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#Post#: 505--------------------------------------------------
Re: New California Republic
By: jazz666 Date: March 16, 2013, 7:06 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: [VN] Pixie
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:41356305
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? I understand completely
How long have you been SeriousRoleplaying? About 2 years
How long have you been with the server/community? About a week
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once? Nope
Have you donated? *Pending*
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30 lines
+)
(These events occur before she joins the NCR)
[me=Larrisa]is sitting alone in a deserted bar, a hat casting
shadows across her face.[/me]
/it A gang of three men approach and the lead man says "What's a
nice lady like you doing here?"
/it The man smiles evilly.
[me=Larrisa]takes a gulp from her bottle of whiskey and says
"Drinking."[/me]
/it The man grabs hold of her arm and says "You best come
outside, not a safe place in here."
[me=Larrisa]gets up, finishing off the dregs of her whiskey and
pushing her hat up, exposing her eyes.[/me]
/it The lead man attempts to lead her outside, flanked by his
two cronies.
[me=Larrisa]kicks backward, hitting the lead man in the
groin.[/me]
/it He doubles over, exhaling explosively.
[me=Larrisa]takes advantage of this time to break her whiskey
bottle over the table.[/me]
/it The other two men draw stilettos from holsters on their
thighs.
[me=Larrisa]grabs their leader off the ground and holds the
bottle to his neck.[/me]
/it The two men charge regardless.
[me=Larrisa]draws the broken edge of the bottle across the mans
throat in a smooth action.[/me]
/it Blood spurts from his neck in a crimson river, spattering
loudly on the floor.
[me=Larrisa]pushes the limp corpse forwards at the charging
men.[/me]
/it They move to the side, avoiding the body.
[me=Larrisa]drops low attempting to sweep out their legs.[/me]
/it One of them is tripped but the other jumps landing on his
feet as i am off balance.
/it He lashes a kick across her jaw, sending me sliding into the
jukebox.
/it A record slips in the jukebox, Eye of the tiger begins
playing.
[me=Larrisa]attempts to get up, the man is looking at his fallen
companions.[/me]
[me=Larrisa]gets to her feet, glaring at the man, a large bruise
forming on her chin.[/me]
[me=Larrisa]steps towards him, swinging her fist in a right
hook.[/me]
/it He attempts to block.
[me=Larrisa]feints and swings a left hook, it connects with his
unprotected jaw, sending him crashing into the wall,
unconscious.[/me]
/it The other man tries to get up.
[me=Larrisa]glares at him and he runs from the bar.[/me]
[me=Larrisa]walks to the counter, dropping a bag of caps on the
counter.[/me]
[me=Larrisa]winks at the man behind the bar "For your silence if
anyone comes knocking."[/me]
/it The man takes the caps, nodding to the woman.
[me=Larrisa]says "I recommend you get those guys out of here
before someone asks questions."[/me]
[me=Larrisa]turns her back on the man, pushing her hat back over
her eyes, she walks from the bar.[/me]
Have you been a NCR before? Yes
What are the IC goals of the NCR and what do they do? The NCR
attempt to bring society and democracy back to the wasteland,
through force if necessary.
Backstory of your character: (100 words +) Larissa was born and
raised in Esmeralda, her father ran a repair shop/general store.
Larissa became mentally unhinged when her childhood companion
was ripped to shreds by rabid dogs in front of her. She only
survived as her father came out and shot the dogs. This
developed into borderline schizophrenia, she would occasionally
talk to herself and mutter random things that made no sense to
anyone but herself. Her father could only watch in despair as
she spiraled into insanity. He began to teach her his trade as a
type of therapy, this helped her considerably but she still
relapses occasionally. She never knew who her mother was. He
began to teach her the knowledge she would need to take over the
business one day. She was 26 when her father had a fight with a
customer and the customer pulled a gun. Her father was shot in
the chest, she grabbed the shotgun that was stashed behind the
counter and aimed at the man. He walked towards her saying "You
ain't gonna shoot me, are ya'?". The man got extremely close,
she then pulled the trigger. The man collapsed to the floor with
a gaping bullet wound in his stomach. The local NCR soldiers had
heard the gunshot and came in to find two dead bodies and a
crying woman holding a shotgun, when she told her version of
events the local NCR marshal, McKay took her under his wing.
After one year of NCR training, he told her
she should go exploring, see the sights of the wasteland before
settling down. She was given a rifle and provisions and set out.
She eventually arrived in the town of Breetle. Something
resounded within her seeing the sandy hills and dusty lakes. She
decided this was where she wanted to be.
[In Character Section]
This is a letter you are sending to a high ranked NCR Officer,
don't use things like 'lol', 'omg' and 'ffs'!
Full name: Larissa Kinley
Age: 28
Height: 5"8
Any physically or mental imperfects: I am slightly schizophrenic
Do you have a certain reputation in the NCR? Nope
Have you had any previous afflection with the NCR? Nope
Do you have skills that might be useful for the NCR? I have some
knowledge of mechanics/gun repair from my father.
(Sorry about the full-stop thing, I don't normally put a . on
the end of /me's or /it's only on speech, apologies nonetheless)
#Post#: 506--------------------------------------------------
Re: New California Republic
By: Victoreno Date: March 16, 2013, 7:20 pm
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Pending.
There are alot of general grammar errors as there rarely is a
period on the end of each sentence and some of those /it's do
not have a capital letter in the beginning.
Your RP example is acceptable but actually abit too badass-movie
style.
Also, a year after she was 28, she still is 28? (concerning the
backstory and IC Section)
Your backstory should as well include why she might be a little
shizophrenic (if she wasn't born with it)
In the RP example I'd actually prefer your opponent's /me's
instead of /it's but that's just optional.
Fix those flaws and you are accepted, 48 hours.
Accepted.
Enough flaws corrected.
#Post#: 512--------------------------------------------------
Re: New California Republic
By: Grike Date: March 17, 2013, 11:41 am
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: Grike
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:42740846
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Yes.
How long have you been SeriousRoleplaying? 1.5 years
How long have you been with the server/community? Just joined.
Have you been banned from the FronTech server once? No.
Have you donated? Not yet.
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 30 lines
+)
/it 3 Rangers are walking on the yellow sand of the Wasteland.
They all carry Anti-Material Rifles and one of them carries a
.357 with 'LONG LIVE NCR' and ' A Rangers Best Friend' written
on it. The one at the front of the line stops, telling them all
to stop.
Smith : I see something there.
/it Smith points to somewhere in an abandoned building, and the
other Rangers look there.
Miller : Boss, I think I see som-
/it His speech is interruped by bullets flying, one of them
comes to Johnson, the other Ranger. He falls down, holding his
shoulder.
Smith : Get down! We have no cover here!
/it The Rangers open fire back, going into a prone position
while doing so. Miller takes a look from his scope, noticing a
Legion member. He sends a bullet to the mans head. Seconds
later, the body falls down.
Miller : I got one!
Smith : Good one! Now advance!
/it The Rangers start to advance, still in prone position.
Johnson seems to made a low-quality bandage on his shoulder, but
it seems to have stopped the bleeding for now.
Miller : Johnson, you okay?
Johnson : Yeah, I am!
/it The Rangers are now a few meters away from the building
after a long prone.
Smith : Get up, get ready for a charge!
/it The Rangers get up, and start to quickly run to the
abandoned building. They spot 4 Legion Members, but there may be
more inside. As they charge, a bullet hits Smith in the chest
and makes him fall down to the ground. Miller quickly rushes for
Smith, grabbing him and dragging him behind a rock.
Miller : Boss, are you okay?
Smith : Yeah.. Yeah.. My armor stopped it. BEHIND!
/it Miller quickly turns and aims his .357 to the Legion Member
behind him, attempting to pull the trigger.
*Miller has rolled 63
*Legion Member has rolled 31
/it The bullet hits the Legion Member in the head, the body
falls down to the ground. But as he falls down, another Legion
Member with a rifle is seen, and bullets start flying. Miller
dives behind the rock aswell, but he feels a pain in his
stomach, he looks down and notices the bullet wound. He must
have got shot while he was diving. He quickly flanks the Legion
Member and breaks his neck.
Miller : I got one. Agh..
/it Smith gets up, looking at Miller.
Smith : You okay?
Miller : Yeah.. Lets check inside, Boss.
/it The Rangers go inside the building, checking it. It seems
there is no one left. The battle is won. It is a victory for the
NCR.
Have you been a NCR before? Yes.
What are the IC goals of the NCR and what do they do? They try
and restore law and order to the Wastelands. Trying to establish
some sort of Republic.
Backstory of your character: (100 words +)
John Miller was born in a NCR outpost. His father was a Ranger
in the NCR, married to a normal woman. Miller was trained by his
father in the ways of the NCR, he was always taught law and
order, and how to fire a gun. When he was 14, he could clean and
shoot a gun really good. He was given a .357 from his father,
writing 'NCR FOREVER' and 'A Rangers Best Friend' on it. He was
social and always had a lot of friends. One time, his father
went to a mission and a few days later a NCR soldier came saying
that he was MIA. Miller took the .357 and went out to find his
father. He learnt all the details of the mission, but couldnt
find anyone.
On the way back, he noticed a battle between Rangers and Legion.
He rushed over to help Rangers, but the Veteran Ranger didnt
allow him to. But when he showed him the .357, the Ranger just
stopped, and nodded. After the battle, the Rangers clapped
Miller, saying he was brave and did very good. The Veteran
Ranger told him to join the NCR and he would be a Ranger like
them if he contiuned like this. Miller said that he wasnt ready
yet and asked if he knew his father. The Ranger nodded and led
him to a place. There was a Ranger with the armor painted in the
colors of the Legion and it wrote 'DEATH TO NCR!' 'LEGION
FOREVER' on it. They took off the helmet and he just stopped
there, it was his father...
His life changed after that. He became unsocial and never talked
to anyone unless he/she was from NCR. He kept on training in the
way of the NCR, and never left the .357 Magnum his father gave
to him. When he was 30, he went on and applied for NCR, thinking
he was ready. His body build was good. He was a tall and
muscular man. He happily sent the application paper.
[In Character Section]
This is a letter you are sending to a high ranked NCR Officer,
don't use things like 'lol', 'omg' and 'ffs'!
Full name: John Miller
Age: 30
Height: 6'4
Any physically or mental imperfects: No, Sir.
Do you have a certain reputation in the NCR? Yes. I once helped
the Rangers and the Veteran Ranger told me to apply, but I wasnt
ready.
Have you had any previous afflection with the NCR? No, Sir.
Do you have skills that might be useful for the NCR? My father
was a Ranger. He taught me everything he knew and I think I
would be useful, Sir.
#Post#: 513--------------------------------------------------
Re: New California Republic
By: Victoreno Date: March 17, 2013, 11:59 am
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Accepted.
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