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Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan {DONE}
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 23, 2012, 12:49 pm
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[center] Name.
Tributarystar
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[font=comic sans ms]Age.
26 Moons
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Alliance.
RiverClan
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Rank.
Leader
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Gender.
She-cat
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Appearance.
Tributarystar has a short-haired grey and white pelt. Her basic
pelt colour is grey, which is like the colour of silver, and the
markings are white. This gives the effect that she's a silver
river with white fish swimming in it, even though the "fish" are
more like ovals with lines sticking out of them. The marks are
mostly on her chest, flank, torso, that kind of area, and her
left hindpaw. Her eyes are a bright blue like the river that
RiverClan lives next to, just missing all the life that's in the
river.
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Personality.
Tributarystar is a little evil, but she does care about her
clan, and will do anything to help her Clan. If it comes to
other clans though, she won't care about them and will let them
deal with their own problems, even if RiverClan started it. Now
if RiverClan started it, she'll pretend that they didn't and it
was the other clan that started it. Sometimes it ends in a
battle between the two clans, but some lucky times it just rolls
over the other clan's shoulders. She's also very protective of
the ones she loves, sometimes to the annoying point. This can
cause a bit of disturbance between them, but in the end it all
works out. Usually she doesn't annoy the other clans on purpose,
but if she ever does, it's usually ThunderClan because of
something in her history.
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History.[b]
Tributarystar was originally born in ThunderClan, but when she
was an apprentice, she fell in love with another apprentice in
RiverClan and became preganant with his kits. When she gave
birth to the kits, ThunderClan cats didn't like that she had
RiverClan kits, so she left the Clan and joined RiverClan. After
that, during a patrol, which her mate was on, they were attacked
by ThunderClan cats and her mate was killed. This made her hate
ThunderClan even more than she already did, and wanted to get
revenge for her mate badly. She soon rose through the ranks of
the clan until she became leader, and is just waiting for the
perfect chance to get her revenge on ThunderClan.
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[b]Role Play sample.
Not my first one...
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#Post#: 72--------------------------------------------------
Re: _______, Leader of RiverClan
DIR By: Wolfatheart
Date: November 23, 2012, 12:51 pm
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Can I use this form for mah cat, too?
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Re: _______, Leader of RiverClan WIP
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 23, 2012, 12:52 pm
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There's a code for the forum at the top of the board. :)
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Re: Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan WIP
DIR By: Wolfatheart
Date: November 23, 2012, 1:08 pm
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Got it, thanks~
#Post#: 658--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan {DONE}
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 24, 2012, 2:16 pm
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BUMP
#Post#: 667--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan {DONE}
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 24, 2012, 2:46 pm
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Hi there, Shannon!
There are a few things you need to correct before I approve you.
-- You use the same descriptive words in you appearance over and
over, which gives it a choppy vibe. Try using some different
adjectives.
-- You also have a few choppy sentences in your personality.
c: Please bump once edited.
#Post#: 671--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan {DONE}
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 24, 2012, 2:56 pm
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Bump
#Post#: 679--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan {DONE}
DIR By: EVERLASTiNG
Date: November 24, 2012, 3:11 pm
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Lovely bio. Approved! :)
#Post#: 683--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tributarystar, Leader of RiverClan {DONE}
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 24, 2012, 3:17 pm
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Thanks!
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