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       ~Umbrella beach~ (Nettleclaw, Medicine cat of Skyclan)
   DIR By: Maple598
       Date: November 25, 2012, 4:04 pm
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       Name. Nettleclaw
       Age.  21 moons
       Alliance. Skyclan
       Rank.  medicine cat
       Gender.male
       Appearance.  [ Must be over four sentences ]
       Nettleclaw is a very rough looking tom, beacuse he has a ragged
       brown pelt, that sticks out at all angles, like needles. He has
       bright, stunning green eyes that seem to change their shade of
       green color, depending on his mood. He has long, white whiskers,
       and a salmon pink nose, and both are perfect for hunting down
       herbs. His claws, however, is what he is known for. They are
       long, sharp, and they look crooked and jagged; hence how he got
       his name Nettleclaw.
       Personality. [ Must be over four sentences ] Despite his rough
       looks and his long, jagged claws, Nettleclaw is actually a very
       friendly, and warm cat, willing to help anyone in need, no
       matter what clan. He also loves to chat and hear the news of the
       day, so some cats usually get caught having long (and often
       boring) conversation with him. Though he can get snappy when
       things don't go as planned, making him a not so happy cat to be
       around. Overall, Nettleclaw is a friendly, talkative cat, who
       will help anyone in need.
       History.  [Must be over five sentences] Nettleclaw has a very
       interesting, rich history. His father, Darktail, was from
       Skyclan, but his mother, Silvershine, was from Windclan. The two
       would meet in secret, often traveling many miles to see each
       other. Silvershine became pregnant and had two kits, Nettleclaw,
       and his sister, Dawnlight. Darktail decided to take Nettleclaw
       back to Skyclan, while Silvershine would keep Dawnlight.
       Darktail told the clan that he had found Nettleclaw on the
       border, and that he would raise him as if he was his own son.
       Now surprisingly, Nettleclaw didn't start out as a medicine cat.
       He was actually a regular old apprentice, rather than a medicine
       cat apprentice. It wasn't until he was a warrior, would he
       become a medicine cat. When a strange occurrence happened, and
       both the medicine cat and the medicine cat apprentice died,
       Starclan chose Nettleclaw to be the new medicine cat. At first,
       Nettleclaw refused, thinking that he wouldn't make a good
       medicine cat. But eventually, he decided to become the medicine
       cat of Skyclan, and he has never once, thought about going back
       to being a warrior.
       Role Play sample.  [Must be over four sentences ~ not needed
       after first bio]
       #Post#: 2045--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Nettleclaw, Medicine cat of Skyclan
   DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
       Date: November 25, 2012, 4:37 pm
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       Hi, Maple! This bio is looking great, but there are a few things
       you need to correct before I can approve you.
       -- You have a lot of run-on sentences and overuse your commas.
       -- You have a few spelling errors.
       Please bump once done editing. :)
       #Post#: 2083--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Nettleclaw, Medicine cat of Skyclan
   DIR By: Maple598
       Date: November 25, 2012, 5:01 pm
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       bump!
       #Post#: 2090--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Nettleclaw, Medicine cat of Skyclan
   DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
       Date: November 25, 2012, 5:09 pm
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       Try checking you appearance section for run-ons, and bump when
       done. :)
       #Post#: 2429--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Nettleclaw, Medicine cat of Skyclan
   DIR By: Maple598
       Date: November 26, 2012, 2:32 pm
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       Bump!
       #Post#: 2510--------------------------------------------------
       Re: ~Umbrella beach~ (Nettleclaw, Medicine cat of Skyclan)
   DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
       Date: November 26, 2012, 6:57 pm
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       Approved! (:
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