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#Post#: 3373--------------------------------------------------
Nighttimepaw of ShadowClan
DIR By: ❝ nighttime. ❞
Date: November 30, 2012, 9:38 pm
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[center]Name.
Nighttimepaw
Age.
7 moons
Alliance.
ShadowClan
Rank.
Medicine cat apprentice
Gender.
Female
Appearance.
HTML http://i.ytimg.com/vi/BCjSxbFW4VU/0.jpg
Nighttimepaw is a pure black she-cat with green eyes, and red
pupils. Her nose is pink, and her other eye is covered by her
“bangs”. She's not as fluffy as Mockingpaw, and has some chest
fur that gives her a youngish quality. Her tail is also fluffy,
marking her as one of Mockingpaw's relatives. She has sharp,
white teeth that she often smirks with. The smirk and tail swish
are her classic moves that make her look dangerous.
Personality.
Sweet, kind, but not shy. She puts others foward and puts
herself behind, and always goes into this “zone” when she's
treating wounds, that includes herself and the patient. She
often stares at the ground, so other cats don't flinch away from
her red and green eyes, but otherwise she's loud. When other
cats are around she's quiet and doesn't speak much, but when
she's with a few others and her friends she could scare all of
the prey away from the forest! Her name may be a mouthful, so
she won't mind if you call her Nightpaw or Timepaw. Sometimes
she has this mood thing where she hides in the shadows and tries
to make as little contact as possible. She always feels safter
at night for some reason. She sings this song to the stars every
night, as if to apoligize to the stars for messing up.
History.
Nighttimepaw was born as a first daughter to Evershinefeather
and Fallinglavastream, two cats with mouthful names, outside of
every Clan. They called her Nighttimestarshine, but then
Nighttimestarshine cut it down to Nighttime when she introduced
herself to other cats. She hated the fact that her parents LOVE
mouthful names, and everytime someone mentions mouthful names,
she hides away somewhere. She decided to leave her parents, and
found the Clans on her way. She decided to live in ShadowClan,
and become one of their medicine cat apprentices. When someone
calls her Nighttimestarshine, she gets really annoyed and may
attack you.[/center]
#Post#: 3379--------------------------------------------------
Re: Nighttimepaw of ShadowClan
DIR By: mocking
Date: November 30, 2012, 11:18 pm
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Hi there C:
I am noticing one thing you have to fix with your bio:
You use the word 'and' too much in one sentence ^^ For example,
look at this sentence.
Sometimes she smiles and grins and cries.
If you use the word 'and' too much, the sentence can get quite
'rough' C:
If you have any questions, please PM me or post here. anyway,
when you're done editing, please bump your thread ^^
Also, did you reserve ShadowClan MCA first?
Thanks! C:
--Mockingbirdeh
#Post#: 3381--------------------------------------------------
Re: Nighttimepaw of ShadowClan
DIR By: ❝ nighttime. ❞
Date: December 1, 2012, 12:33 am
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--- Quote from: mockingbirdeh link ---
>
> Hi there C:
>
> I am noticing one thing you have to fix with your bio:
>
> You use the word 'and' too much in one sentence ^^ For
example, look at this sentence.
>
> Sometimes she smiles and grins and cries.
>
> If you use the word 'and' too much, the sentence can get quite
'rough' C:
>
> If you have any questions, please PM me or post here. anyway,
when you're done editing, please bump your thread ^^
>
> Also, did you reserve ShadowClan MCA first?
>
> Thanks! C:
>
> --Mockingbirdeh
>
--- End Quote ---
[center]
Lol, whoops. I was in a rush.
I was going to reserve it so then I did this and then I had to
go so I decided to post it... you probably know the rest.
Sorry.[/center]
#Post#: 3403--------------------------------------------------
Re: Nighttimepaw of ShadowClan
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: December 1, 2012, 1:30 am
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Actually, Mockers, sometimes people use the "and and and" for
style. cx
Approved~
#Post#: 3554--------------------------------------------------
Re: Nighttimepaw of ShadowClan
DIR By: mocking
Date: December 1, 2012, 7:10 pm
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sorry about that cx
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