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       #Post#: 79719--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: Torenaga
       Date: July 5, 2025, 1:53 pm
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       I sent off the appeal to popla on Tuesday the 1st of July 2025
       as follows
       1. The Notice to Keeper is non-compliant with Paragraph 9(2)(a)
       of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012
       The Notice to Keeper (NtK) issued by the operator fails to
       comply with the mandatory requirements of Paragraph 9(2)(a) of
       Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). This
       paragraph requires that the NtK must “specify the vehicle, the
       relevant land on which it was parked and the period of parking
       to which the notice relates”.
       In this case, the NtK merely states a single timestamp: 12:11pm
       on 01/05/2025. This is a point in time, not a “period of
       parking”. There is no start and end time, no duration, and not
       even a reference to the word “period” in the notice.
       As confirmed in Brennan v Premier Parking Solutions (2023)
       [H6DP632H], a single timestamp alone does not satisfy the
       statutory requirement. The failure to specify a period of
       parking renders the NtK non-compliant, and therefore the
       operator cannot pursue the registered keeper under PoFA.
       2. No evidence of contract formation due to absence of a
       consideration period
       Even if PoFA were not engaged, the operator has provided no
       evidence that a contract was formed with the driver. Under
       Section 5.1 of the Private Parking Sector Single Code of
       Practice (2024), a minimum consideration period must be allowed
       before any assumption of contractual parking can be made. This
       period allows the driver to read the signage, assess the terms,
       and decide whether to accept them. The Code states that a driver
       remaining on site for more than 5 minutes may be deemed to have
       accepted the terms, but there is no evidence that the vehicle
       remained for that long. Without such evidence, there is no basis
       to conclude that the driver accepted any contractual terms, and
       therefore no liability can arise.
       3. Signage incapable of forming a contract
       If, despite the clear absence of keeper liability under PoFA and
       the lack of any evidence that a contract was formed with the
       driver, the assessor is still minded to consider the charge,
       then the operator is put to strict proof that the signage at the
       site was sufficiently clear, prominent, and unambiguous to form
       a legally binding contract. I contend that it was not.
       4. No evidence of landowner authority
       The operator is put to strict proof that they have a valid,
       contemporaneous contract or lease flowing from the landowner
       that authorises them to manage parking, issue PCNs, and pursue
       legal action in their own name.
       I refer the operator and the POPLA assessor to Section 14 of the
       PPSCoP (Relationship with Landowner), which sets out mandatory
       minimum requirements that must be evidenced before any parking
       charge may be issued on controlled land. In particular, Section
       14.1(a)–(j) requires the operator to have in place written
       confirmation from the landowner which includes:
       • the identity of the landowner,
       • a boundary map of the land to be managed,
       • applicable byelaws,
       • the duration and scope of authority granted,
       • detailed parking terms and conditions including any specific
       permissions or exemptions,
       • the means of issuing PCNs,
       • responsibility for obtaining planning and advertising
       consents,
       • and the operator’s obligations and appeal procedure under the
       Code.
       These requirements are not optional. They are a condition
       precedent to issuing a PCN and bringing any associated action.
       Accordingly, I put the operator to strict proof of compliance
       with the entirety of Section 14 of the PPSCoP. Any document that
       contains redactions must not obscure the above conditions. The
       document must also be dated and signed by identifiable persons,
       with evidence of their authority to act on behalf of the parties
       to the agreement. The operator must provide an agreement showing
       clear authorisation from the landowner for this specific site.
       And popla has already responded with an email saying they have
       recieved the evidence pack from UKPC.
       Popla says I have 7 days to comment on the evidence uploaded by
       UKPC. Shall I post up all the evidence on this site that they
       have submitted or is it just a thing of waiting it out as
       commenting won't make a difference to popla's decision?
       Kind regards
       #Post#: 79722--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: b789
       Date: July 5, 2025, 2:27 pm
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       Upload the operators evidence on Google Drive or DropBox and
       make sure that it is accessible to everyone. Just redact any
       personal information on whatever you upload.
       #Post#: 79731--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: Torenaga
       Date: July 5, 2025, 4:24 pm
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  HTML https://1drv.ms/f/c/0301c7ded840f899/EqIQrCGoGuJEi4gy5WX2twUBFonzDbDcfe6nwuf7L_uvPg
       This is the upload on one drive.
       Kind regards
       #Post#: 79733--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: July 5, 2025, 4:55 pm
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       Some initial observations of their contract documents:
       1) The client's details are entirely redacted:
       They've redacted absolutely every detail relating to the
       signatory to the agreement, including the name of the company.
       There's therefore no way of knowing if the company who signed
       the agreement have any suitable proprietary interest in the
       land.
       2) The site-specific contract is incomplete:
       The site specific contract they have provided
       (""Valley+leisure+park+redacted+contract (1).pdf") is apparently
       30 pages long, according to the footnote. They have provided
       just 4 pages of this, and only 1 of the 6 schedules, omitting
       important information such as Schedule 5 (Property specific
       schedules) and Schedule 6 (Site specific requirements).
       3) Mismatch between site-specific contract and the 'general'
       T&Cs:
       UKPC have provided 2 contract documents - 3 if you include the
       signage plan but this is not relevant to my point. Contract
       Document #1 ("Valley+leisure+park+redacted+contract (1).pdf") is
       a site specific contract, signed by UKPC and their client
       (whoever that is, see point #1). Contract Document #2
       ("T&C'S+for+rolling+contract.pdf"), contains UKPC's boilerplate
       T&Cs for rolling contracts, presumably applicable to all sites
       they operate.
       Firstly, Contract Document #2 is not referenced in Contract
       Document #1, and is unsigned, so there's no evidence that these
       T&Cs have been agreed to by the client/landowner.
       Secondly, Contract Document #2 did not exist at the time that
       the contract was signed. How do we know this? Contract Document
       #1 is dated 21st July 2015. However, on page 1 of Contract
       Document #2 there is reference to "the Parking (Code of
       Practice) Act 2019", which didn't exist in 2015. So these
       general T&Cs clearly weren't agreed to on 21st July 2015 when
       the contract was signed - no evidence has been provided to show
       the landowner has agreed to them at some date since.
       #Post#: 79743--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: Torenaga
       Date: July 6, 2025, 4:02 am
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       Thank you for the quick reply DWMB2.
       Should I write that in the "comment on the evidence"?
       Regards
       #Post#: 79746--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: July 6, 2025, 4:17 am
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       They're points you can cover. Your comments on the evidence
       should pick holes in their case. Find anything that undermines
       their arguments, and anything that bolster yours.
       You cannot make any fresh appeal grounds but can draw attention
       to any shortcomings in their case.
       You only have 10,000 characters so it needs to be somewhat
       brief.
       When's your deadline for responding?
       #Post#: 79747--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: Torenaga
       Date: July 6, 2025, 5:30 am
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       I understand, thank you.
       I have 7 days from the 4th of July
       Regards
       #Post#: 79768--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: b789
       Date: July 6, 2025, 8:14 am
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       In their statement, UKPC state: "[i]In this instance the
       motorist is not present in the vehicle or near the signage, so
       we would contest that means an event has taken place.[/I]" Just
       put them to strict proof that is the case.
       If PoFA don't cancel the charge, don't worry about it. This
       would never see the inside of a courtroom.
       #Post#: 87558--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: Torenaga
       Date: August 28, 2025, 9:48 am
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       Hi Everyone.
       I've finally heard back from Popla yesterday and to no surprise
       they have not cancelled the invoice.
       I have posted all the correspondence that popla and UKPC have
       sent me. Was very surprised at how UKPC had sent me an invoice
       within 15 mins of popla sending out my unsuccessful appeal to me
       via email.
       Are they sure they are not connected somehow?  :) .
       I have linked the pages here, please let me know if it is a bit
       confusing  as I did it via screenshot on my phone.
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       Where do I go with this from here?
       Kind regards
       #Post#: 88630--------------------------------------------------
       Re: UKPC NTK not parked correctly within markings of parking
       bay. Valley park croydon
   DIR By: Torenaga
       Date: September 6, 2025, 2:28 am
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       Just bumping this just to find out if I should just be ignoring
       this for now.
       Kind regards
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