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       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: December 31, 2024, 3:58 pm
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       Thank you so much b789.
       All done. When I hear back I’ll update here.
       #Post#: 68223--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: April 23, 2025, 5:17 am
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       Hi to all hope you’re all doing good.
       I have had a response from popla finally. Unfortunately it’s
       been unsuccessful.
       I can’t see the full thread of messages between me and popla. It
       only shows their outcome.
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       #Post#: 68266--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: b789
       Date: April 23, 2025, 7:03 am
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       If further evidence was needed of the utter incompetence of some
       POPLA assessors, you have it in that response.
       Whilst a POPLA decision is not binding on you and you must not
       pay this, it does warrant a formal complaint to POPLA about such
       blatant ineptitude, even though they will not reconsider the
       appeal. It provides a paper trail that they cannot ignore.
       Send the following to POPLA as a pdf attachment to an email to
       info@popla.co.uk and CC in yourself:
       --- Quote ---
       > To: Lead Adjudicator
       > POPLA Complaints
       >
       > To: info@popla.co.uk
       >
       > Subject: Formal Complaint – Appeal Decision [Insert POPLA
       Verification Code]
       >
       > Dear Lead Adjudicator,
       >
       > I am writing to raise a formal complaint regarding the
       decision issued in appeal verification code [INSERT CODE],
       assessed by Larenz Gumbs. The decision reflects a total failure
       to engage with the grounds of appeal or apply even basic
       principles of contract law, PoFA, or the Private Parking Single
       Code of Practice (PPSCoP). The following details each specific
       error, as demonstrated by a point-by-point review of the
       assessor's language compared against the content of the appeal
       and rebuttal.
       >
       > 1. Failure to engage with the core issue of non-receipt of the
       NtK
       >
       > [indent]"The appellant has stated that there was no notice to
       keeper received... they have stated that the operator was not
       compliant with POFA 2012."[/indent]
       >
       > The assessor merely summarised this without addressing the
       legal consequences of non-receipt under PoFA 2012 Schedule 4,
       Paragraphs 9(1) and 9(6). There was no recognition that proof of
       delivery is required to establish Keeper liability. Issuance is
       not the test; delivery is. This is a basic error in statutory
       interpretation.
       >
       > [indent]"The operator has provided the landowner agreement...
       The date of the parking charge incident was on 7th October 2024
       and the Parking Charge Notice was issued to the registered
       keeper on 11th October 2024 which is within the time limit
       allowed via PoFA."[/indent]
       >
       > This statement is misleading. Issuance alone is not
       sufficient. Under Paragraph 9(6), the NtK must be given (i.e.,
       delivered or deemed delivered). The assessor treated the issue
       date as if it alone satisfied compliance, which it does not.
       >
       > 2. Uncritical acceptance of the operator’s assertions
       >
       > [indent]"From the evidence provided, I am unable to conclude
       the parking charge notice is not compliant with POFA."[/indent]
       >
       > This shifts the burden of proof wrongly onto the appellant.
       The operator failed to prove delivery. The appeal explicitly put
       the operator to strict proof. They did not provide any such
       proof—no Certificate of Posting, no delivery record—nothing. The
       assessor’s logic assumes that the absence of evidence is
       acceptable. That is legally and procedurally incorrect.
       >
       > [indent]"This is sufficient to allow the motorist to know they
       will be liable to pay the Parking Charge."[/indent]
       >
       > Wrong. Belief that liability might exist is not the same as
       legally established liability under statute. Paragraph 9(2)(f)
       of PoFA only transfers liability if every statutory requirement
       is fulfilled. The assessor ignored this.
       >
       > 3. Misinterpretation of Paragraph 9(2)(f) of PoFA
       >
       > [indent]"Information is also given of what action to take if
       the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle."[/indent]
       >
       > This glosses over a central point raised in the rebuttal: the
       NtK stated liability begins "28 days after the second working
       day after the date of issue", which is not what PoFA requires.
       PoFA says liability arises "at the end of the period of 28 days
       beginning with the day AFTER that on which the notice is given."
       The operator's calculation is wrong and inconsistent with the
       law. The assessor completely ignored this fundamental defect.
       >
       > 4. Dismissal of the rebuttal evidence
       >
       > [indent]"The appellant has stated that they had a call with
       the operator which discusses the parking charge notice not being
       received and being lost within the post. I am unable to comment
       on this further as I was not privy to this
       conversation."[/indent]
       >
       > This is unacceptable. The operator's own staff reportedly
       stated the NtK was "probably lost in the post"—a clear admission
       that delivery did not occur. It was not denied or countered.
       Rather than treating it as evidence, the assessor dismissed it
       with a blanket disclaimer. This shows a complete failure to
       weigh probative value of uncontested admissions.
       >
       > 5. Superficial treatment of landowner authority
       >
       > [indent]"The operator has provided the landowner agreement to
       manage the car park. This shows that the operator has a
       legitimate interest in the parking incident."[/I][/indent]
       >
       > This is a superficial and legally insufficient assessment. The
       appeal rebuttal pointed out that:
       >
       > [indent]• The agreement was heavily redacted;
       > • It lacked site specificity;
       > • It omitted boundary plans;
       > • It contained no visible execution dates or
       signatures.[/indent]
       >
       > The assessor did not address these at all. They accepted a
       redacted, generic document without examining whether it met
       PPSCoP standards for valid landowner authority.
       >
       > 6. Misapplication of POPLA’s role
       >
       > [indent][i]"Our role at POPLA is to consider if the PCN has
       been issued correctly..."[/indent]
       >
       > That is an unacceptably narrow definition. POPLA’s role is to
       assess if the charge is enforceable, which includes checking
       compliance with PoFA, the Code of Practice, and fairness under
       contract principles. Issuing a PCN does not equate to
       establishing liability. This statement reveals either a
       misunderstanding of POPLA’s remit or an intentional
       mischaracterisation to sidestep the need to assess
       enforceability.
       >
       > Summary
       >
       > This decision reflects a complete failure in competence,
       judgment, and legal understanding. Larenz Gumbs either lacks the
       training to assess PoFA-based cases or did not read the appeal
       properly. I am aware that POPLA does not rescind adjudications,
       but this matter must be escalated to senior level.
       >
       > I expect:
       >
       > [indent]• A formal review of this decision;
       > • Clarification of POPLA’s official position on Paragraph
       9(2)(f) of PoFA;
       > • Confirmation of retraining or disciplinary action for the
       assessor involved;
       > • Written assurance that cases involving disputed PoFA
       compliance will be assessed by trained staff with working
       knowledge of the legislation and Code of Practice.[/indent]
       >
       > If this is not addressed meaningfully, I will escalate the
       matter to Ombudsman Services, as POPLA’s administrator, and to
       the Chartered Trading Standards Institute (CTSI), which is the
       designated competent authority responsible for regulating ADR
       bodies under the ADR Regulations 2015. This is not just about
       one bad decision—it is about systemic failure within POPLA to
       ensure its assessors are competent, impartial, and capable of
       applying statutory consumer law, particularly the Protection of
       Freedoms Act 2012 and the Private Parking Single Code of
       Practice. I will also be raising these concerns with the DVLA,
       given the potential misuse of Keeper data based on decisions
       that fail to assess the legal validity of liability transfer.
       >
       > Yours sincerely,
       >
       > [Your Full Name]
       > [Contact details]
       --- End Quote ---
       Apart from that, you now wait for the inevitable debt recovery
       letters which you can safely ignore. Never, ever communicate
       with a debt collector. They re powerless except to try and make
       the low-hanging fruit on the gullible tree pay up out of
       ignorance and fear. They are powerless. Ignore them.
       Come back when you get a response to your POPLA complaint and
       when you receive a Letter of Claim (loC). You won't be paying a
       penny to Horizon.
       #Post#: 68316--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: April 23, 2025, 10:33 am
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       Hi b789
       Thanks for your time again and reply.
       I went shopping to that Tesco store today and seen a lady friend
       who works there. I discussed this rejection of appeal from popla
       she said to leave it with her and she will get it written off.
       She obtained original letter with horizon reference and car reg
       details. I’m posting this reply from the car park.
       Worth waiting or would you advice to proceed with above actions?
       I searched up that adjudicator larenz gumbs he is a dispute
       resolution executive and works within ombudsmen services. I
       honestly can’t believe his ignorant method of resolution. What a
       world we live in. The world is beautiful indeed unfortunately
       it’s the people that make it.
       
       #Post#: 68317--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: b789
       Date: April 23, 2025, 10:37 am
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       Please send that formal complaint to POPLA. they need to be
       alerted to some of there atrocious decisions some of these
       assessors make, and this one is a classic example.
       Hopefully your friend can get the PCN cancelled anyway. However,
       unless you have it in writing from an official source, don't
       hold your breath until it is actually cancelled.
       #Post#: 68332--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: April 23, 2025, 11:58 am
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       Just sent that email now so I’ll update here when I hear back.
       #Post#: 71295--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: May 13, 2025, 9:37 am
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       Hi I have had a written email response today.
       Copy pasted below:
       Thank you for your email received 23 April 2025, outlining the
       reasons why you are unhappy with the decision that has been
       reached by the assessor in your appeal. This was passed to me by
       the POPLA team as I am responsible for investigating complaints.
       
       POPLA is a one-stage process, and we would not change a decision
       because either party disputes the assessor’s decision. However,
       we may consider an appeal if there has been a procedural error,
       for example – if we failed to allow a motorist to comment on a
       parking operator’s evidence pack. My role as a complaints
       handler is to determine whether a procedural error has occurred
       during the assessment of your appeal.
       
       It is worth pointing out that before submitting an appeal, our
       website informs appellants that POPLA is a one-stage appeal
       service and we cannot reconsider your appeal if you disagree
       with our decision.
       
       The crux of your complaint is that the assessor failed to
       address the legal consequences of non-receipt of the Notice to
       Keeper under the Protection of Freedoms Act (POFA) 2012 and
       there was no recognition that proof of delivery is required to
       establish keeper liability as issuance is not the test, delivery
       is, therefore the assessor has made a basic error in statutory
       interpretation.
       
       You advise the assessor has misinterpreted Paragraph  9 (f) of
       POFA as they stated information is given of what action to take
       if the keeper was not the driver, however the Notice to Keeper
       stated liability begins 28 days after the second working day
       after the date of issue which is not what POFA requires.
       
       POFA states liability arises at the end of the period of 28 days
       beginning the day after that on which the notice is given and
       therefore, the operator calculation is wrong and inconsistent
       with the law which the assessor ignored.
       
       I have now reviewed the appeal and I can confirm Paragraph
       9(2)(f) states that the notice to keeper must: “(f)warn the
       keeper that if, after the period of 28 days beginning with the
       day after that on which the notice is given”…“the creditor does
       not know both the name of the driver and a current address for
       service for the driver, the creditor will (if all the applicable
       conditions under this Schedule are met) have the right to
       recover from the keeper so much of that amount as remains
       unpaid.”
       
       Paragraph 9(6) then defines the given date as: “the second
       working day after the day on which it is posted”.
       
       In this instance, as the notice was issued on Monday 11 October
       2024, the given date is Wednesday 16 October. As POFA states
       that motorists must be given 28 days from the day after the
       notice is given, the 28 days should have begun from 17 October.
       
       The Notice to Keeper states “You are advised that if, after a
       period of 28 days from the second working day after the date of
       this Parking Charge…”, therefore it does not meet the
       requirements of POFA.
       
       It should be noted within POFA Paragraph 9 (6) it states a
       notice sent by post is to be presumed, unless the contrary is
       proved, to have been delivered:
       
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       You explain the assessor accepted Horizon Parking’s assertions
       without criticism which wrongly shifts the burden of proof onto
       the appellant as the operator failed to provide proof of
       delivery such as certificate of posting and or delivery record.
       
       You state the assessor dismissed evidence by stating they were
       unable to comment on a call they were not privy to which is
       unacceptable as the operators own staff reportedly stated the
       Notice to Keeper was probably lost in the post which is a clear
       admission that delivery did not occur and was not denied or
       countered which the assessor dismissed rather than treating this
       as evidence.
       
       You explain the assessor stated they were satisfied the operator
       provided a land owner agreement and on reviewing this, they were
       satisfied the operator has a legitimate interest in the parking
       event which you state Is superficial and legally, an
       insufficient assessment.
       
       You advise the document was heavily redacted did not
       specifically confirm the site omitted boundary plans and did not
       have a visible execution dates or signatures which the assessor
       failed to address and they accepted a redacted generic document
       without examining whether it met PPSCoP standards for valid
       landowner authority.
       
       You state the assessor provided a narrow definition of POPLAs
       role by stating our role is to consider if the parking charge
       notice has been issued correctly.
       
       You explain that POPLAs role is to assess if the charge is
       enforceable which includes checking compliance with POFA, the
       code of practice and fairness under contract principles. You
       advise issuing a parking charge notice does not equate to
       establishing liability and the assessor statement reveals either
       a misunderstanding of POPLAs remit or an intentional
       mischaracterisation to side step the need to assess
       enforceability.
       
       To clarify, POPLAs remit extends only to determining if the
       parking charge notice has been issued correctly based on the
       evidence presented at the time of the appeal. We accept evidence
       from both parties in good faith unless the opposite is proven.
       
       The burden of proof begins with the operator to show it issued
       the parking charge notice correctly. If they do that by
       providing evidence that support its version of events, the
       burden of proof then passes to the appellant.
       I acknowledge in the appeal it was stated the operator advised
       on a call the Notice to Keeper was possibly lost in the post,
       however, as no evidence of this call was provided with the
       appeal to POLPLA, the assessor was unable to comment further.
       There is no requirement in both POFA or the Single Code of
       Practice that an operator must send the Notice to Keeper by
       recorded delivery or provide proof of postage or delivery of the
       notice.
       Section 14.1 of the Single Code of Practice states that a
       parking operator must obtain written confirmation from the
       landowner confirming it has the relevant authority to pursue
       charges on a car park.
       
       This authority must confirm the site and provide a boundary map.
       
       Within its case file, Horizon Parking provided a copy of the
       contract it has with landowner. Contracts with the landowner may
       contain commercially sensitive information, therefore, we will
       accept redacted landowner documents as long as the assessor is
       satisfied it meets the requirements of Section 14.1 of the
       Single Code of Practice.
       
       I note the operator also provided a site map within it case file
       showing the location of the signage and the site boundary.
       
       In this instance, as no evidence was provided to cast doubt on
       this contract, the assessor was satisfied Horizon Parking has
       the appropriate authority to issue charges on this land.
       
       You state you expect a formal review of the decision,
       clarification of POPLAs official position on POFA, confirmation
       of retraining or disciplinary action for the assessor and
       written assurance that cases involving disputed POFA compliance
       will be assessed by trained staff with working knowledge of the
       legislation and code of practice.
       
       When considering POFA, POPLA assessors will consider whether the
       notice to keeper has been issued correctly and meets the strict
       requirements set out in Paragraph 9 (f).
       
       Assessors will make decisions based on:
       
       Relevant law
       The Single Code of Practice
       Evidence provided by both parties
       
       Assessors have been trained on these areas and our
       decision-making guidelines. They have also passed an
       accreditation process following our training programme and
       receive regular internal quality audits as well as coaching and
       personal development.
       
       In this instance, while I am disappointed to note the assessor
       has misinterpreted POFA and fully accept that the assessor is
       wrong to state that the notice is complaint with POFA and I
       would like to apologise for this error, on reviewing the case,
       it is clear the assessor has misinterpreted POFA rather than
       missed evidence provided.
       In order to improve the quality of future appeal decisions, I
       will, of course provide the relevant feedback to the assessor.
       However, as all of the evidence provided has been considered, no
       procedural error has occurred and therefore, the outcome will
       not change.
       
       You advise if your complaint is not addressed, you will escalate
       the matter to Ombudsman Services as POPLAs administrator and to
       the Charted Trading Standards Institute.
       
       Complaints about POLA are reviewed and responded to by the
       complaints team. TAG Services (Formerly Ombudsman Services) have
       no involvement in our complaints handling procedure.
       
       It is worth explaining that POPLA was previously audited
       externally by Independent Scrutiny board for Parking on Private
       Land Appeals (ISPA) at one stage. Unfortunately, funding stopped
       for ISPA and they ceased to continue which means that POPLA does
       not currently have an independent body reviewing our appeals or
       dealing with complaints about our service. As such there is no
       platform for you currently to complain about POPLA externally.
       If you wish to take the matter further, you will need to seek
       independent legal advice.
       
       I am sorry that your experience of using our service has not
       been positive. However, POPLA’s involvement in your appeal has
       now ended and this response concludes our complaints process. It
       will not be appropriate for us to correspond further on this
       matter and all further correspondence will be noted on your
       case, but not responded to.
       
       You are of course, free to pursue this matter further, through
       other means, such as the Courts. For independent legal advice,
       please contact Citizens Advice at: www.citizensadvice.org.uk or
       call 0345 404 05 06
       
       Yours sincerely,
       
       Paul Garrity​​​​
       POPLA Complaints
       complaints@popla.co.uk
       flexibleresolutionservices.co.uk
       #Post#: 71322--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: May 13, 2025, 10:20 am
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       I checked up with horizon it was cancelled by Tesco.
       #Post#: 71326--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: b789
       Date: May 13, 2025, 10:32 am
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       That response from POPLA is notable for two things:
       [indent]1. Admission of error – POPLA expressly admits that the
       assessor misinterpreted PoFA and that the NtK did not comply
       with paragraph 9(2)(f). This is a rare but significant
       concession.
       2. Denial of recourse or escalation – Despite this admission,
       they claim there is no mechanism to escalate complaints
       externally, contradicting their status as a regulated ADR
       provider under the ADR Regulations 2015.[/indent]
       You should submit a formal regulatory complaint to the Chartered
       Trading Standards Institute (CTSI), which regulates ADR
       providers such as POPLA under UK law. CTSI is empowered to
       investigate ADR non-compliance, particularly in cases of:
       [indent]• Failure to apply the law correctly
       • Procedural unfairness
       • Lack of independence or transparency
       • Inadequate complaints resolution mechanisms[/indent]
       You can email the following to adr@tsi.org.uk and CC in
       yourself:
       --- Quote ---
       > Subject: Regulatory Complaint – Non-compliance by POPLA
       (Parking on Private Land Appeals)
       >
       > Dear CTSI ADR Team,
       >
       > I am submitting a formal complaint regarding the conduct and
       operation of POPLA (Parking on Private Land Appeals), which is
       operated by TAG Services (formerly Ombudsman Services) and
       approved as an ADR entity under the Alternative Dispute
       Resolution for Consumer Disputes (Competent Authorities and
       Information) Regulations 2015.
       >
       > POPLA recently handled my appeal under verification code
       [INSERT CODE]. I later submitted a formal complaint regarding
       serious legal and procedural errors in the decision. The POPLA
       complaints handler has since admitted that the decision was
       based on a misinterpretation of the Protection of Freedoms Act
       2012 (PoFA) and that the Notice to Keeper in question did not
       comply with paragraph 9(2)(f).
       >
       > Despite this, POPLA have stated they refuse to reconsider the
       outcome, asserting that it is a “one-stage process.” They
       further state that no external complaints process exists, and
       that TAG Services (the ADR entity administrator) “have no
       involvement in our complaints handling procedure.”
       >
       > This raises several regulatory concerns:
       >
       > [indent]• POPLA admits its decision was incorrect in law, yet
       refuses to reconsider the outcome or offer any remedy.
       > • The internal complaints system lacks independence or
       escalation, directly contradicting the spirit of the ADR
       Regulations.
       > • POPLA claims that neither TAG Services nor any external body
       can investigate complaints, suggesting a complete lack of
       accountability.
       > • POPLA assessors appear untrained or improperly supervised,
       as the admitted legal error concerns one of PoFA's most basic
       requirements.
       > • POPLA’s refusal to reassess a clearly flawed decision
       undermines consumer protection and confidence in the ADR
       system.[/indent]
       >
       > Under the ADR Regulations 2015, ADR entities must:
       >
       > [indent]• Ensure decisions are reached by impartial and
       legally competent assessors;
       > • Have a transparent and accessible complaints process;
       > • Offer effective redress in the event of a serious procedural
       or legal error;
       > • Allow complaints about the ADR service to be handled
       independently.[/indent]
       >
       > I request CTSI urgently investigate POPLA’s non-compliance
       with its statutory duties as an approved ADR provider and advise
       whether it remains suitable to continue handling parking appeals
       without an effective external accountability mechanism.
       >
       > I am happy to supply copies of the original appeal, the
       rebuttal, and POPLA’s full complaint response, including their
       admission of legal error.
       >
       > Yours sincerely,
       >
       > [Your Full Name]
       > [Address]
       > [Email Address]
       > [Phone – optional]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 71413--------------------------------------------------
       Re: HORIZON PARKING OVERSTAY @ Tesco PCN
   DIR By: Mocede28
       Date: May 14, 2025, 4:25 am
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       Just sent off that email now. Update you when I hear back.
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