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       Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: Wildon
       Date: January 14, 2025, 12:23 am
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       I have received a penalty notice from Saba Parking which said I
       arrived in the car park at 7.45am and overstayed the 20 minute
       time limit.  I appealed and asked for photographic evidence that
       I arrived at this time and I was sent a photo of my car at
       8.22am.  I asked again for evidence of arrival time and the
       appeal got sent to the railway compamy who's land it was.  I
       sent my appeal through to them as I know I didn't arrive at
       7.45am, but their response was "We are sure our operator
       followed the correct procedure so the penalty still stands"
       Please can anyone help as they have now closed my appeal and
       said I have to pay it even though I wasn't there at the tie on
       the ticket and there is no evidence that I was.
       #Post#: 53237--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: John U.K.
       Date: January 14, 2025, 3:00 am
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       Moved to Private Parking.
       Please follow the guidance here
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       #Post#: 53271--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: b789
       Date: January 14, 2025, 6:17 am
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       Please show us this "Penalty Notice" issued by SABA. You are
       asking for advice without providing enough evidence for us to
       help you.
       I know for a fact that a SABA issued Penalty Notice (PN) is
       nothing of the sort. It is a fake PN. It is in fact an "offered
       contract" which is not legally binding on anyone. The contract
       offers the recipient the chance to "bribe" SABA to the tune of
       £100 (or whatever amount is in the notice) for them not to
       initiate a private criminal prosecution in the magistrates
       court.
       However, you have already been duped as have hundreds of
       thousands of other low-hanging fruit on the gullible tree into
       engaging with them in this extortion. You mention that
       "[i]...the appeal got sent to the railway compamy whose land it
       was.[/I]". Please elaborate on that.
       SABA themselves have never ever initiated a private criminal
       prosecution in the magistrate's court themselves. They don't
       have an ounce of altruism in their being because any prosecution
       that is successful means that the penalty paid goes to the
       public purse, not the greedy ex-clampers one bank account.
       So, if you'd like advice on how to fight this scam, please
       answer the questions above and show us the PN you received, what
       you have already said in your appeals and the responses you
       received.
       #Post#: 53302--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: Wildon
       Date: January 14, 2025, 9:26 am
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       Thank you for your reply,  I have attached correspondance and
       initial penalty notice for you.  Please let me know if there is
       anything else needed.  Thank you for your help.
       [attachment deleted by admin]
       #Post#: 53311--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: Snudge88
       Date: January 14, 2025, 11:06 am
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       You've left all of your personal information visible in the
       various attachments - you may wish to redact these.
       #Post#: 53337--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: Wildon
       Date: January 14, 2025, 1:26 pm
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       Oh my! uploaded the wrong ones,  Thank you for letting me know.
       #Post#: 53403--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: b789
       Date: January 14, 2025, 10:10 pm
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       Please show us the back of the Notice to Driver (NtD) that was
       affixed to the vehicle.
       I was discussing this matter with a district judge last night
       and he is as outraged by the audacity of these fake Penalty
       Notices. Saba are attempting to conflate civil law and statutory
       law.
       The notice is nothing more than an offer to the recipient which
       is not enforceable. Real Penalty Notices cannot be dealt with by
       the civil courts, only as criminal matters in the magistrates
       court.
       Civil matters only require the burden of proof to be on the
       “balance of probabilities”. Criminal matters require the burden
       of proof to be “beyond all reasonable doubt”. Even if this were
       a real PN (it definitely isn’t), the prosecution would have to
       prove that the crime was committed by the defendant.
       Their reliance on bylaw 14.4 is impossible to prove. Never mind
       the fact that they have not stated which subsection of bylaw 14
       has allegedly been breached, they state that they can hold the
       “owner” of the vehicle liable for the crime. There is no
       register of “owners”. Being the Registered Keeper (RK) is not
       proof of ownership and if you look at your V5C, it states so
       very clearly on the front of it that it is not proof of
       ownership.
       So, SABA cannot try and sue you for the alleged debt as a civil
       matter because it is not a civil matter and they are pretending
       that they have a right to bring a private criminal prosecution
       in the magistrates court as a matter of statutory law. Were they
       to do that, the burden of proof goes through the roof and even
       if they were successful, not a penny of any penalty or fine
       would go to them. It all goes to the public purse.
       I would bet that if Saba were forced to evidence their contract
       with the Train Operating Company (TOC), they have no right to
       issue “Penalty Notices” but are expected to issue Parking Charge
       Notices (PCNs) under civil contract law. However, they choose
       not to because they know they cannot rely on PoFA to hold the
       Keeper liable as the location is not relevant land.
       Please show us the back of the Penalty Notice you received as I
       need it as further evidence of this unlawful extortion racket.
       Continue to ignore everything that is sent to you except a
       Letter of Claim (LoC) or a summons from the magistrates court.
       They have 6 months from the date of the alleged offence to
       initiate legal action. They won’t.
       They are simply hoping you are low-hanging fruit on the gullible
       tree that will pay up out of ignorance and fear. You are only
       one of hundreds of thousands of victims of this scam/extortion
       racket (call it what you will). Unfortunately, unless they’ve
       been here or over on MSE, they have no idea and end up paying
       needlessly into the scam. You have already fallen victim by
       having appealed, needlessly and uselessly.
       #Post#: 53428--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: Wildon
       Date: January 15, 2025, 4:57 am
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       Thank you so much for your kind reply.  I have attached the back
       of the PN for you.
       [attachment deleted by admin]
       #Post#: 53442--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: b789
       Date: January 15, 2025, 6:38 am
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       My advice is to send the following letter to SABA and see what
       their response is. Send the letter as a PDF attachment in an
       email to customersupport.uk@sabagroup.com and also CC in
       yourself.
       --- Quote ---
       > SABA Customer Support Centre
       > PO Box 2466
       > Watford
       > Hertfordshire
       > WD18 1XH
       >
       > By email to: customersupport.uk@sabagroup.com
       >
       > Subject: Formal Challenge Regarding the Legitimacy of Penalty
       Notice [Reference Number: WMT42420241121080936]
       >
       > Dear Sir/Madam,
       >
       > I am writing to formally challenge the legitimacy and
       enforceability of the above-referenced Penalty Notice (PN)
       issued by SABA Parking UK on behalf of West Midlands Trains.
       Based on my understanding of the Railway Byelaws 2005, the 2018
       Department for Transport (DfT) response to POPLA, and the
       decriminalisation of parking offences under the Road Traffic Act
       1991, it is clear that your PN is not a lawful Penalty Notice. I
       contend that this notice is a deliberate misrepresentation of
       your authority under the byelaws and amounts to an attempt to
       extort money from motorists into your own company bank account.
       >
       > 1. Misrepresentation of Legal Authority
       >
       > The PN issued to me purports to be a statutory penalty under
       the Railway Byelaws 2005, specifically byelaw 14. However, I am
       fully aware that parking offences were decriminalised under the
       Road Traffic Act 1991, meaning that minor parking breaches
       should no longer be treated as criminal offences. Instead, they
       should be dealt with through civil contract law mechanisms, such
       as a Parking Charge Notice (PCN), rather than a Penalty Notice
       (PN) implying statutory authority and criminal liability.
       >
       > The 2018 DfT response to POPLA further supports this
       interpretation. The query from POPLA was about their ability to
       provide an independent appeals service for penalty notices
       issued at railway station car parks. It is evident that POPLA,
       as a non-statutory body, cannot adjudicate on criminal matters
       such as penalty notices issued under the Railway Byelaws. POPLA
       could, however, adjudicate if the matter were treated as a civil
       contractual issue, such as a PCN. This distinction highlights
       that penalty notices issued under the byelaws are inherently
       criminal in nature and must be dealt with through the
       appropriate statutory processes.
       >
       > Your attempt to issue a PN under the guise of enforcing a
       statutory penalty is a fundamental misapplication of the
       byelaws. If the alleged contravention is truly a minor parking
       issue, as stated, it should be managed through civil contract
       law, not through threats of criminal prosecution.
       >
       > 2. Unlawful Retention of Penalty Payments
       >
       > Statutory penalties issued under byelaw 14 are intended to be
       paid into the public purse, not retained by private companies.
       The payment instructions provided on your PN direct funds to
       SABA’s bank account, raising serious concerns about the
       legitimacy of your enforcement practices. There is no lawful
       basis for SABA to retain funds collected from alleged breaches
       of railway byelaws. If this were a genuine Penalty Notice under
       statutory authority, any payments collected would need to be
       remitted to the Train Operating Company or the public purse.
       >
       > Your current practice of directing payments to your own bank
       account is indicative of a private revenue collection scheme
       masquerading as statutory enforcement. This misrepresentation is
       misleading to motorists and constitutes a breach of consumer
       protection laws.
       >
       > 3. Procedural Flaws in the Use of "Appeals Service"
       >
       > I note that my appeal to your so-called "Appeals Service" was
       rejected. This further highlights the flawed and unlawful nature
       of your process. The Appeals Service, like POPLA, is not a
       statutory body. It is a third-party, private entity funded by
       SABA, creating a clear conflict of interest and undermining any
       claim of impartiality.
       >
       > If SABA were acting in accordance with the Railway Byelaws,
       the appropriate recourse would be to refer the matter to the
       magistrates' court for prosecution. However, as previously
       stated, minor parking offences should not be subject to criminal
       prosecution. The use of a privately funded appeals service
       demonstrates that SABA has no intention of following either the
       statutory process or the appropriate civil process.
       >
       > 4. Understanding of the Legal Process and the DfT’s Position
       >
       > I am fully aware that if SABA wishes to pursue this matter as
       a genuine penalty under the Railway Byelaws, the correct
       procedure is to lay information before a magistrates' court for
       a private criminal prosecution. If the information is deemed
       valid, a summons would be issued for me to attend court. I also
       understand that the burden of proof in the magistrates' court is
       much higher than in a civil court. The prosecution must prove
       the alleged offence beyond a reasonable doubt, which is a
       significantly higher standard than the balance of probabilities
       used in civil cases.
       >
       > However, it is clear from the DfT’s 2018 response that parking
       offences under byelaw 14(4)(i) are not intended to be dealt with
       through byelaw 24(1) criminal prosecutions. Instead, these minor
       infractions should be handled through civil contract law
       mechanisms, such as issuing a PCN, rather than a PN. Your
       failure to follow the appropriate civil enforcement process
       suggests a deliberate attempt to mislead motorists into
       believing they are liable for a criminal penalty.
       >
       > 5. Abuse of Process and Potential Extortion
       >
       > Given the above, I believe that your actions amount to an
       abuse of process and potentially constitute an attempt to extort
       money from motorists under the guise of statutory enforcement.
       Your PN is not a genuine Penalty Notice under the Railway
       Byelaws, and your procedures indicate a deliberate effort to
       mislead motorists into making payments that are not legally
       owed.
       >
       > Furthermore, the threat of additional costs and enforcement
       action if payment is not made reinforces the impression that
       SABA is attempting to profit from this process without following
       the correct legal channels. These tactics amount to unfair
       commercial practices under the Consumer Protection from Unfair
       Trading Regulations 2008.
       >
       > 6. Request for Clarification and Next Steps
       >
       > I hereby request the following clarifications from SABA:
       >
       > [indent]• Confirmation of the legal authority under which SABA
       collects payments directly into its own bank account for alleged
       breaches of railway byelaws.
       >
       > • An explanation as to why the alleged breach has not been
       referred to the magistrates' court for prosecution, as required
       under the Railway Byelaws, if you believe it constitutes a
       criminal offence.
       >
       > • Details of any contractual arrangements between SABA and
       West Midlands Trains regarding the right to issue Penalty
       Notices and collection and retention of penalty payments.
       >
       > • Clarification of the role and funding of the Appeals
       Service, and an explanation of why this body is used instead of
       a court process or an independent, statutory appeals body.
       >
       > 7. Conclusion
       >
       > In light of the issues outlined above, I do not recognise this
       Penalty Notice as valid or enforceable. I will not be making any
       payment to SABA. Should SABA wish to pursue this matter further,
       it must be done through the appropriate legal channels by
       following either the correct statutory prosecution process or,
       more appropriately, civil contract law procedures. If the latter
       route is pursued, the correct mechanism would be to issue a
       Parking Charge Notice (PCN) under civil law, rather than a
       Penalty Notice.
       >
       > If SABA continues to pursue this matter without following the
       proper legal process, I will consider filing formal complaints
       with the British Parking Association, the DVLA, the Train
       Operating Company, the Office of Rail and Road, and Trading
       Standards. I will also consider reporting SABA’s practices to
       the relevant consumer protection authorities for investigation
       into potential breaches of the Consumer Protection from Unfair
       Trading Regulations 2008.
       >
       > I look forward to your prompt response to this challenge.
       >
       > Yours sincerely,
       >
       > [Your Name]
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       #Post#: 53483--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Incorrect arrival time on Penalty notice
   DIR By: Wildon
       Date: January 15, 2025, 10:04 am
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       Thank you so much for the letter you have drafted.  I will send
       this through and see what happens.  You have helped me
       understand the unlawful practices of these companies.
       I will keep you updated with any response I receive.
       Many thanks once again.
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