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       PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The White 
       Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: markeman Date: November 2, 2025, 2:12 pm
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       Vehicle stopped briefly in a pub car park to use the loo,
       stretch legs and catch up on emails in between ferrying kids
       around.  The pub requires vehicles are registered on arrival but
       this was missed, resulting in the following NTK:
       [list]
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       [li]
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       [/list]
       I expect the pub will require proof of purchase to assist in
       waiving the PCN, but unfortunately nothing was purchased on this
       occasion.
       No action taken re. the PCN yet.
       Any guidance from the experts here would be very welcome as
       always, thank you
       #Post#: 96566--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: b789 Date: November 2, 2025, 5:55 pm
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       No one pays a penny to ECP if they follow the advice we give
       here. Most ECP PCNs that are challenged go all the way to a
       county court claim which is issued by DCB Legal. As long as any
       DCB Legal claim is defended, it will eventually either be struck
       out or discontinued. That is 99.9% for sure.
       Normally, you go through the process of initial appeal,
       rejection, POPLA appeal, rejection, county court claim, defence,
       strike-out/discontinuance. The initial appeal is generic but it
       covers the main point that the Notice to Keeper (NtK) is not
       fully compliant with ALL the requirements of PoFA 2012 to be
       able to hold the Keeper liable if the driver is not identified.
       This is the normal recommended appeal process: There is no legal
       obligation on the known keeper (the recipient of the Notice to
       Keeper (NtK)) to reveal the identity of the unknown driver and
       no inference or assumptions can be made.
       The NtK is not compliant with all the requirements of PoFA which
       means that if the unknown driver is not identified, they cannot
       transfer liability for the charge from the unknown driver to the
       known keeper.
       Use the following as your appeal. No need to embellish or remove
       anything from it:
       [quote]I am the keeper of the vehicle and I dispute your
       'parking charge'. I deny any liability or contractual agreement
       and I will be making a complaint about your predatory conduct to
       your client landowner.
       As your Notice to Keeper (NtK) does not fully comply with ALL
       the requirements of PoFA 2012, you are unable to hold the keeper
       of the vehicle liable for the charge. Partial or even
       substantial compliance is not sufficient. There will be no
       admission as to who was driving and no inference or assumptions
       can be drawn. ECP has relied on contract law allegations of
       breach against the driver only.
       The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have
       been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation
       of the law of agency. Your NtK can only hold the driver liable.
       ECP have no hope at POPLA, so you are urged to save us both a
       complete waste of time and cancel the PCN.[/quote]
       Once you receive the appeal rejection, come back and we will
       provide the POPLA appeal, which will go into greater detail on
       why the PCN fails to comply with PoFA para 9(2)(e)(i).
       #Post#: 97497--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: markeman Date: November 9, 2025, 3:55 pm
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       Thank you [member=26]b789[/member], appeal submitted
       #Post#: 101074--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: markeman Date: December 5, 2025, 3:47 am
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       ECP have rejected the appeal.   Interesting they state "Euro Car
       Parks do not need to provide evidence of who was driving the
       vehicle, it is the registered keeper’s responsibility to inform
       of the full name and address within 28 days beginning with the
       day after the notice was given".
       Their response in full:
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       [li]
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       [li]
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       #Post#: 101133--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: b789 Date: December 5, 2025, 8:59 am
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       Just do a search for any other of the multitude of ECP PANs on
       this forum. Even a POPLA appeal is unlikely o be successful. So
       what? A POPLA decision is not binding on the appellant.
       You can do a search for any other POPLA appeal on here and adapt
       it if you feel the urge to make one. Even if you do nothing, you
       can safely ignore all the useless debt recovery letters that you
       will receive and all you haver to do is defend a claim once they
       issue it through DCB Legal. We will assist with that and I can
       guarantee with greater than 99.9% certainty that the claim will
       either be struck out or discontinued.
       If you still want to bother with a POPLA appeal, then show us
       something you have concocted based on any of the more recent
       examples you can find on here and we will advise on whether it
       needs any amendments. There is more than enough material on the
       forum for you to put something together yourself.
       #Post#: 102328--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: markeman Date: December 13, 2025, 11:01 am
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       My sample POPLA appeal below, I would very much welcome expert
       advice.
       Other POPLA appeals on the forum refer to "3. Defective warning
       of keeper liability (Paragraph 9(2)(f))" in relation to the PoFA
       requirement to warn that the keeper will become liable "after
       the period of 28 days beginning with the day after that on which
       the notice is given", but I note on the original NtK ECP did use
       the correct wording so I have excluded this from the appeal.
       [hr]
       POPLA Appeal – Euro Car Parks – M&B - The White Horse, Shenley
       I am the registered keeper of the vehicle. I appeal this Parking
       Charge Notice as keeper only. There will be no admission as to
       the identity of the driver, and no assumptions or inferences can
       be drawn.
       The Notice to Keeper (NtK) fails to comply with multiple
       mandatory provisions of Schedule 4, Paragraph 9 of the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (“PoFA”), and therefore no
       keeper liability can arise. The operator may only pursue the
       driver for payment, not the registered keeper. The deficiencies
       are as follows:
       1. Failure to specify the period of parking (Paragraph 9(2)(a))
       PoFA requires the NtK to “specify the vehicle, the relevant land
       on which it was parked and the period of parking to which the
       notice relates.”
       This NtK contains no “period of parking”.  It merely states that
       a parking charge was issued for “vehicle was not authorised to
       park” and refers to a date of issue.  ANPR systems record entry
       and exit times, but those are not synonymous with a period of
       parking because they do not show when the vehicle was
       stationary.  The vehicle may have spent time queuing,
       manoeuvring, or exiting.  The Department for Transport’s
       statutory guidance and persuasive appeal decisions (e.g. Brennan
       v Premier Parking (2023)) make clear that a period of parking
       must refer to an actual time parked, not merely camera
       timestamps. This omission renders the NtK non-compliant with
       9(2)(a).
       2. Failure to properly invite the keeper to pay or name the
       driver (Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i))
       PoFA requires the notice to “state that the creditor does not
       know both the name of the driver and a current address for
       service for the driver and invite the keeper—(i) to pay the
       unpaid parking charges; or (ii) if the keeper was not the
       driver, to provide the name of the driver and a current address
       for service for the driver.”
       The NtK does not invite the keeper to pay. Instead, it commands:
       “If you were not the driver... please provide full name and
       address of the driver in writing and pass the notice ont to the
       driver".  This is a material deviation from the statutory
       wording. Parliament intended the keeper to be given the option
       either to pay or to name the driver. A command to “inform us” is
       not an invitation to pay. The omission defeats one of PoFA’s key
       procedural safeguards and invalidates keeper liability.
       3. Failure to unambiguously identify the creditor (Paragraph
       9(2)(h))
       PoFA requires the NtK to “identify the creditor and specify how
       and to whom payment or notification to the creditor may be
       made.”
       The NtK makes conflicting assertions, in one that "the Parking
       Charge is now payable to Euro Car Parks (as the creditor)” and
       in another "The Parking Charge Notice.. is now payable to Euro
       Car Parks Ltd (as the creditor)".  The the full legal entity
       name is unclear (possibly omitted), and the company number and
       registered address are ommitted.  Without a full legal identity,
       the keeper cannot know who the creditor actually is, making the
       notice defective under 9(2)(h).
       4. Ambiguous dating and delivery wording (Paragraphs 9(2)(i) and
       9(4))
       PoFA requires the notice to “specify the date on which the
       notice is sent (given)” and defines when it is deemed “given.”
       The NtK refers only to a “Date Issued” without confirming when
       or how it was sent or delivered. This vagueness prevents a
       reliable calculation of statutory deadlines and is another
       failure to meet PoFA’s strict requirements.
       Conclusion
       PoFA Schedule 4 is a strict liability framework: every
       requirement must be met before any right to recover a parking
       charge from a vehicle’s keeper arises. The NtK in this case
       fails to meet at least paragraphs 9(2)(a) and 9(2)(e), and is
       further undermined by non-compliance with 9(2)(h) and 9(2)(i).
       As a result, Euro Car Parks cannot transfer liability from the
       unknown driver to the keeper. The operator may only pursue the
       driver, whose identity has not been provided. The appeal should
       therefore be allowed.
       Other Consideration
       I also require strict proof of a valid, contemporaneous contract
       or lease flowing from the landowner that authorises the operator
       to manage parking, issue PCNs, and pursue legal action in its
       own name. I refer the operator and the POPLA assessor to Section
       14 of the PPSCoP (Relationship with Landowner), which clearly
       sets out mandatory minimum requirements that must be evidenced
       before any parking charge may be issued on controlled land.
       In particular, Section 14.1(a)–(j) requires the operator to have
       in place written confirmation from the landowner which includes:
       • the identity of the landowner,
       • a boundary map of the land to be managed,
       • applicable byelaws,
       • the duration and scope of authority granted,
       • detailed parking terms and conditions including any specific
       permissions or exemptions,
       • the means of issuing PCNs,
       • responsibility for obtaining planning and advertising
       consents,
       • and the operator’s obligations and appeal procedure under the
       Code.
       These requirements are not optional. They are a condition
       precedent to issuing a PCN and bringing any associated action.
       Accordingly, I put the operator to strict proof of compliance
       with the entirety of Section 14 of the PPSCoP. Any document that
       contains redactions must not obscure the above conditions. The
       document must also be dated and signed by identifiable persons,
       with evidence of their authority to act on behalf of the parties
       to the agreement. The operator must provide an agreement showing
       clear authorisation from the landowner for this specific site.
       #Post#: 102331--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: jfollows Date: December 13, 2025, 11:15 am
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       Good, but when reading that I also want to see precisely what
       PoFA says, in other words I want you to quote the precise text
       as well.
       If nothing else, some POPLA assessors are, shall we say, a bit
       dim, so they need strong guidance.
       #Post#: 102385--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: b789 Date: December 14, 2025, 5:28 am
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       I wouldn't place much hope on POPLA. If it works, then great.
       However, 99% of these ECP PCNs are won when they eventually give
       it to DCB Legal to issue a county court claim and if you follow
       the advice, I can guarantee that the claim will either be struck
       out or discontinued. It just takes longer but there is nothing
       to worry about.
       I am always prepared to take any bet at 10:1 that this will
       never reach a hearing in county court. Any takers?
       #Post#: 102395--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: markeman Date: December 14, 2025, 9:01 am
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       [member=636]jfollows[/member] Thank you, please see v2 of POPLA
       appeal below incorporating feedback (main changes are consistent
       use of "NtK" abbreviation; latest text copied from PoFA
       legislation online
  HTML https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2012/9/schedule/4/paragraph/9;<br
       />latest text copied from PPSCoP Section 14 online
  HTML https://www.britishparking.co.uk/write/Documents/AOS/NEW%20Redesigned%20Documents/sectorsingleCodeofPractice.pdf<br
       />and expanded for completeness covering all points (a)-(j)).
       [member=26]b789[/member] Noted re. chance of POPLA success.
       Happy for the process to play out in full, doesn't seem like
       much, if any, downside.
       [hr]
       POPLA Appeal – Euro Car Parks – M&B - The White Horse, Shenley
       I am the registered keeper of the vehicle. I appeal this Parking
       Charge Notice as keeper only. There will be no admission as to
       the identity of the driver, and no assumptions or inferences can
       be drawn.
       The Notice to Keeper (NtK) fails to comply with multiple
       mandatory provisions of Schedule 4, Paragraph 9 of the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (“PoFA”), and therefore no
       keeper liability can arise. The operator may only pursue the
       driver for payment, not the registered keeper. The deficiencies
       are as follows:
       1. Failure to specify the period of parking (Paragraph 9(2)(a))
       PoFA requires the NtK to “specify the vehicle, the relevant land
       on which it was parked and the period of parking to which the
       notice relates.”
       This NtK contains no “period of parking”.  It merely states that
       a parking charge was issued for “vehicle was not authorised to
       park” and refers to a date of issue.  ANPR systems record entry
       and exit times, but those are not synonymous with a period of
       parking because they do not show when the vehicle was
       stationary.  The vehicle may have spent time queuing,
       manoeuvring, or exiting.  The Department for Transport’s
       statutory guidance and persuasive appeal decisions (e.g. Brennan
       v Premier Parking (2023)) make clear that a period of parking
       must refer to an actual time parked, not merely camera
       timestamps. This omission renders the NtK non-compliant with
       9(2)(a).
       2. Failure to properly invite the keeper to pay or name the
       driver (Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i))
       PoFA requires the NtK to “state that the creditor does not know
       both the name of the driver and a current address for service
       for the driver and invite the keeper- (i) to pay the unpaid
       parking charges; or (ii) if the keeper was not the driver of the
       vehicle, to notify the creditor of the name of the driver and a
       current address for service for the driver and to pass the
       notice on to the driver"
       The NtK does not invite the keeper to pay. Instead, it commands:
       “If you were not the driver... please provide full name and
       address of the driver in writing and pass the notice ont to the
       driver".  This is a material deviation from the statutory
       wording. Parliament intended the keeper to be given the option
       either to pay or to name the driver. A command to “inform us” is
       not an invitation to pay. The omission defeats one of PoFA’s key
       procedural safeguards and invalidates keeper liability.
       3. Failure to unambiguously identify the creditor (Paragraph
       9(2)(h))
       PoFA requires the NtK to “identify the creditor and specify how
       and to whom payment or notification to the creditor may be
       made”.
       The NtK makes conflicting assertions, in one that "the Parking
       Charge is now payable to Euro Car Parks (as the creditor)” and
       in another "The Parking Charge Notice.. is now payable to Euro
       Car Parks Ltd (as the creditor)".  The the full legal entity
       name is unclear (possibly omitted), and the company number and
       registered address are ommitted.  Without a full legal identity,
       the keeper cannot know who the creditor actually is, making the
       notice defective under 9(2)(h).
       4. Ambiguous dating and delivery wording (Paragraphs 9(2)(i) and
       9(4))
       PoFA requires the NtK to “specify the date on which the notice
       is sent (where it is sent by post) or given (in any other case)”
       in Paragraph 9(2)(i) and defines when it is deemed “given” in
       Paragraph 9(4) as "(a) handing it to the keeper, or leaving it
       at a current address for service for the keeper, within the
       relevant period; or (b) sending it by post to a current address
       for service for the keeper so that it is delivered to that
       address within the relevant period."
       The NtK refers only to a “Date Issued” without confirming when
       or how it was sent or delivered. This vagueness prevents a
       reliable calculation of statutory deadlines and is another
       failure to meet PoFA’s strict requirements.
       Conclusion
       PoFA Schedule 4 is a strict liability framework: every
       requirement must be met before any right to recover a parking
       charge from a vehicle’s keeper arises. The NtK in this case
       fails to meet at least paragraphs 9(2)(a) and 9(2)(e), and is
       further undermined by non-compliance with 9(2)(h) and 9(2)(i).
       As a result, Euro Car Parks cannot transfer liability from the
       unknown driver to the keeper. The operator may only pursue the
       driver, whose identity has not been provided. The appeal should
       therefore be allowed.
       Other Considerations
       I also require strict proof of a valid, contemporaneous contract
       or lease flowing from the landowner that authorises the operator
       to manage parking, issue PCNs, and pursue legal action in its
       own name. I refer the operator and the POPLA assessor to Section
       14 of the Private Parking Sector single Code of Practice
       ("PPSCoP") titled "Relationship with Landowner", which clearly
       sets out mandatory minimum requirements that must be evidenced
       before any parking charge may be issued on controlled land:
       "Where controlled land is being managed on behalf of a
       landowner(s), before a parking charge can be issued written
       confirmation must be obtained by the parking operator from the
       landowner(s) covering:
       a) the identity of the landowner(s)
       b) a boundary map of the land to be managed;
       c) such byelaws as may apply to the land relating to the
       management of parking;
       d) the permission granted to the parking operator by the
       landowner(s) and the duration of that permission
       e) the parking terms and conditions that are to be applied by
       the parking operator, including as appropriate the duration of
       free parking permitted, parking tariffs, and specific
       permissions and exemptions, e.g. for staff, residents or those
       stopping for short periods such as taxi and minicab drivers,
       delivery drivers and couriers;
       f) the means by which parking charges will be issued;
       g) responsibility for obtaining relevant consents e.g. planning
       or advertising consents relating to signs
       h) the obligations under which the parking operator is working,
       in compliance with this Code and as a member of an ATA;
       i) notification of the documentation that the parking operator
       may be required to supply on request to authorised bodies
       detailing the relationship with the landowner; and
       j) the parking operator’s approach to the handling of appeals
       against parking charges"
       These requirements are not optional. They are a condition
       precedent to issuing a PCN and bringing any associated action.
       Accordingly, I put the operator to strict proof of compliance
       with the entirety of Section 14 of the PPSCoP. Any document that
       contains redactions must not obscure the above conditions. The
       document must also be dated and signed by identifiable persons,
       with evidence of their authority to act on behalf of the parties
       to the agreement. The operator must provide an agreement showing
       clear authorisation from the landowner for this specific site.
       #Post#: 102397--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Euro Car Parks - Vehicle not authorised to park - The Wh
       ite Horse Pub, Shenley
       By: b789 Date: December 14, 2025, 9:36 am
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       That's the point... there is NO downside. Even if you did
       nothing until the N1SDT Claim Form lands on your doorstep, as
       long as you defend, with or without the template I normally
       suggest, if it isn't struck out, it WILL be discontinued.
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