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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Tabula_Rojo
Date: June 4, 2012, 11:24 pm
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--- Quote from: Phil Srobeighn link ---
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> [quote author=Tabula_Rojo link=topic=4.msg220#msg220
date=1338864673]
> Wait Phil, June 29th (or whatever our launch date for phase 2
ends up being) is the day Spaghetti Land opens?
>
--- End Quote ---
This just came up in the sticky too, and I responded there. The
date is changeable, I just thought it would be a nice touch.
[/quote]
well I actually I should ask like, Spaghetti Land isn't open
prior to the feral invasion? and the board guy is setting off
his explosives on opening day?
if this is the case I have to alter that story that still isn't
done slightly
#Post#: 234--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 4, 2012, 11:47 pm
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--- Quote from: Tabula_Rojo link ---
>
> [quote author=Phil Srobeighn link=topic=4.msg223#msg223
date=1338864947]
> [quote author=Tabula_Rojo link=topic=4.msg220#msg220
date=1338864673]
> Wait Phil, June 29th (or whatever our launch date for phase 2
ends up being) is the day Spaghetti Land opens?
>
--- End Quote ---
This just came up in the sticky too, and I responded there. The
date is changeable, I just thought it would be a nice touch.
[/quote]
well I actually I should ask like, Spaghetti Land isn't open
prior to the feral invasion? and the board guy is setting off
his explosives on opening day?
if this is the case I have to alter that story that still isn't
done slightly
[/quote]
This brings up a good point: I guess that it wouldn't be prudent
to open a fluffy-themed park while your city was sufffering from
an influx of ferals. So no, I'll change the story I wrote.
A good idea might be to have the corrupt board member set up
some sort of Feral Adoption Day - Ferals get to come in for
free, the $109 dollar ticket costs as an adoption fee and you
get a shot/care package. The combination of hugboxers who would
pay $109 to adopt something that is litteraly a dime a dozen,
along with a huge amount of ferals wanting free spaghetti, make
an excellent target. At some point in my Drew Carey and his
crowd-control PA system story Drew can advertise for Feral
Adoption Day, advising the herds to go for free spaghetti.
#Post#: 235--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 4, 2012, 11:56 pm
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How about they open their gates, the hugboxers and their owners
have a few hours of blissful fluffy play, and then the invading
herds arrive. They storm the park and the city, demanding the
spaghetti they've been travelling for. The owner would want to
wait until the park had hit critical hugbox before pressing the
button. The fluffy invasion throws a wrench in that, and instead
he decides to wait until the fluffies are filling the park. Then
something or another prevents him from setting the explosives
off himself, and they go off at the finale. Cleveland is in
ruins, but Spaghetti land is pretty much a crater.
#Post#: 238--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 5, 2012, 12:06 am
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The corrupt board member's power to throw the switch, as well as
the guard's ability to guard from incoming ferals, are both
linked in some way to the external power grid.
Which, of course, has just been shut down due to the reaction in
the nuclear plant from the fluffies massing there from the
Northeast.
The humans and fluffies owned by humans are evacuated from the
park in light of the volitile situation at the nuclear plant,
thus making the ferals think they've defeated the meanie munsta
hoomans who wanted all sketties. Cue the celebratory orgy.
#Post#: 240--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 5, 2012, 12:08 am
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You could hear the "eenfs" from across the city.
#Post#: 242--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 5, 2012, 12:10 am
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> >The near deafning "enf enf enf" is enough to finally bring a
smile to your face.
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#Post#: 243--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 5, 2012, 12:12 am
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Too bad absolutely none of those mares will live long enough to
have babies. Spaghetti Land becomes full of slowly inflating
dams, all happy because they think they've reached the Promised
Land.
#Post#: 254--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Giant_Neckbeard
Date: June 5, 2012, 8:18 am
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I have never used Pastebin before, so here is the link.
HTML http://pastebin.com/4FNvQVKF
Tell me what you think. Am I doing it right or wrong?
#Post#: 256--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 5, 2012, 9:39 am
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dude, take that off. People can see it if they know your URL
#Post#: 257--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 5, 2012, 9:40 am
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You can post straight text directly on the board.
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