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       Prophecy
       By: jamesgames Date: April 1, 2015, 7:22 pm
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       All that glitters is not gold. Seek and you will unfold. At
       sixes and sevens, the bone of contention unleashes the heavens.
       The clock ticks 'til eleventh hour, a nine days wonder. Power is
       black and askew, puts you between the devil and a deep blue sea.
       The prophecy above is for a draft game. As you can see, it gets
       weird at the end. Do you have any suggested changes to improve
       this poem?
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       Re: Prophecy
       By: nitrox116 Date: April 1, 2015, 7:52 pm
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       "Seek and you will unfold" sounds like another syllable might be
       good.
       The rest I can't really advise you on.  Since it starts with a
       rhyme, you might want to keep the rhymes/line syllables
       consistent throughout.  It's difficult to help with prophecies
       unless we know what they're supposed to mean.
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