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       #Post#: 102026--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 11, 2025, 8:24 am
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       You are telling Hertz Collections that you formally dispute
       their £42 “administration fee” and you do not authorise payment.
       You explain that this is not a statutory fine but a private
       Parking Charge Notice on private land, that Hertz’s wording and
       pricing are inconsistent and unclear, and that no fine was
       actually paid by Hertz – they simply passed your details to
       GroupNexus, which is minimal administration.
       You also make it clear that the underlying PCN is in active
       dispute and will be escalated to POPLA, so it is premature and
       unfair for Hertz to pursue their own admin fee now. You then set
       out what you expect them to do: cancel the fee as a goodwill
       resolution, confirm the account is on hold and will not be
       passed to any third party while the dispute is open, confirm
       Hertz will not pay or settle the PCN on your behalf, or, if they
       refuse to cancel, provide the exact contractual clause they rely
       on and a full breakdown of how £42 is justified. Finally, you
       ask for their complaints procedure and confirmation that this is
       logged as a formal complaint.
       Here is a slightly better adaptation of the email you should
       send Hertz:
       --- Quote ---
       > Dear Hertz Collections,
       >
       > I dispute invoice 24366916 for £42 and do not authorise
       payment. Please place this account on hold while you review.
       >
       > This is not a fine or a penalty. It is a speculative invoice
       from an unregulated private parking company. GroupNexus is not
       an authority and no statutory penalty has been incurred. As
       Keeper, Hertz elected to transfer liability to me as Hirer under
       the provisions of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. Once that
       transfer has been made, GroupNexus cannot pursue Hertz under any
       circumstance and no liability can revert to you. Hertz has paid
       nothing and is not at risk of any future liability.
       >
       > Your administration fee is unsupported. Your correspondence
       and website contain inconsistent amounts and misleading
       references to “authorities” and “fines”, none of which apply.
       Passing on the hirer’s details is minimal administration and
       does not justify a £42 fee. The underlying speculative invoice
       is being actively contested with GroupNexus and will be
       escalated to POPLA. Pursuing an administration fee at this stage
       is premature.
       >
       > I require the following:
       >
       > [indent]1. Cancellation of the £42 administration fee.
       > 2. Written confirmation that the account is on hold and will
       not be referred to any third party while this dispute is open.
       > 3. If you refuse cancellation, the exact rental agreement
       clause relied upon and an itemised breakdown of the actual time
       and cost incurred to justify £42.
       > 4. Your formal complaints procedure and confirmation that this
       email is logged as a formal complaint.[/indent]
       >
       > I look forward to confirmation that the administration fee has
       been cancelled or, alternatively, a full response to each point
       above.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 102029--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: mjlazer
       Date: December 11, 2025, 8:34 am
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       Legend, thank you that's more concise and it's gone straight
       over to the Hertz Collections team.
       #Post#: 102036--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: mjlazer
       Date: December 11, 2025, 8:45 am
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       Next up, this is the POPLA appeal I've drafted based on examples
       I've found. Any feedback more than welcome. I have about a month
       to submit it.
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       Evidence to upload:
       - Hertz email forwarding the PCN
       - GroupNexus’ original document sent to Hertz (the original NTK
       quoting para 9)
       - The notice they sent to me (re-addressed, with no hire docs)
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       POPLA verification number [1753445551]
       Parking charge notice [2000064523643]
       - Operator CP Plus Ltd t/a GroupNexus
       - Vehicle OY26 VKY
       - Site Moto Blyth Services
       - Date of event 27/10/2025
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       I am the hirer of the vehicle. I deny any liability. The appeal
       is allowed on the following grounds.
       1. No keeper/hirer liability under POFA 2012 schedule 4 (hire
       vehicles)
       GroupNexus has not complied with the strict requirements of
       Schedule 4 paragraphs 13–14. What I received is plainly a
       re-addressed copy of the original Notice to Keeper to Hertz that
       still purports to rely on paragraph 9. For a hire vehicle, a
       valid Notice to Hirer must be served with all of the prescribed
       documents:
       - a copy of the hire agreement
       - a statement of liability signed by the hirer
       - a copy of the original notice
       None of these documents were enclosed. In addition, the operator
       has provided no evidence that any Notice to Hirer (with all
       enclosures) was delivered within the statutory timescale in para
       14(2)(a). POPLA will be able to see from the operator’s own
       rejection letter that they assert “we are holding the registered
       keeper liable”. The registered keeper is Hertz, not me. In the
       absence of full compliance with Sch 4 paras 13–14, the operator
       cannot transfer liability to the hirer/keeper. I am not naming
       the driver.
       This ground alone requires that the appeal be allowed.
       2. No evidence of landowner authority
       The operator is put to strict proof of a current, unredacted
       contract with the landowner (not merely a site agreement with an
       agent) that:
       - grants CP Plus/GroupNexus authority to manage parking, issue
       PCNs, and pursue charges to POPLA/court, and
       - covers this specific site and the material period
       If such authority is not produced, the charge is invalid under
       the BPA Code of Practice (section 7).
       3. Inadequate and non-prominent signage, including at EV
       charging bays
       The terms relied upon (free 2-hour limit and tariff thereafter)
       were not prominently brought to the attention of drivers using
       the EV charging area. The operator must supply a contemporaneous
       signage plan and dated photos showing: entrance signage
       legibility from a moving vehicle, the font sizes of the core
       terms, and the signs positioned at the EV chargers. Under the
       BPA Code (sections 19 & 21), core terms must be clear and
       prominent. In ParkingEye v Beavis, the Supreme Court stressed
       that charges are only enforceable where the signage is “clear
       and prominent”. That standard is not met here.
       4. No evidence of a compliant “period of parking” and failure to
       allow grace/consideration periods
       The times shown are ANPR entry/exit times, not the mandatory
       “period of parking” required by PoFA Sch 4. They will include
       circulation, queueing for a charger, connecting/disconnecting,
       and exiting. The BPA Code requires both a reasonable
       consideration period on arrival and a minimum 10-minute grace
       period on leaving. The operator is put to strict proof that both
       were allowed and that the alleged overstay is not merely ANPR
       timestamp padding.
       5. Unfair/unclear consumer terms
       If the operator relies on any alleged contractual term, it must
       be transparent and prominent. Given the EV-charging context and
       the absence of prominent warnings at the chargers themselves,
       any purported agreement to pay £100 is not transparent or fairly
       incorporated (Consumer Rights Act 2015). The operator is put to
       strict proof.
       Conclusion
       Because GroupNexus failed to comply with PoFA Schedule 4 for
       hire vehicles, they cannot transfer liability to me as
       hirer/keeper. The remaining points (authority, signage, and
       grace periods) give further independent reasons to allow the
       appeal. I request that POPLA uphold this appeal and direct the
       operator to cancel the charge.
       #Post#: 102044--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 11, 2025, 9:18 am
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       Here’s a tightened version with the points ordered and framed as
       needed: PoFA hire-vehicle failure front and centre, everything
       else clearly secondary/back-up. You can copy/paste and tweak
       dates/refs if needed.
       --- Quote ---
       > POPLA verification number: [1753445551]
       > Parking Charge Notice: [2000064523643]
       > Operator: CP Plus Ltd t/a GroupNexus
       > Vehicle: OY26 VKY
       > Site: Moto Blyth Services
       > Date of event: 27/10/2025
       >
       > I am the Hirer of the vehicle. I deny any liability. This
       appeal is made on the following grounds.
       >
       > 1. No Hirer/keeper liability under PoFA 2012 Schedule 4 (hire
       vehicles) – fatal to the charge
       >
       > GroupNexus has not complied with the strict requirements of
       Schedule 4, paragraphs 13 and 14 of the Protection of Freedoms
       Act 2012 (PoFA).
       >
       > What I received is plainly just a re-addressed copy of the
       original Notice to Keeper sent to Hertz, still purporting to
       rely on PoFA paragraph 9 (a notice to the registered keeper)
       rather than a compliant Notice to Hirer under PoFA paragraph 14.
       For a hire vehicle, a valid Notice to Hirer must:
       >
       > [indent]• be served on the Hirer within the mandatory
       timescale at paragraph 14(2)(a); and
       > • be accompanied by all of the prescribed documents at
       paragraph 13(2), namely:
       > [indent]– a copy of the hire agreement,
       > – a statement of liability signed by the Hirer, and
       > – a copy of the original notice.[/indent][/indent]
       >
       > None of these documents were enclosed with the notice sent to
       me. The operator has also provided no evidence that any fully
       compliant Notice to Hirer with all enclosures was ever delivered
       within the statutory deadline.
       >
       > Further, in their rejection letter GroupNexus state that they
       are “holding the registered keeper liable”. The registered
       keeper at the time of the event was Hertz, not me. I am the
       Hirer only. PoFA Schedule 4 creates a very narrow exception to
       the general rule that only the driver can be liable. For a hire
       vehicle, that exception only applies if the operator strictly
       complies with paragraphs 13 and 14. If they do not, then only
       the unknown driver could be liable and there is no lawful route
       to transfer liability to the Hirer.
       >
       > I am under no obligation to name the driver and I will not be
       doing so. In the absence of full and strict compliance with
       Schedule 4 paragraphs 13–14, GroupNexus cannot transfer
       liability from the unknown driver to the Hirer and cannot rely
       on any presumption, inference or “assumption” that the Hirer was
       also the driver. That is precisely what PoFA was enacted to
       prevent.
       >
       > Because the operator has failed to comply with PoFA 2012 for a
       hire vehicle, there is no Hirer or keeper liability. This point
       alone is fatal to their case and this appeal must be allowed.
       >
       > 2. No evidence of landowner authority and mismatch of
       contracting entity
       >
       > The operator is put to strict proof of their standing. They
       must produce a current, unredacted written agreement with the
       landholder (not merely an agreement with an agent) that:
       >
       > [indent]• identifies the land to which it applies (including
       Moto Blyth Services and this EV charging area);
       > • is in force for the material period; and
       > • expressly authorises the same legal entity that issued this
       PCN to:
       > [indent]– manage parking on the land,
       > – issue Parking Charge Notices in its own name, and
       > – pursue those charges through POPLA and, if they choose, the
       courts.[/indent][/indent]
       >
       > The PCN and correspondence are issued in the name “CP Plus Ltd
       t/a GroupNexus”. However, GroupNexus is now itself a separate
       limited company. CP Plus Ltd and GroupNexus Ltd are distinct
       legal entities. “CP Plus Ltd t/a GroupNexus” is not, in itself,
       a company that can hold a contract with the landowner. Any
       landholder agreement will be with either CP Plus Ltd or
       GroupNexus Ltd (or some other entity), not with a hybrid trading
       description.
       >
       > The operator is therefore put to strict proof that:
       >
       > [indent]• the landowner contract is with the same legal person
       that issued this PCN; and
       > • if the contract is with a different entity (for example CP
       Plus Ltd only, or GroupNexus Ltd only), there has been a clear,
       properly executed assignment or novation of rights that permits
       the PCN-issuing entity to enforce charges in its own
       name.[/indent]
       >
       > The Private Parking Single Code of Practice requires operators
       to have written authorisation from the landholder covering the
       relevant land and specifying the correct operator identity. If
       the operator cannot produce such authority, or if the agreement
       is with a different company to the one issuing this PCN, then
       they have no locus standi and the charge cannot be enforced.
       >
       > 3. Inadequate and non-prominent signage, including at the EV
       charging bays
       >
       > The terms relied upon (a “free” 2-hour limit and tariff
       thereafter) were not clearly and prominently brought to the
       attention of motorists using the EV charging area.
       >
       > The operator is put to strict proof, with contemporaneous
       evidence, of:
       >
       > [indent]• a site plan showing the locations of all signs,
       > • dated photographs of each sign in situ at the material time,
       > • the text on those signs, and
       > • the font sizes of the “core” terms (time limit, charge
       level) on any signs visible from the EV bay used.[/indent]
       >
       > In particular, they must show that:
       >
       > [indent]• there is a clear and legible entrance sign that can
       be read from a moving vehicle; and
       > • there are clear, prominent tariff/terms signs positioned at
       or immediately adjacent to the EV chargers, such that a driver
       using the chargers would have the key terms drawn to their
       attention before or while parking.[/indent]
       >
       > Under the BPA Code of Practice (for signage) core terms must
       be clear and prominent. In ParkingEye v Beavis, the Supreme
       Court stressed that charges are only enforceable where the
       signage is “clear and prominent” so that the motorist is fully
       informed. That standard is not met if the EV-area terms are
       buried in small print or not clearly displayed at all.
       >
       > 4. No evidence of a compliant “period of parking” and failure
       to allow the mandatory grace period
       >
       > The operator appears to rely solely on ANPR entry and exit
       timestamps. Those record only the times the vehicle drove past
       the cameras (time on site), not the “period of parking” required
       by PoFA Schedule 4.
       >
       > These timestamps will inevitably include non-parking time such
       as:
       > [indent]• circulation while looking for a space or charger,
       > • any queueing for a charger to become free,
       > • time spent manoeuvring, connecting and disconnecting the
       vehicle, and
       > • driving to the exit and waiting to leave.[/indent]
       >
       > PoFA Schedule 4 requires that the operator identifies a
       “period of parking”, not merely the total time between passing
       cameras. The operator is put to strict proof that they have:
       > [indent]• identified a true period of parking in accordance
       with PoFA, excluding all non-parking time; and
       > • then applied the mandatory post-parking grace period
       required by the applicable Code of Practice before issuing a
       charge.[/indent]
       >
       > If they cannot demonstrate both a properly defined period of
       parking and a correctly applied grace period at the end, they
       cannot show that any breach of a parking term has actually
       occurred.
       >
       > 5. Unfair and unclear consumer terms
       >
       > If the operator seeks to rely on any contractual term
       requiring payment of £100, that term must be transparent,
       prominent, and fairly incorporated into any alleged contract
       with the driver, particularly in the specific context of EV
       charging.
       >
       > Given:
       >
       > [indent]• the EV-specific layout,
       > • the lack of clearly-prominent warnings at the chargers
       themselves, and
       > • the operator’s failure (to date) to show that any driver
       using the EV charger would have seen and accepted a clear offer
       to pay £100,[/indent]
       >
       > any purported agreement to pay this sum is not transparent or
       fairly incorporated, and is unfair under the Consumer Rights Act
       2015. The operator is put to strict proof that the alleged
       contractual term satisfies the requirements of transparency and
       prominence.
       >
       > Conclusion
       >
       > GroupNexus has failed to comply with PoFA 2012 Schedule 4 for
       hire vehicles and therefore cannot transfer liability to me as
       Hirer. The driver is not identified, and without strict PoFA
       compliance there is no lawful basis to hold the Hirer or keeper
       liable or to presume that the Hirer was the driver. That is a
       complete defence and this appeal should be allowed on that
       ground alone.
       >
       > In the alternative, even if POPLA were to look beyond that
       fatal defect, the operator has also failed to demonstrate
       landowner authority, adequate and prominent signage (especially
       at the EV chargers), a properly defined “period of parking” with
       a mandatory post-parking grace period, or fair and transparent
       consumer terms.
       >
       > For all of these reasons, I respectfully request that POPLA
       uphold this appeal and direct the operator to cancel the Parking
       Charge.
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 102462--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: mjlazer
       Date: December 15, 2025, 4:25 am
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       Thank you, this is extremely helpful and appreciated.
       For the POPLA appeal, am I right in thinking I would need to
       select 'Other' as the reason rather than 'I was not the driver
       or the registered keeper of the vehicle at the time'?
       #Post#: 102472--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 15, 2025, 5:16 am
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       Correct. Just select "Other".
       #Post#: 107316--------------------------------------------------
       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: mjlazer
       Date: January 25, 2026, 1:20 pm
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       Well, we did it 🥳🍾
       The predatory scumbags at GroupNexus have given up and withdrawn
       the parking charge.
       Big shout out to jfollows, b789, and everyone else who
       contributed to this momentous (at least for me) decision. I
       didn't even think this was possible, really, but I've learned a
       lot and can't wait to sound like a boffin down the pub next time
       someone says they've got an unlawful parking charge.
       Peace ✌🏼
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       Re: How does the PCN deadline work while transferring liability
       from Hertz to hirer/keeper?
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: January 25, 2026, 1:59 pm
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       Good, thank you for letting us know.
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