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       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 15, 2024, 7:15 am
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       Here is an updated version of your suggested WS, which includes
       some paragraphs about the redacted contract provided:
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       >
       > [center]IN THE UXBRIDGE COUNTY COURT[/center]
       > [right]Claim No: [Claim Number][/right]
       > [center]Between
       >
       > Hounslow Enforcement Limited
       > (Claimant)
       >
       > - and -
       >
       > [Your Full Name]
       > (Defendant)
       >
       >
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       >
       > WITNESS STATEMENT[/center]
       >
       > 1. My name is [Your Full Name], and I reside at [Address]. I
       am the Defendant in these proceedings and this Witness Statement
       is made from my own knowledge and research, and I confirm that
       the facts stated within it are true to the best of my knowledge
       and belief.
       >
       > PRELIMINARY MATTER - The Claim should be struck out
       >
       > 2. I respectfully submit that before proceeding with the
       hearing, the Court should consider a Preliminary Matter:
       striking out the claim due to the Claimant's and/or their
       solicitor’s failure to comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a), which
       requires a concise statement of the facts. It is embarrassing
       that the Claimant’s solicitor, a firm widely recognised for its
       bulk litigation process of issuing thousands of poorly pleaded
       claims each month, has once again provided inadequate
       Particulars of Claim (PoC). In this case, the PoC are so
       deficient that I, as the Defendant, was expected to prepare a
       defence without a proper understanding of the facts and
       allegations against me.
       >
       > 3. Dismissing the claim is the correct course, with the
       Overriding Objective in mind. Bulk litigators (legal firms like
       the notorious Gladstones with their well-documented connections
       to the IPC Trade Body) should know better than to make little or
       no attempt to comply with the Practice Direction. By continuing
       to plead cases with generic auto-fill unspecific wording, they
       should not be surprised when courts strike out their claims
       based in the following persuasive authorities:
       >
       > 4. In Car Park Management Services Ltd v Akande 2024
       [K0DP5J30] heard on 10th May 2024, HHJ Evans, sitting at
       Manchester County Court, held that
       >
       > [indent]"It cannot be right that the fundamental basic rule
       that Particulars of Claim must set out the case which a
       defendant has to meet can somehow be swept away by the character
       limit imposed by the MCOL system. It does not take many
       characters to say 'did not buy a ticket' or 'did not display
       permit' but if the Claimant really cannot fit that into the 1080
       character limit then the remedy is to serve detailed Particulars
       of Claim."[/indent]
       >
       > The same is true in this case. (See exhibit XX-01 CPMS v
       Akande judgment)
       >
       > 5. In Civil Enforcement Ltd v Chan 2023 [E7GM9W44] heard on
       15th August 2023, HHJ Murch, sitting at Luton County Court, held
       that
       >
       > [indent]"the particulars of the claim as filed and served did
       not set out the conduct which amounted to the breach in reliance
       upon which the claimant would be able to bring a claim for
       breach of contract."[/indent]
       >
       > The same is true in this case. (See exhibit XX-02 CEL v Chan
       judgment)
       >
       > 6. There are many other examples of similarly poorly pleaded
       claims that have been struck out, both at allocation stage and
       at hearings. (See exhibit XX-03 Other CPR 16.4 judgments)
       >
       > The basis of the defence
       >
       > 7. These are the woefully inadequate PoC as provided to me by
       the Claimant through their solicitor utilising MCOL:
       >
       > [indent]"THE DRIVER OF THE VEHICLE WITH REGISTRATION ENTER THE
       VEHICLE REG PARKED IN BREACH OF THE TERMS OF PARKING STIPULATED
       ON THE SIGNAGE (THE 'CONTRACT) AT NORTH HYDE HOUSE HAYES, ON
       19/04/2023, 18/04/2023, THUS INCURRING THE PARKING CHARGES (THE
       'PCN'S'). THE PCN'S WERE NOT PAID WITHIN 28 DAYS OF ISSUE. THE
       CLAIMANT CLAIMS THE UNPAID PCN'S FROM THE DEFENDANT AS THE
       DRIVER/KEEPER OF THE VEHICLE. DESPITE DEMANDS BEING MADE, THE
       DEFENDANT HAS FAILED TO SETTLE THEIR OUTSTANDING LIABILITY. THE
       CLAIMANT CLAIMS £100 PER PCN, £70.00 PER PCN CONTRACTUAL COSTS
       PURSUANT TO THE CONTRACT AND PCN TERMS AND CONDITIONS, TOGETHER
       WITH STATUTORY INTEREST OF £15.14 PURSUANT TO S69 OF THE COUNTY
       COURTS ACT 1984 AT 8.00% PER ANNUM, CONTINUING AT £0.07 PER
       DAY."[/indent]
       >
       > 8. As evidenced, there is a lack of precise detail in the PoC
       in respect of the factual and legal allegations made against me
       such that the particulars of claim do not comply with CPR
       16.4(1)(a). There is no precise or even concise factual
       allegation made against me. There is no factual or legal basis
       for the claim. It is not shown how the claim has been
       calculated.
       >
       > 9. Should the court not agree that the claim should be struck
       out, I respectfully request that the Claimant be ordered to
       provide further particulars that, for the avoidance of doubt,
       must:
       >
       > [indent](a) refer to and have attached to them a copy of the
       contract (or contracts) between the claimant and defendant
       relied on.
       >
       > (b) set out the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of
       the terms and conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is
       (or are) relied on.
       >
       > (c) have attached to them a copy of each of the Parking Charge
       Notices (PCNs) which forms the basis of this claim.
       >
       > (d) must state by what method each of the PCNs was first
       brought to the attention of the defendant. For example,
       attaching it to the defendant's vehicle or sending by post.
       >
       > (e) in respect of each alleged breach of contract, set out the
       reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts that the defendant
       was in breach of contract.
       >
       > (f) in respect of each alleged breach of contract, set out (i)
       the full postal address of where the breach took place and (ii)
       the precise date and time of the alleged breach and (iii)
       exactly how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked
       before the parking charge was incurred.
       >
       > (g) state, in respect of each PCN sued on, whether the claim
       is (or is not) brought under the Protection of Freedoms Act
       2012.
       >
       > (h) in respect of each alleged breach of contract, must state
       whether the defendant is sued as the driver of the vehicle or
       the keeper of the vehicle.
       >
       > (i) not state that the defendant is sued in the alternative as
       the driver of the vehicle or as the keeper of the vehicle.
       >
       > (j) state what amount of the claim is the claim for
       non-payment of the PCNs and what amount of the claim is not for
       non-payment of the PCNs.
       >
       > (k) must explain the factual or legal (or both) basis of the
       claim for any amount claimed which is not for non-payment of the
       PCNs.
       >
       > (l) set out a precise calculation of the claim for statutory
       interest up to the date of issue to include the date interest
       started running.[/indent]
       >
       > Should the Claimant fully comply with the order and the claim
       is not struck out, I should be allowed to provide an amended
       defence based on all the facts provided by the order.
       >
       > Hearsay evidence
       >
       > 10. The Claimants 'witness' is a legal assistant employed by
       the claimant’s solicitors and has no direct knowledge of the
       actual events that form the basis of the claim. Any evidence
       provided by this individual is second-hand, supposedly relying
       entirely on information supplied by the claimant, and thus
       cannot carry the same weight as testimony from someone who
       witnessed or was directly involved in the incident.
       >
       > 11. While the Civil Evidence Act 1995 allows hearsay evidence
       in civil proceedings, it is required to be given less weight,
       especially when it comes from someone with no firsthand
       knowledge. Furthermore, under CPR 32.2, the court has the
       discretion to exclude hearsay evidence when it is of limited
       probative value. In this case, the witness provides only
       second-hand information from the claimant and cannot be
       considered reliable or probative.
       >
       > 12. The claimant's Witness Statement (WS) fails to comply with
       CPR Practice Direction 32, paragraph 18.2, as it does not
       clearly distinguish between what the witness knows firsthand and
       what has been provided to them by others. It is evident that the
       individual providing the statement, being a legal assistant with
       no direct involvement in the events, relies on information
       provided by their client and lacks personal knowledge of the
       facts. As a result, this statement amounts to hearsay, which
       weakens its credibility. Further, the claimant's witness has
       failed to indicate the source of any information and belief, as
       required under PD 32.18.2.
       >
       > 13. The paralegal 'witness' does not work for the Claimants
       company and therefore has no role in the operations, policies,
       or specific events regarding the parking charge or this case.
       This distance from the Claimants company further undermines
       their ability to give a credible account of the facts.
       >
       > 14. The claimant's WS is written in the third person, which is
       inappropriate for a witness statement. A WS should represent the
       personal account of the witness and should be written in the
       first person, as per CPR Practice Direction 32, paragraph 18.1,
       which requires a witness to state their evidence clearly, in
       their own words.
       >
       > No Offer of Parking and No Contract Formed
       >
       > 15. In paragraph 11 of the claimant’s Witness Statement, the
       claimant lists the "terms and conditions" displayed at the site,
       which are all prohibitory terms such as "No Stopping," "No
       Waiting," and "No Pick Up/No Drop Off." I submit that these
       prohibitions cannot possibly form a contractual offer because
       they do not offer any service or benefit to the motorist but
       rather prohibit actions altogether.
       >
       > 16. For a contract to exist, there must be an offer,
       consideration, and acceptance. The claimant’s signs, by their
       own wording, prohibit any action (such as stopping or waiting)
       rather than offering parking or any other service. This means
       there is no contractual offer made to motorists, as no positive
       action is proposed in exchange for any consideration (payment).
       >
       > 17. In legal terms, a prohibitory notice merely tells the
       motorist what they cannot do, and therefore, it does not give
       rise to any enforceable agreement or parking contract. It is
       impossible for a motorist to "accept" a contract that does not
       exist, as they are not given the option to do anything other
       than leave. If the terms are simply prohibitions, there can be
       no offer capable of acceptance, and thus no contract has been
       formed.
       >
       > 18. As there is no valid offer or contract, no liability can
       arise from any alleged breach of such "terms and conditions" and
       the Claimant’s parking charge is unenforceable on this basis.
       >
       > Unenforceable Additional Costs
       >
       > 19. In paragraph 13 of the claimant’s Witness Statement, it is
       stated that the signage provides for a "Parking Charge in the
       sum of £100, plus additional costs if the same remains unpaid."
       However, I submit that these "additional costs" are not defined
       anywhere in the signage or contract terms allegedly relied upon
       by the claimant, rendering them vague and unenforceable under
       the Consumer Rights Act 2015 (CRA), which requires that contract
       terms be both fair and transparent.
       >
       > 20. In the Particulars of Claim, the claimant has added £70
       per Parking Charge Notice (PCN), claiming this as "contractual
       costs as per the contract terms and conditions." However, these
       additional costs are not referred to or specified on the signage
       at the site. The claimant cannot impose additional costs that
       are not clearly stated in the contract (assuming a contract even
       existed, which is disputed). This lack of transparency violates
       Schedule 2, Paragraph 10 of the CRA, which prohibits unfair
       terms 'that have the object or effect of irrevocably binding the
       consumer to terms with which the consumer has had no real
       opportunity of becoming acquainted before the conclusion of the
       contract.'
       >
       > Penalty Charge, Not Genuine Pre-Estimate of Loss
       >
       > 21. Furthermore, these additional costs appear to be arbitrary
       and penal in nature. Under established law principles, such as
       ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis [2015], parking charges must either be a
       genuine pre-estimate of loss or commercially justified. In this
       case, the additional £70 is neither justified nor explained.
       >
       > 22. The claimant has provided no breakdown or explanation of
       how this amount was calculated or why it is appropriate. It can
       only be viewed as a punitive charge designed to penalise the
       defendant, which is contrary to established legal principles
       that prohibit excessive and unfair contractual penalties.
       >
       > 23. The claimant’s demand for additional costs of £70 per PCN
       is entirely baseless. It is not supported by any clear
       contractual term, it violates the CRA's requirements for
       fairness and transparency, and it constitutes an unlawful
       penalty charge. The court should strike out this portion of the
       claim as unenforceable.
       >
       > No Evidence of Service of PCNs and Reminder Notices
       >
       > 24. In paragraphs 20 and 23 of the claimant’s Witness
       Statement, the claimant asserts that the details of the alleged
       contraventions were sent to me as the registered keeper of the
       vehicle, and that I failed to make any payment or response.
       However, the claimant has provided no evidence that these
       notices were actually sent or that they were properly served.
       >
       > 25. I submit that the burden of proof is on the claimant to
       show that they not only prepared these notices but also sent
       them in accordance with the relevant rules of service, as per
       Civil Procedure Rule (CPR) 6.26. Merely producing copies of the
       notices does not prove they were properly delivered or received.
       >
       > 26. The claimant has not provided any evidence, such as proof
       of postage or a certificate of service, to confirm that the
       notices were actually posted. Simply producing copies of the
       notices does not prove they were ever sent. Without evidence of
       proper posting, the claimant cannot rely on CPR 6.26 to claim
       that these notices were deemed served.
       >
       > 27. Furthermore, I had not received any correspondence
       whatsoever from the claimant until the County Court claim form,
       despite my address being unchanged for the last 10 years. I have
       always received other PCNs and promptly dealt with them, which
       demonstrates that there is no issue with my address being on
       record with the DVLA.
       >
       > 28. The claimant’s assertion that, because the claim form was
       received, the PCNs and reminders must also have been received is
       speculative and not supported by any evidence. It is entirely
       possible that these documents were not sent, were misaddressed,
       or were otherwise not delivered. The claimant must provide proof
       of proper service, such as proof of postage or delivery, for
       these notices. Without this, their claim cannot stand as the
       basic pre-requisites for holding the registered keeper liable
       under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
       have not been satisfied.
       >
       > 29. Additionally, the claimant seeks to recover legal fees and
       other charges beyond the PCNs, yet there is no evidence that any
       pre-action protocol (PAP), including a formal Letter of Claim,
       was ever served. This lack of compliance with pre-action
       procedures further undermines the claimant’s claim and the
       additional costs they seek to recover.
       >
       > 30. I invite the court to strike out the claim on the basis
       that the claimant has failed to prove proper service of the
       PCNs, the reminders, and any pre-action correspondence. Simply
       showing copies of these documents is not sufficient to meet the
       burden of proof.
       >
       > Offensive and Baseless Allegation Regarding My Ability to
       Understand CPR and Legal Issues
       >
       > 31. In paragraph 23 of the claimant's Witness Statement, the
       claimant’s legal representative — who, as already noted, has no
       direct involvement in the events surrounding the alleged claim —
       makes a wholly inappropriate and offensive assertion about my
       ability to understand the complexities of the Civil Procedure
       Rules (CPR). The witness claims, without any basis, that I have
       relied on a "generic defence" found on the internet and implies
       that I do not understand the references I have made to the law
       and CPR requirements.
       >
       > 32. This is a baseless and entirely unfounded personal attack.
       The claimant's witness has no knowledge whatsoever of my level
       of education, professional background, or capacity to understand
       legal matters. It is deeply unprofessional and, quite frankly,
       embarrassing that a firm of supposed legal professionals would
       resort to such unfounded insults in an official court document.
       As a litigant in person, I am not expected to have the same
       legal expertise as the claimant’s solicitors. However, I have
       made every effort to research and present a reasonable defence.
       The claimant’s solicitors, being professionals, should be held
       to a higher standard of compliance with legal procedures,
       especially with respect to the Civil Procedure Rules.
       >
       > 33. I respectfully remind the court that I am a litigant in
       person. I have every right to research legal matters and use any
       available resources to present my defence, just as the
       claimant’s solicitors have evidently relied on templates for
       both their Particulars of Claim and Witness Statement. My
       defence is fully supported by relevant case law and legal
       principles, regardless of the method by which I prepared it.
       >
       > 34. Moreover, this unwarranted and disparaging comment about
       my ability as a litigant in person amounts to unreasonable
       behavior on the part of the claimant's solicitors. Such conduct
       is clearly designed to intimidate and belittle me, rather than
       address the actual legal issues in the case. I believe this
       behavior violates the spirit of fair litigation and may amount
       to a breach of the Overriding Objective under CPR 1.1, which
       requires the parties to act justly and fairly.
       >
       > 35. I respectfully request that the court take note of this
       unprofessional conduct when making any assessment of costs. The
       claimant’s solicitors' reliance on personal attacks, rather than
       focusing on the substance of the legal matters, reflects poorly
       on their conduct and should be considered when determining
       whether the claimant has behaved unreasonably in the
       proceedings.
       >
       > Claimant’s Assertion Regarding My Defence
       >
       > 36. In paragraph 25 of the claimant's Witness Statement, the
       claimant asserts that I have been able to produce a "substantive
       defence" and implies that I have not suffered any prejudice as a
       result of the claimant's failure to provide detailed and
       compliant Particulars of Claim (PoC). I respectfully submit that
       this assertion is inaccurate and fails to appreciate the nature
       of my defence.
       >
       > 37. My defence primarily relies on the fact that the
       Particulars of Claim provided by the claimant were woefully
       deficient and did not comply with the requirements of CPR 16.4,
       as they failed to provide sufficient detail about the basis of
       the claim. As a result, I was unable to understand the case
       against me or adequately prepare a response to any specific
       allegations.
       >
       > 38. The only substantive element of my defence, aside from
       pointing out the deficiencies in the claimant's PoC and their
       failure to comply with CPR 16.4, was to state:
       >
       > [indent]"I have no recollection of the reasons I would have
       been at the location as this claim is the first communication I
       have ever received on this matter."[/indent]
       >
       > 39. This is far from a detailed or "substantive" defence, and
       it reflects my inability to provide a fuller response due to the
       claimant's failure to communicate the alleged contravention to
       me prior to initiating this claim. I have never received any
       prior communication about this matter, either in the form of a
       Parking Charge Notice (PCN) or reminder letters, as stated in my
       defence. The claimant’s failure to serve any prior notice means
       I could not reasonably provide a detailed account or explanation
       of the circumstances of the alleged incident.
       >
       > 40. It is important to highlight that my defence is not
       "substantive" in the sense that the claimant implies, but is
       rather a reflection of the claimant's procedural failures and
       their failure to provide me with any prior information about the
       alleged breach. This has placed me at a significant
       disadvantage, and the suggestion that I have not suffered any
       prejudice as a result is clearly without merit.
       >
       > 41. The claimant cannot now seek to argue that their
       inadequate PoC is excusable simply because I have pointed out
       their legal and procedural failings. Their lack of compliance
       with CPR 16.4 has severely hindered my ability to respond to
       this claim in any meaningful way beyond disputing the receipt of
       prior communication and highlighting their procedural errors.
       >
       > 42. I respectfully request that the court takes this into
       account when considering the claimant's conduct and the impact
       it has had on my ability to defend this claim.
       >
       > Failure to Comply with CPR 16.4
       >
       > 43. In paragraph 26 of the claimant’s Witness Statement, the
       claimant attempts to excuse their failure to fully comply with
       CPR 16.4 by asserting that the information provided in their
       Particulars of Claim (PoC) was sufficient to make me aware of
       the nature of the claim. This is a feeble and unconvincing
       attempt to justify their non-compliance, and I have already
       provided evidence of recent persuasive cases where similar
       failures led to claims being struck out.
       >
       > 44. As I have referenced earlier in this Witness Statement, in
       CPMS v Akande [2024] and CEL v Chan [2023], the court found that
       vague and inadequate PoCs that failed to provide essential
       details were grounds for striking out the claim. The claimant’s
       PoC in this case suffers from the same deficiencies — lacking
       crucial information such as the specifics of the alleged
       contravention, the terms supposedly breached, or any supporting
       evidence.
       >
       > 45. I respectfully submit that the claimant’s continued
       reliance on these deficient PoCs should result in the court
       giving no weight to their justification, and I once again refer
       the court to the persuasive appeal cases I have cited, CPMS v
       Akande [2024] and CEL v Chan [2023], which I have included as
       evidence.
       >
       > Redacted Contract, Missing Signatories, Lack of Proof of
       Authority, and No Evidence of Landowner Permission
       >
       > 46. In their evidence, the claimant has provided a redacted
       copy of the alleged contract between themselves and
       VapesDirect-UK Ltd, signed on 1st November 2020 for a term of 5
       years. I wish to draw the court’s attention to the fact that key
       details have been obscured, including the names, positions, and
       signatures of the signatories to the agreement. This omission
       raises serious concerns about the legitimacy of the contract and
       the authority of the individuals who purportedly entered into
       it.
       >
       > 47. Further investigation has revealed that the business
       operating at the location at the time of the alleged parking
       contravention in April 2023 was not VapesDirect-UK Ltd, but
       Anicres-UK Ltd, a separate registered company. The director of
       both companies is the same individual; however, this does not
       alter the fact that they are legally distinct entities with
       different company registrations.
       >
       > 48. The contract provided by the claimant is solely with
       VapesDirect-UK Ltd, which ceased operating at the location
       sometime between 2021 and 2022, long before the alleged
       contravention occurred. Anicres-UK Ltd, the company operating at
       the location in April 2023, is not a party to this contract, and
       no evidence has been provided to demonstrate that the contract
       was novated or assigned to Anicres-UK Ltd. As such, the claimant
       has no valid contractual authority to issue Parking Charge
       Notices (PCNs) at the location in question.
       >
       > 49. It is also important to note that neither VapesDirect-UK
       Ltd nor Anicres-UK Ltd own the land in question. Both companies
       are tenants at the location. The claimant has failed to provide
       any evidence showing that either company had the necessary
       authority from the landowner to enter into a contract with the
       claimant for parking management. Without such authority flowing
       from the landowner, the companies, as tenants, may not have had
       the legal right to authorise the claimant to operate on the land
       in the first place.
       >
       > 50. Although VapesDirect-UK Ltd was not placed into voluntary
       liquidation until October 2023, this fact does not alter the
       situation, as the business operating at the location had already
       changed to Anicres-UK Ltd by 2022. The claimant’s reliance on a
       contract with a company (VapesDirect-UK Ltd) that no longer
       operated at the site in 2023 renders their authority to issue
       PCNs invalid. The contract with VapesDirect-UK Ltd does not
       confer any rights upon the claimant to issue PCNs on behalf of
       Anicres-UK Ltd, and the claimant has provided no evidence of any
       subsequent agreement with the latter company.
       >
       > 51. The redaction of the signatories and the absence of any
       evidence showing that the contract was novated or assigned to
       Anicres-UK Ltd prevents me, as the defendant, from verifying
       whether the agreement was duly authorised by the current
       business operating at the location. Moreover, there is no
       evidence that either VapesDirect-UK Ltd or Anicres-UK Ltd had
       the landowner’s permission to contract with the claimant. In the
       absence of clear evidence of Anicres-UK Ltd authorising the
       claimant, and no evidence that either tenant had the necessary
       authority from the landowner, the claimant has not proven that
       they have the authority to operate at the location and issue
       PCNs.
       >
       > 52. Should the court hold an unredacted version of the
       contract, I submit that this does not cure the claimant’s
       failure to demonstrate their authority to operate at the
       location, as no evidence has been provided to the defendant
       showing that the claimant is authorised by Anicres-UK Ltd or the
       landowner. The court is invited to strike out the claim on this
       basis, as the claimant has failed to meet their burden of
       proving they have the requisite authority to issue PCNs at the
       location.
       >
       > 53. I submit that providing an unredacted version of the
       contract to the court without providing the same to the
       defendant would be insufficient to satisfy the requirement for
       transparency and fairness in these proceedings. However, the
       issue at hand is not simply the redactions but the complete lack
       of evidence showing that the authority to operate flows from the
       current business (Anicres-UK Ltd) or the landowner. In the
       absence of such evidence, I respectfully request that the claim
       be struck out for lack of standing.
       >
       > Conclusion: Claimant's Failure to Satisfy the Burden of Proof
       >
       > 54. The claimant, in their Witness Statement, has failed to
       satisfy the fundamental burden of proof in this matter. Despite
       making various assertions about the alleged contraventions and
       my supposed liability, the claimant has not provided adequate
       evidence to support their claim. Specifically:
       >
       > 55. Lack of Evidence of Service: The claimant has not
       demonstrated that the Parking Charge Notices (PCNs), reminder
       notices, or any pre-action correspondence were properly served,
       as per the requirements of CPR 6.26. Simply producing copies of
       these documents is insufficient without proof of postage or
       delivery, and their failure to provide such proof severely
       undermines their claim.
       >
       > 56. Failure to Comply with CPR 16.4: As detailed earlier, the
       claimant’s Particulars of Claim (PoC) are woefully deficient and
       do not comply with the requirements of CPR 16.4. The PoC fails
       to provide sufficient detail about the alleged contravention,
       preventing me from fully understanding the case against me.
       Recent persuasive cases, such as CPMS v Akande [2024] and CEL v
       Chan [2023], demonstrate that such failures warrant the striking
       out of the claim.
       >
       > 57. Inadequate and Speculative Witness Testimony: The
       claimant’s Witness Statement was provided by a legal assistant
       who has no personal knowledge of the events surrounding the
       claim. Much of the testimony provided is hearsay and fails to
       comply with CPR Practice Direction 32, paragraph 18.2, which
       requires the witness to clearly indicate which statements are
       based on their own knowledge and which are based on information
       provided by others. This undermines the credibility of their
       evidence.
       >
       > 58. Invalid Contract and Lack of Authority: The claimant has
       provided a heavily redacted version of the alleged contract
       between themselves and VapesDirect-UK Ltd. However, this
       contract is invalid for several reasons:
       >
       > [indent]The business operating at the location at the time of
       the alleged contravention in April 2023 was Anicres-UK Ltd, not
       VapesDirect-UK Ltd. These two companies are distinct legal
       entities, and the claimant has failed to provide any evidence of
       a novation or assignment of the contract from VapesDirect-UK Ltd
       to Anicres-UK Ltd. Therefore, the claimant had no authority to
       issue PCNs based on the original contract with VapesDirect-UK
       Ltd.
       >
       > Additionally, both VapesDirect-UK Ltd and Anicres-UK Ltd are
       tenants at the location, not the landowners. The claimant has
       failed to provide any evidence that either company had the
       necessary authority from the landowner to contract the claimant
       for parking management. Without such authority flowing from the
       landowner, the claimant’s contract lacks the legal basis
       required to issue PCNs.[/indent]
       >
       > 59. Redacted Contract and Missing Signatories: The redacted
       version of the contract provided by the claimant further
       undermines their position. Critical details, such as the names,
       titles, and signatures of the signatories, have been obscured,
       making it impossible for me, as the defendant, to verify the
       legitimacy of the contract. This raises serious doubts about
       whether the claimant had proper authorisation to act on behalf
       of either the tenant companies or the landowner.
       >
       > 60. Despite these significant procedural and evidentiary
       failings, the claimant has unreasonably asserted that my defence
       is "without merit." I strongly reject this assertion. My defence
       has highlighted the claimant's failures to provide sufficient
       evidence and comply with legal procedures, as well as their lack
       of contractual authority to operate at the location.
       Furthermore, as a litigant in person, I have made every effort
       to research and present a defence that addresses the key issues
       in this case, despite the claimant’s refusal to provide me with
       clear and adequate information from the outset.
       >
       > 61. I respectfully request that the court dismisses the
       claimant’s claim in its entirety due to the claimant’s failure
       to meet the burden of proof and their failure to comply with the
       requirements of the Civil Procedure Rules. The court should also
       consider the claimant’s unreasonable conduct throughout these
       proceedings when making any assessment of costs.
       >
       > 62. In the matter of costs, I ask:
       >
       > [indent](a) standard witness costs for attendance at Court,
       pursuant to CPR 27.14, and
       >
       > (b) for a finding of unreasonable conduct by this Claimant,
       seeking costs pursuant to CPR 46.5[/indent]
       >
       > 63. Attention is drawn specifically to the (often-seen from
       this industry) possibility of an unreasonably late Notice of
       Discontinuance. Whilst CPR r.38.6 states that the Claimant is
       liable for the Defendant's costs after discontinuance
       (r.38.6(1)) this does not normally apply to claims allocated to
       the small claims track (r.38.6(3)). However, the White Book
       states (annotation 38.6.1): "Note that the normal rule as to
       costs does not apply if a claimant in a case allocated to the
       small claims track serves a notice of discontinuance although it
       might be contended that costs should be awarded if a party has
       behaved unreasonably (r.27.14(2)(dg))."
       >
       > Statement of truth
       >
       > [indent]I believe that the facts stated in this witness
       statement are true. I understand that proceedings for contempt
       of court may be brought against anyone who makes, or causes to
       be made, a false statement in a document verified by a statement
       of truth without an honest belief in its truth.[/indent]
       >
       > Signed:
       >
       >
       > Date:
       --- End Quote ---
       #Post#: 36923--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I 
   DIR By: bz.08
       Date: September 15, 2024, 9:02 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       --- Quote from: b789 link ---
       >
       > As you have redacted the name of the client, are you positive
       that the client is the landowner or an agent of the landowner?
       If they are an agent, such as a management company, there does
       not appear to be any evidence in that contract that they have
       any authority flowing from the landowner to operate.
       >
       > Please confirm the name of the client or at least confirm
       whether the client is the landowner or an agent of the
       landowner.
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       So the client is "Vapes Direct UK Ltd", they are the
       shop/unit/warehouse right next to where it is alleged the driver
       parked. So I assume it is their land. But what is interesting is
       that based on Google Maps Streetview, their shop sign was
       removed between 2021-2022 (see link below). It was replaced with
       a sign for business "Anicres" - based on Companies House "Vapes
       Direct UK Ltd" and "Anicres" are owned by the same owner but are
       separate registered businesses.
  HTML https://www.google.com/maps/@51.4970795,-0.399327,3a,31.3y,14.81h,88.63t/data=!3m7!1e1!3m5!1s1x6JuR1zfFbcad6l4_xhyA!2e0!5s20210501T000000!7i16384!8i8192?entry=ttu&g_ep=EgoyMDI0MDkxMS4wIKXMDSoASAFQAw%3D%3D
       The alleged contravention was in April 2023. Not sure if this is
       relevant at all but just thought I'd point it out.
       #Post#: 36924--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 15, 2024, 9:39 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       It is relevant. If the contract is with one registered company
       but that company is not the landowner because a different
       registered company is the landowner, is important.
       Looking at the Companies House records, Vapesdirect-UK Ltd is in
       the process of being liquidated. They owe HMRC over £2.3 million
       and only have assets of around £15,000 of which are likely to
       realise £0.
       Anicres UK Ltd with net assets of £96,000 is unlikely to be the
       landowner. So, there is no evidence that the contract shown is
       either valid or flows from the landowner.
       I will make an amendment to the WS to cover this fact. Once that
       has been done, please review it, change any necessary details
       such as the claim number and your name and address where
       applicable plus any reference to dates and then type your name
       for the signature, date it and then save it in PDF format.
       In which county court is the hearing supposed to be?
       #Post#: 36925--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: bz.08
       Date: September 15, 2024, 9:49 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       --- Quote from: b789 link ---
       >
       > It is relevant. If the contract is with one registered company
       but that company is not the landowner because a different
       registered company is the landowner, is important.
       >
       > Looking at the Companies House records, Vapesdirect-UK Ltd is
       in the process of being liquidated. They owe HMRC over £2.3
       million and only have assets of around £15,000 of which are
       likely to realise £0.
       >
       > Anicres UK Ltd with net assets of £96,000 is unlikely to be
       the landowner. So, there is no evidence that the contract shown
       is either valid or flows from the landowner.
       >
       > I will make an amendment to the WS to cover this fact. Once
       that has been done, please review it, change any necessary
       details such as the claim number and your name and address where
       applicable plus any reference to dates and then type your name
       for the signature, date it and then save it in PDF format.
       >
       > In which county court is the hearing supposed to be?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Interesting! I did not go as far as checking their accounts to
       see the above. The hearing will be at Uxbridge County Court. I
       will await your amendment before reviewing the WS.
       Thanks again.
       #Post#: 36928--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 15, 2024, 10:26 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       OK, I have edited the WS above and you only need to edit the
       information I do not have into it and sign it. Create a simple
       cover sheet with the same headers as the WS simply listing the
       contents. List of exhibits (should only be the three
       transcripts) and WS.
       So, make sure that you have reread it and understand it. You
       will have 5 PDF documents:
       1. Cover sheet
       2. Akande transcript
       3. Chan transcript
       4. Other judgments
       5. Witness Statement
       Those 5 pdfs are attached to an email which is sent to the
       Uxbridge court at countycourtuxbridge@justice.gov.uk and also to
       Gladstones. Both addressees in the "To" section. Also CC in
       yourself so that you have proof of having emailed it.
       The subject of the email should be "Hounslow Enforcement Ltd v
       [your name] [claim number]". In the body of the email simply
       state "Please find attached the Defendants Witness Statement
       bundle for claim number [claim number] Hounslow Enforcement Ltd
       v [your name]".
       Please try to make sure that the formatting you use int he WS is
       as close to as shown above. Ideally, use a san-serif font such
       as Helvetica with at least 1.5 line spacing and decent margins.
       Every page must have a page number on it.
       If the resultant PDFs combined are larger than 25Mb then you can
       put them through a free online PDF "files size reducer" such as
       this one which will reduce the file size by at least 50% or
       more:
       Compress PDF
  HTML https://smallpdf.com/compress-pdf?mu=b5Vg&utm_campaign=20932796081&utm_source=google&utm_medium=cpc&gad_source=1&gbraid=0AAAAAoxWdI4TSdye_lbahz-qpq-5R9iAM&gclid=Cj0KCQjwi5q3BhCiARIsAJCfuZk_n-R7i7oCtntiJUciNSG6cR44-5Mzr8OP2Z1vPspVP7dqlLSh-KoaAvoBEALw_wcB
       #Post#: 36930--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 15, 2024, 11:26 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       If it's not too late... here is a link to an editable Word
       format version of the document:
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/ikzbcl4eslmnxmukoyi9g/WS.docx?rlkey=17jlcl6zy2dhrbplwy12pko0c&st=8b6wccb1&dl=0
       And if you're an Apple Mac user, here is a link to an editable
       Pages version:
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/7s40br3o1lfwksf66dz70/WS.pages?rlkey=79lp1h6rap9jq816zjf68a5w9&st=0su552md&dl=0
       #Post#: 36940--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: bz.08
       Date: September 15, 2024, 12:30 pm
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       --- Quote from: b789 link ---
       >
       > If it's not too late... here is a link to an editable Word
       format version of the document:
       >
       >
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/ikzbcl4eslmnxmukoyi9g/WS.docx?rlkey=17jlcl6zy2dhrbplwy12pko0c&st=8b6wccb1&dl=0
       >
       > And if you're an Apple Mac user, here is a link to an editable
       Pages version:
       >
       >
  HTML https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/7s40br3o1lfwksf66dz70/WS.pages?rlkey=79lp1h6rap9jq816zjf68a5w9&st=0su552md&dl=0
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Thanks a lot - I have until tomorrow afternoon but I will submit
       this tonight as per your instructions above.
       #Post#: 36941--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 15, 2024, 12:34 pm
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       If you have deadline of 4pm tomorrow, I'd leave it to the last
       minute. If you can, email it at 3:30pm.
       #Post#: 37287--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: bz.08
       Date: September 18, 2024, 3:56 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       --- Quote from: b789 link ---
       >
       > If you have deadline of 4pm tomorrow, I'd leave it to the last
       minute. If you can, email it at 3:30pm.
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       I sent it at 3:30pm sharp as you advised above.
       The court replied an hour later asking me to submit the
       documents physically as they collectively exceeded the 50 page
       limit (I think the total I submitted was 52 pages or so). I just
       reduced the font size slightly on the WS and this got it under
       50 pages then resent to them.
       Is there a typical timeline in terms of the court making a
       decision on striking cases out before it gets to the court date?
       Thanks again for all your help.
       #Post#: 37316--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Received two PCNs from April 2023 with legal and court fees
       on top but this is the first time I am hearing about thi
   DIR By: b789
       Date: September 18, 2024, 6:21 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       The limit is 25 pages/50 sides. As long as they have accepted
       the bundle and you received an auto response email from the CNBC
       when you sent it, that is all done.
       There is no timeline. The case management judge will look at the
       bundles and either order something, such as the request in the
       WS for the Claimant to provide answers to all the questions
       asked that have not been answered as required by CPR 16.4 or may
       simply throw the case out or require everyone to attend the
       hearing and face the consequences of their actions. How long is
       a piece of string?
       If it is chucked out before a hearing, it won't be a surprise as
       Gladstones have a habit of irritating judges with their bulk
       litigation failures. We'll see.
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