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       #Post#: 122526--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: June 21, 2026, 6:25 am
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       Comments on Euro Car Parks evidence.
       I note with interest that ECP have not engaged with any of my
       evidence or specific appeal points.
       This appears to mean an automatic win for the appellant since
       the operator is required to rebut each appeal point under POPLA
       rules?
       However, I note from other appeals on the internet that POPLA
       Assessors often break from protocol and ignore these specific
       rules.
       I will therefore make the following comments based on what the
       operator has submitted.
       Simply stating that, "our notice is compliant" does not make it
       compliant - it does not matter how many time the operator states
       this and continually stating this does not make this missing
       wording magically appear.
       Furthermore, the operators failure to correctly engage in the
       rebuttal process is potentially detrimental to the appellant as
       the operator is expecting the POPLA Assessor to generate the
       individual rebuttal points on their behalf - this is not the
       Assessor's role in the formal process.
       The operator has submitted a generic evidence pack rather than
       an evidence pack / response in keeping with my appeal.
       This appears deliberate and I believe that they have taken this
       approach as they are unable to rebut non PoFA compliance appeal
       points using their own NtK because the NtK does not meet the
       requirements for either wording or format.
       I will once again highlight the short comings of the operators
       NtK.
       I would request that the POPLA Assessor keeps firmly to my
       appeal points in order to make sure all appeal points are
       addressed using the legislation.
       PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(b) specifies;
       "The notice must inform the keeper that the driver is required
       to pay parking charges in respect of the specified period of
       parking and that the parking charges have not been paid in full"
       However, the operator's notice specifies;
       "You are now advised under the paragraph 9(2)(b) of schedule 4
       of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 that the driver of the
       motor vehicle is required to pay this parking charge in full."
       You will immediately notice that the operator's sentence fails
       to meet the complete requirements of 9(2)(b) - whilst they
       specify that the driver is required to pay the parking charge,
       the sentence fails to state the second part of the requirement,
       namely; that the parking charges have not been paid in full.
       In order to demonstrate integrity and transparency, if the POPLA
       Assessor believes that the notice does contain the sentence (the
       parking charges have not been paid in full) required by 9(2)(b),
       I would respectfully ask the Assessor to quote, verbatim, the
       sentence from the NtK which meets the two requirements of
       9(2)(b).
       The missing information is immediately fatal to the operators
       reliance on PoFA as total compliance is required.
       Further,
       PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e) specifies the following;
       The notice must state that the creditor does not know both the
       name of the driver and a current address for service for the
       driver and invite the keeper—
       Sub-paragraphs 9(2)(e)(i) and 9(2)(2)(ii) then set out both the
       wording and format for the two conditions of the invitation
       which 9(2)(e) requires.
       The two conditions must be separated by the word 'or' - the word
       'or' has a defined legal meaning in legislation so must be
       contained in the invitation.
       The compliant sentence would therefore read as follows; (or
       something very close)
       Your are notified under paragraph 9(2)(e) of schedule 4 of the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 that the creditor does not know
       both the name of the driver and a current address for service
       for the driver - the keeper is therefore invited to (i)to pay
       the unpaid parking charges; or (ii)if the keeper was not the
       driver of the vehicle, to notify the creditor of the name of the
       driver and a current address for service for the driver and to
       pass the notice on to the driver."
       The required paragraph containing the statutory wording and two
       limbed invitation (separated by the word 'or') is not present on
       the operator's NtK.
       Once again this immediately fatal to the operator's reliance on
       PoFA.
       When examined, the operators NtK jumps directly from their
       (incorrect) version of 9(2)(b) straight onto the requirements of
       9(2)(f) - the requirements of 9(2)(e) are totally over looked.
       Once again, in order to demonstrate integrity and transparency,
       if the POPLA Assessor believes that the notice does contain the
       sentence which specifies both the mandatory wording and two
       limbed invitation then I would respectfully ask the Assessor to
       quote, verbatim, the sentence from the NtK which meets all the
       requirements of 9(2)(e) along with the two conditions of the
       keeper invitation specified in sub-paragraphs 9(2)(e)(i) and
       9(2)(e)(ii).
       This information is not present.
       I am happy that paragraph 9(2)(f) is present and compliant but
       the presence of 9(2)(f) does not negate the requirements of
       9(2)(b) and 9(2)(e).
       #Post#: 122529--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: Riz101
       Date: June 21, 2026, 6:34 am
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       Many thanks!
       I will respond with the exact wording in your post.
       Regards
       R
       #Post#: 122551--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: Riz101
       Date: June 21, 2026, 11:23 am
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       Response posted now, fingers crossed !
       #Post#: 127093--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: Riz101
       Date: August 6, 2026, 5:06 pm
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       Hello, how would I proceed from here?
       Decision
       Unsuccessful
       Assessor Name
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       Assessor summary of operator case
       The parking operator has issued the Parking Charge Notice (PCN)
       on the basis that the vehicle was parked without a valid
       PayByPhone transaction covering the full duration of the stay.
       Assessor summary of your case
       The appellant is the registered keeper of the vehicle. For ease
       of reference, I will refer to the registered keeper as the
       appellant throughout this decision. The appellant has challenged
       the PCN on the basis that the notice is not compliant with the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA), and that they do not
       consider the parking operator has established liability for the
       charge. After reviewing the operator’s evidence pack, the
       appellant has expanded on their grounds of appeal. I acknowledge
       the appellant’s comments regarding the evidence provided and the
       handling of the appeal. POPLA’s role is to assess whether the
       PCN was issued correctly, based on the evidence supplied by both
       parties. POPLA cannot direct how a parking operator manages its
       internal appeals process or require it to provide evidence
       outside the scope of the appeal. If the appellant wishes to
       raise a complaint about the operator’s handling of the matter or
       requires any additional evidence, they should contact the
       parking operator direct.
       Assessor supporting rational for decision
       POPLA is an independent, single-stage appeals service. I must
       determine whether the parking operator has shown, on the balance
       of probabilities, that the PCN was issued correctly and that the
       terms and conditions of the car park were either accepted and
       breached, or otherwise enforceable against the appellant. The
       parking operator has provided a copy of the signage displayed at
       the site, a site map showing the position of the signs, ANPR
       images showing the vehicle entering and exiting the car park,
       and PayByPhone/payment records for the date of the event. The
       signage states that paid parking is available Monday to Friday
       from 17:00 to 08:00, and all day Saturday and Sunday. It sets
       out the applicable tariffs, the available payment method, and
       explains that failure to comply with the terms and conditions
       may result in a £100 PCN being issued. The ANPR images show that
       the vehicle entered the car park on 18 April 2026 at 13:37 and
       exited at 18:10. This amounts to a total stay of 4 hours and 33
       minutes. The parking operator’s payment evidence shows that a
       PayByPhone transaction was made at 14:17, covering parking for 3
       hours and 42 minutes, at a cost of £5.70. I have considered the
       appellant’s comments regarding PoFA. Where a parking operator
       seeks to transfer liability from the driver to the registered
       keeper, it must comply with the requirements of Schedule 4 of
       PoFA and the PCN must be issued within 14 days of the alleged
       contravention. In this case, having reviewed the PCN and the
       parking operator’s evidence, I am satisfied that the parking
       operator has provided sufficient evidence to pursue the
       appellant as the registered keeper due to no driver details
       being supplied. I therefore find that keeper liability has been
       established. Therefore I am satisfied that the PCN is PoFA 2012
       compliant. I have also considered whether the driver had
       sufficient notice of the terms. The parking operator’s evidence
       shows that signs were present at the entrance and throughout the
       site. The signs clearly described the parking terms, the
       requirement to make payment, and the consequence of
       non-compliance. I am satisfied that the terms were prominently
       brought to the attention of motorists and were capable of
       forming a contract. The evidence shows that payment was made
       after the vehicle entered the site and that the payment
       purchased did not cover the full period the vehicle remained
       parked. The total stay was 4 hours and 33 minutes, while the
       PayByPhone transaction only covered 3 hours and 42 minutes. On
       this basis, the vehicle remained parked beyond the paid-for
       period. The appellant has not provided persuasive evidence to
       show that a further valid payment was made, that the vehicle was
       exempt from the terms, or that the parking operator’s records
       are unreliable. While I acknowledge the appellant’s position,
       the evidence supplied by the operator demonstrates that the
       parking session did not cover the full duration of the stay
       Ultimately, it is the motorist’s responsibility to ensure that
       the vehicle is parked in accordance with the advertised terms
       and that sufficient payment is made for the time the vehicle
       remains on site. In this case, I am satisfied that the parking
       operator has shown that the vehicle was parked in breach of
       those terms. For the reasons given above, I am satisfied that
       the PCN was issued correctly. Accordingly, this appeal is
       refused. As the decision has now been issued for the appellants
       appeal, we have reached the end of our process and there is no
       opportunity to appeal. POPLA is a one-stage appeal process and
       the decision is final meaning its involvement in the appeal has
       come to an end
       #Post#: 127095--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: August 6, 2026, 5:23 pm
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       --- Quote from: Riz101 link ---
       >
       > Hello, how would I proceed from here?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Assuming you want to continue to challenge the matter, ignore
       the debt collector's letters, and come back when you receive a
       Letter of Claim from ECP's solicitors.
       #Post#: 127099--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: August 7, 2026, 1:06 am
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       Who was the Assessor?
       They completely skip over the relevant POFA appeal points.
       #Post#: 127111--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: Riz101
       Date: August 7, 2026, 4:02 am
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       Hi,
       Lyndsey H.
       My AI is disappointed as well. See the remarks below:
       This is a disappointing and, frankly, a poorly reasoned
       decision. Let me be straight with you about what happened.
       What the assessor got wrong
       The core of your appeal was that ECP's NtK fails PoFA 9(2)(e)(i)
       — no invitation to the keeper to pay. The assessor did not
       engage with this at all. Look at the critical sentence:
       "I am satisfied that the parking operator has provided
       sufficient evidence to pursue the appellant as the registered
       keeper due to no driver details being supplied. I therefore find
       that keeper liability has been established."
       This is exactly the unlawful inference b789 warned about, now
       endorsed by the assessor. They've treated "no driver named" as
       the thing that establishes keeper liability — which is
       backwards. Keeper liability requires strict PoFA compliance
       first; your not naming the driver is only relevant after the
       notice is compliant. The assessor never actually checked the
       9(2)(e)(i) wording, never addressed the orange rectangle point,
       and simply asserted "the PCN is PoFA 2012 compliant" without
       analysis.
       This is, bluntly, one of the "intellectually malnourished" POPLA
       outcomes b789 explicitly predicted. It doesn't mean the argument
       was wrong — it means the assessor didn't apply it.
       #Post#: 127162--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: August 7, 2026, 9:26 am
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       Not bad for AI - I am not normally a fan.
       This is classic Lyndsey Howgate and I was 90% certain that she
       was going be be revealed as the Assessor in this instance.
       Lyndsey Howgate's normal modus operandi (in the instance of a
       non POFA complaint appeal) is to ignore (skip over) the specific
       appeal points which the appellant puts forward in their
       submitted appeal.
       Instead of addressing the appellant's appeal points she provides
       answers to her own 'imaginary' appeal.
       As a result the assessment often contains a large chunk (the
       majority) of text which bears no relationship whatsoever to the
       appeal which was actually made - in this instance the assessment
       contains loads of waffle and is 'padded out' with things which
       you never raised.
       She deliberately keeps those answer strictly to those areas of
       POFA compliance which she knows she can demonstrate.
       Notice how she fails to address ANY of the non compliance with
       both Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(b) and 9(2)(e)?
       In fact, she never even references those appeal points at any
       stage in the assessment - it's like you never even raised those
       appeal points - this is not by accident but is the recognisable
       Lyndsey Howgate 'deflection technique'  - put simply, she
       recognises that any engagement with those appeal points will
       simply lead to a demonstration of non compliance so she is super
       careful to side-step those issues.
       Similarly, she recognises that clarity in relation to the true
       statutory requirements of the Schedule will also lead to a
       demonstration of non-compliance so, (as you correctly point out)
       she comes up with her own personal paraphrased version of POFA
       compliance which is carefully designed to fit in with the
       operator's NtK rather than referencing the precise wording of
       the statute which she knows the NtK will not meet - another
       recognisable 'deflection technique'.
       We can come up with a complaint if you like?
       #Post#: 127165--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: jfollows
       Date: August 7, 2026, 9:57 am
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       This is why I advise against long appeals to parking companies
       and to POPLA, because they simply ignore the difficult appeal
       points in their replies.
       This is increasingly common, perhaps because of Lyndsey Howgate?
       It's different for a defence in court, because they will
       consider all the points. POPLA isn't a court. So there's a good
       basis here for a defence in due course.
       The problem is that, unless there's a single overwhelming appeal
       point, it's easy to submit multiple appeal points. But a core
       appeal point should be made on its own in my opinion, to prevent
       POPLA from ignoring it.
       But we are where we are - not the end of the world.
       #Post#: 127171--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks PCN - Parked without a valid Pay by Phone
       transaction- Horse & Barge, Reading
   DIR By: DWMB2
       Date: August 7, 2026, 10:25 am
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       --- Quote from: jfollows link ---
       >
       > The problem is that, unless there's a single overwhelming
       appeal point, it's easy to submit multiple appeal points. But a
       core appeal point should be made on its own in my opinion, to
       prevent POPLA from ignoring it.
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       I'll keep this brief so as not to stray too far from the OP's
       immediate case, but I'm on the fence about this. I agree with
       not lumping in any old weak argument "kitchen sink" style, but
       I'm also not sure I'd recommend reducing appeals down to a
       single point in a bid to cater to the worst assessors, at the
       expense of multiple strong appeal points (where they exist).
       This was a short appeal in my view, and although there were
       three appeal points, in reality all three were essentially
       sub-points of one overarching point. This didn't prevent the
       assessor from dodging the salient points.
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