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       #Post#: 126046--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: July 28, 2026, 9:35 am
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       Thank you, I found it. So another appeal point should be that
       --- Quote ---
       > Driver left site designated for customer parking only
       --- End Quote ---
       is verbal diarrhea and meaningless, although it shouldn't be
       the primary appeal point.
       #Post#: 126134--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: DontStandForNonsense
       Date: July 29, 2026, 1:20 am
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       Thank you.
       I'm guessing that the ball is currently in my court and that
       they are waiting on my to respond with my defense?
       How and at what point should I be sharing the points? And will
       the photos taken in store and dialogue relating to the stores
       products time stamped through whatsapp be used or are they not
       relevant to the defense?
       #Post#: 126135--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: DontStandForNonsense
       Date: July 29, 2026, 1:23 am
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       How can  I modify an earlier comment that is no longer showing
       the modify option?
       #Post#: 126137--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: July 29, 2026, 1:38 am
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       You cannot.
       #Post#: 126139--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: July 29, 2026, 2:08 am
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       --- Quote from: DontStandForNonsense link ---
       >
       > Thank you.
       >
       > I'm guessing that the ball is currently in my court and that
       they are waiting on my to respond with my defense?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       --- Quote ---
       > If you received a N1SDT claim form dated 15 July then you can
       file AoS by 3 August followed by defence by 17 August.
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 126147--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: July 29, 2026, 3:48 am
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       --- Quote from: DontStandForNonsense link ---
       >
       > How and at what point should I be sharing the points? And will
       the photos taken in store and dialogue relating to the stores
       products time stamped through whatsapp be used or are they not
       relevant to the defense?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Your defence will be a written statement, logical simple and
       clear.
       Your original appeal was on the basis of non-compliance with
       PoFA 2012, so your defence should lead with this and amplify
       exactly what requirement(s) of the legislation were
       missed/failed and why.
       Personally I would also argue against the meaningless "charge"
       on the NtK and repeated in the Particulars of Claim.
       If this ever gets to court, you will provide a witness statement
       which would include the other things you mention.
       Also note that, in our experience, Moorside Legal is
       exceptionally incompetent, so you should not assume that they
       know what they're doing or talking about.
       If you post a draft defence here you will likely get comments
       and suggestions on it. This thread and other information on the
       forum should give you a good starting point for this.
       #Post#: 126323--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: DontStandForNonsense
       Date: July 30, 2026, 11:48 am
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       --- Quote from: jfollows link ---
       >
       > [quote author=DontStandForNonsense
       link=topic=9044.msg126134#msg126134 date=1785306039]
       > How and at what point should I be sharing the points? And will
       the photos taken in store and dialogue relating to the stores
       products time stamped through whatsapp be used or are they not
       relevant to the defense?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Your defence will be a written statement, logical simple and
       clear.
       Your original appeal was on the basis of non-compliance with
       PoFA 2012, so your defence should lead with this and amplify
       exactly what requirement(s) of the legislation were
       missed/failed and why.
       Personally I would also argue against the meaningless "charge"
       on the NtK and repeated in the Particulars of Claim.
       If this ever gets to court, you will provide a witness statement
       which would include the other things you mention.
       Also note that, in our experience, Moorside Legal is
       exceptionally incompetent, so you should not assume that they
       know what they're doing or talking about.
       If you post a draft defence here you will likely get comments
       and suggestions on it. This thread and other information on the
       forum should give you a good starting point for this.
       [/quote]
       Sorry are you saying that the defense should  lead with the
       defect alluded to by B789 post "As your Notice to Keeper (NtK)
       does not fully comply with ALL the requirements of PoFA 2012,
       you are unable to hold the keeper of the vehicle liable for the
       charge." Do I need to specify how their NTK doesn't comply or is
       it simply enough to repeat what was said in the original appeal
       by keeping it general?
       #Post#: 126389--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: DontStandForNonsense
       Date: July 31, 2026, 7:21 am
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       I would instinctively say that no evidence has been provided
       that the driver was not a customer or that the driver left the
       site or am  I to repeat the line from the appeal "As your Notice
       to Keeper (NtK) does not fully comply with ALL the requirements
       of PoFA 2012, you are unable to hold the keeper of the vehicle
       liable for the charge. Partial or even substantial compliance is
       not sufficient. There will be no admission as to who was driving
       and no inference or assumptions can be drawn. UKPC has relied on
       contract law allegations of breach against the driver only.
       The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have
       been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation
       of the law of agency"
       Unsure of what a defense should be.
       #Post#: 126478--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: DontStandForNonsense
       Date: August 1, 2026, 8:32 am
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       --- Quote from: b789 link ---
       >
       > Before you continue with this, get it into your head that you
       must NEVER, EVER identify the driver. You have clearly done so
       to us, maybe inadvertently, but if you respond to the PCN like
       that, you will have blabbed the drivers identity and thrown away
       one of the best defences you will ever have for these charges!
       >
       > UKPC have NO IDEA who the driver is unless you blab it to
       them. Because of deficiencies in their Notice to Keeper (NtK)
       they cannot rely on PoFA 2012 to transfer the liability from the
       unknown driver to the known Keeper. The driver is always liable
       and unless you, as the Keeper, refer to the driver in the third
       person, you will have shot yourself in both feet with a single
       shot! You never say silly things like "I did this or that", only
       "the driver did this or that". Don't tell 'em your name Pike!
       >
       > So, to the PCN itself... what evidence have they provided to
       support their allegation that "driver left site designated for
       customer parking"? I'll bet you that they have not provided ANY
       evidence to support their allegation. Also, their NtK is not
       fully compliant with ALL the requirements of PoFA to be able to
       hold the Keeper liable if the driver is not identified.
       >
       > There is no legal obligation on the known keeper to reveal the
       identity of the unknown driver to an unregulated private parking
       firm and no inference or assumptions can be made.
       >
       > The NtK is not compliant with all the requirements of PoFA
       which means that if the unknown driver is not identified, they
       cannot transfer liability for the charge from the unknown driver
       to the known keeper.
       >
       > Use the following as your appeal. No need to embellish or
       remove anything from it:
       >
       > [quote]I am the keeper of the vehicle and I dispute your
       'parking charge'. I deny any liability or contractual agreement
       and I will be making a complaint about your predatory conduct to
       your client landowner.
       >
       > As your Notice to Keeper (NtK) does not fully comply with ALL
       the requirements of PoFA 2012, you are unable to hold the keeper
       of the vehicle liable for the charge. Partial or even
       substantial compliance is not sufficient. There will be no
       admission as to who was driving and no inference or assumptions
       can be drawn. UKPC has relied on contract law allegations of
       breach against the driver only.
       >
       > The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have
       been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation
       of the law of agency. Your NtK can only hold the driver liable.
       UKPC have no hope at POPLA, so you are urged to save us both a
       complete waste of time and cancel the PCN.
       --- End Quote ---
       Come back the they reject the appeal and give you a POPLA code.
       No initial appeal is ever successful because there is no money
       in it for them if they accept.
       [/quote]
       Hiya,
       Do I repeat this in the court form or do I need to know the
       specific POFA defects?
       #Post#: 126481--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Issued with a ticket (NTK) for being parked in a retail park
   DIR By: DontStandForNonsense
       Date: August 1, 2026, 8:57 am
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       --- Quote from: jfollows link ---
       >
       > [quote author=DontStandForNonsense
       link=topic=9044.msg126134#msg126134 date=1785306039]
       > How and at what point should I be sharing the points? And will
       the photos taken in store and dialogue relating to the stores
       products time stamped through whatsapp be used or are they not
       relevant to the defense?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Your defence will be a written statement, logical simple and
       clear.
       Your original appeal was on the basis of non-compliance with
       PoFA 2012, so your defence should lead with this and amplify
       exactly what requirement(s) of the legislation were
       missed/failed and why.
       Personally I would also argue against the meaningless "charge"
       on the NtK and repeated in the Particulars of Claim.
       If this ever gets to court, you will provide a witness statement
       which would include the other things you mention.
       Also note that, in our experience, Moorside Legal is
       exceptionally incompetent, so you should not assume that they
       know what they're doing or talking about.
       If you post a draft defence here you will likely get comments
       and suggestions on it. This thread and other information on the
       forum should give you a good starting point for this.
       [/quote]
       Do you know exactly how the NTK was non compliant with the PoFA?
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