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       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 13, 2025, 2:43 pm
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       That’s an excellent and well-structured POPLA rebuttal — it’s
       clear, thorough, and framed in the precise evidential and legal
       context POPLA expects. It hits every necessary point that
       ParkingEye failed to address, including the core Jopson
       principle, lack of PoFA reliance, absence of evidence of
       parking, defective signage, lack of standing, and irrelevance of
       Beavis.
       Here are just a few light refinements to strengthen it before
       submission:
       --- Quote ---
       > 1. Delivery/unloading is not “parking”
       >
       > The operator’s evidence fails to rebut the central issue: the
       vehicle was engaged in legitimate parcel deliveries to
       residents. This was brief unloading, not parking.
       >
       > In Jopson v Homeguard Services Ltd [2016] B9GF0A9E (HHJ Harris
       QC, Oxford County Court appeal), the court held that temporary
       stopping for loading or unloading does not constitute parking.
       The decision expressly refers to delivery vans and is binding
       persuasive authority at this level.
       >
       > The operator relies only on ANPR entry and exit timestamps
       (17:18 to 17:42). ANPR does not identify any stationary period
       or unattended vehicle and cannot prove parking. The vehicle was
       moving between buildings while deliveries were made. POPLA must
       therefore find that no parking contract arose and no
       contravention occurred.
       >
       > 2. Signage – no allowance for deliveries or visitors
       >
       > The operator’s photos confirm signage limited to “Residents
       Only”. There is no wording accommodating deliveries,
       tradespeople, or visitors. Such total prohibition is ambiguous
       and unfair to lawful delivery drivers.
       >
       > Under the Consumer Rights Act 2015 sections 62 to 68, terms
       must be fair and transparent. No reasonable driver could have
       understood that brief unloading for residents would incur a £100
       penalty.
       >
       > Further, under Thornton v Shoe Lane Parking [1971] 2 QB 163, a
       contract cannot be formed unless the terms are communicated
       before entry. No evidence shows that the terms were legible or
       even visible to a delivery driver entering the site. Hence, no
       fair or transparent contract was formed.
       >
       > 3. Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) – breach
       of fairness and grace requirements
       >
       > The operator claims compliance with the Single Code, but their
       own evidence proves otherwise.
       >
       > Section 5.1 of the PPSCoP requires a consideration period to
       allow drivers to read terms and decide whether to stay. Section
       5.2 requires a minimum 10-minute grace period at the end of a
       parking session.
       >
       > Here, the alleged “stay” was only 23 minutes and includes time
       for arrival, unloading, and departure. The operator’s data table
       lists “Time Allowed 0 hours 0 minutes”, demonstrating there was
       no allowance at all, breaching both sections 5.1 and 5.2 and the
       Code’s fairness principles.
       >
       > 4. No keeper liability – operator admits PoFA not used
       > The operator’s own evidence states in their 'Additional
       information' in their evidence pack: “PLEASE BE ADVISED, THIS
       PARKING CHARGE WAS NOT ISSUED UNDER THE PROTECTION OF FREEDOMS
       ACT 2012.” That statement ends the matter. If PoFA is not used,
       only the driver could be liable. As the appellant is the
       registered keeper and has not been identified as the driver,
       POPLA must allow the appeal.
       >
       > 5. No standing / defective landowner authority
       >
       > The operator provides only a heavily redacted “Order Form”
       rather than a full contemporaneous, site-specific agreement
       compliant with PPSCoP section 14.1(a) to (j). The redacted
       document omits:
       >
       > - the landowner’s full identity and signature;
       > - the unredacted boundaries of the controlled land;
       > - clear terms defining the operator’s authority to issue and
       enforce PCNs.
       >
       > The PPSCoP makes these items mandatory. Without a complete and
       dated agreement evidencing the landowner’s consent, ParkingEye
       has no legal standing to issue or pursue this charge.
       >
       > 6. Beavis is distinguishable
       >
       > ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67 concerned a retail park
       where a charge served a commercial interest in space turnover.
       Here, the site is a residential housing association estate and
       the driver was conducting a necessary delivery. There is no
       comparable commercial or deterrent interest, and the charge
       serves no legitimate purpose beyond punishment.
       >
       > 7. Summary
       >
       > - No period of parking evidenced – only entry/exit timestamps.
       > - Jopson v Homeguard confirms unloading is not parking.
       > - Signage is prohibitive and fails Consumer Rights Act
       standards.
       > - Operator admits PoFA not invoked – keeper not liable.
       > - Landowner authority not proven in accordance with PPSCoP.
       > - Beavis distinguished – no legitimate interest in penalising
       deliveries.
       > - PPSCoP grace and fairness provisions breached.
       >
       > For all these reasons, the appeal should be upheld and the
       Parking Charge cancelled.
       --- End Quote ---
       That version reads fluently, tracks POPLA’s reasoning flow, and
       keeps every statutory and case citation relevant. It’s ready to
       paste directly into the POPLA comment box.
       #Post#: 93985--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: ahsan
       Date: October 14, 2025, 4:22 am
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       Thanks all for your suggestions, [member=26]b789[/member] thanks
       to you for reviewing and polishing the draft, much appreciated.
       I have submitted the rebuttal, Ill keep you all informed when I
       receive the outcome.
       #Post#: 99044--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: ahsan
       Date: November 20, 2025, 12:00 pm
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       Hi all,
       POPLA rejected the appeal :(, here is the link to decision:
  HTML https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OfBwOhF2H7OJjucw1VgPspAm_GF2e-da/view?usp=drive_link
       What should be our next step?
       Thanks in advance.
       #Post#: 99097--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: b789
       Date: November 21, 2025, 12:37 am
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       Typical of a moronic and intellectually malnourished, poorly
       trained POPLA assessors. Do not pay. The decision is not binding
       on you.
       This will never reach a hearing in court if you follow the
       advice. This will be farmed out to DCBL for debt recovery and
       DCB Legsl to issue a claim.
       You can safely ignore all debt recovery letters. They are
       powerless to do anything except to try and intimidate the
       low-hanging fruit on the gullible tree into paying out of
       ignorance and fear.
       Come back when you receive a Letter of Claim (LoC). In the
       meantime. You should send a formal complaint to POPLA for this
       obvious failure to address the appeal properly. Not that they
       will ever reverse a decision, even when they acknowledge they
       were wrong, but for the record.
       Send the following to POPLA:
       --- Quote ---
       > FORMAL COMPLAINT – REQUEST FOR INVESTIGATION INTO ASSESSOR
       MISCONDUCT, GROSS INCOMPETENCE, AND PROCEDURAL FAILURE
       >
       > POPLA Verification Code: 6062555711
       > Assessor: Nazia Mohammed
       > Decision Date: 20/11/2025
       >
       > To the POPLA Complaints Team,
       >
       > I am submitting this formal complaint regarding the conduct
       and competence of POPLA assessor Nazia Mohammed. After reviewing
       her decision in full, it is clear that the assessor failed to
       apply even the most basic principles of evidence assessment,
       failed to engage with the statutory framework, and made findings
       that are factually and legally impossible. The standard
       displayed in this assessment is so poor that it raises serious
       questions about the integrity and reliability of POPLA’s
       decision-making process.
       >
       > This complaint is not about the outcome. I am fully aware
       POPLA does not overturn decisions. This complaint is about the
       assessor’s fundamental inability to correctly interpret
       evidence, apply the law, or demonstrate even minimal
       professional competence. The response to this complaint will be
       forwarded in full to my Member of Parliament and the Ministry of
       Housing, Communities and Local Government, as this level of
       failure requires external scrutiny.
       >
       > 1. The assessor misapplied PoFA against the operator’s own
       evidence
       > The operator explicitly stated in its evidence pack: “Please
       be advised, this Parking Charge was not issued under the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012.”
       > This is an unequivocal statement. It means there is no keeper
       liability. It means only the driver could be pursued. It means
       POPLA should have allowed the appeal immediately.
       >
       > However, the assessor instead wrote:
       >
       > [indent]“In this case, the PCN in question has the necessary
       information, and the parking operator has therefore successfully
       transferred the liability onto the registered keeper.”[/indent]
       >
       > This is not a misunderstanding. It is a direct contradiction
       of the operator’s own position. The assessor invented legal
       applicability where none existed and declared keeper liability
       where it was legally impossible. This alone demonstrates a
       complete collapse of the decision-making process.
       >
       > 2. The assessor failed to evaluate PoFA Schedule 4 paragraph
       9(2)(e)(i)
       > I raised that the Notice to Keeper did not include the
       statutory requirement to “invite the keeper to pay the unpaid
       parking charges”. The operator did not dispute this. The
       assessor ignored it entirely. Instead, she relied on the fiction
       that PoFA applied at all, which the operator had already
       disavowed.
       >
       > 3. The assessor failed to evaluate PoFA Schedule 4 paragraph
       9(2)(a)
       > The Notice to Keeper does not specify any period of parking.
       It only contains ANPR timestamps, which PoFA expressly rejects
       as insufficient. This was a central point of appeal, and the
       assessor again ignored it.
       >
       > 4. The assessor disregarded Jopson v Homeguard
       > I cited binding persuasive authority confirming that unloading
       is not parking. The assessor did not distinguish it, apply it,
       acknowledge it, or appear even to recognise it. This omission
       indicates either a lack of legal understanding or a refusal to
       engage with relevant authorities. Neither is acceptable in an
       adjudicative role.
       >
       > 5. The assessor demonstrated a complete failure to apply the
       Private Parking Single Code of Practice
       > I raised breaches of the consideration period requirement, the
       grace period requirement, and the landowner authority
       requirements. The assessor failed to meaningfully address any of
       these. Her reasoning shows no understanding of the Code beyond
       quoting generalities. She failed to assess the site’s “0 hours 0
       minutes allowed” condition against mandatory provisions.
       >
       > 6. The assessor accepted defective and incomplete landowner
       authority without scrutiny
       > The operator submitted redacted documents lacking several
       mandatory elements required by PPSCoP section 14. The assessor
       declared herself “satisfied” without performing any analysis or
       referencing the requirements. This is not assessment; it is
       rubber-stamping.
       >
       > 7. The assessor’s reasoning is illogical and internally
       inconsistent
       > The assessor claimed the appellant “entered into a contract”
       by “remaining on site for 23 minutes”, ignoring the fact that
       contract formation cannot occur until terms are communicated,
       and that contractual terms cannot be enforced where PoFA is not
       engaged and the identity of the driver is unknown. She
       contradicted her own quoted Code sections and ignored the
       prohibition-based nature of the signage.
       >
       > 8. The decision demonstrates a level of incompetence that
       undermines POPLA’s credibility
       > The decision displays:
       > [indent]• Failure to consider evidence
       > • Failure to consider statutory requirements
       > • Misapplication of PoFA
       > • Refusal to engage with case law
       > • No evaluation of contractual formation
       > • No evaluation of landowner authority
       > • No evaluation of grace or consideration periods
       > • Internal contradictions
       > • Incorrect statements of law
       > • Incorrect statements of fact[/indent]
       >
       > This is not the work of a competent assessor. It brings
       POPLA’s process into disrepute.
       >
       > Requested action
       > Given the seriousness of these failures, I request:
       > [indent]1. A formal investigation into the competence and
       conduct of assessor Nazia Mohammed.
       > 2. Confirmation of what legal training assessors receive
       before ruling on PoFA matters.
       > 3. A detailed explanation of how an assessor can apply PoFA
       where the operator expressly stated it was not used.
       > 4. A full review of this assessor’s decisions for similar
       errors.
       > Confirmation that this complaint will be retained for audit
       and provided to MHCLG if requested.[/indent]
       >
       > Next steps
       > Your response will be forwarded to my MP and the Ministry of
       Housing, Communities and Local Government as evidence of
       systemic inadequacy within the POPLA adjudication process.
       >
       > I expect a full, detailed reply addressing each point above.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       >
       > [Your Name]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 99614--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: ahsan
       Date: November 24, 2025, 12:31 pm
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       [member=26]b789[/member], I have submitted the complaint using
       the form on this page:
  HTML https://popla.pages.dev/contact
       The van was an electric one and my brother was fed up due to
       repeated theft of charging cables (London you can expect
       anything and everything) and we have sold the Van over weekend,
       does the sale of Van play any role going forward? or we still
       wait for Letter of Claim (LoC)?
       Thanks in advance.
       #Post#: 99616--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: November 24, 2025, 12:36 pm
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       The LoC will be sent to the registered keeper using the details
       obtained from the DVLA by the claimant parking company
       originally. They’re actually not allowed to ask for this
       information more than once anyway.
       #Post#: 99619--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: b789
       Date: November 24, 2025, 12:46 pm
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       Having subsequently sold the vehicle has no effect on anything.
       They have the Keeper details and that is all they need.
       #Post#: 104445--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: ahsan
       Date: January 3, 2026, 2:58 pm
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       Hi all,
       Happy new year, I hope all of you had good break.
       I have received a letter today, I'm not able to figure out if
       it's a Letter of Claim or not.
       Front:
  HTML https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dHSMD_Z55_N27woCi8IfRO3bNCd6xHlC/view?usp=drive_link
       Back:
  HTML https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cfqdcoGsimiNMW5L0QBv0tjAZ8J3KtFB/view?usp=drive_link
       They have referred in the letter to read paragraph 8 which talks
       about a supreme court case of Mr Beavis which they think is the
       basis for them to get a verdict in county court?
       I thought I get input from wise and not just simply ignore it
       Also if it's not Letter of Claim, will it come from court or
       some nominated agency of Parkingeye?
       Thanks in advance.
       #Post#: 104460--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: January 4, 2026, 2:57 am
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       This is the Letter of Claim you have been waiting for.
       Wait for further advice as the LoC is totally inadequate.
       #Post#: 104486--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Forest housing association - E11 2QT - Time in car park
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: January 4, 2026, 7:02 am
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       You might want to hide your home address from that document.
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