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#Post#: 255--------------------------------------------------
Brotherhood of Steel
By: Victoreno Date: September 30, 2012, 8:46 am
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BoS applications will be posted here. Reply to this topic; do
not make a new thread!
Format:
[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name:
Steam ID:
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?
How long have you been SeriousRoleplaying?
How long have you been with the server/community?
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once?
Have you donated?
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30 lines
+)
Have you been a BoS before?
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do?
Backstory of your character: (100 words +)
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Meeh Date: March 9, 2013, 1:08 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: Renegade
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:12328812
Your white list can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Yes, I do.
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? 5 years
How long have you been with the server/community? Before it even
started.
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once? Never.
Have you donated? 12 pounds
Give us an Role play example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30
lines +)
-The wall was taking heavy damage as the NCR was attempting to
shoot the BoS Knight (I do not know if I will be Paladin or
Knight, therefore I will only go with Knight).
-Star notices how the weak cover slowly crumbles due to the
bullets passing through it. As the adrenaline was rushing up
into the Knight, Star had little choice.
It was a little problem as he was used to think quickly when it
was all about solving technical problems. The quickest one with
the best answer would always be most appreciated in the bunkers.
-A bullet passed through the cover, almost hitting the Knight.
It was time...
-Star quickly moved outside the cover and saw the environment.
Adrenaline almost slowed time, causing him to carefully pick the
right targets. His hands were shaking, but it was no problem as
he was getting use to it. -It was now, it was a life and death
situation. Four soldiers was not that much as he has been forced
to deal with many more in his combat history.
-Four soldiers, one standing on the roof of the gas station, two
on the left flank, last on the right...
Tactics? There was none, he attempted to charge forward towards
the lone soldier firing at him. It was as if he was a beast,
trying to catch a little lamb. Even though he looked big and
slow, enough time with the power armour can make a man almost
have the same flexibility like any other man, almost...
-While sprinting towards the soldier, Star was shooting a few
shots around the man, in attempt to get the man staggered.
-He picked his choice correctly, apparently the soldier that he
was rushing towards on was only a mere private. Watching how the
large demonic plate armour was getting closer and closer to the
soldier, it almost caused him to panic. He shot and shot, but
his bullets missed more and more and soon the magazine was
empty.
-Many bullets hit Star, although none of them penetrated through
the plate. It was as if he was a death claw. Except that it was
just a human underneath the large plate. What was scary was not
that he was hard to kill...
It's that it was a human, underneath a large plate armour that
was hard to kill. The scariest part was that he was swift and
not clumsy.
-100KG of pure muscle and some fat including the heavy power
armour that Star was trained to wear, crushed the poor private
as Star charged towards the poor man, and tackled him down.
-Bones were heard getting crushed and the private was knocked
out. Star turned to the side, facing the right flank and aimed
with his lazor rifle as the other two NCR shot at him. Bullets
kept trying to pass through the thick plate but the plate
protested. It was as if nothing would go through unless it was
allowed.
-Star aimed at one of the men and pulled the trigger. A small
sound came out and the gun fell back a little bit. When he was
in a fight, it was as if a demon rose up from his personality.
He did not say it, but god he enjoyed killing. It felt good to
feel pain and to deliver pain. A monster, he was. He was hiding
it so well...
-The other one quickly noticed that his friends left side part
of the stomach had gotten melted away. The NCR soldier quickly
fell down to the ground, screaming like mad. It almost felt as
if the whole wasteland could hear his scream for desperation.
His friend on the other hand, began to run away with terror
corrupting his mind. It looked as if he did not care about his
surroundings anymore, his heart was beating so fast that you
almost could hear the bass of his heart, shaking the ground
nearby him.
-These men were just normal people, trying to get by. Star knew
they didn't deserve this, but he also knew that anyone who would
come in his way, who would try to destroy the Brotherhood's
interests, or try to harm the brotherhood itself, would face
death. No matter how weak or strong.
-Only one more to go... Star thought
OOC: Of course if this was real the enemy would try to counter
me as well however, I used environment RP. Since these are only
regular soldiers, they are pretty much f***ed. But as you have
seen, you now know that I do not only know how to RP, but how to
put life into it as well.
PainRP:
-Star, the last member of his squad had managed to flee the
battle between the NCR.
-He took the charge and was caught right in an ambush.
Apparently the NCR had equipped laser guns for just that
occasion. It was too good to be coincidence. How they managed to
wipe that squad in just a few moments was...
Frightening...
-Red blood poured of Star's right waist like a red river...
He managed to rip off a part of his metal around that area, so
that he could put his hand on the wound. There was no way now he
could fix it. The rest of his medical supplies went to his other
wounds. Half of his helm was gone and most of the metal on his
armour was just chunks now. The ventilation was almost not
working anymore and he tried to keep a low pulse to prevent the
blood's speed. Sweat mixed with blood.
-Star thought of killing himself, but what prevented it was his
foolishness, the one thing that kills a man. The hope to
survive. The hope that he ain't like any other man whom dies
that easily...
But being in the wrong place at the wrong time, can change it
all...
-One of his legs were broke, which forced him to walk like dogs
do, when they are crippled. They drag their legs.
-Whenever Star tried to put some weight on it, he growled in
pain. His face turned into ugly and he quickly pulled away the
weight from his broken leg.
-Star saw a cliff in front of him, thinking that it would be the
best choice to climb it, as it would give him an overview over
the area.
-He took big steps across the rocky terrain. Sometimes he would
have to remove parts of his chunks in order to be able to pull
himself up, on higher areas.
-Once he was up, he looked across the view for some signs or
anything useful.
Nothing...
-All he heard was a sniper shot, and he found himself lying on
the ground drowning in his own fucking blood. As it poured out
from his throat. The only thing he heard was his heart beating.
-Star was struggling like a mad man trying to learn his daughter
math. He did not want to die. The pain was indescribable and
every atom in his body stinged.
But all of a sudden, his vision blurred and his attempt to live
slowly faded...
The atoms did not protest anymore...
They just gave in and then...
He was dead.
Have you been a BoS before? Yes
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do? The goals
of the BoS, is to mainly recover technology and if they have to,
go to war for it. The BoS can even prioritize human life above
technology as well.
The BoS also live in bunkers around the wasteland hidden from
common eye.
One of the reasons that the BoS do not wish to share their
technology in which is beneficial for the wasteland, is because
they see the advanced technology not fit for the wastelanders.
Because they think that they are too ignorant and irresponsible.
The BoS are very cold with letting outsiders inside their
bunkers and bases. (Look above for the reason)
But they are not as cold as you might think, as the BoS does
not force anyone who doesn't want to be a scribe, knight or
paladin. Instead, they are free to leave.
They use a quite neo-knightly ranking system combined with an
advanced military background.
They are quite few, but strong and capable. Very, strong.
BoS survival ideas are for everyone who stays inside must
procreate. Which is why they are very strict with same-sex
relationships.
To gather technology and advance.
Back story of your character: (100 words +)
Star Hansols was born within the BoS, bunker not specified. He
grew up with his parents and life was good inside. They had
ventilation and good food.
Nothing to worry about.
His mother was a very good Paladin while his father was a very
good Scribe. They were capable and talented and many enjoyed
their company. However, Star did not. Since they had little time
for the boy as he was always told to become the best.
Sometimes, small quarrels between the two parents would show
up, as his mother wanted him to become a Paladin and his father
wanted him to become a Scribe. Unfortunately, Star tried to
become a Scribe.
During his age he has always been fashioned by the art of
technology. Which has resulted him to always try to be on top
during his lessons. Even though he failed multiple times, Star
kept going until the end where he found out that he wasn't
enlisted to become a scribe.
Despite his attempts, he was not accepted. It was still unknown
until this day what he is to become.
Others from his same age had gotten their ranks and posts, while
he remained to be without anything.
The knightly faction did not laugh at him though, instead they
looked down upon him and did not take him seriously despite his
struggles. His parents were at the point to abandon him, because
of the bad reputation he was giving them...
On the other side, Star's personality is very...
Admirable.
(personality time now)
He is a one of a kind, whenever he engages in a fight, he always
prioritizes orders before his own judgement. Making him very
loyal and easy-going whenever he has a task at hand.
When he is forced to use his own judgement, he would rather kill
himself and destroy his own armour, so that the enemy can not
retrieve it. If was a fight which he could not win, he would
instead take the time to kill himself and dispose of the
technology instead of taking down as many foes as possible.
Basically, he priorities technological recovery above orders and
orders above his own judgement. His last resort above his own
judgement. (In which means dispose of technology and himself)
If words were to be used to describe this man, it would be...
A man with dedication, ambition and filled with integrity and
brains.
A stereotypical BoS Knight. Well, it would be odd if he wasn't,
now would it?
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Altairp Date: March 11, 2013, 8:19 am
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name
Rorschachaltairp
Steam ID
Don't know
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?
Yes
How long have you been SeriousRoleplaying?
1 year
How long have you been with the server/community?
Some month (5-6)
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once?
Nope
Have you donated?
Yep,12 pounds.
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30 lines
+)
Fear RP
**BoS Squad is patrolling near an old bunker hit by a nuclear
bomb during the Great War.
BoS Paladin #1 says "Alright,the radiation level is low,we can
get inside the bunker and search
for some Pre-war tech,maybe we can find something interesting"
**BoS Squad enter the bunker
BoS Paladin #1 says "Scribes,go to the lower levels and find
something,we will stay here to
defend the front door"
BoS Scribe #1 says "You stay here?What we will do if there's
someone dangerous down there?"
BoS Paladin #2 says "Like a mutant?Those bunkers are safe,no
one ever lived here,by the way,if
you are in danger just defend yourself and shout,we will come
and help you"
BoS Scribes move to the lower levels
**After a while the Paladins hear a big scream coming from the
lower levels of the bunker
The Paladins run to the stairs leading into the under floor
**They come to bloody room,human guts are everywhere and one of
the Scribes bodies is on the floor torn in pieces.
BoS Paladin #3 says "Is that one... of the scribes?Oh my
god...what happened to him?"
BoS Paladin #2 takes off his helmet and puke
BoS Paladin #1 says "Soldiers,don't panic,let's go back to the
base to report this ****"
**A growl is heard in the dark
BoS Paladin #2 says "**** **** **** ****!"
BoS Paladin #1 says "Men!Ready your weapons!"
Strange mutant jumps on BoS Paladin #2
***Strange mutant rolls 70
***BoS Paladin rolls 41
Strange mutant succesfully jumps on Bos Paladin #2 face,then he
starts to eat it.
BoS Paladin #2 says "No!NO NOOARGH!"
BoS Paladin #3 says "****!****!****!I'm out of here!"
BoS Paladin #3 tries to run away
BoS Paladin #1 says "You're not going anywhere soldier!"
**BoS Paladin #1 is scared and he tries to shoot at the running
Paladin leg
***BoS Paladin #1 rolls 13
***BoS Paladin #3 rolls 12
BoS Paladin #3 is hit in the chest
BoS Paladin #1 says "Damn it!"
The strange mutant turns to BoS Paladin #1
BoS Paladin #1 backs off,but collides with a wall behind
him,he's in trap.
BoS Paladin #1 says "Well,this is the end,come on ****!"
BoS Paladin #1 shoots at the Strange mutant
The Strange mutant growl,then it jumps on the Paladin...
Pain RP
**Prisoner is tied on a bed in a dark room,maybe in some kind of
underground base,there's a scientist with him.
Prisoner wakes up
Prisoner says "Where...where am I?"
**A man with a white lab coat enters in the room
Prisoner says "Where am I?Who the hell are you??"
Doctor says "This is not important right now,doctor Smith please
inject the first FEV syringe.
Scientist takes a syringe on the table and inject it into the
vein of the prisoner's arm.
Prisoner says "ARRGH!WHAT IS THIS?IT BURNS!"
**Some strange bubbles begins to show on the prisoner arm,he is
slowly mutating into something.
Doctor says "Again,inject another syringe"
Scientist inject another syringe into one of the prisoner's
vein.
Prisoner says "AARRGH!PLEASE STOOP!GROOWLSTOP!AAAH!"
Doctor says "Good,he's starting to mutate,Smith,injec..."
Mutated prisoner destroy the ties,he stands up and he tries to
jump on the doctor
***Mutated prisoner rolls 76
***Doctor rolls 23
Mutated prisoner succesfully jumps on the doctor causing him to
fall on the ground
Mutated prisoner growls
Doctor says "Holy god please don..."
Mutated prisoner bites the Doctor on the neck
Doctor says "Aaarghh!"
**Doctor is torn in pieces by the Mutated prisoner
Combar RP
**BoS Paladin is walking on a road,going east.
**Super Mutant is walking on the same road,going west.
BoS Paladin sees the Super Mutant,he decide to shoot at the
enemy head.
***BoS Paladin rolls 10
***Super Mutant rolls 65
Bos Paladin miss the Super Mutant
Super Mutant shoots at the Paladin
***Super Mutant rolls 20
***Bos Paladin rolls 19
Bos Paladin is hit in the chest,no damage taken.
Bos Paladin shoots again.
***Bos Paladin rolls 54
***Super mutant rolls 53
Super Mutant is hit in the leg
Bos Paladin says "You're not going to win monster!"
Super Mutant laughs,then he rush towards the Paladin and he
tries to punch him
***Super Mutant rolls 12
***Bos Paladin rolls 40
Bos Paladin dodge the punch
Bos Paladin tries to punch the Supermutant in the stomach
***Bos Paladin rolls 30
***Super Mutant rolls 0
Super Mutant is hit in the stomach
Super Mutant tries to hit the Bos Paladin in the head
***Super Mutant rolls 50
***Bos Paladin rolls 20
Bos Paladin is hit in the head
Super Mutant laughs
Bos Paladin laughs
Super Mutant says "No one is going to win here"
Bos Paladin says "Yeah,you're right,hey,my name's Jacob"
Super Mutant says "I'm Marcus,mind if we travel together?"
Bos Paladin says "No,let's go"
Have you been a BoS before?
No
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do?
The BoS is a faction founded some weeks after the Great War,the
faction have two big divisions: the Original Brotherhood of
Steel and the Capital Wasteland BoS.
The Original BoS goals are to find,preserve and develop
technology,which they often put above human life since
technology is irreplaceable in the post-nuclear wastelands,lives
are not,instead the DC division is interested in helping the
wastelanders and in restoring the wasteland,placing human life
above tech.
Backstory of your character:
Luis was born in a small ranch in Washington,his father (Jones
Sera) was a Brotherhood of Steel Paladin who was locked out of
the faction base due the bunker lock down and his mother was a
travelling merchant,he never met her because she died giving him
birth.
After Luis birth his father decided to find refuge in a nearby
settlement,they lived there for a while in a small shack,Jones
provided him with everything,the best food,the best toys and the
best clothes,he loved his son even more than the Brotherhood.
5 years later Jones Ham radio received a message from the HQ:the
bunker was opened and every Brotherhood member would have to
return to report.
When Jones was preparing to return home a big group of raiders
attacked the settlement,while defending his house Luis father
got hit in the chest by a bullet,when the raiders retreated
Jones quickly took his son to the Brotherhood bunker and after
two days of non-stop walking he died after he entered his old
home.
Luis was then raised by Artur Ribben,his father best friend,and
the faction itself.
He was the best of the Initiates,he passed every VR test with
full marks and he soon became a Knight.
17 years later during a patrol mission he decided to return to
his old settlement to salute his old friend,he discovered the
burned ruins of his old home,the entire village was raided by
the nearby bandits,Luis decided to take revenge,he convinced his
squad members to attack the enemy camp and together they killed
everyone burning the camp to the ground.
After the attack they found a little cave where there were some
of the bandits slaves,the squad freed the prisoners and then
they returned to the bunker.
During the returning tip Luis knew Midea,one of the slaves,soon
they fell in love with each other.
In the bunker,the Elder refused to host the slaves,but
Luis,after many quarrels with his superiors,managed to get Midea
into the Brotherhood bunker.
A year later Midea gave birth to Luis's daughter Lucy.
At the age of 35 Luis became a Knight,while his daughter started
the training to become a Scribe the Elder decided to send Luis
on a mission in a nearby bunker near the city of Breetle to spy
the NCR forces in the area.
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Victoreno Date: March 12, 2013, 1:17 pm
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@Renegade:
Accepted.
Great roleplay examples, legit backstory. Pretty good
application in general.
@Altairp:
Denied.
Considering your experience this is not a too bad application
but Brotherhood of Steel is rather for very experienced players.
With a bit more time and ambition you will get a pro as well ;)
There are alot of other opportunities to roleplay on the server.
-
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Ganondorf Date: March 12, 2013, 3:22 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name:[ExGa] [D:F] Ganondorf
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:31625942
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?: Mhm, Yes.
How long have you been SeriousRoleplaying?: Around two years
(3404 gmod hours)
How long have you been with the server/community?: A week/Two
weeks.
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once?: Nope.
Have you donated?: Indeed, £8.
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30 lines
+)
Fear RP/Combat RP
**The metallic stench of blood wafts towards a small squad of
BoS, much to their discomfort**
**They look towards the source of the scent, the mutilated
remains of various bodies lay on the ground in a bloody heap**
BoS Paladin1: /me looks down at the bodies, flinching at the
sight. He then scowls into his radio "Aarhg.. discusting!"
BoS Paladin2: /me Mutters into her radio "Stay on the lookout
for any hostiles.."
BoS Paladin1: /me Nods, twisting his hips around as he raises
the Laser rifle at shoulder height, scanning for enemies.
BoS Scribe: "D-do we have t-to look around 'ere? I-it's rumored
to have mutants.."
BoS Paladin2: /me Begins to speak in a comical way "Oh no! The
scary mutants are gonna'eat us all! Run!"
BoS Paladin1: /me Chuckles, continuing to look around for any
sign of danger as they advance.
BoS Scribe: /me Mutters something inaudible, lowering his head
in shame.
**The un-mistakable roar of a super mutant echoes throughout the
landscape.
BoS Scribe: /me let's out a scared cry as he squeezes the
trigger on his gun in reaction, spraying a red-laser beam into
the sky.
BoS Paladin1: /me Quickly rolls into cover behind a charred
vehicle, his breathing heavy.
BoS Paladin2: /me Lets out her anger towards the scribe "You
idiot! You've alerted everyone in the city!" before rolling into
cover herself.
BoS Scribe: /me Begins to tear up, his eye's filling with a
clear liquid as he drops his rifle.
**One of the mutants in a nearby building raises his .32 Hunting
rifle, pulling down on the trigger as he aims at the Scribe.
BoS Scribe: /me Cries out as a bullet hits his body, dropping to
the ground as blood pours from the newly created cavity in his
forehead.
BoS Paladin1: /me Looks in dismay at the scribe's body lying on
the concrete, squeezing down on his guns trigger towards the
building.
**The laser beams enter the mutants chest, disintegrating his
right lung. His body falls out of the building, hitting a car
below.
BoS Paladin2: /me Stays in the cover of the car, after a while
of silence she decides to pull her head up, looking through the
helmet's eyes.
**The whistling sound of a laser beam soars through the air,
stopping. Only to be replaced with an explosion.**
**The (BoS Paladin 2)'s helmet implodes, blood flowing from the
cracks in her helmet with a mixture of brain matter**
BoS Paladin1: /me Cries out as he watches his second team-mate
fall victim, his helmet filling with tears, his mind filling
with fear.
BoS Paladin1: /me Continues to stay still, clutching his head
tight with sorrow, dropping his gun to the floor with a thud.
BoS Paladin1: "O-oh my go-.. Oh sh-... W-what i-..
BoS Paladin1: /me Continues to mutter to himself in shock, as
the mutants begin to open stray shots.
**A building nearby him explodes sending concrete shrapnel and
metal rods through the air.**
Super Mutant: /me Grunts, his thick muscles rippling with sweat
as his small brain forces him to kill the human, shooting round
after round.
Super Mutant: /me Throws down the the laser rifle to the ground,
resorting to a small hand-grenade on his hip which he quickly
arms.
BoS Paladin1: /me Perks his ears to the sound of a whistling
sound.
**The grenade rolls to the Paladins feet, squeaking once, twice,
and on the third time..**
*Boom*
Pain RP
**A super-mutant Behemoth encounter with a BoS Squad**
BoS Paladin: /me Presses the back of his helmet against the
cover, shielding himself from the behemoth's sight.
Behemoth: /me Stomps through the street, raising the large
Fire-Hydrant into the air, sweeping it through a nearby
building's top floor.
BoS Paladin: /me Shudders at the sound of collapsing concrete,
his breathing heavy in terror of being found.
Behemoth: /me Looks down at the faint figure of the paladin, his
large but stupid brain slowly processing the image as something
to kill.
Behemoth: /me Then sneaks up behind the figure, raising his
makeshift weapon and swiping the Paladin across the side.
BoS Paladin: /me Yells out as he's flung through the air,
crashing into a nearby window.
BoS Paladin: /me Cries out in pain, the shards of glass hadn't
penetrated his Power armor, but it was heavily crushed from the
impact.
**Upon further inspection, two broken ribs lay cracked on the
ground by his feet**
BoS Paladin: /me Is exhausted from the blow, and his body soon
goes through shock. Agony surges through his body as he throbs
in pain.
BoS Paladin: A-arrhg.. Sh-..
**The Paladin soon falls unconscious from the shock and damage
from the behemoth's blow.
BoS Paladin: /me Grunts, waking up to a pool of blood
surrounding his body, a mash of flesh and bone marrow is
scattered in the wound.
BoS Paladin: /me Then moans, realizing he had the repair the
wound some how before he would bleed out.
BoS Paladin: /me Spots a convenient rag by his side, quickly
tightening it around his side as he yells out in pain from the
pressure "Aah!"
BoS Paladin: G-gosh dammit! I-if only I carried p-painkillers..
O-or have I?
BoS Paladin: /me Checks his pockets/bag for any sort of
Painkillers.
BoS Paladin: /roll
**BoS Paladin rolls 57
BoS Paladin: /me Quickly pops open the metal container which he
found, forcing a grouping of pills down his raw throat.
BoS Paladin: /me Slowly climbs up, pressure on his sides cause
his ears to ring out in pain, slowly climbing up.
BoS Paladin: /me Nearly falls over from the pain his side causes
him, coughing out a small mixture of blood and spit as he leans
against the wall.
BoS Paladin: /me Picks up a rather large iron rod from the
crumbled wall, using it as a makeshift support to make his way
out of the building.
BoS Paladin: /me Continues to yell out "Augh.. D-dammit." As he
slowly makes his way down the stairs, blood trailing down his
sides.
BoS Paladin: /me Reaches for his radio, now having enough energy
to make out for help in the radio.
BoS Paladin: /radio A-arh.. A-anyone here?
BoS Scribe: /radio Where have you been?! we have been looking
for you the past few days!
BoS Paladin: /me Begins to answer, but simply collapses from
exhaustion again, rolling down the stairs in his bloody armor.
BoS Scribe: Hello...?
Have you been a BoS before?: Not really, but I've got the
general idea from research of how to RP as one.
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do?: The goal
of the Brotherhood of Steel is to recover Pre-War technology and
salvage it into a useable product/weapon.
Backstory of your character: (100 words +):
Alice Smith was born within Washington DC in a small building on
the outskirts, her father was a Senior Paladin within the
Brotherhood of Steel and her mother would stay at home with her
to look after her. Life was rather unpleasant growing up in the
Pre-War building which they called home. Her mother physically
unable to go out and scavenge for food herself, Alice from a
young age had to do this for the family, on the odd occasion
that her father returned home he would help Alice, teaching her
the ways of the waste's. She usually spent most of her time
reading a book her father got for her, it was called 'The
Wasteland survival guide' and it would teach her how to survive
within the wastes. As she grew up she went further into the
wastes to scavenge further for more advanced items such as
weaponry and armor. When she was old enough she joined the BoS
in attempt to help her father as a Paladin.
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Victoreno Date: March 13, 2013, 11:58 am
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Acceped.
Nice roleplay example and a pretty decent backstory. Like your
app :)
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Jankon Date: March 16, 2013, 12:05 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: Jankon
Steam ID: -
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Yes, I do.
How long have you been SeriousRoleplaying? A bit less than two
years.
How long have you been with the server/community? Since like...
One month before the server was put up. Or more.
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once? No.
Have you donated? No.
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30 lines
+)
* Sergeant Julie is walking through the open desert, followed by
a Private.
* Private Dan looks around the surrounding carefully, then down
to his rifle pressing the button to eject the magazine. He
catches it as it slides it, then kicks it back into the rifle.
* A vehicle is seen approaching from far, non-recognisable yet.
* The vehicles comes closer after a few moments, three armed men
are seen jumping out of it. They lay onto the ground and bullets
start flying heads of two soldiers.
* Sergeant Julie crouch and leans the stock aganist her sholder,
taking an aim onto the terrorists through her rifle scope.
* Private Dan is hit into his stomach by a bullet, falling
backwards onto his back groaning loudly.
* Sergeant Julie squeezes the trigger, firing a burst of three
bullets towards one of the enemies.
* Terrorist #2 is seen dropping his rifle and his head lowers to
the ground with a pool of blood under it.
* Private Dan screams out in pain, dropping his rifle and
putting both of his hands onto his stomach wound, holding it
tightly "F-Fuuck!"
* Sergeant Julie switches her aim towards an other terrorist,
ready to pull the trigger.
* Terrorist #3 squeezes the trigger of his AK, as it clicks. He
turns the rifle sideways, pressing the magazine-eject button and
pulling out the empty magazine. He reaches into his vest then,
pulling out a fresh 30 round magazine, clumsily loading it into
the rifle before regaining aim on Sergeant.
* Sergeant Julie pulls the trigger of her rifle, sending another
burst towards a terrorist.
* Terrorist #1 lets out a screams of pain as two bullets hit
him, one in left shoulder and other one into his foot.
* Terrorist #3 squeezes the trigger again with his aim trained
on Sergeant. The rifle clicks. He opens his other eye, looking
at the rifle for a few moments before he reaches for the bolt,
pulling it back roughly twice. He lowers his eye back to the
iron sights, aiming at the Sarge.
* Sergeant Julie aims at the third terrorist, taking a deep
breath.
* Terrorist #3 presses the trigger tightly, spraying a long
burst towards the Sergeant.
* Sergeant Julie is hit into her right arm and her right leg,
she drops the rifle onto the ground and moans loudly in pain,
holding her arm wound with her left hand.
* Terrorist #3 quickly stands up and begins to run towards the
two, his rifle raised. He is heard yelling something in arabic
language.
* Sergeant Julie slowly and shakily reaches for the sidearm in
her holster, attempting to grab it and slide it out.
* Terrorist #3 approaches her and attempts to kick Sergeant into
her face with his shoe.
* Sergeant Julie is kicked and falls backwards onto her back
with a loud groan, then whimpering.
* Private Dan watches the action, tearing up from pain he lets
out another groan.
* Terrorist #3 quickly aims his rifle towards the Private,
spraying several bullets at him.
* Private Dan drops his head down onto the ground, dead.
* Terrorist #3 walks up to the side of Sergeant, aiming at her
head as he yells in broken english "Get up!" gesturing towards
the car with his barrel.
* Sergeant Julie lets out another moan with fear in her eyes as
she looks up to the masked man, saying shakily "D-Don't shoot!"
then begins to sit up, grinding her teeth in pain.
* Terrorist #3 steps back and keeps to aim at her, yelling
"Fast!"
* Sergeant Julie groans again and drops to the ground with
tightly shut eyes, in obviously big pain.
* Terrorist steps over to her and kicks her into the head,
yelling again "Get up!"
* Sergeant Julie due to being weakened by the blood loss and the
pain, she passes out at the kick.
* Terrorist #3 presses his barrel aganist her forehead, pulling
the trigger once.
* Blood splatters onto the ground.
* Terrorist #3 then looks around, before turning and running
towards the car.
Have you been a BoS before? No.
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do? They are
trying to recover pre-war technology and investigate it, but
also turn it into useful things. They are activelly recovering
technology, as this is their main goal.
Backstory of your character: (100 words +) (fuck this) Sarah was
born in the brotherhood. Both her mother and father were
Paladins, and both of them died on a patrol under attack of a
group of supermutants.
She never was happy living under the ground constantly. Sarah
went to convince the leader of her chapter to let her become an
outsider and supplier of items the Brotherhood cannot produce
themselves underground. After two years, she convinced him and
she was allowed to freely venture around the wastelands,
bringing the supplies back at the bunker occasionaly.
She highly preffered the free life of wastelands than sitting in
the bunker whole day, training and learning. She learnt that
there are friendly and hostile people, aswell as animals. She
was not much of a fighter, but she mostly found a way to avoid
the trouble. After the death of her parents, she has grown a
hate towards the super-mutants. She is now venturing the wastes,
doing her duty to the Brotherhood...
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Re: Brotherhood of Steel
By: Victoreno Date: March 16, 2013, 1:20 pm
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Accepted.
Acceptable RP example, acceptable backstory. Not much but about
enough to accept.
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