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       #Post#: 86895--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: sue11 Date: August 23, 2025, 7:13 am
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       Thank you B789 for your reply. Apologies I forgot to add the NTK
       & parking sign pic, which I have now attached. So should I edit
       the message to remove the first three points and include point
       4& 5 & send it ?
       #Post#: 86918--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: b789 Date: August 23, 2025, 10:18 am
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       Nah... just send it as is. I'm sure there are more than one type
       of sign at the location.
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       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: sue11 Date: August 24, 2025, 4:28 am
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       ok sure. Thank you.
       #Post#: 99425--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: sue11 Date: November 23, 2025, 11:34 am
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       Hi All,
       Here it is the Court claim form (attached)
       Although the date on the letter states 19th Nov, I only recieved
       it yesterday(22nd) , I don't know if that makes any difference.
       I would appreciate any advice on the next steps . What are my
       options and chances going forward & how such cases have panned
       out lately.
       Many thanks.
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       #Post#: 99464--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: b789 Date: November 23, 2025, 11:06 pm
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       “Attached” where??? We need to see the Particulars of Claim
       (PoC).
       Is this a Moorside Legal issued claim?
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       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: DWMB2 Date: November 24, 2025, 4:22 am
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       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: sue11 Date: November 24, 2025, 12:36 pm
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       Apologies, this is the link to the image
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       #Post#: 99621--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: b789 Date: November 24, 2025, 12:51 pm
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       With an issue date of 19th November, you have until 4pm on
       Monday 8th December to submit your defence. If you submit an
       Acknowledgement of Service (AoS) before then, you would then
       have until 4pm on Monday 22nd December to submit your defence.
       You only need to submit an AoS if you need extra time to prepare
       your defence. If you want to submit an AoS then follow the
       instructions in this linked PDF:
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/s/xvqu3bask5m0zir/money-claim-online-How-to-Acknowledge.pdf?dl=0
       Until very recently, we never advised using the MCOL to submit a
       defence. However, due to recent systemic failures within the
       CNBC, we feel that it is safer to now submit a short defence
       using MCOL as it is instantly submitted and entered into the
       "system". Whilst it will deny the use of some formatting or
       inclusion of transcripts etc. these can always be included with
       the Witness Statement (WS) later, if it ever progresses that
       far.
       You will need to copy and paste it into the defence text box on
       MCOL. It has been checked to make sure that it will fit into the
       122 lines limit.
       [quote][font=Courier New]1. The Defendant denies the claim in
       its entirety. The Defendant asserts that there is no liability
       to the Claimant and that no debt is owed. The claim is without
       merit and does not adequately disclose any comprehensible cause
       of action.
       2. There is a lack of precise detail in the Particulars of Claim
       (PoC) in respect of the factual and legal allegations made
       against the Defendant such that the PoC do not comply with CPR
       16.4(1)(a).
       3. The Defendant is unable to plead properly to the PoC because:
       (a) The contract referred to is not detailed or attached to the
       PoC in accordance with PD 16, para 7.3(1);
       (b) The PoC do not state the exact wording of the clause (or
       clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or
       contracts) which is/are relied on;
       (c) The PoC do not adequately set out the reason (or reasons)
       why the claimant asserts the defendant has breached the contract
       (or contracts)
       (d) The PoC do not state with sufficient particularity exactly
       where the breach occurred, the exact time when the breach
       occurred and how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked
       before the parking charge was allegedly incurred;
       (e) The PoC do not state precisely how the sum claimed is
       calculated, including the basis for any statutory interest,
       damages, or other charges;
       (f) The PoC do not state what proportion of the claim is the
       parking charge and what proportion is damages;
       (g) The PoC do not provide clarity on whether the Defendant is
       sued as the driver or the keeper of the vehicle, as the claimant
       cannot plead alternative causes of action without specificity.
       4. The Defendant submits that courts have previously struck out
       similar claims of their own initiative for failure to adequately
       comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a), particularly where the Particulars
       of Claim failed to specify the contractual terms relied upon or
       explain the alleged breach with sufficient clarity. The
       Defendant refers specifically to the persuasive appellate cases:
       - Civil Enforcement Ltd v Chan (2023), Luton County Court, HHJ
       Murch, ref: E7GM9W44
       - CPMS Ltd v Akande (2024), Manchester County Court, HHJ Evans,
       ref: K0DP5J30
       In both cases, the claim was struck out due to materially
       similar failures to comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a).
       5. The Defendant invites the Court to strike out this claim of
       its own initiative. The Defendant relies on the judicial
       reasoning set out in Chan and Akande, as well as other County
       Court cases involving identical failures to adequately comply
       with CPR 16.4. In those cases, the court further observed that,
       given the modest sum claimed, requiring further case management
       steps would be disproportionate and contrary to the overriding
       objective. Accordingly, the judge struck out the claim outright
       rather than permitting an amendment. The Defendant proposes that
       the following Order be made:
       Draft Order:
       Of the Court's own initiative and upon reading the particulars
       of claim and the defence.
       AND the court being of the view that the particulars of claim do
       not comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a) because: (a) they do not set out
       the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and
       conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is (or are)
       relied on; and (b) they do not adequately set out the reason (or
       reasons) why the claimant asserts that the defendant was in
       breach of contract.
       AND the claimant could have complied with CPR 16.4(1)(a) had it
       served separate detailed particulars of claim, as it could have
       done pursuant to PD 7C, para 5.2, but chose not to do so.
       AND upon the Court determining, having regard to the overriding
       objective (CPR 1.1), that it would be disproportionate to direct
       further pleadings or to allot any further share of the Court’s
       resources to this claim (for example by ordering further
       particulars of claim and a further defence, with consequent case
       management).
       ORDER:
       1. The claim is struck out.
       2. Permission to either party to apply to set aside, vary or
       stay this order by application on notice, which must be filed at
       this Court not more than 7 days after service of this order,
       failing which no such application may be made.[/font][/quote]
       #Post#: 99869--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: sue11 Date: November 26, 2025, 5:58 am
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       Thank you so much for b789 for the detailed draft.
       Just wondering what happens next once this is submitted. Do I
       need to appear in the court , etc which I'm a bit apprehensive
       about.  Apologies as I have never dealt with such things before,
       so completely unsure.
       Also should I send this draft straight away or should it be sent
       on a certain date ?
       Thanks in advance
       #Post#: 99880--------------------------------------------------
       Re: PCN from UKCPS limited
       By: b789 Date: November 26, 2025, 6:51 am
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       You submit that "draft" by copying and pasting it into the
       defence section of the MCOL webform.
       You will receive an acknowledgement of your defence. At some
       point you will receive an N180 Directions Questionnaire and a
       mediation phone call. The odds of you ever having to appear in
       court to defend this are slim to none. Even if you did, you have
       nothing to fear. This is not a criminal matter. It is a civil
       dispute over an alleged debt because the driver allegedly
       breacghed a contract.
       You have the utterly incompetent Moorside Legal representing the
       claimant which is an additional bonus for you. Just in case your
       imagination is running wild about "court", here is a short video
       that explains what would happen on the day, if this ever reached
       that stage (unlikely):
  HTML https://youtu.be/n93eoaxhzpU?feature=shared
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