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       #Post#: 106171--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: January 16, 2026, 7:50 am
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       You appeal to POPLA using the appeal points you used already,
       but amplifying or expanding them to lead the POPLA assessors
       through the reasons why the appeal should be accepted. Refer to
       the legislation
       (
  HTML https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2012/9/schedule/4)
       and why
       the notice does not comply, and therefore why the liability can
       not be transferred from the unknown driver to the registered
       keeper.
       There are lots of POPLA appeals documented here.
       If you can construct your own and post it here you will get
       guidance on any improvements or modifications before you send
       it.
       #Post#: 106477--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: Clarke066
       Date: January 19, 2026, 4:42 am
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       POPLA Appeal – Parking Charge Notice [PCN ref]
       Vehicle Registration: [VRM]
       Operator: ParkingEye Ltd
       1. Keeper position – no admission of driver and no keeper
       liability
       I am the registered keeper of the above vehicle and I dispute
       this Parking Charge Notice. I deny any liability or contractual
       agreement.
       There will be no admission as to who was driving and no
       inference may be drawn. ParkingEye is put to strict proof of the
       driver’s identity.
       ParkingEye may only pursue the registered keeper if it has fully
       complied with every requirement of Schedule 4 of the Protection
       of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). The burden of proof rests entirely
       with the operator. As set out below, the Notice to Keeper (NtK)
       fails to comply with PoFA and therefore keeper liability cannot
       arise.
       2. Failure to specify a period of parking – PoFA Schedule 4,
       paragraph 9(2)(a)
       Paragraph 9(2)(a) of Schedule 4 requires the NtK to “specify the
       period of parking to which the notice relates”.
       The NtK does not specify any period of parking. It merely states
       the times at which ANPR cameras recorded the vehicle entering
       and leaving the site. These timestamps are not a period of
       parking in law and necessarily include time spent driving,
       manoeuvring, or queueing, when the vehicle was not parked.
       As this is a mandatory requirement of PoFA and it has not been
       met, the NtK is non-compliant and cannot transfer liability to
       the keeper.
       3. Failure to include a valid invitation to the keeper to pay –
       PoFA Schedule 4, paragraph 9(2)(e)(i)
       Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) requires the NtK to include an invitation
       to the keeper to pay the parking charge or, alternatively, to
       name the driver.
       The NtK does not do this. Instead, it states that “the driver of
       the motor vehicle is required to pay this parking charge in
       full” and then instructs the keeper to name the driver if they
       were not driving. This wording does not invite the keeper to pay
       the charge in the alternative, as required by PoFA.
       This is a further failure to comply with PoFA, and keeper
       liability cannot arise.
       4. No contract capable of being formed – prohibitive signage
       The prominent signage at the site states:
       “3 hour max stay – Strictly no parking outside of store hours.”
       This wording is prohibitive. Outside store hours, parking is
       forbidden rather than offered on contractual terms. A
       prohibition cannot form a contractual offer capable of
       acceptance, and therefore no contract can exist and no
       contractual parking charge can arise.
       At most, any alleged issue would be a matter of trespass, which
       could only be pursued by the landowner and not by ParkingEye as
       a contractual claim.
       5. Misleading barrier arrangement – lack of fair and transparent
       notice
       This is a barrier-controlled car park. At the material time:
       The entry barrier was raised when the vehicle entered
       The exit barrier was raised when the vehicle left
       On a barrier-controlled site, the position of the barriers is a
       key indicator of whether parking is permitted. An open entry
       barrier reasonably conveys that the car park is open and
       available for use.
       If the store and car park were in fact closed, leaving the
       barrier open was misleading conduct and failed to provide fair
       and transparent notice of any restriction. This is contrary to
       basic consumer law principles and undermines any suggestion that
       the driver knowingly accepted or breached any parking terms.
       6. Nonsensical “maximum stay” of 0 hours 0 minutes
       The NtK asserts that the applicable “maximum stay” was “0 hours
       0 minutes”.
       This is self-evidently incoherent and impossible to comply with.
       A term that is impossible to perform cannot form part of a valid
       contract. A Parking Charge Notice relying on such a description
       is unclear, defective, and unenforceable.
       7. Conclusion
       ParkingEye has failed to establish keeper liability due to
       multiple breaches of the mandatory requirements of Schedule 4 of
       the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. There is no legal
       presumption that the keeper was the driver.
       Separately and in any event, no contract was capable of being
       formed due to prohibitive signage, misleading barrier
       arrangements, and an incoherent description of the alleged
       parking terms.
       For all of the above reasons, I respectfully request that POPLA
       allows this appeal and directs ParkingEye to cancel the Parking
       Charge Notice.
       Would you make any changes to this or would this be fine?
       #Post#: 106558--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: ixxy
       Date: January 19, 2026, 1:05 pm
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       Point 1 all fine as long as the POPLA assessor agrees with your
       assessment the PCN breaches POFA requirements. As b789 who gave
       you that defence argument loves to point out POPLA assessors are
       not legally trained and are unlikely to get into the semantics
       of the wording.
       Point 2 that's how the industry works, this will not help with
       getting POPLA to uphold your appeal.
       Point 3 see point 1.
       Point 4 may be valid, unlikely a POPLA assessor will agree,
       Parkingeye signage is often held as best practice.
       Point 5, I know this car parking having parked the myself. To
       call it barrier controlled is pushing the concept, from memory
       it's a couple of manual pole type barriers. Whether they were
       open or not doesnt materially impact your case. Most car parks
       don't have barriers, you can assume that means parking
       restrictions aren't in force.
       Point 6 The wording is indeed clumsy but is factually correct,
       there is a max stay of 0 minutes being offered (consideration
       period not withstanding),  contractually if you stay longer you
       agree for them to invoice you at the rate on the signage.
       Point 7 let's see what the POPLA assessor thinks.
       Bottom line is you don't have any strong grounds for appeal
       here, the POPLA  appeal is just going through the motions of
       running the clock down until they (probably) give up before
       having to pay a court fee.
       #Post#: 114802--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: Clarke066
       Date: March 30, 2026, 5:13 am
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       Have got the appeal outcome from POPLA and it has not been
       succesfull.
       What would be the next steps for this now?
       Thanks
       #Post#: 114812--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: March 30, 2026, 6:41 am
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       Please post up the appeal outcome.
       #Post#: 114833--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: Clarke066
       Date: March 30, 2026, 10:41 am
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       Decision
       Unsuccessful
       Assessor summary of your case
       The appellant has provided a detailed account surrounding the
       parking event in question. For the purpose of my report, I have
       summarised the grounds raised into the points below. • They
       advise they are the keeper and deny any liability or contractual
       agreement and there will be no admission to who was driving and
       has also quoted the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). They
       have also quoted paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) and
       said the PCN does not invite the keeper to pay the charge or
       name the driver. • They say the PCN does not specify the period
       of parking and just shows ANPR cameras recorded the entry and
       exit times and not parking times. • They state there is no
       contract capable of being formed as the signs say “3 hour max
       stay – Strictly no parking outside of store hours” as the
       wording is prohibited and outside of store hours, parking is
       prohibited rather than offered on contractual terms. They say
       the PCN asserts that the maximum stay was 0 hours 0 minutes and
       is self-evidently incoherent and impossible to comply with an
       impossible term cannot form a valid contract. • They say there
       is a misleading barrier arrangement as the barrier was raised
       and if the store was closed, this was misleading conduct and
       failed to provide fair and transparent notice of any
       restriction. All of the above has been considered in making my
       determination.
       Assessor supporting rational for decision
       When assessing an appeal POPLA considers if the operator has
       issued the parking charge notice correctly and if the driver has
       complied with the terms and conditions for the use of the car
       park. The operator has provided photographic evidence of the
       signage in place in the car park, which detail the terms and
       conditions of parking. The signs state “…Strictly no parking
       outside of store hours…” The motorist is also advised that
       failure to comply with the terms and conditions will result in a
       PCN being issued for £100. The operator has provided Automatic
       Number Plate Recognition (ANPR) images to demonstrate when the
       vehicle entered the site and how long it remained there for. •
       They advise they are the keeper and deny any liability or
       contractual agreement and there will be no admission to who was
       driving and has also quoted the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012
       (PoFA). They have also quoted paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) Paragraph
       9(2)(e)(i) and said the PCN does not invite the keeper to pay
       the charge or name the driver. The Protection of Freedoms Act
       (PoFA) 2012 is a law that allows parking operators to transfer
       the liability to the registered keeper in the event that the
       driver or hirer is not identified. Parking operators have to
       follow certain rules including warning the registered keeper
       that they will be liable if the parking operator is not provided
       with the name and address of the driver. In this case, the PCN
       in question has the necessary information and the parking
       operator has therefore successfully transferred the liability
       onto the registered keeper. • They say the PCN does not specify
       the period of parking and just shows ANPR cameras recorded the
       entry and exit times and not parking times. The Private Parking
       Sector Single Code of Practice (The Code) sets the standards its
       parking operators need to comply with. While the ANPR images do
       not show the period of parking, section 2.19 if The Code states
       that a parking event begins when a vehicle enters, and remains,
       on controlled land. • They state there is no contract capable of
       being formed as the signs say “3 hour max stay – Strictly no
       parking outside of store hours” as the wording is prohibited and
       outside of store hours, parking is prohibited rather than
       offered on contractual terms. They say the PCN asserts that the
       maximum stay was 0 hours 0 minutes and is self-evidently
       incoherent and impossible to comply with an impossible term
       cannot form a valid contract. I have reviewed the signs and can
       see they state that there is a 3-hour maximum stay and no
       parking outside of store opening hours. As no parking is
       allowed, and the vehicle remained on site, the terms were
       broken. I am satisfied that there is a contract capable of being
       formed. • They say there is a misleading barrier arrangement as
       the barrier was raised and if the store was closed, this was
       misleading conduct and failed to provide fair and transparent
       notice of any restriction. On private land, barriers are not
       required to show if the site is open or closed as the terms
       visible advise motorists what is expected. POPLA’s role is to
       assess if the operator has issued the charge in accordance with
       the conditions of the contract. As the terms and conditions of
       the car park have not been met, as the vehicle remained on site
       when it was not authorised, I conclude that the operator has
       issued the parking charge correctly, and the appeal is refused.
       #Post#: 114851--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: ixxy
       Date: March 30, 2026, 12:46 pm
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       Next steps is you sit back and wait for the debt collectors
       (which you can ignore) followed by a letter of claim which you
       ant ignore. Nothing else constructive you can do now. Your
       appeals were rejected.
       #Post#: 114858--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parking Eye PCN - After Hours - Asda Hayes  
   DIR By: Sander333
       Date: March 30, 2026, 2:01 pm
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       Surely the sign just stating no parking whilst store is closed
       without giving the operating hours defeats the object.
       I could reasonably go to the shop and find that it was closed
       but did not know what times it was operating and leave.
       This is similar to the notices in retail car parks near sports
       grounds whereby it states a maximum stay of 90 minutes on match
       days. Unless I am an ardent sports fan I would not know if a
       sports event was taking place on a particular day. I am sure
       thar a case has been thrown out of court under these
       circumstances.
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