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       #Post#: 48388--------------------------------------------------
        PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: badrav
       Date: December 5, 2024, 12:38 am
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       I was looking for some advice regarding the following situation
       if you could help please.
       The driver of the car on 27/09/2024 it seems entered the car
       park to turn the car around and promptly left.
       The letter which has been received, seems an escalation and has
       been recieved a fair while from the date shown and talks about
       parking breach which nobody was aware of.
       I have the V5, as a registered keeper
       Any help regarding contesting this would be greatly appreciated.
       Should the company be contacted regarding missed/delayed
       communication what would be the best way to reply?
       If any more information is required please let me know.
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/2de4bZ0
       I will attach other pictures asap
       #Post#: 48433--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 5, 2024, 7:05 am
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       Are you saying the you do not have or did not receive the
       original postal Notice to Keeper (NtK)?
       If you have it, we need to see that (both sides) leaving all
       dates and times visible. Any reminder is of little use in trying
       to formulate a response.
       #Post#: 48481--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: Dave65
       Date: December 5, 2024, 10:40 am
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       So, how long was the vehicle in this car park?
       Can you get photos of the signage?
       #Post#: 48552--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: badrav
       Date: December 6, 2024, 12:27 am
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       [member=26]b789[/member] Thanks, yes unfortunately not sure why
       but only recieved this reminder. Could be lost in the post or
       otherwise. Should I call them and ask them to resend/email?
       [member=1555]Dave65[/member] Thanks, wouldve been in for less
       the 5,; Attached the signage
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/eY4UJIx
       #Post#: 48563--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: Dave65
       Date: December 6, 2024, 4:00 am
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       So, this could be a case of "Unforbidden Signage" and offer no
       contract to park.
       #Post#: 48564--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: December 6, 2024, 4:05 am
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       "Forbidding signage" - i.e. signage that does not offer any
       consideration. The sign you have shown us (other than the
       instructions for registration) looks like the entrance sign,
       saying on it "See car park signs for terms and conditions" - can
       you show us one of those terms and conditions signs please?
       #Post#: 48733--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: badrav
       Date: December 7, 2024, 5:20 am
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       Thanks [member=1555]Dave65[/member] not sure what unforbidden
       signange is
       Thanks [member=103]DWMB2[/member] ive been to the site again and
       this is all the signage displayed atm
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/EVAfGgf
       Just got this 🤦‍♂️
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/AfaW4yC
       #Post#: 48742--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 7, 2024, 5:59 am
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       We don't need to know about any dent recovery letters and you
       can safely ignore them. Use them as kindling. They are useless
       and powerless to do anything. Ignore them. Never, ever, ever,
       communicate with a useless debt collector.
       The sign you've shown primarily offers terms for authorised
       parking and does not create a clear 'contractual offer' to the
       driver unless they meet specific conditions. The sign states
       that only "parishioners and authorised visitors" who register
       their vehicle on a touchscreen inside the premises are eligible
       to park.
       This implies that no offer is being made to the general public
       for parking. Instead, it restricts the premises to authorised
       users only. The sign explicitly states, "General public parking
       is not permitted" which further supports that it is not an
       invitation to enter into a parking contract for anyone other
       than authorised users.
       The phrase "If you breach any of these terms, you will be liable
       to a parking charge of up to £100" implies that any unauthorised
       parking constitutes a breach, not acceptance of a contract. This
       approach leans more towards a prohibitive notice rather than an
       offer capable of forming a contractual relationship.
       The sign does not clearly state any terms that would apply to
       someone who merely enters the premises but does not park (e.g.,
       someone turning around). A contract requires that terms are
       clearly communicated and capable of being accepted by conduct.
       Here, the "driver turning around" scenario does not align with
       the parking terms specified.
       For a contract to be valid, it must offer terms that are capable
       of acceptance. The sign's focus on "Authorised Parking Only"
       does not provide an offer to unauthorised users but rather seeks
       to exclude them.
       This sign does not appear to offer a contractual relationship to
       unauthorised drivers (e.g., those who enter and immediately
       leave, or turn around). Instead, it serves as a prohibitive
       notice designed to restrict access to authorised users only. As
       such, no contract could reasonably have been formed between the
       driver and Civil Enforcement Ltd in this case.
       As you have the PCN number, you could go onto the CEL website as
       though to appeal and see what, if any, evidential photos they
       have. Make sure you download any images. You need to find out
       how much time the vehicle was actually on the premises because
       there are other appeal points that can be made, such as
       "consideration" and "grace" periods.
       You say the driver simply entered, turned around and left. If
       they simply entered and turned around and then immediately left,
       CEL will be put to strict proof that that was not the case.
       Send the following as a formal complaint to CEL (check their
       complaints procedure on their website):
       --- Quote ---
       > Subject: Request for Clarification and Re-Issuance of Notice
       to Keeper (NtK)
       >
       > [Keeper's Name]
       > [Keeper's Address]
       > [Date]
       >
       > To:
       > Civil Enforcement Ltd
       > [Address - check CEL's correspondence or website for their
       contact details]
       >
       > Re: Parking Charge Notice Reminder for PCN [pcn number]
       >
       > Dear Civil Enforcement Ltd,
       >
       > I am writing regarding a reminder letter I received for an
       alleged parking contravention at [Location Name] on 27/09/2024.
       I have not received the original Notice to Keeper (NtK) that
       should have been sent to me, and therefore I am unable to
       determine the nature of the alleged contravention.
       >
       > As the Keeper of the vehicle, I am entitled to receive all the
       information necessary to understand the alleged breach. The
       reminder letter fails to provide the details required to
       establish:
       >
       > [indent]1. The exact alleged contravention.
       > 2. Evidence supporting your claim, including any images or
       proof of the vehicle's actions at the site.[/indent]
       >
       > From the limited information provided, I understand that the
       driver of the vehicle on the date in question did not park but
       merely entered the location to turn around and promptly exited.
       The signage at the site, which I have reviewed, states:
       >
       > [indent]"Authorised Parking Only. Parishioners and authorised
       visitors must obtain a parking permit by registering their full
       correct vehicle registration on the touch screen located inside
       the premises."[/indent]
       >
       > This wording implies that any alleged contravention applies to
       vehicles that remain on-site without authorisation or proper
       registration. The vehicle in question did not park or wait at
       the location and therefore could not have breached these terms.
       >
       > In line with the BPA Code of Practice (version 9, applicable
       at the time of the alleged incident), specifically Sections
       21.4, 21.5, and 23.1, I require you to:
       >
       > [indent]• Provide a copy of the original NtK, which must
       include all necessary details of the alleged contravention,
       including time-stamped evidence of the vehicle's presence and
       proof of any alleged terms breached.
       > • Clarify the alleged contravention with full supporting
       evidence.[/indent]
       >
       > Furthermore, I remind you that should you fail to provide
       adequate evidence to support your claim, this matter will be
       considered unresolved, and any further action by you or your
       agents may be deemed unreasonable and vexatious.
       >
       > If I do not receive a satisfactory response within 14 days, I
       will escalate this matter to the BPA and other relevant bodies
       for further investigation.
       >
       > Please treat this correspondence as a formal complaint.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       >
       >
       > [Keeper's Full Name]
       > [Keeper's Contact Information]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 48744--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: badrav
       Date: December 7, 2024, 6:09 am
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       [member=26]b789[/member] Thanks so much, will do!
       #Post#: 50298--------------------------------------------------
       Re:  PCN from 'Civil Enforcement Ltd'
   DIR By: badrav
       Date: December 17, 2024, 7:03 pm
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       [member=26]b789[/member]
       @Dave765
       Unfortunately rejected, it also seems the duration is somehow
       wrong they have it as almost 50 minutes which im pretty sure is
       wrong
       If you could please let me know your thoughts
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