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       #Post#: 39971--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: benb76
       Date: October 9, 2024, 6:45 am
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       Thank you both for your responses. I am not going to appeal to
       IAS. I will wait to see if they issue a letter of claim.
       Many thanks again for your advice.
       #Post#: 39973--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: October 9, 2024, 6:51 am
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       VCS are a litigous bunch so a claim is fairly likely I'd say.
       Another point, if you move house before the 6 years for them to
       make a claim have expired, be sure to write to VCS and inform
       them of your new address for service.
       #Post#: 39981--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 9, 2024, 7:22 am
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       They will eventually issue a claim. Whether it actually gets as
       far as a hearing is very doubtful and even if it did, there is
       no Keeper liability and it would be thrown out on that alone.
       #Post#: 40024--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: benb76
       Date: October 9, 2024, 11:00 am
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       Thank you, very useful advice.
       #Post#: 60086--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: benb76
       Date: March 1, 2025, 7:07 am
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       Good afternoon, I have today received a letter of claim from dcb
       legal.
  HTML https://imgur.com/a/FprcvYt
       I would very much appreciate your advice on next steps please.
       Thank you in advance and for your advice to date.
       #Post#: 60095--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: b789
       Date: March 1, 2025, 9:15 am
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       Respond with the following letter. Save it as a PDF and attach
       it in an email to info@dcblegal.co.uk and CC in yourself.
       --- Quote ---
       > [Your Name]
       > [Your Address]
       >
       > DCB Legal Ltd
       > Direct House
       > Greenwood Drive
       > Manor Park
       > Runcorn
       > WA7 1UG
       >
       > [Date]
       >
       > By email: info@dcblegal.co.uk
       >
       > Subject: Response to Letter of Claim – Disputed Debt
       >
       > Dear Sir/Madam,
       >
       > I acknowledge receipt of your Letter of Claim dated 27
       February 2025 regarding an alleged debt of £510.00 on behalf of
       your client, Vehicle Control Services Limited (VCS). I dispute
       this claim in its entirety, both on substantive and procedural
       grounds. Accordingly, I require full and detailed clarification
       before any further action is taken. Failure to provide the
       required information will be considered a breach of the
       Pre-Action Protocol for Debt Claims (PAP) and may be cited in
       any subsequent proceedings.
       >
       > 1. Pre-Action Protocol Non-Compliance
       >
       > Your Letter of Claim fails to comply with the requirements of
       the Pre-Action Protocol for Debt Claims (PAP) in the following
       ways:
       >
       > [indent]No Clear Breakdown of the Debt (£510.00)
       >
       > The LoC fails to itemise the charges beyond stating a lump sum
       amount.
       >
       > I require a full breakdown showing:
       >
       > [indent]- The original Parking Charge(s) amount.
       > - Any alleged additional fees, including "debt recovery costs"
       or "legal fees."
       > - Justification for any additional costs beyond the original
       PCN amount.
       > - Explanation of how such fees comply with the Supreme Court
       ruling in ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67.[/indent][/indent]
       >
       > [indent]Failure to Provide Key Evidence
       >
       > Your letter does not include any documentary evidence to
       substantiate the claim, such as:
       >
       > [indent]- A copy of the original Parking Charge Notice(s)
       (PCNs).
       > - Photographic or ANPR evidence showing the alleged
       contravention, including timestamped images of entry and exit.
       > - A full copy of the terms and conditions allegedly breached,
       including the signage that the claimant is relying on that
       formed the contract with the driver, as displayed at the time of
       the alleged contravention.
       > - Evidence that VCS has the authority to issue parking charges
       at the location in question.
       > - Proof that the alleged sum reflects actual loss or
       liquidated damages enforceable under contract
       law.[/indent][/indent]
       >
       > [indent]No Demonstration of Keeper Liability Under PoFA 2012
       >
       > - If your client seeks to rely on the Protection of Freedoms
       Act 2012 (PoFA) Schedule 4, strict compliance is required.
       > - I request confirmation that the Notice to Keeper (NtK) sent
       complies with PoFA 2012, Schedule 4, Paragraph 9, including:
       >
       > [indent]- Clear invitation for the keeper to pay the charge.
       > - Delivery within the statutory timeframe.
       > - The inclusion of mandatory wording as per PoFA
       9(2)(e)(i).[/indent]
       >
       > - If no such compliance exists, VCS has no basis for holding
       me liable as keeper.[/indent]
       >
       > [indent]Potential Abuse of Process – Unreasonable Additional
       Costs
       >
       > - The addition of any ‘debt recovery costs’ beyond the
       original PCN is likely unrecoverable and may constitute an abuse
       of process.
       > - In Britannia Parking v Semark-Jullien (2020), the courts
       ruled that adding a flat £60 debt recovery fee was an abuse of
       process and struck out the claim.
       > - If this claim proceeds with added fees, I will seek to have
       them struck out and will request costs for unreasonable
       behaviour.[/indent]
       >
       > 2. Demand for Further Disclosure
       >
       > To facilitate a meaningful response and comply with the
       Overriding Objective under CPR 1.1, I request the following
       within 30 days:
       >
       > [indent]- A full breakdown of the claimed sum, showing any
       debt collection or legal fees.
       > - A copy of the original Parking Charge Notice(s) (PCNs).
       > - Timestamped ANPR or photographic evidence of the alleged
       contravention.
       > - Copies of the signage in place at the material time,
       including the full contractual terms.
       > - Evidence of landowner authority, showing VCS has the right
       to issue PCNs at the site.
       > - Clarification on whether the claim is pursued under contract
       law or trespass.
       > - If alleging Keeper Liability, confirmation that all PoFA
       2012 requirements have been met.[/indent]
       >
       > If you fail to provide the above, I will draw this to the
       court’s attention as a failure to engage in pre-action conduct,
       potentially seeking an adverse costs order.
       >
       > 3. Next Steps & Potential Complaint
       >
       > If you fail to provide the requested information or continue
       to pursue an unmeritorious claim:
       >
       > [indent]- I will formally complain to the Solicitors
       Regulation Authority (SRA) regarding potential breaches of SRA
       Code of Conduct (Principles 1, 4, 5 & 7) regarding misleading
       demands for payment.
       > - I will escalate a complaint to the DVLA for breach of the
       Keeper at Date of Event (KADOE) contract, as VCS’s misuse of
       DVLA data warrants investigation and potential sanctions.
       > - If you issue a claim without addressing these issues, I will
       request summary judgment or strike-out for failure to follow the
       PAP.
       > - If the claim proceeds, I will seek full costs under CPR
       27.14(2)(g) for unreasonable behaviour.[/indent]
       >
       > 4. No Admission of Liability & Right to Seek Further Advice
       >
       > This letter should not be construed as an admission of any
       liability. I reserve the right to seek independent legal advice,
       and if necessary, to counterclaim for unreasonable conduct.
       >
       > Please confirm receipt of this letter and provide a full
       response within 30 days.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       >
       > [Your Name]
       > [Your Address]
       > [Email Address]
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 60106--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: benb76
       Date: March 1, 2025, 11:13 am
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       Thank you once again for your advice, which is very much
       appreciated. I will do as advised.
       #Post#: 67184--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: benb76
       Date: April 15, 2025, 6:23 am
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       Good afternoon,
       Thank you once again for your advice. I have today received the
       email below from DCB Legal, in response to the reply that I sent
       them, in accordance with your advice above. If you would be so
       kind, I would appreciate your further advice on their latest
       communication please. They have attached copies of the original
       notice, photos of the car, of which I am the registered keeper,
       signage at the area in concern, and copies of our previous
       correspondence. Thanks in advance.
       Dear x,
       
       We write in response to your correspondence received in our
       office.
       We now respond to the same as follows.
       Please find attached all evidence we currently hold on file. We
       confirm that prior to the event of a hearing, all relevant
       evidence will be provided.
       If there are any documents that you have requested, but that are
       not attached, it is because we have deemed the request to be
       disproportionate and/or not relevant to the substantive issues
       in dispute. We respectfully draw your attention to paragraph
       2.1(c) of the Protocol and remind you that both parties are
       expected to act reasonably and proportionately.
       
       When parking on private land, the contractual terms of the site
       are set out on the signs. You are entering a contract and
       agreeing to the terms by parking and staying on the site.
       Parking in breach of the terms as stipulated on the signage
       means that you are then breaking the terms of the contract.
       
       The terms and conditions on the signs stated no stopping. The
       vehicle was recorded stopped in an area where stopping was
       prohibited as is demonstrated in the photographic evidence
       enclosed. The parking charge ("PC") was issued correctly.
       
       In order to identify the Registered Keeper of the vehicle, our
       client submitted a request for details to the DVLA. Your details
       were provided and thereafter notices were sent to you by our
       Client at your serviceable address. Those notices asked you to
       either make payment or, if you were not driving, nominate a
       driver by providing their name and full address. You did neither
       and as such you are now pursued on the basis that you were
       driving. On the balance of probabilities, if you were not the
       driver, you would have nominated.
       
       The sum added is a contribution to the actual costs incurred by
       our Client as a result of your non-payment. Our Client’s
       employees have spent time and material attempting to engage in
       dispute resolution. This is not our Client’s usual business and
       the resources could have been better spent in other areas of the
       business. Had you of paid as per the Contract, there would have
       been no need for debt resolution so the amount due would not
       have increased.
       
       For the avoidance of doubt, please see below a breakdown of the
       £510.00 outstanding.
       
       PC no.
       PC amount.
       Debt recovery fee.
       VCSxx
       £100.00
       £70.00
       VCSxx
       £100.00
       £70.00
       VCSxx
       £100.00
       £70.00
       You now have 30 days from the date of this email to make payment
       of £510.00. Failure to make payment will result in a Claim being
       issued against you without any further reference.
       
       Payment can be made via bank transfer to our designated client
       account: -
       Account Name: DCB Legal Ltd Client Account
       Sort Code: xx
       Account Number: xx
       You must quote the correct case reference (xx) when making
       payment. If you do not, we may be unable to correctly allocate
       the payment. If further action is taken by us as a result of an
       incorrect reference being quoted, you will be liable for any
       further fees or costs incurred.
       Alternatively, you can contact DCB Legal Ltd on 0203 838 7038 to
       make payment over the telephone or online at
  HTML https://dcblegal.co.uk/response/pay-online/.
       
       Kind Regards,
       
       xx
       Litigation Support Associate
       DCB Legal Ltd
       #Post#: 67200--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: b789
       Date: April 15, 2025, 7:09 am
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       Please host the appropriately redacted letter and accompanying
       documents you received on DropBox or Google Drive.
       #Post#: 67207--------------------------------------------------
       Re: VCS CN - Stopping in a prohibited zone - Bristol airport - 3
       x CNs in 13 minutes
   DIR By: b789
       Date: April 15, 2025, 7:42 am
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       You can respond with the following to info@dcblegal.co.uk and CC
       yourself:
       --- Quote ---
       > [Date]
       >
       > DCB Legal Ltd
       > Direct House
       > Greenwood Drive
       > Manor Park
       > Runcorn
       > WA7 1UG
       >
       > By email only: info@dcblegal.co.uk
       >
       > Subject: Response to your email dated [insert date] – VCS /
       [Reference Number(s)] – Keeper Liability Not Applicable
       >
       > Dear Sir/Madam,
       >
       > I write further to your email dated [insert date], and must
       express astonishment at the level of misunderstanding and
       procedural ineptitude it contains. I respond purely for the
       benefit of the court, should this charade ever be escalated to
       litigation.
       >
       > Let me be clear: I am the registered keeper, and at no stage
       have I identified the driver. Yet, despite my prior
       explanation—and the fact that the location in question is
       Bristol Airport, land subject to statutory control under
       byelaws—you persist in attempting to argue that I am liable as
       the keeper under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA).
       Your failure to grasp such a fundamental legal point is,
       frankly, embarrassing.
       >
       > 1. Airport Land Is Not “Relevant Land” – Keeper Liability Is
       Irrelevant
       >
       > For avoidance of any further confusion (which appears
       chronic), land governed by airport byelaws is excluded from the
       definition of “relevant land” under Paragraph 3 of Schedule 4 to
       the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA).
       >
       > You cannot hold a keeper liable.
       >
       > There is no grey area. This is basic statutory
       interpretation—something one would reasonably expect a
       litigation firm to understand before threatening court action.
       Yet here we are, with your firm still insinuating that liability
       passes to the keeper, as if PoFA applies where it manifestly
       does not.
       >
       > The Keeper is under no legal obligation to identify the driver
       to your client, an unregulated private parking company.
       Moreover, there can be no presumption or inference that the
       Keeper was the driver, as already confirmed in persuasive
       appellate case law—including your own client’s loss in Vehicle
       Control Services Ltd v Edward (2023) [HOKF6C9C]. To continue
       suggesting otherwise demonstrates either wilful ignorance or a
       staggering level of incompetence.
       >
       > 2. Misrepresentation of the Law – Baseless ‘Balance of
       Probabilities’ Argument
       >
       > Your assertion that I am liable “on the balance of
       probabilities” because I did not name the driver is both legally
       baseless and intellectually lazy.
       >
       > As already explained above, PoFA does not apply to airport
       land. In such cases, where there is no statutory mechanism for
       transferring liability from driver to keeper, your client must
       prove as a matter of fact that I was the driver. There is no
       legal presumption, and the Keeper is under no obligation to
       assist a private firm by naming the driver.
       >
       > Your reliance on inference in the absence of evidence is a
       misrepresentation of the applicable legal test. In the
       persuasive appellate case of Vehicle Control Services Ltd v
       Edward (2023) [HOKF6C9C], HHJ Gargan made clear at paragraph
       35.3:
       >
       > [indent]“It is consistent with the appropriate probability
       analysis whereby simply because somebody is a registered keeper,
       it does not mean on balance of probability they were driving on
       this occasion, because one simply cannot tell.”[/indent]
       >
       > The judge was unambiguous: unless the Claimant can clearly and
       specifically evidence that the defendant was the driver, no such
       inference can be drawn.
       >
       > Your continued reliance on this flawed reasoning is not only
       legally incorrect—it is professionally embarrassing. To attempt
       to manufacture liability through inference where none exists,
       and in direct contradiction to established and persuasive
       appellate authority, falls well below the standards expected of
       regulated legal practitioners.
       >
       > Should you persist in advancing this fiction, I will bring it
       to the court’s attention and will include it in my formal
       complaint to the Solicitors Regulation Authority, highlighting
       your firm’s apparent willingness to misstate the law and pursue
       claims without proper legal foundation.
       >
       > 3. DVLA Data Misuse – Formal Complaints Imminent
       >
       > Your client obtained my keeper data via the DVLA’s KADOE
       contract, which strictly prohibits use of that data where PoFA
       is not applicable and where the keeper cannot be held liable.
       >
       > Continued use of that data in pursuit of an unenforceable
       claim is not only unlawful but in breach of the KADOE contract
       and the UK GDPR.
       >
       > Should this baseless pursuit continue, I will not hesitate to
       escalate matters to:
       >
       > The DVLA, for breach of the KADOE terms; and
       > The Information Commissioner’s Office, for unlawful processing
       of personal data.
       >
       > 4. Fake Add-Ons – Abuse of Process
       >
       > Your attempt to inflate the claim with three separate £70
       “debt recovery” charges is equally absurd. The added sums
       represent no genuine loss, nor are they contractually agreed.
       >
       > This exact conduct was condemned by the courts in Britannia
       Parking v Semark-Jullien (2020), where such practices were found
       to be an abuse of process. Adding these sums not only displays a
       complete lack of legal rigour, but if a claim is issued
       including them, I will seek summary judgment or strike-out, and
       pursue costs under CPR 27.14(2)(g) for unreasonable conduct.
       >
       > 5. Pre-Action Protocol – Your Response Is Woefully
       Non-Compliant
       >
       > Despite my reasoned and structured response, your firm has
       simply repeated your client’s unmeritorious position and
       cherry-picked which questions you deemed “proportionate.” That
       is not how the Pre-Action Protocol works.
       >
       > Paragraph 6(a) of the Protocol requires a full and considered
       reply to every substantive point raised. Your
       approach—consisting largely of automated bluster and evidence
       you believe supports your client—falls well short of what the
       court will expect.
       >
       > 6. Final Position
       >
       > Let me be crystal clear: any further attempt to pursue me, as
       the keeper, for a purported contravention on non-relevant land,
       will be taken as evidence of:
       >
       > [indent]• A deliberate abuse of process;
       > • A flagrant misuse of DVLA data; and
       > • A breach of the SRA Principles, notably:
       >
       > [indent]• Principle 1: Upholding the rule of law
       > • Principle 4: Acting with honesty
       > • Principle 5: Acting with integrity
       > • Principle 7: Acting in the best interests of each
       client[/indent][/indent]
       >
       > Should your firm be foolish enough to escalate this to court,
       I will include this and all previous correspondence in my
       witness statement, and will formally request that the court
       issue a finding of unreasonable behaviour against your client,
       and against you as their representatives.
       >
       > I strongly suggest that you now take competent legal advice
       before humiliating yourselves and your client further.
       >
       > Yours faithfully,
       >
       > [Your Name]
       > Registered Keeper – Not Liable
       --- End Quote ---
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