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       Re: Euro Car Parks_ Overstayed max time_M&S
       foodhall_Beckenham
   DIR By: Needadvice
       Date: June 15, 2026, 9:43 am
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       Hello,
       Update on my POPLA appeal.
       I have now received the operator's evidence pack from Euro Car
       Parks in response to my POPLA appeal. POPLA has given me 7 days
       to provide comments on the evidence before the appeal is
       assessed.
       I have attached/uploaded the full evidence pack and would be
       very grateful if the forum advisers could review it and suggest
       the strongest points for my POPLA comments, as I have limited
       time to respond.
       The PDF file is available through the Dropbox here
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       Having reviewed the evidence myself, my initial observations are
       as follows:
       1. Euro Car Parks appears to rely on generic statements and
       standard template responses rather than addressing all of the
       specific points raised in my appeal.
       2. In relation to signage, they have provided photographs of
       signs located in other parts of the car park, but they have not
       addressed my specific point regarding the area where my vehicle
       was parked and where I maintain there is no visible signage.
       3. They continue to rely on ANPR entry and exit times but have
       not addressed my point that these times do not establish the
       actual parking period. The evidence does not identify when the
       vehicle was parked in a bay, only when it entered and exited the
       site.
       4. They have not properly addressed the issue of grace periods
       and the distinction between time spent driving around looking
       for a space, time spent parked, and time spent queuing to leave
       the site. This was a busy Bank Holiday period and there was
       congestion within the car park and at the exit. The ANPR times
       include these periods, which are not the same as the actual
       period of parking.
       5. I do not believe they have fully addressed my concerns
       regarding compliance of the PCN.
       Before I submit my POPLA comments, I would be grateful for any
       advice on:
       • Which points are strongest to focus on;
       • Whether there are any weaknesses or omissions in the
       operator's evidence;
       • Whether the signage evidence provided is sufficient to rebut
       my appeal points;
       • Any specific wording I should use in my POPLA comments.
       I also converted all 38 pages of the pack from Europarks into
       images and uploaded them on IBB, here are the links:
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       #Post#: 121907--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks_ Overstayed max time_M&S
       foodhall_Beckenham
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: June 16, 2026, 1:00 am
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       Could you post up the text of your appeal?
       Did you use the individual appeal point?
       #Post#: 122090--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks_ Overstayed max time_M&S
       foodhall_Beckenham
   DIR By: Needadvice
       Date: June 17, 2026, 6:55 am
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       --- Quote from: InterCity125 link ---
       >
       > Could you post up the text of your appeal?
       >
       > Did you use the individual appeal point?
       >
       --- End Quote ---
       Hello @ InterCity125,
       Apologies for the delay to revert. here is the text of my POPLA
       appeal as submitted:
       I am the registered keeper of the vehicle and I am appealing
       this Parking Charge Notice as keeper only, since the driver is
       not known to the operator. The driver has not been identified.
       I understand that, under POPLA rules, I must set out my appeal
       points and the operator must rebut them.
       APPEAL POINT ONE – Non-compliance with Protection of Freedoms
       Act 2012 Schedule 4 paragraph 9(2)(e), 9(2)(e)(i) and
       9(2)(e)(ii).
       The operator’s Notice to Keeper fails to comply with the
       mandatory wording and requirements of PoFA Schedule 4 paragraph
       9(2)(e).
       In particular, the NtK does not contain the mandatory wording:
       “the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a
       current address for service for the driver”.
       Paragraph 9(2)(e), 9(2)(e)(i) and 9(2)(e)(ii) sets out the
       following;
       Paragraph 9(2)(e) requires that the notice must:
       •
       driver and a current address for service for the driver and
       invite the keeper -
       (i) to pay the unpaid parking charges; or
       (ii) if the keeper was not the driver, to notify the creditor of
       the name and current service address of the driver and to pass
       the notice to the driver.
       An examination of the operator’s NtK reveals that the statutory
       wording is not present.
       I therefore ask the operator to specifically rebut this appeal
       point by supplying a copy of the relevant NtK, to the PoPLA
       Assessor, with an orange rectangle around the wording, "the
       creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current
       address for service for the driver" - for total clarity, please
       do not include any other notations on the provided NtK - just
       the orange rectangle.
       APPEAL POINT TWO – That, subsequent to the statutory wording
       required by 9(2)(e), the operator’s NtK does not set out the
       mandatory two-limbed invitation to the keeper to either pay the
       unpaid
       parking charges or nominate another driver.
       An examination of the legislation surrounding 9(2)(e) reveals
       that compliance is achieved by the setting out of the statutory
       wording immediately followed by a two limbed 'invitation to the
       keeper' to either 'pay the unpaid parking charges' or 'nominate
       another driver'.
       Once again here, Paragraph 9(2)(e) requires that the notice
       must:
       •
       driver and a current address for service for the driver AND
       invite the keeper -
       (i) to pay the unpaid parking charges; or
       (ii) if the keeper was not the driver, to notify the creditor of
       the name and current service address of the driver and to pass
       the notice to the driver.
       An examination of the operator’s NtK reveals that the NtK fails
       to provide the required two-limbed invitation to the keeper.
       Both above conditions must be satisfied in order for the
       operator to rely on PoFA and transfer liability from the driver
       to the keeper. Once again, I ask the operator to specifically
       rebut this appeal point by supplying a copy of the NtK which
       clearly sets out, in an orange rectangle, the two-limbed legal
       invitation which the legislation requires in order to be
       compliant.
       APPEAL POINT THREE - That, in accordance with 9(2)(e) and
       subsequently 9(2)(e)(i), the NtK must 'invite the keeper to pay
       the unpaid parking charges'.
       An examination of the operators NtK reveals that there is no
       clear invitation to the keeper to pay the unpaid parking
       charges, as specifically required by paragraph 9(2)(e)(i).
       Once again, I ask the operator to prove that the NtK complies
       with this requirement - please demonstrate the 'invitation to
       the keeper to pay the unpaid charges'. Please note that
       terminology such as “notified” or “advised” is not equivalent to
       the statutory requirement of an “invitation to the keeper” under
       paragraph 9(2)(e). The wording used in the legislation is
       specific and must be properly reflected in the Notice to Keeper.
       Please also note that, the parking operator is required to meet
       ‘all applicable conditions' under Schedule 4 in order to hold
       the keeper liable for the unpaid charges.
       The operator’s references to keeper liability and paragraph
       9(2)(f) do not remove the separate requirement to fully comply
       with paragraph 9(2)(e).
       As the NtK does not comply with the mandatory requirements of
       PoFA, liability cannot be transferred from driver to keeper.
       I therefore put the operator to strict proof of full PoFA
       compliance and ask the operator to specifically rebut these
       appeal points by identifying where the mandatory wording appears
       on the NtK.
       APPEAL POINT FOUR – No evidence of the required period of actual
       parking.
       The NtK relies solely on ANPR images showing entry and exit
       times. These do not establish the actual period of parking as
       required by PoFA Schedule 4 paragraph 9(2)(a).
       ANPR captures vehicle movements entering and exiting the site,
       rather than the actual period during which the vehicle was
       parked.
       APPEAL POINT FIVE – Failure to account for non-parking time /
       grace periods.
       The recorded duration includes time spent:
       • locating a parking space in a busy car park
       • queuing to exit due to congestion, traffic lights and the
       one-way system
       This is not parking time and should not form part of any alleged
       parking period. The recorded time includes time spent entering
       the site, locating a parking space, manoeuvring, and exiting the
       site, including delays caused by congestion and traffic lights
       immediately outside the car park exit on what was a particularly
       busy bank holiday period.
       APPEAL POINT SIX – Inadequate signage
       There is inadequate signage in the small bay area near the exit
       of the car park where no visible terms and conditions signage is
       present.
       The terms and conditions were not adequately brought to the
       attention of drivers using this specific area of the car park
       and therefore no contract could have been formed.
       APPEAL POINT SEVEN – No evidence of landowner authority
       The operator is put to strict proof that it has the necessary
       landowner authority to issue and enforce parking charges at this
       site.
       The operator is required to produce an unredacted
       contemporaneous contract showing authority to issue parking
       charges and pursue them to recovery.
       In the absence of such evidence, the operator has failed to
       demonstrate compliance with the requirements of Schedule 4 of
       the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. In light of all the above,
       I request that the charge be cancelled.
       #Post#: 122169--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks_ Overstayed max time_M&S
       foodhall_Beckenham
   DIR By: InterCity125
       Date: June 18, 2026, 1:56 am
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       Comments on Euro Car Parks evidence.
       I note with interest that ECP have not engaged with any of my
       evidence or specific appeal points.
       This appears to mean an automatic win for the appellant since
       the operator is required to rebut each appeal point under POPLA
       rules?
       However, I note from other appeals on the internet that POPLA
       Assessors often break from protocol and ignore these specific
       rules.
       I will therefore make the following comments based on what the
       operator has submitted.
       The operator has submitted a generic evidence pack rather than
       an evidence pack / response in keeping with my appeal.
       This appears deliberate and I believe that they have taken this
       approach as they are unable to rebut non PoFA compliance appeal
       points using their own NtK because the NtK does not meet the
       requirements for either wording or format.
       I will once again highlight the short comings of the operators
       NtK.
       I would request that the POPLA Assessor keeps firmly to my
       appeal points in order to make sure all appeal points are
       addressed using the legislation.
       PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(b) specifies;
       "The notice must inform the keeper that the driver is required
       to pay parking charges in respect of the specified period of
       parking and that the parking charges have not been paid in full"
       However, the operator's notice specifies;
       "You are now advised under the paragraph 9(2)(b) of schedule 4
       of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 that the driver of the
       motor vehicle is required to pay this parking charge in full."
       You will immediately notice that the operator's sentence fails
       to meet the complete requirements of 9(2)(b) - whilst they
       specify that the driver is required to pay the parking charge,
       the sentence fails to state the second part of the requirement,
       namely; that the parking charges have not been paid in full.
       In order to demonstrate integrity and transparency, if the POPLA
       Assessor believes that the notice does contain the sentence (the
       parking charges have not been paid in full) required by 9(2)(b),
       I would respectfully ask the Assessor to quote, verbatim, the
       sentence from the NtK which meets the two requirements of
       9(2)(b).
       The missing information is immediately fatal to the operators
       reliance on PoFA as total compliance is required.
       Further,
       PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e) specifies the following;
       The notice must state that the creditor does not know both the
       name of the driver and a current address for service for the
       driver and invite the keeper—
       Sub-paragraphs 9(2)(e)(i) and 9(2)(2)(ii) then set out both the
       wording and format for the two conditions of the invitation
       which 9(2)(e) requires.
       The two conditions must be separated by the word 'or' - the word
       'or' has a defined legal meaning in legislation so must be
       contained in the invitation.
       The compliant sentence would therefore read as follows; (or
       something very close)
       Your are notified under paragraph 9(2)(e) of schedule 4 of the
       Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 that the creditor does not know
       both the name of the driver and a current address for service
       for the driver - the keeper is therefore invited to (i)to pay
       the unpaid parking charges; or (ii)if the keeper was not the
       driver of the vehicle, to notify the creditor of the name of the
       driver and a current address for service for the driver and to
       pass the notice on to the driver."
       The required paragraph containing the statutory wording and two
       limbed invitation (separated by the word 'or') is not present on
       the operator's NtK.
       Once again this immediately fatal to the operator's reliance on
       PoFA.
       When examined, the operators NtK jumps directly from their
       (incorrect) version of 9(2)(b) straight onto the requirements of
       9(2)(f) - the requirements of 9(2)(e) are totally over looked.
       Once again, in order to demonstrate integrity and transparency,
       if the POPLA Assessor believes that the notice does contain the
       sentence which specifies both the mandatory wording and two
       limbed invitation then I would respectfully ask the Assessor to
       quote, verbatim, the sentence from the NtK which meets all the
       requirements of 9(2)(e) along with the two conditions of the
       keeper invitation specified in sub-paragraphs 9(2)(e)(i) and
       9(2)(e)(ii).
       This information is not present.
       I am happy that paragraph 9(2)(f) is present and compliant but
       the presence of 9(2)(f) does not negate the requirements of
       9(2)(b) and 9(2)(e).
       You could then add your further points on signage etc.
       #Post#: 122178--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks_ Overstayed max time_M&S
       foodhall_Beckenham
   DIR By: Needadvice
       Date: June 18, 2026, 4:29 am
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       Thank you very much!
       #Post#: 126821--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Euro Car Parks_ Overstayed max time_M&S
       foodhall_Beckenham
   DIR By: Needadvice
       Date: August 4, 2026, 11:07 am
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       Hello [member=6750]InterCity125[/member], all,
       I wanted to follow up on my case. My POPLA appeal has just come
       back as unsuccessful, and I would appreciate some advice on the
       next steps. I have copied the full decision below for reference.
       One point I am particularly unsure about is the PoFA issue. In
       my original appeal, I specifically requested that POPLA address
       how the PCN complied with the individual requirements of
       Schedule 4, paragraph 9, including the relevant statutory
       wording and information required. However, the assessor’s
       response simply states that the notice “does meet the
       requirements” without explaining any details.
       The decision also appears to rely heavily on the ANPR entry and
       exit times as evidence of the parking period.
       Are there any points in the POPLA reasoning that stand out as
       potentially challengeable? Is there any realistic route to
       request further clarification regarding the PoFA compliance
       assessment, or is the matter effectively closed at this stage?
       Any advice on the best next steps would be greatly appreciated.
       Thank you.
       
       Here is the full, unedited text of the assessor response with
       rationale:
       The operator has issued the Parking Charge Notice (PCN) due to
       overstaying the maximum time period allowed.
       Assessor summary of your case
       The appellant has raised the following points from their grounds
       of appeal. For the purposes of my decision, I have summarised
       these below. • Non-compliance with Protection of Freedoms Act
       2012 Schedule 4. • ANPR images showing entry and exit times and
       do not establish the actual period of parking. • Failure to
       account for non-parking time / grace periods. • There is
       inadequate signage in the small bay area near the exit of the
       car park where no visible terms and conditions signage is
       present. • No evidence of landowner authority. On reviewing the
       case file, the appellant maintains their grounds of appeal. In
       support of their appeal, the appellant provided a copy of the
       parking charge and a photos of the bays and car park.
       Assessor supporting rational for decision
       When assessing an appeal POPLA considers if the operator has
       issued the parking charge notice correctly and if the driver has
       complied with the terms and conditions for the use of the car
       park displayed on the signs located within the car park. When
       parking on a private car park, the driver forms a parking
       contract with the parking operator. The terms and conditions of
       this contract are displayed on the signage located throughout
       the car park. Therefore, the driver is responsible for seeking
       out these signs, reviewing the displayed terms and conditions
       and complying with these. The signs on this site confirm welcome
       to M&S, please follow the conditions below to avoid parking
       charges while you shop with us. Maximum stay 90 minutes. Failure
       to comply with the above will result in the issue of a £85
       parking charge notice. The operator has provided photographic
       evidence the vehicle remained on site for 1 hour 43 minutes.
       POPLA is an evidence-based service, and I can only base my
       decision on the evidence presented. The appellant states that
       there is non-compliance with Protection of Freedoms Act 2012
       Schedule 4. I can confirm that the notice sent has been reviewed
       against section Schedule 4 paragraph 9 of the Protection of
       Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012 and it does meet the requirements. The
       appellant states that ANPR images showing entry and exit times
       and do not establish the actual period of parking. Section 2.19
       (a) of the Single Code of Practice explains that parking is when
       a vehicle enters and remains within a controlled site. Using
       ANPR images to show how long a vehicle was within a site is
       sufficient to prove if the terms and conditions of the parking
       contract have been breached. The appellant states that there has
       been a failure to account for non-parking time / grace periods.
       Section 5.2 of the Single Code of Practice requires a parking
       operator to allow a grace period in addition to the parking
       period. The Code advises that grace periods do not apply other
       than where a driver has parked in compliance with the terms and
       conditions of the area, nor is a grace period a free period of
       parking. In this case, the motorist overstayed the maximum time
       period by 13 minutes, meaning that the 10 minute grace period
       was also exceeded. The appellant states that there is inadequate
       signage in the small bay area near the exit of the car park
       where no visible terms and conditions signage is present.
       Section 3.1.3 of the Single Code of Practice contains the
       requirements for signs displaying the terms and conditions. The
       signs must be placed throughout the site, so that drivers have
       the opportunity to read them when parking or leaving their
       vehicle. The terms and conditions must be clear and unambiguous,
       using a font and contrast that is be conspicuous and legible. In
       this case the operator's evidence clearly demonstrates that
       there is sufficient signage in situ throughout the car park.
       Ultimately it is the driver’s responsibility to seek the
       signage, review the displayed terms and conditions and comply
       with them. The appellant said that there is no evidence of
       landowner authority. Section 14.1 of the Code states that where
       controlled land is being managed on behalf of a landowner,
       written confirmation must be obtained before a parking charge
       can be issued. The evidence provided in relation to this appeal
       meets the criteria POPLA requires, and therefore I am satisfied
       that the operator has sufficient authority at the site on the
       date of the parking event. POPLA’s role is to assess if the
       operator has issued the PCN in accordance with the conditions of
       the contract. As the terms and conditions of the car park have
       not been met, I conclude that the operator has issued the PCN
       correctly, and the appeal is refused.
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