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#Post#: 2285--------------------------------------------------
Jump.... for what? SkyClan leader!~
DIR By: Wolfatheart
Date: November 25, 2012, 7:53 pm
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Name.Eclipsestar
Age. 25 moons
Alliance. SkyClan
Rank. Leader
Gender. Tom
Appearance. [ Must be over four sentences ]Eclipsestar is a very
handsome cat in general. He has short, brown tabby fur, his
tabby markings are originally stripes, but they're swirled, so
they look like zebra stripes. His eyes are a very bright
electric green, they look like he can see through you. On his
ears, Eclipsestar ear tips have very fluffy black tufts, along
with his elbows on each leg.
Personality. [ Must be over four sentences ] The SkyClan leader
is known as quiet, but strong, referring him to, obviously, the
title: The strong, silent type. He isn't very social, and is
always on time for whatever he needs to get to such as
gatherings. Eclipsestar rarely smiles, and when he does, it's
usually about something he acheived. You see, he's not snobby,
just has very high self pride.
History. [ Must be over five sentences ]Eclipsestar doesn't have
much of a history. He was born into SkyClan, so he is an
original SkyClan cat. When he was a kit, he was the scrawniest
of the litter. The then Eclipsekit didn't have much of a
reputation, until he was turned into an apprentice and was in
the middle of battle. Only two days of being an apprentice, of
course he was frightened. When his original leader told him to
send a message back to camp, Eclipsepaw ran, and he ran fast.
The message was to bring another patrol to the battle, and when
SkyClan won the battle, they thanked Eclipsepaw for sending the
message. Scrawny little Eclipsepaw. As he grew up, he worked on
his strength, and became very strong. When he was a warrior, the
leader's deputy called on him to be deputy, thus earning his
name, Eclipsestar when his leader died of old age.
Role Play sample. [ Must be over four sentences ~ Not needed
after first bio ] This is my second Bio.
#Post#: 2302--------------------------------------------------
Re: Jump.... for what? SkyClan leader!~
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 25, 2012, 8:11 pm
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hey wolfy >8D
-- you have some run-on sentences and choppy sentences.
that's all. c: please bump once done.
#Post#: 2349--------------------------------------------------
Re: Jump.... for what? SkyClan leader!~
DIR By: Wolfatheart
Date: November 25, 2012, 8:33 pm
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Bump?
#Post#: 2354--------------------------------------------------
Re: Jump.... for what? SkyClan leader!~
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 25, 2012, 8:38 pm
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Approved!
Good job~
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Re: Jump.... for what? SkyClan leader!~
DIR By: Wolfatheart
Date: November 25, 2012, 8:38 pm
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YAAAYYYY Thankies, Evey
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