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The Ice War
By: sw138994 Date: April 21, 2014, 3:56 pm
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Hello I started making a game but it never worked out so I had
wrote this for a short story essay in class......... (I dunno I
saw the new writing section so ya Know I did something :D )
I couldn't figure out how to attach a file so I pasted it on
here... that's a lot...
[spoiler= Story] Prologue-
Jamie walks down the grand steps to the throne room seeing
and quickly bowing to the queen. The queen’s beauty and her
dress and all of her features are amazing!
The queen asks “what may I do for you my darling?”
“I had a quick question if I may?” she responds “Because I know
you are very busy.” Jamie continues
“No, no it’s fine I can take a second off of work” The queen
jokingly response
“Ok, I was wondering is it true, that…uh you and the… fire kin-“
As the queen cuts Jamie off, she says “PLEASE!” “Don’t speak of
this man in my presence!” she sighs and excuses Jamie.
Hours later
Jamie a young teenage girl, dark brown hair, pale skin, and
probably around the height of 5’5, she was thinking about what
had gone on in the castle. She had got a guard to tell her that
the queen and the fire king were once married. And just telling
Jamie this had gotten him fired.
“KNOCK-KNOCK”
She runs down stairs, yelling “DAD, are you finally home!” she
had tears of hope in her eyes. Three years ago when Jamie’s mom
had died, he had left for a better job and life and never came
back. Jamie, now with a smile on her face opened the door and
was shocked back to reality. All that was there was a young
guard from the castle. He had bright blue eyes, and bright
blonde hair.
Jamie, apologizing for all her yelling asked “What can I help
you with sir?”
The guard taking off his armor replied “I just need food.”
“What?” Jamie thought to herself “he wants food?”
She than replies “Why, aren't you trying to arrest me or
something?”
He replied “no, sorry I we got off on- wait what? What have you
done to be arrested?”
Jamie laughingly replied “nothing, I was just surprised a guard
wanted food.”
“Oh well don’t you remember, I am the one you got fired at the
castle.” He said sternly
“Oh sorry, I didn't notice.” Jamie said sheepishly. “Well, I am
Jamie, you?”
“Nickolas, that’s my name and before this gets to personal could
you give some food so I can start my trip to the nature kingdom,
please. My family lives there and I am going back because of the
many issues here.”
Jamie insists him to stay a night and get some rest before he
takes that long journey. After a very long argument he finally
agreed to stay.
The next morning
Jamie woke up early and packed Nickolas’s bags full of
food. Suddenly she heard footsteps on the roof. She stepped
outside and saw a ton of fire warriors all running over the
roof, when “BOOM” The roof collapsed! Bombs were exploding
around the house! Jamie started to run in panic of the roof
toppling onto her. Then she heard screaming the upstairs
bedroom! NICKOLAS! She panicked and decided to try and get him
out. It became helpless and she ran for help.
She made it to the castle and asked the queen to call off
the fire warriors, which she had not realized were. The answer
was no, the queen could not do anything about them besides
attack. Jamie pushed and fought the queen to her limits until
the queen was like a buzzing bee ready to sting whoever was in
her honey, and right now she is that person. The queen even
threatened to banish her! Jamie, frustrated ran back to the
village to grab some food and money and started out for the Fire
Kingdom. Then the thought of Nickolas came to her, who she was
trying to save was probably dead by now, trapped under a burning
roof.
1 day after she left
Jamie was already in the Fire Kingdom and was a little
frightened. She had searched and searched until after almost
five hours of searching she found the castle. When she saw the
king the first thing that came to her head was “WOW!” He was
wearing his dark black hair in a pony tail on the top of his
head, and a huge bun. His eyes were dark red, and his pale skin
made him really stand out. His outfit wasn't much better; he
wore a black and red robe full of design, and little rabbit
slippers to pull it all together.
“Who enters my throne of fire?” asked the king in a surprisingly
calm voice.
Jamie, a little scared, replied “I am…uh, I am an outsider from
a different kingdom…uh wou-“
Cutting her off, he asks “what kingdom?”
“Well you see-” she tries to finish but the king is a little
inpatient
“It is a very simple question… which of the five- um… four
kingdoms are you from?”
She answers “The Ice Kingdom sir,” while she bows.
“GUARDS, KILL THIS UGLY FROM THE ICE KINGDOM, NOW,” the king
yells in a very stern yet not so serious voice
“So much for a nice king,” she mumbles under her breath and
thank her lucky stars nobody heard that. As she snaps back into
reality she thinks quickly and yells “WAIT! WAIT! HOLD UP!!!”
The king response “What do you want?
“I never got to ask my question,” she replies
“Tell me you’ll die anyways,” says the king in a very sassy
voice
She says a little awkwardly “well all I want is this war to
end!”
“Kill her,” the king says with a sigh
“WAIT,” she says hoping for attention
“Just kill her she is becoming really annoying,” the king says
again in a sassy voice
“NO,” she tries
“OH MY GOSH, BE QUIET GIRL!!!!”
“CAN’T WE MAKE AN AGREEMENT? PLEASE,” she tries knowing it’s not
going to work, and that she really should be quiet.
“Well since you asked so nicely.” Says the king in a calm voice
like nothing ever happened.
“SO,” the king urges
“Well I want to stop the war… uh… what do you want?”
“To be rich… OH WAIT, I already have that” The king says
laughing afterwards.
Not being so amused by the king anymore she asks “No
seriously…what do you want?”
“well here’s a list… one you to leave, two you to die, number
3…hmm… um well you could defeat the Nature Kingdom and give us,
THE FIRE KINGDOM, that land instead of yours.”
She thinks about this, while a few minutes pass by. She
thinks, Nickolas is from…well…I have to…no I shouldn't I…NO I am
going to go…no. As she fight with herself the king loses his
patients
“YES OR NO!?!?! Hey hate to break it to ya’ sister but I don’t
have all day!”
“Ok, I will do it…I think, yes, yes I WILL DO IT!” She said very
unsure of herself.
“Very well, I will stop the war right now, and you be a darling
and go off to Nature Kingdom” he laughs happily.
3 days later
She made it to the nature kingdom after three days of
traveling, and she was tired! This place is HUGE how am I
supposed to defeat this, I mean they have an army, too. If I get
caught I again will be standing at death doors with a king.
Where do I start? I can’t conquer this entire kingdom before
getting caught!
She thinks and thinks about how to defeat this Kingdom of
Nature. Then it popped into her head, as she looked around
everything is made of earth and plants and animals and… things
you can burn! She got right to work she went back to the woods
and gathered up sticks and made a ton of torches. She finally
finished making at least eight hundred some.
She geared up and grabbed torches as weapons. She ran out
if the woods and started to defeat a village, it burnt right
down! Although she did feel bad knowing this village could have
been Nickolas’s village, but she kept going village to village.
It was working really well until…she ran into about two thousand
solders not very happy with her! She started to run but it was
no use she was stuck and they… they had weapons.
To her surprise they just escorted her into the castle! The
Nature King, an older man probably in his late forty’s. He had
white hair, green eyes, and a dark green robe. He gave her a
quick talk about how she shouldn't have done this and she is
lucky she is young or she would be in the jail right now. Then
he said he was going to let her go and have her be escorted to
the ice kingdom.
“Thank you, sir!” She said in her most polite voice she had even
though she knew she was being babied.
“It was no big deal, and just know-“He got cut off by the fire
king passing him out with a handkerchief!
The fire king let off some kind of gas it made all the guards
pass out! She was scared she screamed asking the other king of
what was happening, but it was no use soon she was passed out
and on the floor!
When she woke up
She had cuts and bruises all over her, either she hadn't
noticed or she had been being beat up! When she tried to stand
both legs gave out! “He must have bruised the inside!” she
thought to herself. Not knowing what to do, she crawled trying
to help the kingdom but it was no use! The Nature King is
trapped outside just to sit and watch as the fire king and his
guards destroy his kingdom piece by piece!
By the time the fire king was done with that section he
dragged the king to the next spot of destruction. Seeing this
made Jamie very depressed, but when she opened her mouth,
nothing came out. Finally, Jamie had enough strength to talk.
“STOP, STOP!” She cries out
“I know I started this but it’s only made this war worse, three
kingdoms now in war! I don’t want to be the one who did that!”
Everyone circles around her, being their grumpy self I guess
they don’t give second chances. A villager starts yelling and
beating her. Everyone liked that idea, so off they went. Finally
after a few minutes, they stopped because “WOOOOOSH,” an entire
kingdom of villager’s sky diving down to help.
Now another part of this war has started the 5th kingdom
and the Fire Kingdom! “This is amazing everyone thinks it’s a
myth but she had the proof”
Days later
“The Ice Kingdom has teamed up with the Stone Kingdom,
Nature Kingdom, and of course the Sky Kingdom. It is kind of our
fight because it’s four entire kingdoms versus one. The odds are
pretty obvious!” Jamie thought to herself as she fought, she was
healed and has been remembering these exact words she is saying
to you right now so when the war is over she can re- create in
for other people. Although this war has been going on for
almost five weeks now, Jamie’s side has pretty much won.
Unexpectedly a loud “WOOOOOOSH!” The ice queen! She just made
everything and everyone from the Fire Kingdom frozen! She was
blown away by the force of her power. It was too strong for even
her. Sadly she died.
“We have to help her she can’t die!” A villager called out
“No, no we don’t have to she gave her live to stop this war… for
us.” Jamie told everyone
Everyone gave a round of applause for the queen. It was an
amazing ending for this war.
After the war
“The Fire King was captured and executed, and get this I
got a letter from my dad last night and he said he was coming
back home! Oh and did I mention we are living in the Sky
Kingdom! We live under one rule here in the Sky-five kingdom. Up
here is amazing, oh yeah the sunsets are amazing! Oh and you
want to know about the war? Well to sum it up quick, just for
that courageous of the ice queen the war is now known as the Ice
War.”
THE END[/spoiler]
I know it has quite the cheesy names... :)
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