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Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: PikuChanOX
Date: November 26, 2012, 6:41 pm
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Name.
Glasspaw/Glasspool
Age.
7 moons
Alliance.
SkyClan
Rank.
Medicine Cat Apprentice
Gender.
Female/She-cat
Appearance. [ Must be over four sentences ]
Glasspaw is a glossy, thick coated she cat with dark blue/grey
fur, which is speckled with small black spots.
Her tail is fairly large and fluffy, with a pale grey tip and a
black stripe, which extends from the top of her head to the end
of tail.
The black stripe is slightly visible on Glasspaw's sides. Her
ears are a bit large, and are pale grey with small black tips,
her paws and forelegs are also pale grey,
but they lack the black tips. Glasspaw's most distinguishable
features are her eyes, which are large, orbs with a color
similar to the water in a swimming pool.
Her eyes are filled with streaks and flecks of a darker tone,
and are usually glassy, with lighter streaks as well.
Personality. [ Must be over four sentences ]
Glasspaw is an energetic, spunky young cat, who looks for the
best in everyone. She takes pride in being queer,
and loves to tell imaginative stories to the younger kits of the
clan. Glasspaw loves all aspects of nature, and has a soft-spot
for injured animals of any species.
Glasspaw's absolute favorite time/moment, is the calm before the
storm, she loves the sense of danger that ensues that time,
loves how every sound and sight stands out with such vivid
serenity during those moments.
Glasspaw hates to injure others, therefore, she hates to battle,
and does anything she can to avoid the sight of it.
Her worst fear is of any size fire, due to something that
happened in her past...
History. [ Must be over five sentences ]
Glasspaw used to live with her father, Stone, and her mother,
Emerald along with her brothers, Sky and Hemlock,
her family was a bit like a traveling group of rogues, except
that they were peaceful, and generally avoided contact with the
clans.
Glasspaw would have stayed like this if it had not been for the
cruelty of one possibly deranged twoleg hunter,
who happened to come across her parents while they were asleep,
and then decided to kill them, and cook them over his fire.
When this happened, Glasspaw, Sky, and Hemlock were in a
clearing about a mile away, playing hide and seek without a care
in the world.
After they had grown bored of the game, they proceeded to go
back to their den.
When they got there, they saw that their parents were gone,
so they followed their scent to the hunter's camp, where they
saw their parents dead bodies,
scorched and blackened by the flames in a small camp fire set up
by the human.
When the human noticed Sky, Hemlock, and Glasspaw, he raised his
gun and shot Sky and Hemlock,
barely missing Glasspaw. as a result of this, Sky was killed,
and Hemlock and Glasspaw ran off.
After joining SkyClan, Glasspaw tried to convince Hemlock to
join as well, but he was to shy, and refused.
Now, Glasspaw is the medicine cat apprentice of skyclan, and is
deathly afraid of fire due to that event.
Role Play sample. [ Must be over four sentences ~ Not needed
after first bio ]
Glasspaw padded out of the camp into the lush green of the
surrounding forest,
taking delicate whiffs of the herb scented air as she walked. In
a small clearing, about a couple fox lengths away,
she could see a patch of goldenrod, which had been scarce
lately. Naturally, Glasspaw started to pad in its direction,
first checking to be sure she had enough room in her mouth to
carry more herbs, as she approached,
a faint, but distinct scent hit her nose. Fur bristling ever so
slightly,
she put her herbs down and sniffed the air, taking a deep whiff.
As Glasspaw's mind raced to decipher the scent,
a sudden breeze whisked her small pile of herbs away, and they
scattered into the bushes and ferns of the area,
now too lost to recollect. Smoke. The realization hit her
suddenly, and felt almost as if she had been hit with a large
rock.
She hadn't, of course, but that was how it felt. Glasspaw's eyes
widened, and they quickly scanned the landscape,
only staying focussed on each object for a spilt second. She
didn't see anything of alarm, but even so... she thought,
smoke comes from... fire... The thought was sending shivers of
fear up and down her spine, and she, taking one last glance at
the precious goldenrod
she had desired, decided it would be safest to flee. When she
reached the camp entrance,
she stopped, and turned towards the forest, still nothing... she
thought,
maybe i imagined it... she then began to pad into the camp,
but still.... she shuddered, it seemed so... real...
Other. i think this is the right place to post this...
oh, and, imma make hemlock join someday, so he'll have a bio
eventually...
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#Post#: 2507--------------------------------------------------
Re: GlassPaw of SkyClan
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 26, 2012, 6:55 pm
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Hi Piku! ;D
This bio is looking great, but first you must correct some
things:
--It is unrealistic for her to have a perfectly shaped gray
diamond lined with white on her forehead.
--The suffix in a warrior name is not capitalized. Right:
"Glasspaw loved to fish all day long." Wrong: "GlassPaw loved to
fish all day long!"
Please bump when done editing. c:
#Post#: 2519--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: PikuChanOX
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:09 pm
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Bump!~
i fixed it!
#Post#: 2520--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:10 pm
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Approved! :D
#Post#: 2522--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: PikuChanOX
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:11 pm
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;D
Thank you!
#Post#: 2523--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:11 pm
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Not a problem. x3
#Post#: 2528--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: PikuChanOX
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:14 pm
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should this be locked?
#Post#: 2537--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:45 pm
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No, it's already been moved.
#Post#: 2541--------------------------------------------------
Re: Glasspaw of SkyClan
DIR By: PikuChanOX
Date: November 26, 2012, 7:55 pm
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okay
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