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       #Post#: 107353--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: January 26, 2026, 1:54 am
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       Yes, got it to load.
       So the NtK is not PoFA compliant - end of.
       You could comment with the following;
       The conditions of PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) are not
       met - the critically required wording is obviously not present
       in the NtK.
       The wording of PoFA makes it clear that total compliance with
       Para 9(2) is required in order for PoFA to be relied upon. Para
       9(1) reinforces that point beyond any doubt.
       The conditions set out in Schedule 4 of PoFA are not met simply
       by the parking operator stating that they are - close
       examination of the NtK is required.
       I highlighted the NtK failings in my original appeal - the
       operator simply skips over this point and never demonstrates
       compliance - their further comments simply demonstrate that they
       do not understand the requirements of para. 9(2).
       The NtK provided in the operator evidence contains a number of
       highlighted areas (in order to seemingly challenge my appeal
       evidence) but the highlighting still fails to highlight the
       required wording - no amount of highlighting will make the
       required wording magically appear.
       I challenge the operator / POPLA assessor to specifically show
       where the required wording is on the operators NtK?
       In order to be compliant, PoFA specifies that the notice 'must'
       state all of the information required in para. 9(2) in order for
       the parking operator to rely on PoFA - at no point does the
       issued notice to keeper 'invite the keeper to pay the unpaid
       parking charges' - the absence of this required wording is
       immediately fatal to the operators case - therefore the operator
       cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper and, as
       such, the keeper cannot be pursued as the operator is
       suggesting.
       By way of help, in order to satisfy the requirements of para.
       9(2)(e), the wording on the NtK from the operator MUST contain
       wording along the lines of the following;
       At the current time, Euro Car Parks (the creditor) does not know
       both the name and a current address for service for the driver.
       The keeper is therefore INVITED TO PAY THE UNPAID PARKING
       CHARGES  (Para 9(2)(e)(i) requirement but not present on the
       Euro Car Parks NtK)
       Or
       If the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to notify the
       creditor of the name of the driver and a current address for
       service for the driver and to pass this notice onto the driver
       (Para 9(2)(e)(ii) requirement)
       The wording of Paragraph 9 (of Schedule 4) means that partial
       compliance with Para 9(2) is not sufficient to move liability
       onto the keeper using PoFA as the notice 'must' contain all the
       stated information from 9(2)(a)to(i). The wording used (must)
       means that total compliance is required with each section and
       subsection.
       Also note that certain sections of para. 9(2) require that the
       information is provided in a specific manner - that 9(2)(e)
       requires that the information is presented in such a manner as
       the keeper is given a specific legal choice between paying the
       parking charges themselves OR providing the driver details -
       critically, this legal choice is never set out on the operators
       NtK as the correct wording from one leg of that choice is never
       stated.
       It also appears that the parking operator needs to reconsider
       their relationship with their solicitors in that respect.
       I have also examined the operators signage layout.
       The PCN shows the driver entering the forecourt (from the main
       road) by making a shallow turn to the left - more of a taper
       than a turn in fact - due to the layout, most drivers would
       enter in this manner.
       The signage on entry from this direction is wholly inadequate
       since there is no required 'entry signage' which faces oncoming
       traffic - this does not appear to meet the minimum requirements
       set out in The Code of Practice document.
       #Post#: 107358--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: January 26, 2026, 3:41 am
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       --- Quote from: InterCity125 link ---
       >
       > So the NtK is not PoFA compliant - end of.
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       I'd be amazed if the assessor agreed. As of yet, I'm also not
       sure we've seen the 9(2)(e)(ii) point tested in court either, so
       I'm not sure it's quite right to describe it as "end of". It
       might therefore be wise to challenge some other points in ECP's
       response.
       Do they provide a map of the site anywhere? Their landowner
       contract refers to one, but if they've not included one in the
       evidence pack that's an issue.
       #Post#: 107371--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: January 26, 2026, 5:46 am
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       I've modified the wording slightly and added a section which
       shows complaint wording which I feel adds weight to the appeal.
       I cannot open the entire evidence pack so I cannot tell if a map
       is present.
       #Post#: 107390--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: January 26, 2026, 7:24 am
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       Thanks inner.
       I can confirm dwmb2 there is a map in the evidence pack. I been
       trying to deal with imgbb since yesterday but I’m still having
       issues. I uploaded 35 page pdf but the link only shows 18 pages.
       Here is a link that’s only valid for 24 hours before deletion
       that’s shows the last 18 pages with maps and signage.
  HTML https://jumpshare.com/s/JC3MfbPkeKM8Zv70029V
       #Post#: 107392--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: January 26, 2026, 8:00 am
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       The images show your vehicle turning left into the car park -
       this would have been the driver's view on the way in: Google
       Street View
  HTML https://maps.app.goo.gl/oTVTbXPDezSA3nFVA
       Their own signage plan support this and shows that the entrance
       signage is angled such that it would not be particularly
       prominent to a vehicle turning left. I would point this out.
       #Post#: 107412--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: January 26, 2026, 9:42 am
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       I noted this point early on but didn’t mention it as I thought
       it would be disregarded.
       You take a left into shell and drive forward to the back passing
       fuel pumps on your right. At the back there is plenty of signage
       not accessible on google street view. That’s where the courier
       collection boxes are.
       #Post#: 107418--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: January 26, 2026, 10:09 am
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       --- Quote from: DWMB2 link ---
       >
       > The images show your vehicle turning left into the car park -
       this would have been the driver's view on the way in: Google
       Street View
  HTML https://maps.app.goo.gl/oTVTbXPDezSA3nFVA
       >
       > Their own signage plan support this and shows that the
       entrance signage is angled such that it would not be
       particularly prominent to a vehicle turning left. I would point
       this out.
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Good spot - I have added that to the appeal document.
       #Post#: 112710--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: March 10, 2026, 10:19 am
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       Hi all.
       As expected I have appeal
       Denied by popla. Copy pasted below.
       Decision
       Unsuccessful
       Assessor Name
       Gayle Stanton
       Assessor summary of operator case
       The operator has issued the Parking Charge Notice (PCN) because
       the driver parked on the site for longer than the maximum stay.
       Assessor summary of your case
       The appellant has provided the following grounds of appeal which
       I have summarised for the purposes of assessment: • No keeper
       liability – the Notice to Keeper is not compliant with PoFA 2012
       Schedule 4 (including failure of 9(2)(e)(i)). • Mandatory
       consideration period and grace period not evidenced and not
       capable of being correctly applied when the operator relies Euro
       Car Parks relies on ANPR to calculate “length of stay”. That
       approach cannot properly measure parking time. It also fails to
       show that mandatory time allowances were applied. • Inadequate
       signage – no proof of prominent terms capable of forming a
       contract. • No proof of landowner authority – Euro Car Parks
       must evidence every requirement in PPSCoP section 14.1(a) to
       (f). • Failure to consider mitigation and vulnerability – breach
       of PPSCoP Annex F. • ANPR reliability and data integrity not
       proven. In the comments the appellant has provided the following
       : The conditions of PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) are not
       met - the critically required wording is obviously not present
       in the NtK. The PCN shows the driver entering the forecourt
       (from the main road) by making a shallow turn to the left - more
       of a taper than a turn in fact - due to the layout, most drivers
       would enter in this manner. The signage on entry from this
       direction is wholly inadequate since there is no required 'entry
       signage' which faces oncoming traffic - this does not appear to
       meet the minimum requirements set out in The Code of Practice
       document. The appellant has provided a document detailing their
       grounds of appeal.
       Assessor supporting rational for decision
       When assessing an appeal POPLA considers if the operator has
       issued the parking charge notice correctly and if the driver has
       complied with the terms and conditions for the use of the site.
       The appellant has advised that the Notice to Keeper is not PoFA
       compliant. The Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012 is a law
       that allows parking operators to transfer the liability to the
       registered keeper in the event that the driver or hirer is not
       identified. In this case, it is not clear who the driver of the
       appellant’s vehicle is, so I must consider the Protection of
       Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012, as the operator issued the Parking
       Charge Notice (PCN) to the keeper of the vehicle. I will
       therefore be assessing keeper liability. The operator has
       provided me with a copy of the notice to keeper sent to the
       appellant. I have reviewed the notice to keeper against the
       relevant sections of PoFA 2012 and I am satisfied that it is
       compliant in all aspects. The Private Parking Sector Single Code
       of Practice (The Code) sets the standards its parking operators
       are required to comply with. The appellant states that they were
       not allowed a consideration or grace period. Section 5.1 of the
       Single Code of Practice states that parking operators must allow
       a consideration period of appropriate duration, subject to the
       requirements set out in Annex B to allow a driver time to decide
       whether or not to park. In this case the recommended
       consideration period according to Table B.1 is five minutes. The
       Code also includes the following note: NOTE 2: The consideration
       period may end earlier than the times prescribed in Annex B
       where there is evidence that the driver has, accepted the terms
       and conditions applying (whether or not they have chosen to read
       them) which may for example be evidenced by the driver parking
       the vehicle and leaving the premises, paying the applicable
       parking tariff, or remaining on the controlled land for more
       than 5 minutes. As the vehicle remained on the site for one hour
       and one minute this was exceeded and the driver became liable to
       comply with the terms. Section 5.2 of the Single Code of
       Practice requires a parking operator to allow a grace period in
       addition to the parking period. However, the Code advises that
       grace periods are not applicable to short stay areas where the
       parking of a vehicle is allowed for a limited period not greater
       than 30 minutes, such as drop off and pick up zones. In this
       case as the maximum stay allowed is 15 minutes which is a short
       stay car park, drivers are not entitled to a grace period. The
       appellant has advised that there was no entrance signs and
       Section 3.1.1 of the Single Code of Practice states that there
       must be an entrance sign displayed and maintained at the
       entrance to the site, to inform drivers whether parking is
       permitted subject to terms and conditions or prohibited. Section
       3.1.2 of the Code contains the principles the entrance sign must
       display, including whether public parking is available. Its
       design must also comply with the standard format as described in
       Annex A. The entrance sign must take into account the speed of
       vehicles approaching the car park. The operator has provided
       evidence of the entrance signs on the site and these advise that
       the maximum stay permitted is 15 minutes. These signs also
       advise that motorists can see the signage on the site for
       further terms and conditions. Due to this I am satisfied that
       the entrance signs comply with Section 3.1.2 of The Code.
       Section 3.1.3 of the Single Code of Practice contains the
       requirements for signs displaying the terms and conditions. The
       signs must be placed throughout the site, so that drivers have
       the opportunity to read them when parking or leaving their
       vehicle. The terms and conditions must be clear and unambiguous,
       using a font and contrast that is be conspicuous and legible.
       The operator has provided evidence of the signage on the site
       and this advises that parking is limited to 15 minutes and that
       failing to comply will result in a £100 PCN being issued. I am
       satisfied that the signage on the site complies with Section
       3.1.3 of The Code. The appellant says they were unaware of the
       terms and conditions. However, a driver does not need to have
       read the terms to accept them—only to have been given the
       opportunity to do so. It is the driver’s responsibility to
       locate and understand the terms before parking. Based on the
       photographic evidence and site map, I am satisfied that the
       driver would have passed at least one sign and therefore had
       this opportunity. The appellant states that there is no evidence
       of landowner authority and Section 14.1 of the Code states that
       where controlled land is being managed on behalf of a landowner,
       written confirmation must be obtained before a parking charge
       can be issued. In this case the operator has provided a
       memorandum of understanding and I am satisfied that the operator
       has the authority to issue PCN’s on this site. The operator does
       not need to provide a full copy of the full contract as it may
       contain commercially sensitive information. The appellant states
       that the operator has not considered any mitigating
       circumstances. The Appeals Charter is a statement on how certain
       circumstances should be handled by the parking operator. This
       details when a parking charge should be cancelled, and when a
       parking charge should be reduced to £20, when an appeal is based
       on an error or mitigating circumstances. In this case the
       appellant has not provided any explanations as to why the
       operator or POPLA should consider their mitigating
       circumstances. The site operates Automatic Number Plate
       Recognition (ANPR) cameras, which capture vehicles entering and
       exiting the site to calculate the time a vehicle has remained in
       the car park. This data captured is then compared with the
       online transaction record, and therefore if any vehicle has
       overstayed the maximum stay of 15 minutes, a PCN is issued. The
       data provided by the operator shows that the vehicle had been
       parked on the site for one hour and one minute on the day in
       quesiton. ANPR technology is generally reliable, though POPLA
       sometimes receives appeals alleging ANPR errors. In such cases,
       POPLA considers whether any evidence casts doubt on the accuracy
       of the system. The operator must first prove the PCN was
       correctly issued, usually by providing ANPR images. If they do
       so, the burden then shifts to the motorist to provide evidence
       that questions the ANPR’s reliability. This may include an
       account of events, but physical evidence—such as receipts
       showing the motorist was elsewhere—is usually more persuasive.
       The POPLA assessor ultimately decides whether the evidence
       demonstrates an ANPR inaccuracy. In this case the appellant has
       not provided any evidence to cast doubt on the operator’s ANPR
       evidence and therefore I can only consider this evidence in this
       case. The operator has issued the Parking Charge Notice (PCN)
       because the driver parked on the site for longer than 15 minutes
       and therefore did not comply with the terms and conditions.
       Based on the evidence provided, I am satisfied the parking
       charge has been issued correctly therefore, I must refuse the
       appeal. This means the appellant is required to pay the full
       parking charge to the operator.
       #Post#: 112726--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: March 10, 2026, 12:01 pm
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       No problem - we can come up with a complaint - the NtK is 100%
       not compliant.
       Give me a day or two.
       #Post#: 112744--------------------------------------------------
       Re: EURO CAR PARK OVERSTAY SHELL PETROL STATION
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: March 10, 2026, 1:38 pm
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       Fill in the missing details and submit to POPLA as a complaint
       to info@popla.co.uk
       POPLA Complaint - Procedural failure by the Assessor to
       correctly identify non PoFA compliance in a Euro Car Parks NtK.
       POPLA Code -
       POPLA Assessor - Gayle Stanton.
       Dear Lead Assessor,
       Background;
       I have recently received an appeal response from POPLA regarding
       a Parking Charge Notice issued by Euro Car Parks.
       In my appeal I specifically demonstrated that the issued NtK was
       not compliant with all the required aspects of PoFA Schedule 4
       Paragraph 9(2).
       This complaint relates purely to the inability of the Assessor
       to correctly apply the legislation when required.
       In her assessment Gayle Stanton incorrectly establishes keeper
       liability when keeper liability cannot possibly occur due to
       multiple compliance issues.
       Clear procedural error;
       In simple terms, the Euro Car Parks NtK is not compliant with
       PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e).
       As you will see in my original appeal, I clearly lead the
       Assessor, very directly, to the exact failings of the operators
       NtK.
       I think it is fair to say that the Assessor could be left in
       absolutely no doubt what those failing were.
       In her appeal response, Gayle Stanton specifical mentions non
       compliance with Paragraph 9(2)(e) in the appeal summary at the
       start of her response.
       It is therefore unclear how such a clear and obvious mistake can
       be made.
       In her response, the Assessor explains the basics of PoFA and
       then states, " I have reviewed the notice to keeper against the
       relevant sections of PoFA 2012 and I am satisfied that it is
       compliant in all aspects."
       This statement is demonstrably false since an examination of the
       NtK clearly reveals the missing elements which would be required
       to make it 'compliant in all aspects'.
       In the first instance, I would draw your attention to the fact
       that the Assessor flatly refuses to engage with the precise
       evidence provided by myself in respect of the requirements of
       9(2)(e) - instead, she simply makes a blanket statement which
       never addresses the specific evidence.
       In my appeal I specifically invited the Assessor to demonstrate
       where the requirements of 9(2)(e) were met within the operators
       NtK - if the Assessor believed the wording to have been present
       then she could have easily copied this wording, verbatim, from
       the operators NtK in order to prove compliance with the required
       section.
       It is my opinion that the Assessor refuses to do this since it
       is obvious that the required wording is not present - the
       Assessor cannot present the evidence which is not there?
       I note with interest that the Assessor does engage in the more
       subjective elements of my appeal but deliberately and, in my
       opinion, purposefully, avoids the very specific and objective
       element which deals with PoFA compliance - because PoFA
       compliance is totally objective, any engagement with the issue
       raised (in terms of the precise requirements) would only lead to
       more clarity on the issue and that, in turn, would lead to a
       situation where the Assessor would be unable to demonstrate that
       the NtK was compliant - as a result the Assessor is forced into
       non engagement with the points raised because they are not
       rebuttable since the NtK does not contain the required wording
       and subsequent legal choice which 9(2)(e) requires.
       Correct procedure;
       Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e) states the following;
       The notice MUST
       (e)state that the creditor does not know both the name of the
       driver and a current address for service for the driver AND
       invite the keeper—
       (i)to pay the unpaid parking charges; or
       (ii)if the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to notify
       the creditor of the name of the driver and a current address for
       service for the driver and to pass the notice on to the driver;
       So, in order to establish compliance with 9(2)(e) we must
       examine the precise wording of the operators NtK - the word AND
       is deliberately emboldened by myself in order to draw your
       attention to the precise requirements - that the NtK must set
       out the prescribed wording AND then invite the keeper to choose
       between the two options which should be presented to the keeper
       at that precise point.
       So, in the case of the mandatory requirements of 9(2)(e),
       9(2)(e)(i) and 9(2)(e)(ii) we are looking for a section of
       prescribed mandatory wording immediately followed by the
       presentation of a two limbed legal choice which must be offered
       to the vehicle keeper (and not the driver).
       This should therefore be something along the lines of the
       following;
       ==============================================
       At the current time, Euro Car Parks (the creditor) does not know
       both the name and a current address for service for the driver.
       The keeper is therefore invited TO PAY THE UNPAID PARKING
       CHARGES
       or
       If the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to notify the
       creditor of the name of the driver and a current address for
       service for the driver and to pass this notice onto the driver.
       ==============================================
       The required paragraph is clearly missing from the operators NtK
       - if the required paragraph is present then please feel free to
       point it out to me?
       The information must be presented in this manner to be compliant
       ie in one paragraph. Compliance cannot be achieved by, for
       example, placing the information at random points throughout the
       NtK since this would not present the keeper with the text
       immediately followed by the legal choice which 9(2)(e) /
       9(2)(e)(i) / 9(2)(ii) requires - this point is clearly backed up
       by the precise wording of 9(2)(e) - the mandatory text which
       must be immediately followed by the invitation to the keeper to
       pay the charges or nominate another driver.
       In this particular instance it is immediately clear that;
       The Euro Car Parks NtK never states the essential mandatory
       wording required by para. 9(2)(e).
       The Euro Car Parks NtK never 'invites the keeper to pay the
       unpaid parking charges'.
       The Euro Car Parks NtK never uses the required mandatory word
       "or" to connect the two required limbs of the legal choice.
       The Euro Car Parks NtK never presents the two limbed legal
       invitation which para. 9(2)(e)(i) and 9(2)(e)(ii) demands.
       Summary;
       This, to be fair, is a very clear and obvious oversight by the
       Assessor given that she was lead directly to the NtK PoFA
       failings and that those failings were so clearly illustrated -
       this appears to demonstrate that Assessors are not adequately
       trained to deal with PoFA compliance even when they are
       presented with the evidence in a very clear fashion.
       I await, with interest, the outcome of your enquiries.
       Best wishes,
       xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
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