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       #Post#: 79315--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: roythebus
       Date: July 2, 2025, 2:37 pm
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       Simply ignore any further correspondence from debt collectors
       and the like, as others may have said further up the page, the
       debt is not theirs to collect, there's not much else they can
       do. As long as you as the RK haven't disclosed who the driver
       was, they'v got no way of finding out.
       #Post#: 79347--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: July 3, 2025, 1:54 am
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       As above. You can safely ignore debt collectors. However, I do
       advise that you respond to Moorside's letter, report them to the
       SRA and make a complaint to the police about this attempt to
       defraud you.
       #Post#: 79351--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: Cariboudle
       Date: July 3, 2025, 2:43 am
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       Thanks both.
       Regarding the report to the police, I have tried the 101 number
       a while back under your advice but they gave me the runaround
       trying to refer me to Action Fraud.  I'll try again and ask for
       the economic crime department or make time to visit my local
       police station and speak to someone directly.
       I've responded to Moorside Legal as advised.
       With reference to the report to SRA, their website has a form
       you're meant to fill in and a different email address so I
       basically sent the above wording as the email cover with the
       form and correspondence as attachments to both addresses.
       Hopefully that covers all bases.
       Thanks again, particularly B789.  I'll let you know if I manage
       to get anywhere with the police and if there is any response
       from Moorside or SRA.
       EDIT:  auto response from SRA says they 'aim' to get back to
       people within 45 days.  So I won't hold my breath!
       #Post#: 79358--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: July 3, 2025, 3:21 am
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       You don't have to use their form to raise a complaint with the
       SRA. The email address I gave you "redalert" is for urgent
       cases. Please keep to the advice.
       As for the police, which is your local police force? Are you
       covered by the Metropolitan Police in London? Or are you
       elsewhere in the country?
       Here is some advice on how to deal with the fob-off you are
       getting from 101 and their attempt to redirect you to the
       useless Action Fraud:
       For London, you can contact the Metropolitan Police Economic
       Crime Command (also known as FALCON – Fraud and Linked Crime
       Online). While they don’t publish a direct public email, you can
       write to:
       [indent]Metropolitan Police Service – Economic Crime Command New
       Scotland Yard Victoria Embankment London SW1A 2JL[/indent]
       Or email the Metropolitan Police Commissioner’s Office directly
       at: commissioner@met.police.uk Explain that you are reporting a
       suspected offence under the Fraud Act 2006 and that 101 has
       failed to escalate the matter appropriately.
       Outside of London, Eech police force in England and Wales has a
       fraud or economic crime team, even if it's not publicly
       advertised. Here's how to reach them:
       [indent]• Visit your local police force’s website (e.g. West
       Midlands Police, Greater Manchester Police, etc.)
       • Search for “economic crime”, “fraud investigation”, or “report
       fraud”
       • If no direct contact is listed, use the general contact form
       and explicitly request escalation to the Economic Crime
       Unit[/indent]
       You can also call 101, but when you do, say:
       [indent]“I am reporting a suspected offence under the Fraud Act
       2006, involving false representation and attempted unlawful
       gain. This is not a scam or cybercrime. I require this to be
       escalated to your Economic Crime Unit, not Action
       Fraud.”[/indent]
       If they still try to redirect you, ask to speak to a supervisor
       or duty inspector.
       If 101 refuses to escalate, write directly to the Chief
       Constable of your local force. Here's a template:
       --- Quote ---
       > To: Chief Constable [Name] [Your Local Police Force]
       > [Force HQ Address]
       >
       > Subject: Urgent Request for Investigation – Fraud by False
       Representation (Moorside Legal Ltd/SABA Park Services Ltd)
       >
       > Dear Chief Constable,
       >
       > I am writing to report a suspected criminal offence under the
       Fraud Act 2006, involving:
       >
       > [indent]• Saba Park Services UK Ltd
       > • Moorside Legal Ltd
       > • ZZPS Ltd[/indent]
       >
       > These parties have issued a document styled as a Penalty
       Notice under Railway Byelaw 14, threatening criminal prosecution
       and a £1000 fine. However, they are now attempting to recover
       this sum via civil proceedings, falsely claiming it is a
       contractual debt.
       >
       > This is a false representation of legal authority and
       enforcement powers, made with intent to cause loss and gain for
       another. It appears to satisfy the elements of:
       >
       > [indent]• Section 2: Fraud by false representation
       > • Section 3: Failure to disclose material facts
       > • Section 4: Abuse of position
       > • Section 6: Possession of articles for use in fraud[/indent]
       >
       > I attempted to report this via 101 but was improperly
       redirected to Action Fraud, which is not appropriate for this
       type of structured, document-based fraud. I am therefore
       requesting that this matter be referred to your Economic Crime
       Unit for proper investigation.
       >
       > I am happy to provide all supporting documentation and a full
       written statement.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       >
       > [Your Full Name]
       >
       > [Your Address]
       > [Your Contact Information]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 82446--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: Cariboudle
       Date: July 24, 2025, 2:08 am
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       Finally got a reply from my MP:
       --- Quote ---
       > Dear Name,
       >
       > Thank you for your previous correspondence regarding private
       parking companies, please see attached a response from the
       Minister.
       >
       > In his response, he outlines that if you believe Saba
       Limited’s actions constitute a breach of the code of
       practice, you should contact their trade association, the
       British Parking Association (details are available on their
       website: httos://www.britisnparking.co.uk/)
       >
       > He also outlines how you may appeal this charge through
       Saba’s appeals process, and if this is unsuccessful, how
       you may further appeal via Parking on Private Land Appeals
       (POPLA) which is a second stage appeals service of the BPA.
       >
       > On 11 July the Government published a consultation document
       setting out its proposals for raising standards across the
       private parking industry ahead of preparing a code of practice
       and an accompanying compliance framework for private parking
       operators.
       >
       > The Government's proposals seek to better protect and support
       motorists whilst balancing the legitimate needs of private
       parking operators to manage car parks. In his response, the
       Minister states he| would very much welcome your contribution to
       this consultation. The consultation ends on 5 September.
       >
       > Please see here:
  HTML https://www.gov.uk/government/consultations/private-parking-code-of-practice/private-parking-code-of-practice
       >
       > I hope this reply is helpful and that you do take part in the
       consultation.
       >
       > Yours sincerely,
       >
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       The Minister's letter is here:
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/cxBuiex<br
       />(Just redacted my name throughout).
       Nothing yet from anyone else.
       #Post#: 82481--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: July 24, 2025, 6:33 am
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       Yet more masterclass in obfuscation and evasion. I suggest you
       respond to Rachel Hopkins with the following:
       --- Quote ---
       > Subject: Response to Minister’s Letter Regarding Saba’s
       Fraudulent “Penalty Notice”
       >
       > Dear Rachel,
       >
       > Thank you for forwarding the response from Alex Norris MP,
       Parliamentary Under-Secretary of State for Building Safety, Fire
       and Local Growth.
       >
       > Regrettably, the Minister’s reply exemplifies the
       institutional evasion that allows private parking companies like
       Saba Limited to continue issuing fraudulent documents without
       consequence. His letter fails to engage with the central issue I
       raised: that Saba has issued a document titled “Penalty Notice”
       despite having no prosecutorial authority under Railway Byelaws.
       This is not a civil dispute—it is a deliberate act of deception
       designed to mislead recipients into believing they are subject
       to criminal sanction.
       >
       > The suggestion to appeal via Saba’s internal process or POPLA
       is entirely misplaced. POPLA adjudicates civil Parking Charge
       Notices, not documents that falsely purport to be statutory
       penalties. Referring me to the British Parking Association—a
       trade body with no regulatory powers and a vested interest in
       shielding its members—is not a meaningful remedy. It is
       deflection.
       >
       > The use of “Penalty Notice” by a private company without
       lawful authority constitutes a false representation under
       Section 2 of the Fraud Act 2006. It is an instrument of
       coercion, not compliance. The government’s failure to
       acknowledge or address this abuse is deeply concerning.
       >
       > While I intend to contribute to the consultation referenced in
       the Minister’s letter, I must stress that consultations and
       codes of practice are no substitute for enforcement. Fraud is
       not a matter for trade associations—it is a matter for
       regulators, law enforcement, and Parliament.
       >
       > I therefore ask that you escalate this matter further and
       seek:
       >
       > [indent]• A direct response from the Minister addressing the
       allegation of fraud, not a generic overview of appeal routes.
       > • Clarification on whether the government considers the use of
       “Penalty Notice” by Saba to be lawful, and if not, what
       enforcement action will be taken.
       > • Referral of this issue to the relevant Select Committee or
       the Parliamentary Ombudsman if the Minister continues to
       deflect.[/indent]
       >
       > Thank you again for your support. I remain determined to see
       this abuse exposed and addressed.
       >
       > Yours sincerely,
       >
       > [Your Full Name]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 83560--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: Cariboudle
       Date: July 31, 2025, 7:35 am
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       And a response from DVLA Step 2.  In summary:  no change.
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/pBTl26L
       One wonders what's the point?
       Still nothing back from Saba or Moorside Legal.
       #Post#: 83570--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: b789
       Date: July 31, 2025, 8:13 am
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       You can respond to the DVLA fob-off with the following:
       --- Quote ---
       > Subject: Formal Challenge to DVLA Step 2 Response – Evidential
       Misconduct and Regulatory Failure
       >
       > Dear Mrs N Smith,
       >
       > Your Step 2 response dated 31 July 2025 is unacceptable and
       fails to address the clear evidence I submitted regarding the
       unlawful use of my personal data by SABA Park Services UK Ltd.
       The DVLA’s reply appears to deliberately avoid the issue, shift
       blame, and protect a system that benefits the unregulated
       private parking industry—a system from which the DVLA earns over
       £30 million a year by selling keeper data.
       >
       > I provided detailed evidence showing that SABA accessed my
       data under the claim of enforcing Railway Byelaws, but then used
       it to pursue a civil debt through Moorside Legal. They issued a
       misleading “Penalty Notice” and made threats implying criminal
       liability, despite having no intention of prosecuting the matter
       in court. This is a clear breach of the purpose limitation
       principle under Article 5(1)(b) of UK GDPR. It also violates the
       KADOE contract and consumer protection laws.
       >
       > Your response ignores this evidence entirely and instead
       repeats generic statements about DVLA policy. It wrongly claims
       that SABA becomes the sole Data Controller once they receive the
       data. This is incorrect. The DVLA retains responsibility for
       ensuring that data released under KADOE is used only for the
       lawful purpose for which it was disclosed. The ICO has made
       clear that the DVLA’s role is not passive.
       >
       > It is also unacceptable that your letter fails to mention my
       right to escalate the complaint to the Independent Complaints
       Assessor (ICA). This omission breaches your own complaints
       procedure and further undermines the credibility of your
       response.
       > Given the DVLA’s financial interest in maintaining this flawed
       system, it is clear that there is a conflict of interest in how
       these complaints are handled. The refusal to investigate misuse
       of data by companies like SABA suggests that the DVLA is
       prioritising revenue over lawful conduct.
       >
       > I now formally request that the DVLA:
       >
       > [indent]1. Acknowledge that SABA’s use of my data was unlawful
       and incompatible with the original purpose.
       > 2. Confirm whether this constitutes a breach of the KADOE
       contract and UK GDPR.
       > 3. Suspend or revoke SABA’s access to the KADOE system pending
       investigation.
       > 4. Provide full details for escalating this complaint to the
       Independent Complaints Assessor.[/indent]
       >
       > If the DVLA continues to deflect responsibility, I will
       escalate the matter to the Information Commissioner’s Office, my
       MP, and request referral to the Parliamentary Ombudsman.
       >
       > Please confirm receipt and provide a complaint reference for
       this formal challenge.
       >
       > Yours sincerely,
       >
       > [Your Full Name]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 83583--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: H C Andersen
       Date: July 31, 2025, 9:11 am
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       OP, in an earlier post I used the term 'if you have nothing
       better to do'. Surely you must have something better to do than
       continue to engage with these scammers.
       As I also posted: 'if they could take legal action they would
       have done it ages ago', and this was last year.
       Pl, pl stop. You received a Letter of Claim* to which you
       responded.
       Unless you receive anything from a court (which you won't) pl
       stop engaging. You are giving them confidence that in time
       they'll wear you down.
       The choice is yours.
       *- which they cannot for reasons explained ad nauseam: the civil
       procedure rules apply to CIVIL procedures which in your case are
       NOT engaged because, if it's anything, it's a breach of bylaws.
       #Post#: 83591--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saba Parking Services - Railway parking site - debt
       collector before initial notice?
   DIR By: Cariboudle
       Date: July 31, 2025, 9:40 am
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       Thanks HC Anderson - other than the response to the letter of
       claim I've not corresponded with Moorside legal.
       I have only followed B789's advice about complaining to various
       bodies like the DVLA or my MP etc, for which I am very grateful,
       but I'm happy to leave it at this if pursuing this line is
       considered to be further engaging with the scammers or if this
       sort of advice is keeping both of you from helping those who
       have more pressing cases.  Do let me know.
       Thanks!
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