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       #Post#: 84003--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: b789
       Date: August 4, 2025, 5:36 am
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       --- Quote from: Pauly436 link ---
       >
       > Questions I have.
       >
       > 1) Now this has been given a court date. Does this mean the
       judge has decided to let it proceed and not strike it out? Or
       could this still happen.
       >
       > 2) Should I just wait and see if the court fee is paid before
       doing anything else. With the claimant now having to pay this
       fee and commit a person to the trial is there a chance they back
       down? 🤞
       >
       > 3) Should I come back here if they pay the trial fee for help
       with my defence?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       1. No, this does not mean that that it will proceed to trial. It
       is still likely to be discontinued just before the trial fee has
       to be paid.
       2. Yes, absolutely. It is at the point where the trial fee has
       to be paid that most of these cases are discontinued.
       3. If the trial fee is paid, then that is a sign that they
       intend to go to trial. Your defence has already been submitted.
       You would have to prepare a Witness Statement (WS). However, you
       do not need to do anything until you've see the claimants WS,
       even if that means you have to submit yours a day or so after
       the deadline.
       I suggest you call the court on 23rd August to see whether the
       trial fee has been paid. If it hasn't, then the claim is struck
       out. If it has, then you wait to receive a copy of the claimants
       WS.
       #Post#: 86814--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: Pauly436
       Date: August 22, 2025, 11:39 am
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       Trial fee has been paid.
       Hi All. I rang the court earlier today and the trial fee has
       been paid. So looks like this is going the distance.
       Questions I have going forward.
       1) It has been mentioned a few times on here that it would be
       rare for this to ever get to court. Are you surprised this is
       going to court now? Any ideas why they are taking it this far?
       2) Is the opportunity for it to be thrown out now passed (unless
       moorside decide to pull it themselves?)
       3) When defended myself in court, can I only mention things that
       I previously put in my defence that was made by b789 for me. Or
       can I add other details specifically about my case.
       4) In what format will I receive the Claimant witness statement
       ( post or email).  if I wait to see theirs before submitting
       mine and miss the deadline are there any repercussions or is it
       expected that I wait for theirs first?
       Finally I would appreciate any further guidance you have. This
       is uncharted territory for me.
       Thanks
       Pauly
       #Post#: 86821--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: b789
       Date: August 22, 2025, 12:06 pm
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       The deadline to file Witness Statements (WS) and evidence is 14
       days before the hearing. Do not file your WS until you have seen
       the claimant’s WS. Moorside’s WS will almost certainly be
       hearsay from an employee and can be given little weight.
       Wait to review what they actually rely on — especially for an
       alleged “observed leaving site” breach. Similar claims have
       previously drawn judicial criticism; one such matter became
       known as the “toothbrush” case after the judge warned the
       representative that bringing another claim of that kind could
       lead to contempt consequences.
       Accordingly, hold back your WS until theirs is served. Even if
       that means filing yours a day or so late, it is important to
       address and rebut exactly what they put forward.
       #Post#: 86823--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: August 22, 2025, 12:12 pm
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       Do keep a keen eye on any correspondence, as there's a fair
       chance that the claimant will leave it relatively close to the
       deadline to file their WS, too.
       #Post#: 86825--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: Pauly436
       Date: August 22, 2025, 12:15 pm
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       Is it common practice to start building my WS before seeing
       theirs and then tweeking? If I wait for theirs before putting
       anything together, one days notice to turn around my WS with no
       experience is daunting.
       Although I have noticed the responses to help come extremely
       quickly here.
       Thanks
       Pauly
       #Post#: 86892--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: b789
       Date: August 23, 2025, 6:57 am
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       Yes, of course you can start drafting your WS. Always be
       prepared. However, I really can't see this going all the way to
       a hearing. If it actually does, the you will be well prepared.
       #Post#: 88426--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: Pauly436
       Date: September 4, 2025, 12:32 pm
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       Witness statements are due 14 days before the trial which is
       tomorrow (Friday 4/9/25). The WS from the claimant has still not
       arrived. Would you expect it via post or email?
       All other correspondence has been by post but they have my email
       from the N180.
       Because the 14 days lands on a Friday but I was advised to wait
       and read theirs before submitting mine. Would submitting mine on
       Monday be pushing it? I assume the court wouldn't process it on
       a weekend.
       Thanks
       Pauly
       #Post#: 88492--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 5, 2025, 1:12 am
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       As you only came to us after you had received the claim, did you
       receive a Letter of Claim (LoC) from Moorside and if so, did you
       respond, and if so, what did you respond with? Did you request
       the evidence their client relied on? Did you out them to strict
       proof of anything?
       They will submit their WS bundle by email if they have not
       forgotten about it. You are dealing with a firm of incompetents
       and there is a chance that by submitting your WS you will
       trigger a panic response from Moorside. I have tried to head
       that off in the WS.
       I still don’t think that they will dare try and present this
       case in court. However, just in case I’m wrong, I have put
       together a WS you can use.
       If you have not received anything by 4pm today, I have prepared
       the body of your WS that you can submit at 4pm today by email.
       You will need to attach the two transcripts as evidence to the
       WS and they are referenced in it:
       --- Quote ---
       > 1. I am the Defendant and a litigant in person. This statement
       is confined to the Claimant’s defective Particulars of Claim and
       to their failure to serve any witness statement or exhibits by
       the court’s deadline of Friday 5 September 2025.
       >
       > 2. As at today’s date, the Claimant has served nothing beyond
       their vague, template Particulars of Claim. There is therefore
       nothing for me to answer other than that bare pleading.
       >
       > 3. I am filing after the evidence deadline because I
       reasonably awaited the Claimant’s witness statement and bundle
       so that I could respond to the case they chose to advance. None
       has been served. This filing simply records the position created
       by their default and causes no prejudice.
       >
       > 4. The Particulars of Claim do not comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a).
       They do not set out a concise statement of the facts relied upon
       and they disclose no recognisable cause of action that I can
       meet.
       >
       > 5. No contract or exact wording of any term is set out or
       attached as required by Practice Direction 16 paragraph 7.5.
       >
       > 6. The Particulars do not say whether I am pursued as driver
       or as registered keeper. Those are different legal bases and the
       Claimant should plead one clear case.
       >
       > 7. No material facts are pleaded: not what was done, where,
       when, or for how long; no signage or contractual nexus is
       identified; no legal basis is explained. I am left guessing and
       that is prejudicial.
       >
       > 8. The amount claimed is not properly particularised. There is
       no breakdown between any principal sum and any add-ons, and no
       legal basis is given for additional sums or interest.
       >
       > 9. For online claims, Practice Direction 7C paragraph 5.2(2)
       allows a claimant to serve separate, detailed Particulars within
       14 days if space is limited. The Claimant chose not to do so.
       The continuing lack of particulars is therefore a choice.
       >
       > 10. The Claimant’s solicitors are officers of the court and
       are under a positive duty by CPR 1.3 to help the court further
       the overriding objective. It is a dereliction of that duty to
       issue and persist with Particulars that do not meet CPR
       16.4(1)(a), and then to ignore the court’s directions by missing
       the 5 September 2025 evidence deadline.
       >
       > 11. Their default is serious and significant. As a represented
       party they should be held to a strict standard of compliance.
       This is not a minor technicality but conduct that wastes court
       time and obstructs the just, expeditious and proportionate
       resolution of the case.
       >
       > 12. Any suggestion that pre-action correspondence somehow
       cures the defective pleading is denied. The issues are defined
       by the statements of case. A witness statement is for evidence;
       it is not a vehicle to plead a new case after the deadline or to
       retrofit particulars that were never pleaded.
       >
       > 13. If the Claimant now seeks to serve a late witness
       statement, I oppose relief from sanctions. There is a serious
       and significant breach, no good reason has been offered, and all
       the circumstances—especially the prejudice to a litigant in
       person and the Claimant’s represented status—favour refusal. The
       court should not permit an ambush after seeing my position.
       >
       > 14. The Claimant missed the 4pm, Friday 5 September 2025
       evidence deadline. Under CPR 32.10 they may not rely on any
       witness statement served late without permission. If relief from
       sanctions is sought, I oppose it: the breach is serious and
       significant; there is no good reason; and all the
       circumstances—including their represented status, the prejudice
       to a litigant in person, the attempted ambush after seeing my
       statement, and wasted court time—favour refusal (*Denton*; CPR
       3.9). As officers of the court (CPR 1.3) their serial
       non-compliance warrants sanction, not indulgence.
       >
       > 15. If, contrary to that, any late material is admitted, it
       should be confined strictly to matters already pleaded; any new
       allegations, new contractual terms or new causes of action
       should be excluded; and I should have a fair opportunity to
       respond, including an adjournment with my costs thrown away.
       >
       > 16. Any late statement from a Moorside employee will be
       hearsay from someone with no first-hand knowledge. I ask the
       court to give such material little or no weight.
       >
       > 17. I attach and rely upon Civil Enforcement Ltd v Chan (2023)
       and Car Park Management Services v Akande (2024) (Exhibits AUTH1
       and AUTH2). These persuasive appellate authorities struck out
       near-identical parking templates for failure to comply with CPR
       16.4(1)(a) and confirm that a claimant must properly plead its
       case rather than attempting to retrofit it later.
       >
       > 18. In light of the above, I invite the court to strike out
       the claim under CPR 3.4(2)(a) because the statement of case
       discloses no reasonable grounds for bringing the claim. I
       further invite the court to sanction the Claimant’s solicitors
       for their dereliction of duty as officers of the court and for
       their abuse of process in missing the court’s deadline.
       >
       > 19. In the alternative, I ask the court to dismiss the claim,
       refuse any late attempt to expand or amend it, and consider
       costs for unreasonable conduct under CPR 27.14(2)(g).
       --- End Quote ---
       As this will be your “bundle” you will need to put it all
       together as a single PDF file, correctly paginated. The WS will
       need the court header (same as for the defence but titled
       “Witness Statement”) and a Statement of Truth (again, same as in
       the defence but with “witness statement” instead of “defence”).
       As this is a small claims track, the judge on the day is not
       going to have read anything and will be skim reading. I suggest
       you also add the following as part of your bundle...
       A single cover page, big font, double spaced:
       --- Quote ---
       > 1. Claimant (represented) missed 4pm Friday 5 Sept 2025 for
       WS/exhibits.
       >
       > 2. CPR 32.10: no reliance on a late WS without permission.
       >
       > 3. Denton: serious/significant; no good reason; all the
       circumstances (ambush after seeing mine; I’m LiP; they’re
       solicitors/ officers of court under CPR 1.3).
       >
       > 4. Prejudice: I lose any chance to deal with new facts/terms;
       asymmetric forensic disadvantage; wastes court time.
       >
       > 5. Pleaded case still defective (CPR 16.4(1)(a) / PD16 7.5;
       PD7C 5.2(2) ignored).
       >
       > 6. Authorities: CEL v Chan (2023), CPMS v Akande (2024):
       near-identical templates struck out.
       >
       > Order sought: exclude late WS; strike out under CPR 3.4(2)(a).
       > If admitted: (i) limit to pleaded issues only; (ii) no new
       terms/causes; (iii) adjourn or permit a short reply WS within 7
       days; (iv) costs thrown away.
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       After the WS, include the transcripts as referenced and also the
       draft order that was submitted with the defence.
       If Moorside try and ambush you with a late WS submitted after
       yours, let us know and I can give you a Supplemental WS that you
       can then submit which destroys their failures and requests
       appropriate sanctions.
       #Post#: 88499--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: Pauly436
       Date: September 5, 2025, 1:45 am
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       Thank you for the sheer amount of advice and work you have put
       in for me b789.
       I did receive a LoC, and in my naivety before I came to the
       site, I thought this was just another bullying letter like the
       others they send out demanding money.
       Attached here
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       I did not respond. Error
       I didn't ask them to prove anything. I asked them for a SAR to
       see everything they had.
       Would you recommend I add any specifics about the parking
       incident in the WS? No signs on the entrance to the car park?
       only being in the car park for 1 minute and 22 seconds? or does
       that just add more confusion. You have clearly provided me so
       many points already. Having read other threads on this site it
       seems that this wont get past the first bullet point before the
       judge throws it out.
       I will prepare this WS into a PDF now like you described, ready
       to send at 4pm. If I hear from Moorside before then I will let
       you know immediately.
       Thanks
       Pauly
       #Post#: 88500--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Small claim court letter received. Observed leaving site
       UKCPS Sheff
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 5, 2025, 1:56 am
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       You can only respond to the PoC. The PoC do not state a cause of
       action. You have to assume that the recipient of a claim has no
       knowledge of what it is about. It is up to the claimant to
       provide enough detail for the defendant to understand the claim.
       As with all claims issued by the utter incompetents at Moorside
       Legal, they never comply with CPR 16.4(1)1(a) which means that
       they do not even include a concise cause of action.
       All they have pleaded is that you, either as driver or Keeper
       are in breach of contract. They have not even said what the
       contractual terms you have allegedly breached. The court will
       have no idea that they are alleging that the breach is a term
       that can be breached. How can the court know that they are
       alleging that the term of contract breached is someone left the
       site? How exactly is that term written? Does it apply to the
       driver only? Does it apply to anyone in the vehicle? How. Is the
       ‘site’ boundary defined’? How do they intend to hold you liable
       as the Keeper?
       Without stating the cause of action, it could be because no blue
       cars are allowed to park on a Wednesday between 0945 and 1127.
       Who knows? I could go on but you get the idea.
       So, DO NOT add anything about the unknown cause of action.
       Just remember, do not submit that until after 4pm.
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