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       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: Natedog
       Date: October 16, 2024, 5:44 am
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       Dear Mr……….   ,
       Thank you for your recent communication concerning parking
       charge reference…..
       We have carefully considered your appeal based on the
       information provided and the evidence supporting the parking
       charge. In this instance having
       completed our assessment, we consider the parking charge to have
       been correctly issued, as the vehicle was parked on site without
       displaying a valid
       permit.
       Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 discusses the
       recovery of unpaid parking charges. It allows parking operators
       to hold the registered
       keeper liable to pay unpaid parking charges if the operator has
       not been provided the name and a serviceable address of the
       driver.
       Entrance signage advises motorists that terms of parking apply,
       and that notices within the car park should be checked to
       identify the full terms and
       conditions. These notices are numerous and placed appropriately
       throughout the car park. It is ultimately the responsibility of
       the motorist to ensure they
       identify the terms of parking, and then decide whether to park
       their vehicle, or leave the site if they are unable to meet
       those terms.
       We would also contend that when a motorist enters a car park
       they should be at the same level of observance as when driving
       on a public road; When
       driving on the road, motorists are expected to be aware of signs
       when travelling at up to 70mph. In a car park, the typical
       driving speed is on average, much
       lower. We therefore contend that it is not unreasonable to
       expect a motorist to note the signs and to subsequently
       familiarise themselves with these.
       It is UKPC’s position that the signage installed on site is more
       than sufficient to bring the terms and conditions to the
       attention of any motorist, both in the
       clarity of information contained within it, as well as the
       number of appropriately placed signs on site, that a legally
       binding contract is formed between the
       motorist and the party offering that contract.
       Our appeals process is now concluded, you may now choose one of
       the following options:
       1) Pay the parking charge detailed above at the reduced rate of
       £60.00 to UK Parking Control Ltd. PLEASE REFER OVERLEAF FOR
       PAYMENT OPTIONS
       AND ADDRESS DETAILS.
       2) Make an appeal to the independent adjudicator POPLA (Parking
       on Private Land Appeals) using the verification code provided
       above. Please note that if
       you wish to appeal to POPLA, you will lose the right to pay the
       discounted rate of £60.00, and should POPLA reject your appeal
       you will be required to pay
       the full amount of £100.00. If you opt to pay the parking charge
       you will be unable to appeal with POPLA. Appeals to POPLA must
       be made within
       twenty-eight days from the date of this letter. To appeal with
       POPLA, please visit www.popla.co.uk. If you are unable to access
       the internet, you may
       appeal by post – this must be done using a POPLA postal form
       which may be obtained by contacting POPLA by phone (0330 159
       6126) or post (PO Box
       1270, Warrington, WA4 9RL).
       By law we are also required to inform you that Ombudsman
       Services (www.ombudsman-services.org/) provides an alternative
       dispute resolution service
       that would be competent to deal with your appeal. However, we
       have not chosen to participate in their alternative dispute
       resolution service. As such
       should you wish to appeal then you must do so to POPLA, as
       explained above.
       3) If you choose to do nothing the parking charge will
       automatically increase after thirty-five days from the date of
       this letter to £100.00 and the matter
       will be passed to our debt recovery agent, at which point you
       will be liable to pay an additional charge of £70, in accordance
       with the terms and conditions
       of parking, and further charges will be claimed if court action
       is taken against you. Any unpaid court judgement may adversely
       affect your credit rating.
       Yours sincerely,
       Appeals Department
       UK Parking Control Limit
       #Post#: 40993--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: Natedog
       Date: October 16, 2024, 5:57 am
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       Luckily, I have a job today which takes me to the location of
       the car park, and I am going to video the site along with taking
       pictures of the signage. Hopefully this will help support my
       appeal to POPLA.
       I am guessing that my main reason for appeal is the fact they
       didn’t give any time for the signage to be read? Am I correct?
       #Post#: 40998--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 16, 2024, 6:43 am
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       The NtK does not specify the "period of parking" as required by
       PoFA. Also, the signs are the usual UKPC rubbish with the terms
       hidden in a wall of tiny text and the charge for breaching terms
       also hidden in there, another breach of PoFA whereby the signs
       should adequately bring to the attention of the driver, the
       charge for breaching any terms.
       The location in the NtK is ambiguous in that the industrial
       estate is huge and there is no evidence of where on this estate
       the alleged breach occurred. As can be seen in GSV, there are
       entire areas with no signage whatsoever:
  HTML https://i.imgur.com/2loP1Vz.jpeg
  HTML https://maps.app.goo.gl/d8aETJaq1mKAYyKH6
       So, on that basis alone, the PCN is not compliant with ALL the
       requirement of PoFA to be able to hold the keeper liable.
       Also, the signs are prohibitory and therefore no contract could
       possibly be formed. Without any "period of parking" defined,
       there is no evidence that the BPA CoP has been followed with
       regard to consideration period.
  HTML https://i.imgur.com/udsl0ED.jpeg
       All this will go into a POPLA appeal.
       #Post#: 41005--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 16, 2024, 7:09 am
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       Here is a suggested outline for a POPLA appeal. It can be
       revised and any photos that can be provided will be added if
       they help the appeal.
       Can you please show on Google maps exactly where in the estate
       the vehicle was when the driver went to find directions?
       --- Quote ---
       > I am appealing as the registered keeper of the vehicle against
       the parking charge notice issued by UK Parking Control Ltd
       (UKPC). The grounds for my appeal are outlined below, supported
       by multiple failings in the Notice to Keeper (NtK) and the
       supporting evidence provided by UKPC. The PCN has been
       incorrectly issued based on the following grounds:
       >
       > 1. Failure to Comply with Protection of Freedoms Act 2012
       (PoFA) - No Period of Parking Specified
       >
       > [indent]The Notice to Keeper (NtK) issued by UKPC does not
       comply with PoFA 2012, Schedule 4, Paragraph 9(2)(a), which
       mandates that the NtK MUST specify the period of parking. The
       NtK only provides a single timestamp (01:54:34) but fails to
       indicate the duration or period during which the vehicle was
       allegedly parked.
       >
       > Without this information, the NtK does not meet the statutory
       conditions necessary to hold the keeper liable. UKPC cannot
       transfer liability to the keeper when their NtK does not comply
       with PoFA, and as such, the charge must be cancelled.[/indent]
       >
       > 2. Inadequate and Non-Compliant Signage – No Contract Formed &
       PoFA Failure
       >
       > [indent]UKPC claims that their signage is clear and prominent,
       citing an absurd comparison in their rejection letter to road
       signs that motorists are expected to read at 70 mph. This
       argument is not only irrelevant but laughable in the context of
       a car park, where signage must be legible and sufficiently
       prominent at low speeds or even while stationary.
       >
       > a) Hidden Terms and Conditions: The only prominent wording on
       the sign is "NO UNAUTHORISED PARKING." All other crucial
       information, including the terms of parking and the parking
       charge, is hidden in a wall of small text, making it impossible
       for any driver to reasonably read or understand the contract
       they are purportedly agreeing to. The wording "NO UNAUTHORISED
       PARKING" on the sign is prohibitory in nature. A prohibitory
       sign cannot form the basis of a contract because it offers no
       invitation to park under any terms. Instead, it acts as a
       deterrent, merely stating that parking is not permitted. For a
       contract to be valid and enforceable, there must be an offer,
       consideration, and acceptance, none of which can occur with a
       prohibitory notice.
       >
       > As a result, this type of signage cannot be used to form a
       contractual agreement, and no breach of terms could have
       occurred. Therefore, no parking charge can be enforced based on
       this inadequate and non-compliant signage.
       >
       > b) Non-compliance with BPA Code of Practice: The BPA Code of
       Practice mandates that parking terms and charges must be clearly
       visible and easy to read. In this case, the signage does not
       meet these standards, as the essential terms (including the £100
       charge for breach) are obscured within tiny text, and the
       clarity of the signage is insufficient to form any contract with
       a motorist.
       >
       > c) PoFA Non-compliance: This failure to clearly (adequately)
       bring to the attention of the driver the sum of the parking
       charge for breaching terms also constitutes a failure to comply
       with PoFA 2012, Schedule 4, Paragraph 9(2)(d). PoFA mandates
       that the amount due must be clearly communicated. As UKPC has
       failed to adequately highlight this, no valid contract was
       formed, and UKPC cannot hold the keeper liable.
       >
       > Given these facts, no legally binding contract was formed
       between the driver and UKPC, as the signage fails to communicate
       the parking terms adequately.[/indent]
       >
       > 3. Ambiguity of Location – NtK Fails to Specify Exact Location
       >
       > The NtK is vague and fails to specify the exact location
       within Uplands Business Park where the vehicle was allegedly
       parked. This business park is a large industrial estate, with
       numerous areas, many of which are entirely unsignposted. Without
       specifying the exact location, it is impossible for UKPC to
       claim a valid parking contravention occurred at a specific
       point.
       >
       > [indent]a) PoFA Non-Compliance: Under PoFA 2012, Schedule 4,
       the relevant land must be specified. The general mention of
       Uplands Business Park does not meet the requirement for
       specifying the relevant land, and therefore the NtK is not
       compliant.
       >
       > b) Multiple Unsigned Areas: Given that some areas within the
       estate have no signage whatsoever, it is entirely possible that
       the vehicle was parked in a location without any displayed
       terms. This further erodes the credibility of UKPC's claim and
       their assertion that the driver was bound by any parking
       terms.[/indent]
       >
       > 4. UKPC Must Provide Strict Proof of Driver Identity
       >
       > [indent]Since I am appealing as the registered keeper, and no
       admission has been made regarding the identity of the driver,
       UKPC is required to provide strict proof that the person they
       are pursuing is indeed the driver.
       >
       > UKPC has not provided any evidence that identifies the driver,
       nor can any assumptions or inferences be made under PoFA 2012.
       In the absence of such proof, the charge must be cancelled, as
       UKPC cannot demonstrate that the keeper and driver are the same
       individual.[/indent]
       >
       > 5. Consideration Period – Ability to Locate and Understand
       Signage
       >
       > In their rejection of my initial appeal, UKPC claimed that
       their signage was sufficient and that motorists should have the
       same level of "observance" in a car park as they do on public
       roads at high speeds. This claim is not only baseless but also
       demonstrates UKPC’s lack of understanding of the BPA Code of
       Practice.
       >
       > [indent]a) Time to Find and Read Signs: The BPA Code of
       Practice clearly requires that motorists be given an appropriate
       amount of time to find the signage, read it, and understand the
       terms before any contract can be assumed to have been formed.
       This is referred to as a consideration period. In this instance,
       there was no adequate signage visible upon entry, and even where
       signs are placed, the terms are not legible due to their size
       and poor placement.
       >
       > b) Inadequate Signage in Low Light Conditions: The alleged
       contravention occurred in the early morning, in darkness, which
       would make it even more difficult for any motorist to read and
       understand the terms displayed on UKPC’s signs. No consideration
       period was allowed for the driver to locate, read, and
       comprehend the small-font, densely worded signage.[/indent]
       >
       > Conclusion
       >
       > In summary, the parking charge must be cancelled due to the
       following reasons:
       >
       > [indent]• The NtK is non-compliant with PoFA 2012 due to the
       absence of a period of parking and the failure to specify the
       exact location of the alleged contravention.
       > • No contract was formed because the signage was inadequate,
       non-compliant with the BPA Code of Practice, and failed to
       clearly communicate the parking terms.
       > • The failure to bring the sum of the charge for breaching
       terms to the attention of the driver constitutes another PoFA
       2012 failure.
       > • UKPC has provided no evidence identifying the driver, and no
       assumptions can be made under PoFA about the keeper being the
       driver.
       > • The consideration period required to locate and understand
       the signage was not provided.[/indent]
       >
       > I suggest that POPLA upholds this appeal and cancels the PCN.
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 41008--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: October 16, 2024, 7:32 am
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       I'd be minded to add to point #1 - in these sort of cases taken
       by a warden, you often see 2 photos taken some time apart, to
       prove that the vehicle was there for longer than the relevant
       consideration period. In this case there only appears to be 1
       photo, so they seemingly haven't demonstrated that the car was
       there for more than 5 minutes.
       #Post#: 41010--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 16, 2024, 7:34 am
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       Yes... but the NtK has to mention the "period of parking",
       irrespective of whether there are other evidential photos.
       #Post#: 41012--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: October 16, 2024, 7:38 am
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       I agree - my point is that the lack of additional photos means
       they've provided no evidence that the vehicle was even there for
       long enough to attract a parking charge, which is yet another
       ground of appeal that can be added. Worth throwing in every
       issue.
       #Post#: 41019--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: Natedog
       Date: October 16, 2024, 8:03 am
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       Hi, yes the driver parked the vehicle in this car park here…..
  HTML https://maps.app.goo.gl/VTsJaxgzCS5pHW4w7?g_st=ic
       Also, the warden took numerous pictures of the vehicle. (Around
       4/5 I think)
       When looking online at the pictures taken, the time stamp on the
       pictures gives around 2 minutes from the first picture taken to
       the last one.
       #Post#: 41025--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: b789
       Date: October 16, 2024, 8:17 am
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       Can you show us the evidential photos they have. It will be
       interesting to see the lighting conditions.
       #Post#: 41027--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit
   DIR By: Natedog
       Date: October 16, 2024, 8:20 am
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       Also, when I look at the PCN online. The reason for issue
       states….. Parked in a permit area without displaying a permit.
       I’m not sure if that makes a difference.
       Anyway, I will make the appeal to POPLA with the template you
       suggested. Thanks again for your continued support.
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