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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: fluff_n_stuff
Date: June 6, 2012, 2:17 pm
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Not at all, it's just a way to promote the "Cleveland Rocks"
meme throughout not Spaghettiverse stories. I was pretty sure no
one want puffy griffons in Spagehttiverse anyway.
#Post#: 301--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 6, 2012, 2:19 pm
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Just wanted to confirm. Looks good to me.
#Post#: 302--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 6, 2012, 2:46 pm
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--- Quote from: Mayclore link ---
>
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg292#msg292
date=1339003276]
> Mayclore: The fluffsplosions and the gas explosions throw me
off there. Is it possible to limit to just the gas explosions,
or to make it more clear that the fluffsplosions are
gas-induced, or something? But this is a great way to remind us
of the explosive nature of overfull fluffies and sets up the
moving of the herds.
>
--- End Quote ---
What do you mean, 'throw you off'?
[/quote]
I had a hard time understanding this on my first read through.
I see what you're doing now.
#Post#: 307--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 6, 2012, 11:08 pm
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This Phase 1.1 story is really long, so I'll just link you to
it.
HTML http://www.ponibooru.org/post/view/194934
HTML http://pastebin.com/DTgKk1bB
It's got one really really minor reference. I couldn't find any
other place to put it without it being more overt.
#Post#: 308--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Mayclore
Date: June 7, 2012, 1:12 am
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--- Quote from: Phil Srobeighn link ---
>
> [quote author=Mayclore link=topic=4.msg294#msg294
date=1339003476]
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg292#msg292
date=1339003276]
> Mayclore: The fluffsplosions and the gas explosions throw me
off there. Is it possible to limit to just the gas explosions,
or to make it more clear that the fluffsplosions are
gas-induced, or something? But this is a great way to remind us
of the explosive nature of overfull fluffies and sets up the
moving of the herds.
>
--- End Quote ---
What do you mean, 'throw you off'?
[/quote]
I had a hard time understanding this on my first read through.
I see what you're doing now.
[/quote]
So, all good then? Ugh...I hate posting to Ponibooru,
though...there's a reason I only put stuff on my pastebin/the
fluffy forum.
#Post#: 309--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 7, 2012, 1:26 am
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Very good story, Mayclore. Think your exterminator and my
exterminator might be able to team up during Phase 2?
#Post#: 310--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Mayclore
Date: June 7, 2012, 1:43 am
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--- Quote from: Lord Anubis link ---
>
> Very good story, Mayclore. Think your exterminator and my
exterminator might be able to team up during Phase 2?
>
--- End Quote ---
Oh, that'd be fun.
"Why are you shooting the dams?!"
"To make the other dams explode and spark."
"That's sick!"
"You think I like this job? Besides, making them die is better
than catching on fire."
#Post#: 311--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 7, 2012, 1:52 am
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--- Quote from: Mayclore link ---
>
> Oh, that'd be fun.
>
> "Why are you shooting the dams?!"
> "To make the other dams explode and spark."
> "That's sick!"
> "You think I like this job? Besides, making them die is
better than catching on fire."
>
--- End Quote ---
Think of the buddy cop dynamics!
"What's that stuff you're spraying?"
"It's my own mixture. It knocks them out and stops their heart
so they die painlessly and peacefully."
"Ever tried it on gas-bloated fluffies?"
"Can't say that I have."
>Brief moment of silent eye contact.
"Science?"
"Science."
>One hour later
>Both of them are running like hell from a burning shed.
"Well, there's your answer! Hope you're happy!"
"Don't yell at me, this was your idea!"
>And then they started their own show. One of them got a beret
and a walrus mustache.
#Post#: 312--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 7, 2012, 2:27 am
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--- Quote from: Mayclore link ---
>
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg302#msg302
date=1339012005]
> [quote author=Mayclore link=topic=4.msg294#msg294
date=1339003476]
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg292#msg292
date=1339003276]
> Mayclore: The fluffsplosions and the gas explosions throw me
off there. Is it possible to limit to just the gas explosions,
or to make it more clear that the fluffsplosions are
gas-induced, or something? But this is a great way to remind us
of the explosive nature of overfull fluffies and sets up the
moving of the herds.
>
--- End Quote ---
What do you mean, 'throw you off'?
[/quote]
I had a hard time understanding this on my first read through.
I see what you're doing now.
[/quote]
So, all good then? Ugh...I hate posting to Ponibooru,
though...there's a reason I only put stuff on my pastebin/the
fluffy forum.
[/quote]
Yeah, great story. I like the visual concept.
CROSSOVERS! THERE NEEDS TO BE SO MANY CROSSOVERS!!
#Post#: 313--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Mayclore
Date: June 7, 2012, 2:31 am
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--- Quote from: Lord Anubis link ---
>
> [quote author=Mayclore link=topic=4.msg310#msg310
date=1339051381]
> Oh, that'd be fun.
>
> "Why are you shooting the dams?!"
> "To make the other dams explode and spark."
> "That's sick!"
> "You think I like this job? Besides, making them die is
better than catching on fire."
>
--- End Quote ---
Think of the buddy cop dynamics!
"What's that stuff you're spraying?"
"It's my own mixture. It knocks them out and stops their heart
so they die painlessly and peacefully."
"Ever tried it on gas-bloated fluffies?"
"Can't say that I have."
>Brief moment of silent eye contact.
"Science?"
"Science."
>One hour later
>Both of them are running like hell from a burning shed.
"Well, there's your answer! Hope you're happy!"
"Don't yell at me, this was your idea!"
>And then they started their own show. One of them got a beret
and a walrus mustache.
[/quote]
Oh, what if he were related to Sarah? The whole circle of life
thing. She makes 'em, he ends up having to kill them. It's
like a cottage industry.
--- Quote from: Phil Srobeighn link ---
>
> [quote author=Mayclore link=topic=4.msg308#msg308
date=1339049545]
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg302#msg302
date=1339012005]
> [quote author=Mayclore link=topic=4.msg294#msg294
date=1339003476]
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg292#msg292
date=1339003276]
> Mayclore: The fluffsplosions and the gas explosions throw me
off there. Is it possible to limit to just the gas explosions,
or to make it more clear that the fluffsplosions are
gas-induced, or something? But this is a great way to remind us
of the explosive nature of overfull fluffies and sets up the
moving of the herds.
>
--- End Quote ---
What do you mean, 'throw you off'?
[/quote]
I had a hard time understanding this on my first read through.
I see what you're doing now.
[/quote]
So, all good then? Ugh...I hate posting to Ponibooru,
though...there's a reason I only put stuff on my pastebin/the
fluffy forum.
[/quote]
Yeah, great story. I like the visual concept.
CROSSOVERS! THERE NEEDS TO BE SO MANY CROSSOVERS!!
[/quote]
I'll put it up on the 'Booru in a little bit. How do I text >
image (better than my previous uploads)? I am so bad@Ponibooru.
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