasn’t prepared for.
“You are now under my protection, my lady. My men have no right
to treat you as though you are some sort of desert ****. I
appreciate having your trust already and will always treasure
those words, but please, allow me to do my duties, to do what is
right.” he said.
At that, he rose off his knees, planted a kiss on the back of my
hand and left me alone in the tent to collect my thoughts.
I heard the sound of footsteps approaching the tent as I sat
back on the bed to relax. I pulled a cushion up and lay it
across my abdomen to avoid wandering eyes and impure thoughts.
Ardeth entered moments later and behind him was the man whom had
tried to have his way with me before. I managed to force a smile
and he returned it. His was also forced, or so it seemed.
“Dear lady, please forgive me for my actions. I will from this
moment on adapt to having a woman in the camp who is a true
friend to our chief. I shall not disrespect you again” he said.
The man took my hand in his and as Ardeth had done, he placed a
kiss on the back of it. My smile was now genuine and his eyes
lit up when I wholeheartedly accepted his apology. I couldn’t
even begin to imagine what Ardeth had said to him, for him to
turn his attitude around so quickly, but I was ever so thankful
that he had. I did not wish to feel awkward around anyone.
The man turned and made his way out of the tent. Ardeth turned
to follow him, but as soon as the man had left through the gap
in the tents entrance, I grabbed Ardeth’s arm and pulled him
back slightly. He looked startled and almost lost his footing,
but instead he collided with me. I blushed a wonderful shade of
beetroot when we both toppled backwards and ended up on the bed,
him on top of me.
“Um..” I said, shuffling to one side to get up.
“Laa” he said, “where do you think you’re going?”
My heart, now somewhere in my throat, thumped madly. I struggled
to breathe as he lay hovering over me, his burning eyes staring
right into mine. I wanted to turn my head, but I couldn’t look
away from him. Then, as if by a piece of string pulling us
closer to each other, his lips were on mine. His kiss, like
nothing I had ever tasted before. His tongue danced with mine as
though it would be their last. My head began to spin and so I
closed my eyes tighter, hoping to be rid of the dizzy problem.
“Arabella..” he muttered against my lips, “why are you so
tempting?”
It was a question I could not answer. I didn’t even process the
compliment he had just given me, for my head was still in a daze
from the electricity his lips had bestowed upon mine. They were
now tingling and begging to taste his own lips again. I lunged
my head upward, connecting us once more. He gasped and growled,
followed by a groan of pleasure when my hand reached under the
robes of his chest. He grasped my hand tightly in his and stared
at me with a stern expression. Through his eyes I could see
worry, fear and many other emotions, though the one that stood
out the most, was his clear want of me, and I would not stand in
his way.
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Re: You
DIR By: Maggie Flannery
Date: June 25, 2012, 7:28 pm
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Aww, it's quite alright , it's a shame it has to end but I still
think it's an awesome piece of work! :D I love it! I think it's
quite nice and very gentlemanly of Ardeth to speak on that
heathen's behalf. How many men would actually do that? Ooh,
things were starting to get a bit steamy between Arabelle and
Ardeth! (If I were her I'd just give to my impulses and poor
Ardeth wouldn't know what hit him, haha.) You're doing fantastic
work! :D
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Re: You
DIR By: Wolfy
Date: June 25, 2012, 8:27 pm
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It annoys me so much that I can't stick with one story for too
long. I think my best effort was These Arms Of Mine cause that
took up a whole load of space on my laptop haha. I shall try to
keep this going as long as I possibly can though :] it won't be
a let down, I promise. Aye! I agree that not an awful lot of men
would do such a thing. I agree what that too haha xD bless him,
he'd be in a right daze.
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Re: You
DIR By: Wolfy
Date: June 26, 2012, 4:16 pm
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Last bit now :] I'm sorry this ended so strangely, but this
other story will not leave me alone. I've had to give enough
details so readers can imagine it all themselves however they
wish to :D haha.
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As he stared into my eyes, completely drunk on lust, I lifted
his robe off his body and tossed it across the tent, not knowing
where it had gone.
“Well now, had I know you’d be like this I would have prepared
myself a little more” he said.
Before I could respond, his lips claimed mine again and our kiss
lasted a lifetime. My hands dove up into his hair and pulled on
his loose curls every time he bit down on my lip. He was after
entrance, but I wasn’t going to give him it so easily.
“Don’t make me wait” he said, in a very low voice.
The sound of his voice changing so quickly had me in another
trance. Without thinking or remembering the little game I was
playing, I parted my lips for him. His tongue danced again with
mine and a growl rose up from his throat when I slid my nails
ever so gently down his bare back.
His men seemed to be enjoying the performance, or rather the
sound of it. When I threw my head back in delight as his kisses
moved down to my neck, I spotted the outline of them right
outside the tent. I didn’t know whether to be more worried or
amused. I tried to hold back laughter as best I could. It was
made so much easier for me when Ardeth trailed his kisses lower
and lower; then even lower. My hands gripped his hair and I
tried to pull him back up, but he was having none of it. He
lifted the nightgown ever so slowly, rising it higher up my
thighs.
I felt his hot breath between my legs and gasped when his tongue
dove deep inside me, swirling like a tornado. I couldn’t hold it
back much longer as the cries of ecstasy escaped from my mouth.
My hands clung to the cushion behind my head and my sounds only
grew louder the more forceful he became. As he pulled himself up
and lay over me, I tried to turn over to please him as well, but
he held my hands down, pinning them over my head so I could not
fight him or move away.
My eyes bore into his as he looked down at me hungrily, licking
his lower lip as he spoke.
“You will let me have you” he said.
I could do nothing but grin as I replied, “But of course”
He released my hands and tore my nightgown completely off my
body, tossing it in the direction I had thrown his robes.
Teasingly, he rubbed himself against me, grinding himself gently
against me. It was as though he would not do anything until I
practically screamed for him to do so, which I did. As soon as
those words left my mouth, he thrust him entire length deep
inside me. I couldn’t moan loud enough at the pleasure it shot
right through my body, but the look on his face told me he
didn’t mind. In fact, he only encouraged it by quickening his
pace. I wondered if by morning, my hips would be bruised, as
well as his.
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Re: You
DIR By: Maggie Flannery
Date: June 27, 2012, 8:07 pm
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Oh. My. Good. Gawd! I loved this! It wasn't a strange ending at
all! It's quite a steamy bit of writing and that's just fine in
my book, haha. It allows me to come with my own conclusions as
to how these two finally ended up together. I say good on ya!
Brilliant piece of writing my dear!
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Re: You
DIR By: Wolfy
Date: June 28, 2012, 10:07 am
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I'm glad you didn't mind the steam in that last bit haha. I hope
you don't that I ended it so suddenly. I wanted it to go on a
little longer, but obviously Oded's other characters wanted a
little bit of the action. Thank you for your praise! :D
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