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#Post#: 3136--------------------------------------------------
Mottledshadow of ThunderClan
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 29, 2012, 6:23 pm
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Yes, I am using the form from WCRPG
[center]Character Name:
Mottledshadow
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Character Age:
20 moons
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Gender:
She-cat
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Alliance:
ThunderClan
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Rank:
Warrior
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Appearance:
Mottledshadow is a beautiful, long-haired tortoiseshell cat. Her
eyes are the colour of amber, sparkling in the sun. A long,
deep, battle scar reaches from the bottom of her back right leg
to her flank. While she's in the light, the ginger spots on her
body make it seem as if there are patches of fire on her.
However, when she is in the dark the ginger spots seem to
disappear, making her look like a shadow. The only spot on her
body that doesn't seem to disappear or light up is her nose,
which is as pink as the beginning of the sunrise.
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Personality:
Mottledshadow was born as a very honest cat. She's also
extremely devoted to ThunderClan, being not afraid to die if it
helps her Clan. When she is awfully sad or depressed, she goes
into a state and will be gloomy for days, but otherwise she can
be quite cheerful. She may have trouble accepting something that
she doesn't agree with, but will come around in the end. While
thinking, she may get lost deep in thought, and seems as if
she's ignoring you, but you can always tell by the thoughtful
look in her eyes. At times she can become a bit too serious,
especially when it come to protecting her loved ones.
---Likes: Mottledshadow enjoys hunting, being with loved ones,
and above all, honesty.
--- Dislikes: She hates being lied to, becoming wet, and
unnecessary bloodshed.
---Strengths: Her strengths are blending in with the dark,
climbing up trees and rocks, and being able to take orders.
---Weaknesses: Mottledshadows weaknesses are being in the light,
because of the way it makes her pelt light up, swimming, and
killing cats.
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History:
When Mottledshadow was a kit, she was a rogue called, Mottle.
She lived with her mother, Sunny, and her two brothers, Patches
and Turtle. They all lived happily together in a beautiful
forest. When they were 6 moons old, their mother was attacked by
a fox and sacrificed herself for Mottledshadow and her brothers.
She told them to run and Mottledshadow had trouble leaving her,
but she ran after her brothers, knowing there was nothing they
could do to help their dying mother. They ran as far away as
they could. After a moon living on their own, they came across a
different forest. As they made their way closer to the forest
they were ambushed by a pack of wild dogs. Being only 7 moons
they were easily beaten. Mottledshadow managed to slip away but
her two brothers weren't as lucky. Patches was being torn by the
dogs and Turtle was about to escape too, but the dogs saw him at
the last moment. Mottledshadow was forced to watch her brothers
die but quickly turned away, dashing into the forest. Soon after
going in to the forest she came across ThunderClan, and was
allowed to become part of the clan.
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Roleplay Sample:
Not my first.[/center]
#Post#: 3174--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mottledshadow of ThunderClan
DIR By: mocking
Date: November 29, 2012, 8:18 pm
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Hey Shannie >8D
You have several places missing commas. ^^
for example, you need a comma here:
--- Quote ---
> However, when she is in the dark
--- End Quote ---
There are a few other spots lacking commas. Without commas, it
becomes kind of a 'rough' sentence. If you have any questions,
you can PM me or post here ~
Bump when you're done ~ 8D
#Post#: 3712--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mottledshadow of ThunderClan
DIR By: Shannon
Date: December 2, 2012, 7:13 pm
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Bump
#Post#: 3758--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mottledshadow of ThunderClan
DIR By: mocking
Date: December 3, 2012, 8:34 pm
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ACCEPTED! 8D
Lovely bio :)
#Post#: 3761--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mottledshadow of ThunderClan
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: December 3, 2012, 8:42 pm
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moving.
#Post#: 3804--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mottledshadow of ThunderClan
DIR By: Shannon
Date: December 5, 2012, 5:02 pm
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Thankies!
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