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#Post#: 2637--------------------------------------------------
Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: dawnfire111
Date: November 27, 2012, 7:52 am
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Name.
Creamkit Creampaw Creamsoda
Age.
7 Moons
Alliance.
RiverClan
Rank.
Medicine cat apprentice
Gender.
She-cat
Appearance. [ Must be over four sentences ]
Just close your eyes and imagine that right in front of you sits
a tall and large glass of that dark brown soda with tons of
fluffy bubbles sitting on top of it, like snow. Well, take some
bunches of the creamy puffs and picture it in the shape of a cat
with blue eyes. There is Creampaw, please enjoy! What, you want
MORE details? Sigh...fine. Well, like I said before, Creampaw
just seems like the fluffy bubbles on your cream soda. Though
she as a long and silky feather-duster near above her backside,
called a tail, but I like feather-duster better. It's a bit more
difficult to stretch out her appearance, since it's pretty much
the same everywhere. A soft, fluffy, creamy white for her base
coat with faded spots of a light or pale tan color, which is
most obvious on her face. What's different, you ask? You can see
the adorable pink berry planted just above her mouth, also known
as her nose. Moving up her face you get lost in wide, round,
deep pools of dark aqua blue with a frightening black hole
sitting in the middle. Altogether, she's often known to be quite
pretty and attractive, and very beautiful to some.
Personality. [ Must be over four sentences ]
Bubbly, friendly, cheerful, bold, fun-loving, and patient, all
could describe sweet Creampaw. Let's spread it out a bit, shall
we?
Bubbly. Yep, Creampaw is known to be very enthusiastic and
energetic! Fortunately, she's not REALLY crazy like one of those
cats who are very energetic ALL the time. She can actually
control her excitement, in most situations, sometimes she can't.
Okay, maybe she is a bit like those cats.
Friendly. Creampaw is definitely a social butterfly and a
popular girl, and she is still very nice to anyone and everyone
she meets and sees. She loves making new friends with everyone
in the Clan and it can make her upset when some cats don't want
to be around her.
Cheerful. This little sweetheart is very optimistic and usually
adds a positive twist to everything as much as possible. She's
very slow to anger, but can be saddened just a bit more easily,
but very rarely.
Bold. Creampaw isn't afraid, at all, to protect and stand up for
her Clanmates with pride and hope, and a passionate fire always
flashes in her eyes. She can also be a bit adventurous and even
daring when it comes to certain situations.
Fun-loving. As long as she has friends to do it with, anything
can be quite fun if she thinks it is. Sometimes she'll even
create games to go along with it, so she is obviously known to
be very playful and fun to be around. The fluffy she-cat is also
easy to fall in love with from having such an enjoyable
personality, which causes a lot of toms to develop crushes on
the sweet medicine cat apprentice. Don't you feel a little bit
of pity for poor Creampaw?
Patient. Like most medicine cats should be, Creampaw is very
tolerant and motherly to her Clanmates whenever she can be, and
is often trying to help others with their duties or problems.
Many cats come talk about their hardships with her while
Creampaw sits and listens attentively. Some cats even share
secrets with her, because they trust that she wouldn't gossip
about it. Hopefully that's true, but I guess you're just going
to have to find out on your own!
History. [ Must be over five sentences ]
Creampaw, like most RiverClan cats, was born into RiverClan with
a loving mother, Slimmingfeather. But the story is just a bit
different, than most normal ones. Her mother, being very
beautiful, had many toms falling at her feet, mostly because she
was a flirt. So of course, she greatly enjoyed the company of
the toms and was often found hanging around a different one
every day! Soon after she became a warrior, she became mates
with Rainclaw, who she had two large litters with. Suddenly,
after the "love" litters, she broke up with him and kept moving
from tom to tom, having a TON of litters. She gave them all
names, but she didn't keep them for long and handed them over to
the other queens to care for them. Then she continued to mate
with other toms and never really took the time to spend with her
many kits.
When Creamkit became Creampaw, the medicine cats received a sign
from StarClan. A few days earlier they found and empty cream
soda bottle outside of the medicine den. At first they just
cursed the twolegs for the waste, but then another one appeared
the next day. Then the next, and the next, until they finally
decided it WAS a sign from StarClan. Unusual, maybe, but it was
enough for them. Creampaw was a new medicine cat apprentice of
RiverClan.
Role Play sample. [ Must be over four sentences ~ Not needed
after first bio ]
--- Quote from: dawny ❤ link ---
>
> Adderpaw yawned and blinked open her pale green eyes, but
quickly closed them again due to the bright sunlight that shone
on her sight. She grumbled and pushed herself to sit up, her
legs needed to be stretched from the long rest. Sleepily, she
stretched her thin, but strong legs and her long tail. She swung
her head back to groom her ruffled, matted pelt, it was so
annoying to have her fur out of place. After a thorough
cleaning, she finally stood up and looked over the awaking
apprentices that slept all around her own nest. Not taking long
to watch the apprentices yawn and groom their pelts, Adderpaw
emerged from the place she slept, sighing happily in the sun
that brightened her freshly cleaned fur. Good morning, Adderpaw.
She thought with a cheerful purr, though her fresh morning
probably wouldn't last too long.
>
--- End Quote ---
#Post#: 4757--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: dawnfire111
Date: December 17, 2012, 9:09 pm
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Bump, finally finished! :D
#Post#: 4798--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: December 18, 2012, 8:38 pm
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denied
You have some choppy sentences scattered throughout your bio,
love <3
Please bump when done.
#Post#: 4800--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: dawnfire111
Date: December 18, 2012, 8:50 pm
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Oops. Well, I know I do, but they were just short comments I
thought. If it's not too much trouble, could you point out some
of the ones you want me to fix?
#Post#: 4815--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: December 19, 2012, 10:43 am
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I'm not actually supposed to point them out, but a good example
is:
Close your eyes and imagine. Right in front of you... etc.
You'd have to make "Close your eyes and imagine" a full
sentence. It sounds incredibly choppy and doesn't have a correct
subject/predicate. 8D
bumpers when done.
#Post#: 4822--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: dawnfire111
Date: December 19, 2012, 7:05 pm
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Bump!
Oops, so sorry for the bother, Ever. Hopefully it's better now.
:-[
#Post#: 4834--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: December 19, 2012, 10:20 pm
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It's no problem, Dawny <3
Approved! (:
#Post#: 4840--------------------------------------------------
Re: Creampaw of RiverClan {MCA}
DIR By: dawnfire111
Date: December 20, 2012, 7:25 am
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THANK YOU!!! <3 :D
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