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#Post#: 151--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: Internal Medicine Doctor
Date: January 7, 2014, 6:24 pm
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--- Quote from: Pixel link ---
>
> Well, I dont really want translator status. Ill just be doing
it in a thread over there. I just figured I'd let you know. Im
not confident enough about my translations present them as fact
without being checked. :P
>
--- End Quote ---
That's perfectly fine. The option shall always be open, however.
KaminaSan, our resident translator, is also buying the book, so
I assumed you two could work through the translations together
or at least at the assistance and confirmation of each other.
I'm not knowledgeable in the content character of the language,
however. Feel free to do whatever you want.
#Post#: 152--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: KaminaSan
Date: January 7, 2014, 7:49 pm
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Aww man, I got all excited when I started reading Pixel's post.
I thought the novel was already in.
I looked at some of your translations and you seem to have a
good sense of the language. A little 'word for word' but maybe
that's what we need. You probably have more actual translating
experience than I do, so help would of course be appreciated if
you have time.
Either way, two people with the novel will make this a breeze.
#Post#: 153--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: Pixel
Date: January 7, 2014, 8:19 pm
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Haha, yeah, I've been trying to interpret the sentences in my
own words, but you find yourself writing word for word.
Especially longer sentences. I find myself just trying to get
all of the information in.
When I was translating OTWTAS, I was translating from German,
which is pretty similar to english in its phrasing and sentence
structure, so it was alot easier to rewrite and fix things up.
Im working my way through, fixing things up, after doing my
first pass of the chapters.
#Post#: 155--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: KaminaSan
Date: January 7, 2014, 9:46 pm
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Alright guys, there seems to be a lot of confusion about the
death scene, and I found some more errors upon re-reading so I
am going to translate it, and write the Japanese underneath.
Also as a bonus, the last two sentences in the image on the left
side... I can finally make it out. You guys are gonna hate me
for including it though.
--- Quote ---
>
> T: "You were giggling"
> Y:"Not telllliinnng!"
> T: "Yunaaaa!"
> Tidus said in a pitiful voice! It was funny... and so
endearing that Yuna ate it up.
> T:"Ouch!"
> When she looked, Tidus was holding the back of his head.
> T:"What the..."
> Tidus turned around, surprised.
> What caught his eye was a slowly rolling ball.
> It was the color of tanned leather... about the same size as
one used in blitzball matches.
> Tidus:"A blitzball?!"
> While looking for the owner, Tidus began to walk towards the
ball.
> Yuna watched.
> One Step.-----
> Yuna was surprised by the tears that suddenly began flowing
from her eyes.
> She sunk to the ground, holding herself with both arms, she
realized... she was being overcome with sadness.
> There was a loud sound, and the force of the shock sent her
flying through the air.
> In front of Yuna's eyes, something went flying with great
force; Tidus' head, with the look of surprise still etched onto
it.
> Yuna lost consciousness.
>
> Far left two sentences:
> "Remember him. His name... was Tidus, correct?"
> "An unknown voice called to Yuna"
> ----------------
> T:くすくす笑った
> Y：内緒！
> T:ゆうなあ！
>
ティーダが情けない声を出した。おかしくて、愛しくてたまらない
> T:イッテっー
>
みるとティーダが後頭部を押さえていた
> T:えっー
>
振り返ったティーダが驚く。その視線の先にはゆっくりと転がるボールがあった。
>
なめした革のそのままの色で大きさはブリッツ試合球とほぼ同じだ。
>
T:ブリッツボール？！
>
ティーダは持ち主を探しながらボールに向かって歩き出す
>
後一歩ーーーーーー
>
その様子を見たユウナは自分の目から突然こぼれた涙に驚いた感情が大きく播さぶられて、立っていられない
>
しゃがみ込んで自分の両腕を抱えた時それが耐え難い悲しみだと気がついた。
>
大きな音がして同時に衝撃に吹き飛ばされて宙を舞っていた
>
勢いよく飛んでいったのは驚きの表情が張り付いたティーダの首だった。
--- End Quote ---
Once again:
No 'kicking the ball because they had a fight'
Tidus was hit with a ball, that's why he says ouch.
The tone in which Yuna addresses him is playful and lovey dovey.
NOT cold or extremely standoffish.
Pixel, please look at the Japanese, and tell me if there is
anything you would change.
#Post#: 158--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: catnip
Date: January 7, 2014, 11:28 pm
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Gahhh, THANK YOUU!!! :-*
#Post#: 159--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: CrystalOfLies
Date: January 8, 2014, 3:18 am
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So Tidus didn't act like an idiot and kick a suspicious looking
blitzball? He just acted like the curious person he was?
...Dammit! Now half of the Headless Tidus joke is worthless! But
at the same time... I'm relieved. Thanks, KaminaSan. You made a
girl who has a vomiting bug today feel a little bit better.
#Post#: 161--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: Pixel
Date: January 8, 2014, 9:05 am
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Was looking at this last night, but fell asleep
ティーダが情けない声を出した。おかしくて、愛しくてたまらない
Something like.
Tidus spoke in a pitiful voice. It was funny, and so endearing,
it was irresistable.
I guess it means he couldn't help it.
振り返ったティーダが驚く。その視線の先にはゆっくりと転がるボールがあった。
Tidus looked around in surprise. A ball rolled slowly past his
line of sight.
ティーダは持ち主を探しながらボールに向かって歩き出す
Tidus started walking toward the ball, looking for it's owner.
後一歩ーーーーーー
After one step-------
その様子を見たユウナは自分の目から突然こぼれた涙に驚いた感情が大きく播さぶられて、立っていられない
There's a bit missing at the end here
Yuna was surprised by the tears that suddenly began flowing from
her eyes SOMETHING, and couldn't stand.
しゃがみ込んで自分の両腕を抱えた時それが耐え難い悲しみだと気がついた。
As she crouched on the ground, holding herself with both arms,
she was overcome with unbearable sadness.
#Post#: 162--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: catnip
Date: January 8, 2014, 9:22 am
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HTML http://i.imgur.com/6fGMgjw.gif
#Post#: 163--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: Pixel
Date: January 8, 2014, 12:26 pm
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Who transcribed this? Sorry, I was just checking it, since I was
just translating from the page. Its not complete, it as commas
an word missing, exclamation marks added. Names changed from
Hirigana to Katakana. Im just gonna work from the book when it
comes.
This is
ティーダが、情けない声を出した。おかしくて、愛おしくてたまらない。
Tidus spoke in a pitiful voice. It was funny, and unbearably
adorable.
お was left out of the last part
#Post#: 164--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Novella: Final Fantasy X-2.5 ~Price of Eternity~
DIR By: Mystic Dragon
Date: January 8, 2014, 2:15 pm
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--- Quote from: KaminaSan link ---
>
> Far left two sentences:
> "Remember him. His name... was Tidus, correct?"
> "An unknown voice called to Yuna"
>
--- End Quote ---
At least now we know the first words the mysterious unsent says
to yuna :D
Thanks for the translation KaminaSan
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