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       #Post#: 60120--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 1, 2025, 12:39 pm
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       I've asked for it. The adjudicator was Stuart Lumsden and I've
       seen a few of his terrible decisions. He's one that is in dire
       need of some eduction and training as he has no concept of PoFA
       and statutory control/relevant land.
       #Post#: 60121--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: March 1, 2025, 12:40 pm
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       Excellent - this site crops up fairly often so having that to
       hand will be useful.
       #Post#: 60130--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: whydothistome
       Date: March 1, 2025, 1:20 pm
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       Thanks will look around and draft something then come back here.
       --- Quote from: b789 link ---
       >
       > A recent POPLA appeal for the same location that was not
       successful
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Is that the exception or the norm for this location at popla?
       #Post#: 61259--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: whydothistome
       Date: March 7, 2025, 4:07 pm
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       My first attempt below from stitching together appeals i've seen
       here plus some chatgpt help
       To POPLA,
       I, the registered keeper of vehicle XYZ, received a "Parking
       Charge Notice" titled "Notice to Keeper" via post from MET
       Parking Services (hereinafter referred to as MET). I appealed
       this notice to MET, which acknowledged and subsequently rejected
       my appeal without addressing the points I raised. It remains my
       position that, as the registered keeper of the vehicle, I have
       no liability for the parking charge. My appeal should therefore
       be upheld on the following grounds:
       The Location is Not 'Relevant Land' under the Protection of
       Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
       The Operator has Failed to Meet the Requirements of Paragraph 14
       of PoFA
       Failure to Address Appeal Points
       Inadequate Evidence of Clear and Prominent Signage
       No Legal Obligation to Identify the Driver or Assumption of
       Driver Identity
       1. The Location is Not 'Relevant Land' under the Protection of
       Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
       MET does not know the identity of the driver and is pursuing me
       as the vehicle’s registered keeper. The alleged contravention
       occurred at Southgate Park, which falls within the boundary of
       Stansted Airport. A Stansted Airport-issued map, provided with
       this appeal, confirms this fact. As Stansted Airport is subject
       to byelaws, it falls under statutory control.
       Paragraph 3(1)(c) of Schedule 4 of PoFA explicitly states that
       "relevant land" excludes any land that is "subject to statutory
       control," such as land governed by byelaws. Therefore, Southgate
       Park does not qualify as relevant land under PoFA. While the
       land may be privately owned and MET Parking Services may have
       been contracted to manage the car park, this does not override
       the fact that it falls under statutory control.
       Since Southgate Park is not relevant land, MET cannot invoke
       PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper. The only party they
       may legally pursue is the driver, whose identity has not been
       disclosed. As the keeper, I am under no legal obligation to
       identify the driver, and thus, there is no keeper liability in
       this case.
       2. The Operator has Failed to Meet the Requirements of Paragraph
       14 of PoFA
       Even if Southgate Park were considered relevant land (which is
       denied), MET would still be unable to hold me liable as the
       registered keeper due to non-compliance with PoFA’s
       requirements. PoFA sets out specific conditions that must be met
       for an operator to transfer liability from the driver to the
       keeper. MET has failed to meet these requirements, and thus, I
       cannot be held liable.
       3. Failure to Address Appeal Points
       In my initial appeal to MET, I explicitly raised the issue that
       Southgate Park is not relevant land under PoFA and that MET had
       not complied with PoFA’s requirements for keeper liability.
       However, MET failed to address these fundamental legal arguments
       in its rejection. Instead, MET dismissed the appeal without
       properly engaging with the evidence or responding to the legal
       basis of my argument. This indicates that the rejection was
       issued without due consideration of the facts or applicable
       legal framework.
       4. Inadequate Evidence of Clear and Prominent Signage
       MET has not provided sufficient evidence that the terms and
       conditions of parking were clearly displayed and visible to
       motorists. For a driver to be bound by a contract, signage must
       be legible, prominently positioned, and capable of being read
       before a contract is formed. MET has failed to provide
       satisfactory evidence that:
       The signage was adequately positioned and illuminated;
       The terms and conditions were clearly legible from a driver's
       perspective;
       The alleged contravention occurred in an area where sufficient
       and visible signage was present.
       Without such evidence, MET’s claim is unsubstantiated.
       5. No Legal Obligation to Identify the Driver or Assumption of
       Driver Identity
       As the keeper of the vehicle, I am not legally required to
       identify the driver. MET has provided no evidence to establish
       the identity of the driver at the time of the alleged
       contravention. Since PoFA does not apply to Southgate Park and
       MET has failed to meet PoFA’s conditions for keeper liability,
       MET must pursue the driver—if they can identify them. Without
       such identification, their claim against the keeper is baseless.
       Additionally, POPLA must not assume or infer that the keeper was
       the driver. Established case law supports this position. In VCS
       v Edward H0KF6C9C [2023], HHJ Mark Gargan stated in paragraph
       35.3:
       "It is consistent with the appropriate probability analysis
       whereby simply because somebody is a registered keeper, it does
       not mean on balance of probability they were driving on this
       occasion, because one simply cannot tell... These are all
       possibilities which show that it is not appropriate to draw an
       inference that, on balance of probability, the registered keeper
       was driving on any given occasion."
       Despite this, MET frequently attempts to mislead assessors by
       referencing an erroneous note in Annex C of the BPA/IPC Private
       Parking Single Code of Practice, which states:
       "Where a keeper or hirer fails or refuses to provide the name
       and serviceable address of the driver when requested to, it may
       be assumed they are the driver, based on that failure or
       refusal."
       This statement is contrary to established legal principles, as
       explained in VCS v Edward. A keeper's refusal to identify the
       driver does not justify an assumption that the keeper was the
       driver. Any such inference would be legally unsound, and POPLA
       must not be misled by MET’s misinterpretation of liability
       rules.
       Conclusion
       Southgate Park is within Stansted Airport’s boundary and is
       therefore subject to statutory control, excluding it from being
       classified as relevant land under PoFA. The explicit wording of
       Paragraph 3(1)(c) of Schedule 4 of PoFA confirms that land
       governed by byelaws does not meet the definition of relevant
       land. The official airport boundary map provided with this
       appeal removes any doubt about this fact.
       Even if the site were relevant land, MET has still failed to
       comply with PoFA’s keeper liability requirements. Furthermore,
       there is no legal basis for assuming the keeper was the driver.
       Established case law confirms that such an assumption is
       improper.
       MET has also failed to provide evidence of adequate signage and
       dismissed my initial appeal without addressing my legal
       arguments. Given these fundamental flaws, POPLA must uphold my
       appeal and instruct MET Parking Services to cancel the Parking
       Charge Notice.
       Yours faithfully,
       [Your Name]
       #Post#: 61264--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 7, 2025, 4:56 pm
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       Is the vehicle leased or hired? If not, then PoFA paragraph 14
       has nothing to do with this. If you're going to mention various
       paragraphs or sections, you have to make sure they apply to your
       situation.
       For example, because the land is under statutory control, PoFA
       cannot apply. However, on their NtK, they refer to Keeper
       liability under PoFA. Section 8.1.1(d) of the PPSCoP states:
       [indent]"The parking operator must not serve a notice which in
       its design and/or language: state the keeper is liable under the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 where they cannot be held
       liable."[/indent]
       So, there is a breach of the PPSCoP which invalidates the PCN.
       #Post#: 61280--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: whydothistome
       Date: March 8, 2025, 2:26 am
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       no it's not leased or hired, I guess I quoted an incorrect
       section. which bit shall I remove?
       #Post#: 61505--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: whydothistome
       Date: March 9, 2025, 3:44 pm
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       So is my response correct and polished enough to submit?
       #Post#: 61531--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 9, 2025, 6:47 pm
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       Here is a slightly more coherent version that you should send to
       POPLA:
       --- Quote ---
       > I, the registered keeper of vehicle [VRM], received a "Parking
       Charge Notice" (PCN) titled "Notice to Keeper" via post from MET
       Parking Services (hereinafter referred to as MET). I appealed
       this notice to MET, which acknowledged and subsequently rejected
       my appeal without addressing the points I raised. It remains my
       position that, as the registered keeper of the vehicle, I have
       no liability for the parking charge. My appeal should therefore
       be upheld on the following grounds:
       >
       > [indent]1. The Location is Not 'Relevant Land' under the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
       >
       > 2. MET Cannot Transfer Liability to the Keeper and Cannot
       Assume Keeper Liability for the Charge
       >
       > 3. MET’s Notice to Keeper Breaches the Private Parking Single
       Code of Practice (PPSCoP) and their KADOE Contract with the DVLA
       >
       > 4. Inadequate Evidence of Clear and Prominent Signage[/indent]
       >
       > 1. The Location is Not 'Relevant Land' under the Protection of
       Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
       >
       > MET does not know the identity of the driver and is pursuing
       me as the vehicle’s registered keeper. The alleged contravention
       occurred at Southgate Park, which falls within the boundary of
       Stansted Airport. A Stansted Airport-issued map, provided with
       this appeal, confirms this fact. As Stansted Airport is subject
       to byelaws, it falls under statutory control.
       >
       >
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       >
       > Paragraph 3(1)(c) of Schedule 4 of PoFA explicitly states that
       "relevant land" excludes any land that is "subject to statutory
       control," such as land governed by byelaws. Therefore, Southgate
       Park does not qualify as relevant land under PoFA. While the
       land may be privately owned and MET may have been contracted to
       manage the car park, this does not override the fact that it
       falls under statutory control.
       >
       > Since Southgate Park is not relevant land, MET cannot invoke
       PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper. The only party they
       may legally pursue is the driver, whose identity has not been
       disclosed. As the keeper, I am under no legal obligation to
       identify the driver, and thus, there is no keeper liability in
       this case.
       >
       > Furthermore, MET continues to mendaciously claim that because
       the location is "private land" or "not at the airport," then it
       must be relevant land. However, the POPLA assessor cannot deny
       the obvious fact that an official Stansted Airport map, with the
       airport boundary clearly marked in blue and the location of
       Southgate Park marked in red, shows that it is within the
       airport boundary and therefore is land under statutory control
       (airport byelaws). I put MET to strict proof that this is not
       the case.
       >
       > 2. MET Cannot Transfer Liability to the Keeper and Cannot
       Assume Keeper Liability for the Charge
       >
       > Even if Southgate Park were considered relevant land (which is
       denied), MET would still be unable to hold me liable as the
       registered keeper due to non-compliance with PoFA’s strict
       statutory conditions. PoFA sets out clear requirements that an
       operator must meet in order to transfer liability from the
       driver to the keeper. MET has failed to meet these requirements,
       meaning I cannot be held liable.
       >
       > Additionally, as the keeper of the vehicle, I am not legally
       required to identify the driver. MET has provided no evidence to
       establish the identity of the driver at the time of the alleged
       contravention. Since PoFA does not apply to Southgate Park and
       MET has failed to meet PoFA’s conditions for keeper liability,
       MET must pursue the driver—if they can identify them. Without
       such identification, their claim against the keeper is baseless.
       >
       > Furthermore, POPLA must not assume or infer that the keeper
       was the driver. Established case law supports this position. In
       VCS v Edward [2023] (H0KF6C9C), HHJ Mark Gargan stated in
       paragraph 35.3:
       >
       > [indent]"Simply because somebody is a registered keeper, it
       does not mean on balance of probability they were driving on
       this occasion, because one simply cannot tell... These are all
       possibilities which show that it is not appropriate to draw an
       inference that, on balance of probability, the registered keeper
       was driving on any given occasion."[/indent]
       >
       > This legal principle confirms that MET cannot assume keeper
       liability unless they provide direct evidence that the keeper
       was the driver. POPLA must not be misled by any attempt to
       suggest otherwise.
       >
       > 3. MET’s Notice to Keeper Breaches the Private Parking Single
       Code of Practice (PPSCoP) and their KADOE Contract with the DVLA
       >
       > Section 8.1.1(d) of the Private Parking Single Code of
       Practice (PPSCoP) clearly states:
       >
       > [indent]"The parking operator must not serve a notice which in
       its design and/or language states the keeper is liable under the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 where they cannot be held
       liable."[/indent]
       >
       > Since Southgate Park is not relevant land under PoFA, MET is
       in clear breach of this section by continuing to issue Notices
       to Keeper (NtKs) that falsely imply or directly state that the
       registered keeper can be held liable. This is a serious breach
       of the Code of Practice.
       >
       > By knowingly issuing such unlawful notices, MET is also in
       breach of their Keeper at Date of Event (KADOE) contract with
       the DVLA, which only permits them to obtain registered keeper
       details for lawful and Code-compliant purposes. Handling and
       processing keeper data in this manner is therefore unlawful, and
       MET has no legitimate grounds to retain or use my personal data.
       >
       > As a result, MET’s entire basis for issuing this PCN is
       fundamentally flawed. Their breach of both the PPSCoP and the
       KADOE contract means that the PCN is invalid on that ground
       alone. The assessor must acknowledge that MET has no legal right
       to issue or enforce this charge. The PCN must be cancelled
       immediately.
       >
       > I will be reporting MET’s conduct to the DVLA separately, but
       the key point for POPLA to consider is that MET’s non-compliance
       invalidates this charge entirely.
       >
       > 4. Inadequate Evidence of Clear and Prominent Signage
       >
       > MET has not provided sufficient evidence that the terms and
       conditions of parking were clearly displayed and visible to
       motorists. For a driver to be bound by a contract, signage must
       be legible, prominently positioned, and capable of being read
       before a contract is formed. MET has failed to provide
       satisfactory evidence that:
       >
       > [indent]• The signage was adequately positioned and
       illuminated;
       > • The terms and conditions were clearly legible from a
       driver's perspective;
       > • The alleged contravention occurred in an area where
       sufficient and visible signage was present.[/indent]
       >
       > Without such evidence, MET’s claim is unsubstantiated.
       >
       > Conclusion
       >
       > Southgate Park is within Stansted Airport’s boundary and is
       therefore subject to statutory control, excluding it from being
       classified as relevant land under PoFA. The explicit wording of
       Paragraph 3(1)(c) of Schedule 4 of PoFA confirms that land
       governed by byelaws does not meet the definition of relevant
       land. The official airport boundary map provided with this
       appeal removes any doubt about this fact.
       >
       > Even if the site were relevant land, MET has still failed to
       comply with PoFA’s keeper liability requirements. Furthermore,
       MET’s Notice to Keeper breaches the PPSCoP and their KADOE
       contract with the DVLA, meaning they have no lawful basis to
       handle or retain keeper data. This renders the PCN invalid on
       this ground alone.
       >
       > MET has also failed to provide evidence of adequate signage.
       Given these fundamental flaws, POPLA must uphold my appeal and
       instruct MET Parking Services to cancel the Parking Charge
       Notice.
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 61533--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: March 9, 2025, 6:51 pm
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       b789, is this the same site on which another case you were
       involved in led to the lead assessor agreeing (after a
       complaint) that it wasn't relevant land? If so, worth throwing a
       reference to that in there?
       #Post#: 61537--------------------------------------------------
       Re: MET Parking Services - Southgate Park - Stansted Airport
       Starbucks/McDonalds - Notice To Keeper
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 9, 2025, 6:57 pm
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       Unfortunately, the appellant in that case didn't provide the
       assessors name or the POPLA reference number. It can be
       referenced but without those two details, it will hold little
       weight for the assessor of this appeal.
       I think that there should be enough in this appeal to persuade
       the POPLA assessor but, as always with POPLA, you don't know who
       is doing the assessment and they have some truly moronic
       assessors on staff at the moment, who have shown incredible lack
       of understanding of the law and the PPSCoP.
       Anyway, if POPLA don't accept the appeal, it would be very
       easily defended in court if MET are going to play silly buggers
       and try and escalate it that far.
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