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       #Post#: 55141--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: b789
       Date: January 26, 2025, 5:03 am
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       I suggest you now send a letter by post, with a free certificate
       of posting from the post office, to Gladstones. They will have 7
       days to respond. If they fail to do so, then you will have to
       apply for a set side without consent.
       --- Quote ---
       > [Your Name]
       > [Your Address]
       > [City, Postcode]
       >
       > Date: [Insert Date]
       >
       > Gladstones Solicitors
       > Unit B, 1st Floor
       > 210 Cygnet Court
       > Warrington
       > WA1 1PP
       >
       > BY POST WITH CERTIFICATE OF POSTING
       >
       > Re: Claim No. [INSERT CLAIM NUMBER]
       > Defendant: [Your Name]
       >
       > Dear Sir/Madam,
       >
       > I write further to my email sent to you on [INSERT DATE]
       regarding a proposal to set aside the default judgment in the
       above matter by mutual consent.
       >
       > Delivery Receipt of Email
       >
       > The email was sent to your official address at
       enquiries@gladstonessolicitors.co.uk and was not bounced.
       According to the email headers meta-data, the message was
       successfully delivered. However, I have not received a
       substantive response to my proposal or even an acknowledgement
       of receipt.
       >
       > SAR Response Omission
       > Further, I note that the Subject Access Request (SAR) response
       you provided failed to include any reference to my email or the
       attached letter. This raises concerns about the accuracy and
       completeness of your response and your potential failure to
       acknowledge correspondence that has been properly delivered.
       >
       > Next Steps
       > In the interests of resolving this matter efficiently and
       proportionately, I am giving you a final opportunity to confirm
       receipt of my original email and to provide a substantive
       response to my proposal to set aside the judgment by consent.
       >
       > I am prepared to proceed by way of mutual consent and cover
       the application fee of £119 to submit the Consent Order to the
       court. This would avoid unnecessary costs and court time for
       both parties. However, should I not receive a response to this
       letter within 7 days of service, I will proceed with an N244
       application for a contested set-aside.
       >
       > Should you continue to deny receipt of my original email, I
       will place this letter, my original email, and the delivery
       receipt/header meta-data before the court as evidence of my
       attempts to resolve the matter reasonably.
       >
       > Overriding Objective
       > I respectfully remind you of your obligation to assist the
       court in achieving the overriding objective of the Civil
       Procedure Rules: to deal with cases justly, efficiently, and at
       proportionate cost. A consent order remains the most equitable
       and efficient resolution in this case.
       >
       > I look forward to your response.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       >
       > [Your Name]
       >
       > Enc. Copy of original letter as sent by email
       --- End Quote ---
       Make sure you include a copy of the original letter. I suggest
       you date the letter and post it on the same day. You will have
       to take it to a post office and get a free Certificate of
       Posting. According to the Interpretation Act, a First Class
       letter posted is deemed served two working days later.
       #Post#: 59579--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: jayudd
       Date: February 24, 2025, 7:41 pm
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       Hello b789,
       I hope all is well.
       I sent the letter by proof of postage, as suggested.
       Still no reply.
       Shall I move forward with the set aside from my end? They had
       ample time to respond, but nothing as of yet. Sorry it has taken
       me a few weeks, but I had been away for work with no
       access/limited internet.
       Thanks.
       #Post#: 59666--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: b789
       Date: February 25, 2025, 11:32 am
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       In which case you will have to make the application yourself.
       Here is a link to a partially completed N244 application for
       your specific case:
       N244 application
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/zcwkj2n7iwvu5igmzdenk/N244_0622_save.pdf?rlkey=fr8eisykkysyh98vgszzhl2ut&st=kcdm0vkq&dl=0
       You will need to complete your personal details and the claim
       number and you sign by typing your full name for the signature.
       Here is the Witness Statement which should be saved as a PDF
       file.
       --- Quote ---
       > [center]IN THE COUNTY COURT[/center]
       > [right]Claim No: [Claim Number][/right]
       >
       > [center]BETWEEN:
       >
       > National Parking Management Ltd
       > Claimant
       >
       > - and -
       >
       > [Defendant's Full Name]
       > 
Defendant
       >
       >
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       >
       > WITNESS STATEMENT[/center]
       >
       > I, [DEFENDANT'S NAME], of [ADDRESS], state as follows:
       >
       > 1. I am the Defendant in this matter. This witness statement
       is in support of my application to set aside the default
       judgment entered against me on [DATE] pursuant to CPR 13.3(1).
       >
       > 2. The default judgment was entered due to an honest
       procedural mistake on my part, and I have a real prospect of
       successfully defending the claim, which is fundamentally
       defective and should be struck out.
       >
       > Background
       >
       > 3. I first became aware of the judgment when I received a
       letter from HM Courts & Tribunals Service dated [DATE] notifying
       me of the default judgment.
       >
       > 4. The claim form was correctly delivered, and I submitted an
       Acknowledgment of Service (AoS) within the prescribed timeframe.
       However, my defence was not submitted due to:
       >
       > [indent]a) A technical email issue which resulted in the
       defence not being sent;
       >
       > b) A misunderstanding regarding the defence form in the claim
       pack, as I mistakenly believed it was only to be used for
       counterclaims.[/indent]
       >
       > 5. Upon learning of the judgment, I acted promptly by
       contacting the Claimant’s solicitors, Gladstones, requesting a
       consent order to set aside the judgment. I offered to cover the
       £119 consent application fee.
       >
       > 6. Despite multiple attempts to engage with the Claimant’s
       solicitors, they have ignored my requests, forcing me to file
       this contested application at an increased cost of £303.
       >
       > The Claim Fails to Comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a) and Should be
       Struck Out
       >
       > 7. I have a real prospect of successfully defending this
       claim, but more importantly, the claim fails to comply with CPR
       16.4(1)(a) and should be struck out under CPR 3.4(2)(a) because
       it does not disclose reasonable grounds for bringing a claim.
       >
       > 8. The Particulars of Claim (PoC) contained within the N1SDT
       claim form are defective and fail to meet the standard required
       under CPR 16.4(1)(a). A copy of the N1SDT claim form is attached
       as Exhibit [INITIALS]-01, which clearly demonstrates:
       >
       > [indent]a) No contractual terms are identified or attached, as
       required under CPR PD 16(7.5).
       >
       > b) The PoC do not specify which clause(s) of the alleged
       contract have been breached.
       >
       > c) The PoC fail to provide a clear factual basis for the
       alleged breach (e.g., the exact nature of the alleged
       contravention).
       >
       > d) The sum claimed is not explained, and no legal basis is
       provided for additional charges beyond the parking charge
       itself.
       >
       > e) The PoC do not clarify whether I am pursued as the driver
       or as the registered keeper.[/indent]
       >
       > 9. The PoC within the N1SDT form fail to contain a concise
       statement of facts, as required by CPR 16.4(1)(a), and as a
       result, the claim is vague, inadequate and defective. It does
       not particularise the cause of action, preventing the Defendant
       from preparing a meaningful response.
       >
       > 10. The courts have previously struck out identical claims for
       failing to comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a). I rely on the following
       persuasive appellate authorities:
       >
       > [indent]CEL v Chan 2023 [E7GM9W44] – The court struck out the
       claim for failing to provide a concise statement of facts as
       required by CPR 16.4(1)(a).
       >
       > CPMS v Akande 2024 [K0DP5J30] – The court struck out a
       similarly vague claim, ruling that a claimant cannot rely on
       generic, template-style pleadings without properly
       particularising the alleged breach.[/indent]
       >
       > 11. Copies of these judgments are attached as Exhibit
       [INITIALS]-02 and Exhibit [INITIALS]-03.
       >
       > 12. Furthermore, in a similar case, a district judge struck
       out a claim of their own initiative due to identical defects.
       The judge ruled that:
       >
       > [indent]• The claim lacked legal and factual specificity.
       >
       > • It would be disproportionate and contrary to the overriding
       objective to allow amendments.[/indent]
       >
       > 13. A copy of the draft order from that case is attached as
       Exhibit [INITIALS]-04
       >
       > Claimant’s Unreasonable Conduct & Costs Request
       >
       > 14. I acted promptly in seeking to set aside the judgment and
       engaged in good faith negotiations with the Claimant’s
       solicitors, who refused to engage.
       >
       > 15. I attempted to resolve this amicably by:
       >
       > [indent]• Sending an email to Gladstones solicitors on [DATE]
       requesting a consent order and offering to cover the £119
       application fee.
       >
       > • Following up via first class post with proof of posting on
       [DATE].[/indent]
       >
       > 16. Despite these efforts, Gladstones failed to even
       acknowledge, never mind respond, leaving me no choice but to
       file a contested application at an increased cost of £303.
       >
       > 17. Under CPR 27.14(2)(g), the Claimant’s failure to engage in
       settlement discussions is unreasonable conduct that justifies a
       costs order in my favour.
       >
       > 18. Additionally, under CPR 38.6(1), if the Claimant
       discontinues the claim post-set-aside, costs should follow the
       event, meaning I should be compensated for the costs incurred in
       this unnecessary application.
       >
       > Request for Relief
       >
       > 19. In light of the above, I respectfully request that the
       Court:
       >
       > [indent]a) Set aside the default judgment pursuant to CPR
       13.3(1).
       >
       > b) Strike out the claim under CPR 3.4(2)(a) for failing to
       disclose reasonable grounds for bringing a claim.
       >
       > c) Order the Claimant to pay my costs, summarily assessed at
       £303, due to their unreasonable conduct in refusing to engage in
       settlement discussions.[/indent]
       >
       > STATEMENT OF TRUTH
       >
       > I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true. I
       understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought
       against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false
       statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without
       an honest belief in its truth.
       >
       > Signed:
       >
       >
       > Dated:
       --- End Quote ---
       Here is the draft order which should be saved in an MS Word
       (.docx or .doc) format:
       --- Quote ---
       > IN THE COUNTY COURT[/center]
       > [right]Claim No: [Claim Number][/right]
       >
       > [center]BETWEEN:
       >
       > National Parking Management Ltd
       > Claimant
       >
       > - and -
       >
       > [Defendant's Full Name]
       > 
Defendant
       >
       >
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       >
       > DRAFT ORDER[/center]
       >
       > UPON the Court considering the Defendant’s application dated
       [DATE] to set aside the default judgment entered against them on
       10th December 2024;
       >
       > AND UPON considering the Defendant’s witness statement and
       supporting evidence;
       >
       > AND UPON it appearing that:
       >
       > [indent]a) The Defendant acted promptly upon learning of the
       default judgment and has a real prospect of successfully
       defending the claim, pursuant to CPR 13.3(1);
       >
       > b) The Claimant’s Particulars of Claim as set out in the N1SDT
       claim form are defective and fail to comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a)
       and CPR PD 16(7.5), in that they do not contain a concise
       statement of facts, do not specify the exact contractual terms
       allegedly breached, and do not provide the factual basis for the
       amount claimed;
       >
       > c) The Claim is therefore vague, lacking in specificity, and
       does not disclose reasonable grounds for bringing a claim,
       pursuant to CPR 3.4(2)(a);[/indent]
       >
       > IT IS ORDERED THAT:
       >
       > [indent]1. The default judgment entered on [DATE] is set aside
       pursuant to CPR 13.3(1).
       >
       > 2. The claim is struck out in its entirety pursuant to CPR
       3.4(2)(a) on the basis that it fails to disclose reasonable
       grounds for bringing a claim due to non-compliance with CPR
       16.4(1)(a) and CPR PD 16(7.5).
       >
       > 3. The Claimant shall pay the Defendant’s costs of this
       application, summarily assessed at £303, due to:
       >
       > [indent]a) The Claimant’s failure to engage in discussions to
       resolve this matter via consent, which necessitated this
       contested application; and
       >
       > b) The Claimant’s issue of defective Particulars of Claim,
       which resulted in an unmeritorious default judgment being
       entered.[/indent]
       >
       > Dated:
       --- End Quote ---
       Here is a link to the Chan, Akande transcripts and draft
       strikeout order exhibits which need to be saved with their own
       court header information and marked with the relevant reference
       in the WS to the exhibits with your initials (eg. XX-01, XX-02
       etc.).
       Draft Order for the defence
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/zc23txk7poctyyxiv2ytx/Strikeout-order-1-a-v2.1.pdf?rlkey=pancly3z6zwqt2cra5rvvh3ls&st=nq7a58tz&dl=0
       CEL v Chan Transcript
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/nb9ypbecuurpmln00dily/CELvChan-appeal-transcript.pdf?rlkey=7mpuvpmpe45s2zbhch21om1ez&st=i8dnbod3&dl=0
       CPMS v Akande Transcript
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/y631olc61z1slr6xfrdsk/CPM-v-AKANDE.pdf?rlkey=kltpojedcxiwarxr0sdfyjo05&st=qi4lv3fv&dl=0
       Make sure you also include a copy of the N1SDT Claim Form with
       the defective PoC as an exhibit too and reference it accordingly
       in the WS and on the header.
       When you have made the necessary edits and saved everything, the
       application form, the WS, and the exhibits should all be saved
       as a single PDF file. The draft order (not the evidential one
       for the defence) should be saved as a MS Word (.docx or .doc
       format) file. You then need to attach the PDF film and the Word
       files to an email which you send to:
       applications.cnbc@justice.gov.uk and CC in yourself.
       Make sure that the claim number is in the subject field of the
       covering email and in the body of the email state:
       "Please contact me at [phone number] to take payment for the
       N244 application fee by card" and also include a very short
       explanation about what is attached, mentioning that it is an
       N244 application for a set aside.
       That should cover it unless anyone else has any observations.
       #Post#: 62377--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: jayudd
       Date: March 13, 2025, 2:09 pm
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       Hi b789,
       I hope you are well.
       Thank you for providing the draft N244 information etc. I have
       not yet sent it off as I had been away for work. I got back
       earlier this week.
       Having said that, interestingly, I received the following from
       Gladstones:
       Good morning,
       Thank you for your email.
       Please accept our apologies for the delay in response.
       Our client does not intend to oppose an application to set the
       judgment aside providing that:
       1. The judgment sum is paid in full
       2. You accept liability for the judgment amount and to pay the
       costs of the application
       3. You agree not to make any application as to costs
       May we remind you that £170.00 remains outstanding on file
       104294.150XXX. Failure to make payment on or before the 27th
       March 2025 will result in further legal proceedings.
       Payment can be made to the following details:
       Gladstones Solicitors Ltd
       Barclays Bank
       Account Number: 33028712
       Sort Code: 20-24-09
       Does this mean, they still want us to pay the county court
       judgement amount in full and bear the costs of the application?
       I believe I should still do as you said in your previous post
       and apply to set aside the judgment. Can I recover the costs
       from them? I almost feel like they know they will lose if we go
       to set aside hence asking not to pursue costs. But i am no
       expert, please do advise where we stand with their email etc.
       I would love to know about claiming the application costs etc
       from them.
       Thank you.
       Jay
       #Post#: 62398--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 13, 2025, 3:35 pm
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       Why have you waited for over two weeks to send off the
       application? You may be required to justify the delay. You
       absolutely must not delay making an application for a set
       aside!!!! What is your excuse?
       Gladstones have now responded, albeit 9 weeks later. They are
       saying that they will only agree to a consented set-aside if you
       pay them the judgment amount AND you cover the application fee
       of £119, which is about £450. Your choice.
       If you go for what I suggested over two weeks ago, you have a
       chance of having the CCJ set-aside and the original claim struck
       out, which a chance that you will be awarded your costs.
       I really cannot be wasting my time if you arbitrarily delay
       doing what has been advised and now the landscape has changed.
       Additionally, I have no idea what they are referring to about
       the outstanding £170 you are allegedly in debt to them for. Do
       you have another outstanding PCN? I suggest you show us the full
       letter and not just your paraphrasing of it is we are to
       properly assist.
       #Post#: 62412--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: jayudd
       Date: March 13, 2025, 5:07 pm
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       Hi b789,
       Sorry I should have explained my delay - my line of work
       requires me to travel a fair but and I only have access to my
       work laptop which is restricted to work use only, in the line of
       work I am in. I was actually dealing with the draft suggestions
       you kindly provided yesterday and then I received Gladstones
       email. I will finish and send as you advised.
       Regarding the other claim, I did not receive anything regarding
       that so have emailed asking for more information. I will post up
       once I have more information.
       I will come back here if I get stuck.
       Thank you once again.
       #Post#: 62414--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: jayudd
       Date: March 13, 2025, 5:13 pm
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       Hi b789,
       What would be the name of the court - is it my local court or
       the Northampton one?
       Thanks
       #Post#: 62417--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 13, 2025, 5:23 pm
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       If it was a default judgment from the CNBC then that is the
       court you make the application to. It would then be allocated to
       your local county court for a hearing.
       #Post#: 62419--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: jayudd
       Date: March 13, 2025, 5:27 pm
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       Thank you b789.
       Question regarding the n244 - am I putting my name in the
       claimant section? I ask, because you put NPMs details on the
       defendants text field and for question 2, ticked I am the
       defendant. Is that correct?
       #Post#: 62423--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Gladstones Solicitors (for National Parking Management LTD)
       have issued CCJ
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 13, 2025, 5:46 pm
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       No. Nothing has changed. You are the defendant and NPM are the
       claimant in the case.
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