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       #Post#: 48085--------------------------------------------------
       County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: s2324
       Date: December 3, 2024, 12:17 pm
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       Hi guys.
       I received a county court letter on Saturday for a Parking Eye
       PCN from Preston Hospital, Public G. It says it is from 24th
       March 2024. I never received any PCN from them or any other
       letter. I'm pretty sure the ticket machine wasn't working that
       day, I can't remember correctly as it's been a long time, but I
       remember there was a few other cars in the car park, and none of
       them had bought and displayed a ticket. I didn't really pay
       attention to any of the signs, and its pretty far from me so I
       cant go back and look. I tried checking on google maps, but its
       old and the signs are blurred out.
       I've done the AoS on the MCOL just now, but have no idea how I'm
       meant to put together the defence.
       I've attached the PoC I received. Please could someone help me,
       thank you.
       [attachment deleted by admin]
       #Post#: 48092--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 3, 2024, 12:34 pm
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       That is a DCB Legal issued claim on behalf of Parking Eye. If PE
       thought they had a chance in court, they'd have issued the claim
       themselves, not through DCB Legal.
       What is the issue date of the claim? Having submitted the
       Acknowledgement of Service within 14 days of service (5 days
       plus any non-working days from the date of issue), you then have
       5 days plus 28 days plus any non-working days to submit your
       defence.
       As it is a DCB Legal issued claim, as long as it is defended, I
       can say with greater than 99% certainty that they will
       eventually discontinue, some time early next year. Nobody who is
       here receiving advice and following it, will ever pay a penny to
       the operator for a claim under £600.
       For the defence simply send the following plus the draft order
       and two transcripts. You only need to edit your name, the claim
       number and sign it by typing your full name for the signature.
       There is nothing to edit in the draft order. When ready, attach
       both documents as PDF files to an email addressed to
       claimresponses.cnbc@justice.gov.uk and CC in yourself. Make sure
       that the email subject contains the claim number. In the body of
       the email put "Please find attached the defence and draft order
       in the matter of ParkingEye Ltd v [your full name] Claim No.:
       [claim number]".
       --- Quote ---
       > [center]IN THE COUNTY COURT[/center]
       > [right]Claim No: [Claim Number][/right]
       >
       > [center]BETWEEN:
       >
       > [Claimant's Full Name]

       > Claimant
       >
       > - and -
       >
       > [Defendant's Full Name]
       > 
Defendant
       >
       >
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       >
       > DEFENCE[/center]
       >
       >
       > 1. The Defendant denies any liability for this claim.
       >
       > 2. There is a lack of precise detail in the Particulars of
       Claim (PoC) in respect of the factual and legal allegations made
       against the Defendant such that the PoC do not comply with CPR
       16.4(1)(a).
       >
       > 3. The Defendant is unable to plead properly to the PoC
       because:
       >
       > [indent](a) The Particulars of Claim fail to comply with CPR
       16.4(1)(a), lacking specific terms allegedly breached, the
       signage locations, or details of the breach. This prevents the
       Defendant from properly pleading a defence, and the claim should
       be struck out under CPR 3.4. The Defendant cites CEL v Chan 2023
       [E7GM9W44] and CPMS v Akande 2024 [K0DP5J30], where similarly
       vague claims were struck out. Should the court not strike out
       the claim, the Defendant refers to the draft order in paragraph
       4.
       >
       > (b) The contract referred to is not detailed or attached to
       the PoC in accordance with CPR PD 16(7.5);
       >
       > (c) The PoC do not state the exact wording of the clause (or
       clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or
       contracts) which is/are relied on;
       >
       > (d) The PoC do not set out the reason (or reasons) why the
       claimant asserts the defendant has breached the contract (or
       contracts);
       >
       > (e) The PoC do not state with sufficient particularity exactly
       where the breach occurred, the exact time when the breach
       occurred and how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked
       before the parking charge was allegedly incurred;
       >
       > (f) The PoC do not state exactly how the claim for statutory
       interest is calculated;
       >
       > (g) The PoC do not state what proportion of the claim is the
       parking charge and what proportion is damages;
       >
       > (h) The PoC states that the Claimant is suing the defendant as
       the driver or the keeper. The claimant obviously knows whether
       the defendant is being sued as the driver or the keeper and
       should not be permitted to plead alternative causes of
       action.[/indent]
       >
       > 4. The Defendant has attached to this defence a copy of an
       order made at another court which the allocating judge ought to
       make at this stage so that the Defendant can then know and
       understand the case which he/she/it faces and can then respond
       properly to the claim.
       >
       > Statement of truth
       >
       > I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true. I
       understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought
       against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false
       statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without
       an honest belief in its truth.
       >
       > Signed:
       >
       >
       > Date:
       --- End Quote ---
       Draft order for the defence
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/z8zcqfdncdoajgj4ag6a4/short-defence-order.pdf?rlkey=at98xmfwj0ehi3w9d0ia15ogp&st=rg3m5xjv&dl=0
       Transcript of CEL v Chan
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/nb9ypbecuurpmln00dily/CELvChan-appeal-transcript.pdf?rlkey=7mpuvpmpe45s2zbhch21om1ez&st=cb03gae6&dl=0
       Transcript of CPMS v Akande
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/y631olc61z1slr6xfrdsk/CPM-v-AKANDE.pdf?rlkey=kltpojedcxiwarxr0sdfyjo05&st=k0sb5u43&dl=0
       #Post#: 48094--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: s2324
       Date: December 3, 2024, 12:41 pm
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       The issue date of the claim is 28th November 2024.
       So for the defence, do I not do it on the MCOL portal and just
       send those PDFs as an email?
       Thank you for your help
       #Post#: 48097--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 3, 2024, 12:50 pm
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       Apart from submitting your AoS, you do not use the MCOL portal
       for anything else except to check your history. The defence and
       anything else is submitted as a PDF attachment to an email.
       Eventually, the case will be transferred to your local county
       court and that will be the end of your need to refer to MCOL.
       #Post#: 48805--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: s2324
       Date: December 7, 2024, 4:13 pm
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       I have just sent that email off, once again thank you for your
       help.
       Is there any specific proof I should keep of my email? and is
       there anything further for me to do on the MCOL portal?
       Thank you
       #Post#: 48810--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 7, 2024, 5:19 pm
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       Your email in he sent folder is your proof of posting. The
       headers in that email and copy you CCd to yourself are evidence
       of having sent it and it being received by the recipient.
       #Post#: 48843--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: s2324
       Date: December 8, 2024, 5:07 am
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       Ok thank you.
       What are the next steps I should be expecting now?
       #Post#: 48870--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: b789
       Date: December 8, 2024, 7:47 am
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       You'll receive a response from DCB Legal statin that after
       reviewing your defence their client intends to proceed. You'll
       also receive a copy of their N180 Directions Questionnaire (DQ)
       which you can just file.
       Eventually, you will receive your own DQ from the CNBC. Having
       received your own N180 (make sure it is not simply a copy of the
       claimants N180), do not use the paper form. Ignore all the other
       forms that came with it. you can discard those. Download your
       own here and fill it in on your computer. You sign it by simply
       typing your full name in the signature box.
  HTML https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/form-n180-directions-questionnaire-small-claims-track
       Here are the answers to some of the less obvious questions:
       The name of the court is "Civil National Business Centre".
       To be completed by "Your full name" and you are the "Defendant".
       C1: "YES"
       D1: "NO". Reason: "I wish to question the Claimant about their
       evidence at a hearing in person and to expose omissions and any
       misleading or incorrect evidence or assertions.
       Given the Claimant is a firm who complete cut & paste parking
       case paperwork for a living, having this case heard solely on
       papers would appear to put the Claimant at an unfair advantage,
       especially as they would no doubt prefer the Defendant not to
       have the opportunity to expose the issues in the Claimants
       template submissions or speak as the only true witness to events
       in question."
       F1: Whichever is your nearest county court. Use this to find it:
  HTML https://www.find-court-tribunal.service.gov.uk/search-option
       F3: "1".
       When you have completed the form, attach it to a single email
       addressed to both dq.cnbc@justice.gov.uk and info@dcblegal.co.uk
       and CC in yourself. Make sure that the claim number is in the
       subject field of the email.
       Eventually, the claim will be assigned to your local county
       court. In due course, DCB Legal will discontinue. Don't try to
       overthink it. They just do.
       #Post#: 49087--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: s2324
       Date: December 9, 2024, 1:04 pm
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       Thank you for that.
       So we definitely don't do anything further on MCOL? Out of
       curiosity I clicked the start defence button and it gives you an
       option to submit defence there too. How come we send it over
       email and not the portal? I just don't want to do anything
       wrong.
       Thank you
       #Post#: 49089--------------------------------------------------
       Re: County Court Letter for Parking Eye PCN 
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: December 9, 2024, 1:06 pm
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       The portal limits you to 120 lines (roughly, can't remember the
       exact number), and removes any formatting you might input.
       It's no good for anything longer than a few lines.
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