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       #Post#: 95896--------------------------------------------------
       PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: rjcbooth666
       Date: October 28, 2025, 7:56 am
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       Hi all
       We've just received a PCN from Euro Car Parks for parking in a
       pub car park without a ticket. I knew that a ticket had been
       bought but when it was retrieved from the car I discovered it
       only had a partial registration plate on it. This must have been
       entered incorrectly either by human or machine failure.
       I have attached the PCN and the parking ticket itself.
       I have not appealed yet. Would that count against me if it goes
       to court?
       Here are links to both sides of the PCN and both sides of the
       parking ticket.
       PCN p1:
  HTML https://ibb.co/MDjGxgqv
       PCN p2:
  HTML https://ibb.co/qMyDSMHX
       Ticket front:
  HTML https://ibb.co/SDhLRGqD
       Ticket back:
  HTML https://ibb.co/DPdgjP5z
       Thanks for any advice.
       Bob
       #Post#: 95929--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 28, 2025, 10:50 am
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       It is a common failure with many P&D machines that issue a
       physical ticket. However, the unregulated parking operator will
       not give a damn and will gleefully issue a PCN as it is easy
       money for them, especially f their victim is low-hanging fruit
       on the gullible tree and likely to pay up out of ignorance and
       fear.
       I can tell that if you follow the advice we give here, you will
       not be paying a penny to ECP. They are easily defeated but it is
       a protracted process that will go all the way to a county court
       claim, issued through DCB Legal. I can tell you with greater
       than 99.9% certainty that any claim issued though DCB Legal that
       is defended, and we provide the defence, will either be struck
       out or discontinued.
       To begin with, appeal to ECP with the following:
       --- Quote ---
       > I am the Keeper of the vehicle and I dispute your parking
       charge. I deny any liability or contractual agreement and will
       be making a complaint about your predatory conduct to your
       client landowner. I am under no legal obligation to identify the
       driver to an unregulated private parking firm.
       >
       > A valid pay-to-park session was purchased by the driver. Your
       machine recorded only the last three characters of the VRM,
       showing “OTA” on the receipt, whereas the full VRM is “J60OTA”.
       This is not a “gross keying error” by the driver but a failure
       of your equipment to record the full VRM. You could have very
       easily verify the payment by cross-checking your payment logs
       for an unreconciled transaction against “OTA” at the material
       time.
       >
       > As your Notice to Keeper (NtK) does not fully comply with ALL
       the requirements of PoFA 2012, you are unable to hold the keeper
       of the vehicle liable for the charge. In particular, it fails
       paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) because it does not include the required
       invitation for the keeper to pay the charge.
       >
       > Partial or even substantial compliance is not sufficient.
       There will be no admission as to who was driving and no
       inference or assumptions can be drawn. ECP has relied on
       contract law allegations of breach against the driver only.
       >
       > The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have
       been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation
       of the law of agency. Your NtK can only hold the driver liable.
       ECP have no hope at POPLA, so you are urged to save us both a
       complete waste of time and cancel the PCN.
       --- End Quote ---
       If/when that is rejected, come back for a POPLA appeal.
       #Post#: 95942--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: rjcbooth666
       Date: October 28, 2025, 11:55 am
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       Thank you so much for this.
       The appeal form does not have space for for the full text that
       you have provided. It appears to be limited to just under 800
       characters including spaces.
       I can attach the full text as a PDF or I can send a hard copy by
       post (or both). Which do you suggest.
       Should I attach the scan on my parking ticket?
       Thanks,
       Bob
       #Post#: 95946--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 28, 2025, 12:15 pm
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       So attach it as a PDF. I don't understand the problem? Just get
       it submitted!
       #Post#: 95949--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: rjcbooth666
       Date: October 28, 2025, 12:27 pm
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       Thank you for confirming. The appeal is submitted and will be
       processed within 28 days.
       Bob
       #Post#: 99437--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: rjcbooth666
       Date: November 23, 2025, 1:20 pm
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       Hi guys
       It won't surprise you to heat that my appeal was rejected. I
       received the rejection as an email with a PDF attachment. The
       email address was a noreply address.
       Below is the text from the PDF:
       What do you recommend as my next move please? I really
       appreciate your help.
       ===================
       Date: 21/11/2025
       Our Ref: [REMOVED MY MOD]
       Unique POPLA Verification Code: [REMOVED MY MOD]
       Dear ************ (ON BEHALF OF THE DRIVER),
       Thank you for your letter of appeal. The details of the Parking
       Charge Notice are as follows:
       Parking Charge Notice Number: [REMOVED MY MOD] Date of Issue:
       13/10/2025
       Vehicle Registration Mark: FJ60OTA Time of Issue: 17:53:23
       The Site: JDW - The Dominie Cross - Retford
       Breach of Terms and Conditions:
       No valid pay and display/permit was
       purchased
       Having carefully considered the supporting evidence provided by
       you, Euro Car Parks (ECP) have
       decided to reject your appeal for the following reasons:
       • The Site is operated by an Automatic Number Plate Recognition
       (ANPR) system and patrolled
       by ECP employees.
       • When purchasing a pay and display ticket or mobile payment
       session, payment is required for
       the full duration of your stay and the full and correct vehicle
       registration mark. Signage at the
       site clearly details the terms and conditions that you must
       adhere to.
       • Your appeal states that you purchased a pay and display ticket
       or mobile payment session,
       however, after checking the providers mobile payment and/or pay
       and display machine audit
       reports for your stay, there are no transactions for the vehicle
       registration mark which would
       suggest there has been a “major keying error” when purchasing a
       pay and display
       ticket/mobile payment session.
       • Euro Car Parks do not need to provide evidence of who was
       driving the vehicle, it is the
       registered keeper’s responsibility to inform of the full name
       and address within 28 days
       beginning with the day after the notice was given. If the full
       amount remains unpaid, under
       Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (‘the Act’),
       Euro Car Parks have the right
       subject of the Act to recover from the keeper of the vehicle at
       the time it was parked so much
       of that amount which remains unpaid.
       ECP can confirm the parking charge notice has been issued
       correctly and the £20.00 administration
       fee is now due as per the British Parking Association Code of
       Practice. Failure to pay the £20.00
       administration fee within 14 days from the date of this letter
       the parking charge notice amount will
       revert back to the original amount due when the appeal was
       logged.
       Oct 13, 2025 16:46:51 Oct 13, 2025 17:47:02 327102 JDW - The
       Dominie Cross - Retford JDC02B Up To 2 Hours OTA £2.00
       C1 MB
       AR/DB/v.001
       Once the payment of the £20.00 administration fee has been
       received within 14 days from the date of
       this letter, the parking charge notice will be closed and
       considered settled.
       Payment of the £20.00 is now due. Please use one of the
       following options below to make
       payment:
       1. Online: By visiting
  HTML https://www.eurocarparks.com/pay-a-parking-charge/
       2. Phone: Use the automated telephone service 0203 553 4559.
       3. Post: Make your cheque payable to Euro Car Parks Limited
       (include a £2.50 handling charge
       for cheque processing) and post to Euro Car Parks Ltd, 30 Dorset
       Square, London, NW1
       6QJ, quoting the PCN number on the reverse of the cheque.
       The above amount is now due and the parking charge notice will
       be held for 14 days from the date of
       this letter to allow time to make payment.
       You have now reached the end of our internal appeals procedure.
       You can make an appeal to the Independent Appeals Service, POPLA
       (Parking on Private Land
       Appeals) using the unique POPLA Reference code provided above.
       Please note, should you decide
       to appeal to POPLA, or if you appeal to POPLA and your appeal is
       subsequently rejected, the option
       to pay the £20.00 administration fee/discounted amount will no
       longer be available and the Full
       Amount of the PCN will be due.
       Please note - if the parking charge notice was issued in
       Scotland and or Northern Ireland, only “The
       Driver” can appeal to POPLA.
       If you decide to appeal to POPLA, you will need to visit the
       website, www.popla.co.uk where further
       details of how to appeal (either online or by downloading the
       relevant forms) can be found. If the
       driver is unable to access the website, please use the contact
       us page at
  HTML https://www.popla.co.uk/contact.
       Please ensure that the POPLA
       Reference Number as noted above is
       quoted on all correspondence to POPLA. You have 28 days from the
       date of this letter to submit an
       appeal to POPLA. If you appeal to POPLA, the parking charge
       notice will be placed on hold.
       Appeals may not be accepted if payment is made against the
       Parking Charge Notice, including any
       appeals logged via POPLA.
       If you choose to ignore this letter, we will seek to recover the
       outstanding amount owed to us through
       the debt recovery process and procedure, this may lead to court
       action against you.
       By law, we are also required to inform you that the Ombudsman
       Services (www.ombudsman-
       services.org) provides an alternative dispute resolution service
       that would be able to assist with your appeal. Please note, we
       have not chosen to participate in their dispute resolution
       service and as such,
       should you wish to appeal then you must do so to POPLA, as
       detailed above.
       Yours sincerely
       PCN Coordinator
       Parking Charge Notice Department
       #Post#: 99465--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: b789
       Date: November 23, 2025, 11:17 pm
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       You may want to redact the POPLA code and PCN number as anyone
       with malicious intent can now log in and submit a nursery rhyme
       or anything for your POPLA appeal.
       The appeal rejection is exactly as expected. You can now submit
       a POPLA appeal. Just search the forum for any recent POPLA
       appeals and put one together for yourself.
       Before you submit anything, show it to us here and we will
       advise on any changes it may need. You already have the first
       two “hooks” for the appeal in the initial appeal… no Keeper
       liability and a payment that can be reconciled. Add in their
       woeful signage and put them to strict proof of standing to
       operate and issue PCNs in their own name.
       #Post#: 100869--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: rjcbooth666
       Date: December 3, 2025, 8:31 am
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       Thank you. I have found an example of an ECN POPLA appeal and
       adapted it using the hooks that you had provided. I include it
       below. Will it suffice?
       Thanks again for your help and guidance.
       ----------
       POPLA Appeal
       Verification Code: xxxx
       Parking Charge Ref: xxxx
       Vehicle Registration: xxxx
       Operator: Euro Car Parks
       Appellant: The Keeper
       I am the Keeper of the vehicle and I submit this appeal on the
       following grounds:
       1. Valid Pay to Park Purchased - Equipment failed to record to
       full VRM
       2. No Driver Liability – No Admission of Driving; Operator
       Attempting to Hold an Unidentified Party Liable
       3. The signage fails to comply with the requirements of PoFA
       2012 Schedule 4 Paragraphs 2(2) and 2(3)(b)(ii).
       4. The operator is put to strict proof that its signage complies
       with the BPA Code of Practice v9 (January 2024).
       5. The operator is put to strict proof that it holds a valid and
       contemporaneous contract with the landowner authorising the
       issuing of PCNs in its own name.
       No evidence has been provided as to the identity of the driver,
       and no liability can transfer to the Hirer in the absence of
       PoFA compliance.
       1. A valid pay-to-park session was purchased by the driver of
       the vehicle at the time of the alleged contravention.. The
       machine in the car park managed by Euro Car Parks recorded only
       the last three characters of the VRM, showing “OTA” on the
       receipt, whereas the full VRM is “J60OTA”. This is not a “gross
       keying error” by the driver but a failure of the equipment to
       record the full VRM. Euro Car Parks could have very easily
       verified the payment by cross-checking their payment logs for an
       unreconciled transaction against “OTA” at the material time.
       2. No Driver Liability – No Admission of Driving; Operator
       Attempting to Hold the Wrong Party Liable
       The Keeper has made no admission as to the identity of the
       driver of the vehicle at the time of the alleged contravention.
       No such admission is required, and no lawful presumption can be
       made. The operator is not entitled to infer, assume, or
       speculate that the Keeper was the driver.
       This appeal is made strictly in the capacity of Keeper, and Euro
       Car Parks is fully aware that their ability to pursue the Keeper
       relies on strict compliance with Schedule 4, Paragraph 14 of the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. As established in Section 1 of
       this appeal, ECP has not complied with the mandatory conditions
       of Paragraph 14. Therefore, they have no lawful basis to
       transfer liability to the Keeper.
       Where liability cannot transfer, the only party potentially
       liable is the driver. However, where the driver has not been
       identified — and no lawful inference can be drawn — the operator
       is left without a liable party.
       The law is unequivocal. PoFA does not permit a parking operator
       to simply pursue the most convenient or likely person. Liability
       must lie either with:
       •The driver (if known or admitted); or
       • The keeper but only if full and correct PoFA compliance has
       been achieved.
       In this case, the Keeper is not shown to be the driver, and the
       operator has failed to meet the statutory gateway for pursuing
       the Keeper. Therefore, no party is lawfully liable, and the
       charge must be cancelled.
       Appeal point #3 Conclusion
       The Keeper has made no admission as to being the driver, and the
       operator has not complied with the strict statutory requirements
       needed to hold the Keeper liable under PoFA. As such, Euro Car
       Parks is attempting to hold an unidentified party liable in
       direct contravention of the statute. The charge is therefore
       unenforceable, and the appeal must be allowed.
       3. The Signage Fails to Comply with PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraphs
       2(2) and 2(3)(b)(ii) – The Parking Charge Was Not Given Adequate
       Notice
       Euro Car Parks (ECP) has failed to comply with the statutory
       requirement under Paragraphs 2(2) and 2(3)(b)(ii) of Schedule 4
       of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). These provisions
       state that, to be enforceable, a parking charge must be
       adequately notified to the driver at the time the vehicle was
       parked.
       PoFA Schedule 4, Paragraph 2(2):
       “The reference in the definition of ‘parking charge’ to a sum in
       the nature of damages is to a sum of which adequate notice was
       given to drivers of vehicles (when the vehicle was parked on the
       relevant land).”
       PoFA Schedule 4, Paragraph 2(3)(b)(ii):
       “Adequate notice” means the display of one or more notices
       which:
       “(i) specify the sum as the charge for unauthorised parking; and
       (ii) are adequate to bring the charge to the notice of drivers
       who park vehicles on the relevant land.”
       It is not enough for a parking operator to simply claim that
       signs were present. The sum being demanded must be clearly
       specified and prominent on those signs, and the signage must be
       adequate to bring that charge to the attention of drivers.
       Why the Signage at Dominie Cross, Retford Fails to Meet These
       Requirements
       The signage at this location falls far short of what is required
       to satisfy Paragraphs 2(2) and 2(3)(b)(ii). Specifically:
       • The parking charge is buried in small print within a densely
       worded sign and is not legible or visible from a moving vehicle
       or from a reasonable distance.
       • The signage does not specify the charge in a manner that is
       prominent or apparent to drivers at the point of decision (i.e.
       when entering or parking).
       • The charge is not brought to the attention of the driver in a
       manner that could fairly be described as “adequate” under the
       statutory definition.
       • There is no large, clear warning that a failure to purchase a
       pay-by-phone session will incur a specified charge.
       • The charge is not immediately obvious, nor is it specified as
       a penalty for unauthorised parking in a conspicuous manner.
       Accordingly, ECP is attempting to enforce a parking charge that
       does not meet the legal definition of a ‘parking charge’ under
       PoFA Schedule 4. The sum was not adequately notified, and
       therefore cannot be recovered from the driver (if known).
       Relevant Standards and Best Practice
       These defects also breach:
       • The British Parking Association Code of Practice v9 (January
       2024), Section 19.3 and Appendix B, which require that the
       parking charge must be prominently displayed and clearly
       legible, with core contractual terms (including the charge)
       being immediately apparent.
       • The Consumer Rights Act 2015, which mandates that any term
       likely to disadvantage the consumer (such as a £100 penalty)
       must be transparent and prominent.
       This was reaffirmed in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67,
       where the £85 charge was prominently displayed and therefore
       enforceable. The contrast with this case is stark: ECP’s charge
       is not prominent and would not withstand equivalent judicial
       scrutiny.
       Appeal point #3 Conclusion
       The signage at Dominie Cross, Retford fails to satisfy PoFA
       Schedule 4 Paragraphs 2(2) and 2(3)(b)(ii) because the charge
       was not adequately brought to the attention of the driver. As
       such, no enforceable parking charge exists, and the appeal must
       be allowed on this basis alone.
       4. The Operator is Put to Strict Proof that its Signage Complies
       with the BPA Code of Practice v9 (January 2024)
       Euro Car Parks is a member of the British Parking Association
       (BPA) and is therefore required to adhere to the BPA Code of
       Practice Version 9 (January 2024). The operator is put to strict
       proof that the signage at Whale Bone Lane South – Dagenham fully
       complies with the relevant provisions of this Code.
       In particular:
       • Section 19.3 requires that signs must be clear and
       intelligible to drivers, and visible from a distance.
       • Section 19.5 requires that the parking charge itself must be
       prominently displayed and not hidden within terms and
       conditions.
       • Appendix B of the Code sets out minimum standards for font
       size, contrast, lighting, and the positioning of signage, such
       that drivers are given a fair opportunity to see, read, and
       understand the terms before parking.
       The operator is put to strict proof of full compliance with
       these requirements as they stood at the time of the alleged
       contravention, including:
       • The exact wording and appearance of the signage at the site;
       • A site plan showing the location and orientation of each sign;
       • Evidence that all signs were clearly legible, properly
       positioned, and visible from all entry points;
       • Whether the signs were illuminated or otherwise visible during
       hours of darkness.
       Failure to provide such evidence should be taken by POPLA as
       confirmation that the signage was not compliant, and therefore
       no contractual charge is enforceable.
       5. Strict Proof of Landowner Authority – No Locus Standi Without
       Full and Evidenced Rights
       Euro Car Parks (ECP) is put to strict proof that it holds a
       valid, contemporaneous, and fully executed contract with the
       landowner (or a duly authorised agent) granting it the authority
       to manage parking, issue PCNs, and enforce those charges in its
       own name at Dominie Cross, Retford.
       It is not sufficient for the operator to rely on:
       • a generic witness statement;
       • a short letter merely asserting that a contract exists;
       • or any heavily redacted or undated document lacking legal
       specificity.
       To establish locus standi, the operator must supply the full,
       unredacted contract, which must include all of the following:
       • The full commencement and expiry dates of the contract,
       confirming the precise period for which authority was granted;
       • Confirmation that the agreement was in force on the date of
       the alleged contravention;
       • The full terms and conditions originally agreed between the
       operator and the landowner or agent, including the exact terms
       to be imposed on drivers;
       • A clear definition of the land covered by the agreement,
       including plans or maps where applicable;
       • Explicit confirmation within the contract that ECP has the
       authority to:
       • manage the site;
       • issue Parking Charge Notices;
       • and pursue payment and legal action in its own name;
       Details of any material amendments to those terms since the
       contract’s inception, including:
       • What those changes were;
       • When they were agreed;
       • And confirmation that the contract was formally varied and
       remains binding in its amended form.
       This level of documentary scrutiny is essential to confirm that
       any contractual terms relied on in the signage (and any related
       PCN) were valid and properly authorised at the relevant time.
       POPLA is therefore respectfully reminded that it must not accept
       generic, redacted, or vague evidence in support of such a
       fundamental claim of legal standing.
       Applicable Code of Practice
       While the signage at the site is governed by the BPA Code of
       Practice v9 (January 2024), all other operator conduct —
       including contractual authority — is now governed by the BPA/IPC
       Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP), which requires
       that operators:
       “...must on request provide evidence of the written
       authorisation from the landholder (or their appointed agent) to
       manage the relevant site... including the scope, terms, and
       effective dates of such authority.”
       Legal and Evidential Position
       The principle that a private parking operator must hold either a
       proprietary interest in the land or a clear, legally binding
       agreement conferring enforcement authority has been repeatedly
       confirmed by the courts. Notably, in Vehicle Control Services
       Ltd v HMRC [2013] EWCA Civ 186, it was made clear that a mere
       licence to access the land is insufficient for contract
       formation and enforcement.
       If Euro Car Parks cannot supply all of the above in full and
       unredacted form, then it has no legal standing to issue or
       pursue any PCN at this location, and the appeal must be allowed
       in full.
       Conclusion
       In summary, Euro Car Parks has failed to meet the statutory
       requirements necessary to hold the Hirer liable under Schedule 4
       of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. The Notice to Hirer is
       non-compliant; the signage does not give adequate notice of the
       charge; no admission has been made as to the identity of the
       driver; and the operator has not provided evidence of either
       signage compliance with the BPA Code of Practice v9 (January
       2024) or valid landowner authority as required by the Private
       Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP).
       On all grounds presented, the charge is unenforceable, and POPLA
       is invited to allow this appeal in full and direct the operator
       to cancel the Parking Charge.
       #Post#: 100897--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 3, 2025, 11:33 am
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       You know, I won't even bother reading or analysing it because
       there is little chance that POPLA will accept it anyway. All
       these ECP PCNS end up being claims that are eventually
       discontinued.
       Have a read of any of the other multitude of ECP claims issued
       by DCB Legal to understand the process. As long as all the debt
       recovery letters are ignored and the claim is defended, it will
       never reach a hearing in court. We assist every step of the way.
       #Post#: 102197--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN Dominie Cross Pub Retford, Euro Car Parks, incorrect
       registration entered
   DIR By: rjcbooth666
       Date: December 12, 2025, 10:42 am
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       Thank you. The appeal has been submitted. My understanding of
       next steps is:
       the appeal will be rejected
       I will receive demands in the post from ECP, debt collectors and
       a legal team
       I ignore all of these until I receive a letter of claim from DCB
       legal
       I then come back here and ask for help on a defense
       is that about right?
       Thanks for all your help
       Bob
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