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#Post#: 717--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 23, 2012, 12:31 pm
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Vanner: excellent story. Fuzzies exterminate fluffies with
brutal efficiency. Your story captures that perfectly
Mayclore: So it's kinda like the Jericho missile from Iron Man?
Amazing story, the acute attention to detail is what really
makes it great. This is why I hope Ginger Fig still wants to be
a part of this. He could draw a fluffy massacre like that with a
lot of pathos.
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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Mayclore
Date: June 23, 2012, 12:40 pm
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--- Quote from: Lord Anubis link ---
>
> Mayclore: So it's kinda like the Jericho missile from Iron
Man? Amazing story, the acute attention to detail is what really
makes it great. This is why I hope Ginger Fig still wants to be
a part of this. He could draw a fluffy massacre like that with a
lot of pathos.
>
--- End Quote ---
Jericho dispenses about three dozen propelled guided
submunitions, if I remember correctly. What the MGM-140 does is
unload a fuckton of these:
HTML http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/8/8b/M77_Cluster_Munition_With_Hand.jpg/640px-M77_Cluster_Munition_With_Hand.jpg
Basically, they're fragmentation grenades. Imagine 950 (per
missile) of those falling down on you and exploding. Jericho
doesn't even come close to that.
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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 23, 2012, 12:51 pm
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Hot damn, I guess we have our optimal method of fluffy
eradication when they're ass-to-face crowded on the streets
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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 23, 2012, 1:22 pm
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Two great stories. Good to have some violence again.
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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Giant_Neckbeard
Date: June 25, 2012, 2:10 am
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Right, as you guys may or may not be aware, my original tower
died in the ass, choking to death on Cat Fluff, so I'm having to
manually pull out what data I can.
This is slowing me down somewhat, as I had work data on there as
well as private data, so it is taking time due to the fact I
have to extract the work data first, for obvious reasons.
Now, excuses aside, in regards to 'Phase 2' (Part 1b) I was
thinking of the "Professional Puppeteers" who pilot the Uni the
Fluffy Unicorn Costume to be doing work on a 'Kids show'
designed for Fluffy Ponies, teaching Fluffies how to be good to
their owners and how to survive in the back-yard, and then get
told somebody has bought the rights to their character out from
under them. They are told that their 'Uni' character now works
for an up and coming themepark in the north....
Obviously no explicit naming of Cleveland or Spaghetti Land, and
I was wondering if it would be too creepy to have Uni become a
'Sex Goddess' to the Fluffy Stallions? I have this mental image
of Feral Herds worshipping her ass, and when the Cleaving of
Cleveland begins, the suit is abandoned and becomes an
'Religious Idol' to the Zombfluffies.
#Post#: 760--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Lord Anubis
Date: June 25, 2012, 2:27 am
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--- Quote from: Giant_Neckbeard link ---
>
> Right, as you guys may or may not be aware, my original tower
died in the ass, choking to death on Cat Fluff, so I'm having to
manually pull out what data I can.
>
> This is slowing me down somewhat, as I had work data on there
as well as private data, so it is taking time due to the fact I
have to extract the work data first, for obvious reasons.
>
> Now, excuses aside, in regards to 'Phase 2' (Part 1b) I was
thinking of the "Professional Puppeteers" who pilot the Uni the
Fluffy Unicorn Costume to be doing work on a 'Kids show'
designed for Fluffy Ponies, teaching Fluffies how to be good to
their owners and how to survive in the back-yard, and then get
told somebody has bought the rights to their character out from
under them. They are told that their 'Uni' character now works
for an up and coming themepark in the north....
>
> Obviously no explicit naming of Cleveland or Spaghetti Land,
and I was wondering if it would be too creepy to have Uni become
a 'Sex Goddess' to the Fluffy Stallions? I have this mental
image of Feral Herds worshipping her ass, and when the Cleaving
of Cleveland begins, the suit is abandoned and becomes an
'Religious Idol' to the Zombfluffies.
>
--- End Quote ---
The fluffy show idea is wonderful, and Uni being an object of
desire for stallions makes it even better. "Arnold, stop humping
the TV screen!" "But Uni pwetty fwuffy, wan gif speshaw hugs!"
It doesn't even need to be zombfluffs, just regular herds
fighting over her.
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Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Giant_Neckbeard
Date: June 25, 2012, 4:32 am
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And best of all, as a Latex Suit, 'she' will remain relatively
clean and spotless no matter what.....
Sorry, just a mental image of the empty suit becoming the
'Birthing Cave' of the Feral Herds, a place of safety to have
the Foals, and the absolute slaughter as the Herds go to war
over who claims the Goddess for themselves.
Basically the show I had in mind is a quick 10-minute show put
in between children's cartoons, about this Unicorn, Uni, who
lives in a 'Garden', which is a scaled-up set. Co-Stars are
'Daddy' (two giant boots) 'Baww' (giant ball) and 'Munsta'
(two-man Cat Suit), and Uni plays with her friends (un-named
one-man suits) in the Garden and shows them how to eat the
grass, make poopies where they are supposed to and how to stay
away from the Munsta.
>"So .... why is it you feel compelled to grab my bum like
that?" You ask your 'co-star', Sarah, grinning around your
cigarette.
>"Well, you've got to hold onto the best things in life,
'Tasha." Sarah grins back.
>Both of you are wearing day-glo pink bicycle shorts and
tank-tops, only clothing small enough and airy enough to wear
for long under the Latex Suit without you both passing out from
heat-stroke.
>"Oi, oi, enough of that crap, we're filming in ten!" The
director shouts. God, the breaks never seem to last long enough
on this cheap-ass show.
>Back into the suit...yep, Sarah's fondling you again. God
dammit, not in the suit!
>Today's script is ... Uni and Friends play with the Ball.
>Oh God.
>Trundle out onto the set, peering out through the small visor
under 'Uni's' head.
>Giant two-man Fluffy Pony Suit, made of latex rubber and
covered in silky-soft stain-resistant silk 'fluff'. Pure
Snow-White Fluff and a multi-coloured mane of Green, Pink and
Blue. No Wings, for Copyright Reasons, of course.
>Original version had to be scrapped after the 'Trained' Fluffy
Ponies got into it.
>Mares and Foals wriggling through the fluff, telling 'Uni' how
much they loved her. That wasn't the bad part ....
>The Stallions just went completely bat-shit insane. Humping
Uni's backside, her belly, her face, every part that they could
get to.
>Created so much static electricity they almost reset
themselves. Was hilarious to hear the Cleaner describe Fluffies
humping furiously then squeaking in alarm as little arcs of
static electricity jumped out and 'zapped' between Fluffy
Ponies.
>Their lustful rendition of "EEEENF EEEENF *squeak* EEEEENF!"
was enough to make the show filming next door complain to the
producers.
>Kinda hard to do a somber moment when your actors cannot stop
bursting into laughter at two dozen little voices giving vent to
their lust and desire a few meters away.
>Had to use Humans in Furry Suits after that. Mares and Foals
were alright, but the damn Stallions had figured out that
'Uni's' Fluff was the softest of them all, and even if they
couldn't find the 'Naughty Place', it still felt good.
>Next 'Show' you were trying to shoot, live no less, eight of
the damn things climbed up your legs and clung to Uni's
backside, thrusting away wildly and proclaiming 'Softest Pwot
Evah!'
>Ad-libbed that they were naughty Fluffies, and made you upset,
and should not jump Mares just because the Stallions felt
Naughty.
>Minor hiccup, censors let it slide as a 'educational' video.
>Poor Sarah was traumatized, however. Damn things were hard up
against the Latex 'body' of the suit and pounding furiously
against Sarah's back and thighs.
>"Hewwo fwiends!" You say loudly, manipulating the levers in
Uni's 'chest' to make her mouth move in time to your voice. "How
awe yuu?"
>Lift a leg and 'wave' it at the Camera.
>Wait ten seconds for the 'audience' to wave back.
>"Uni happy to see yuu aww again. Today, Uni an' Fwiends gun be
pwayin' wit Baww! Yuu aww haf yuu Bawws?" You ask as the other
actors, on all fours in their 'Fluffy Suits', shuffle in,
pushing the 'Baww' with them.
>Actually, it's a guy in a suit rigged with lights inside a
giant inflatable ball with a foot-wide 'clear strip' for him to
see out of. 'Baww' is the friend of the show's Fluffies.
>Another tragedy there. Poor guy could barely see out in the
first version of the 'Baww', ran over two batches of Foals by
accident once. Thankfully You and Sarah had goofed and gotten
between him and the camera, so that the gory stains weren't
visible.
>Man goes through a bottle of Jim after every show after
that....
>"Hewwo Uni, we wuv yuu!" The actors in the smaller Fluffy Suits
all say loudly, and the guy in the ball jumps up and down to
make the ball 'bounce' excitedly.
>"An' Uni wuv aww her fwiends!" You respond, trying to not
squeak as Sarah's hands tease you. "Is Baww weady to pway too?"
>The 'Baww' bounces up and down vigorously.
>Survey says that 'Baww' is the second favourite character on
your show.
>"Den aww Fwuffies pway!" You 'shout' happily.
>Both you and Sarah lift your legs quickly, clumsily immitating
'trotting on the spot'.
>Makes your suit's fluff shake about wildly, but apparently it
looks good.
>"Awighty den! Fwuffies, push Baww about! Be guud to each otha!"
You say as the other Actors start to 'push' the giant Ball
around the set.
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>"You being a good boy, Frank?" Your owner asks from the
White-Tiled-Nummies-Place.
>"Yes, Mumma, Fwank bein' guud!" You shout back. Don't want her
coming over here....Naughty Place is so hot right now. Mumma
doesn't like that. Says you are a 'Dirty Fluffy'.
>You are a Boy Fluffy with pale brown fluff and black mane and
tail.
>And you're watching your favourite show in the world.
>Uni the Unicorn. Uni the Magical. Uni the most Beautiful Fluffy
in the World!
>You went and got your Ball when she asked.
>Wave at her when she waves at you.
>You're Uni's friend, she always says hello to you. She said she
loves you again today....
>Oh ..... Uni. She makes you feel so warm and fuzzy inside.
>"......Den aww fwuffies pway!" Uni says, in her beautiful
voice, and then does the Dance.
>"Oooooooooh....." You groan, watching her Fluff shake around
like that, shining under the light, swaying back and forth .....
>No Mare can compare to Uni ....
>All the other Stallions at the Play-Ground agree.
>When you go over to Dangle's place, Dangle's Daddy lets you all
watch a moving picture of Uni getting Special Hugged by many
Stallions....
>Makes you all angry .... Uni is your (special) Friend! How dare
they give her Special Hugs!
>Then Uni says she's sad, she didn't want to have Special Hugs
with Naughty Stallions.
>Maybe ..... she wanted to have Special Hugs with Stallions she
loved?
>Stallions like ... you? She says she loves you, every day!
>"Mmmph." You grunt, laying down flat on the couch and watching
as Uni and her Friends push the Baww around in their Garden.
>The way her legs move ...
>Your naughty place has been hot for some time now.
>The way her Fluff shines .....
>Start to give Special Hugs to the couch. Mumma doesn't like
that, but you just ...
>The soft, gentle eyes ........
>.... can't stop yourself!
>"Uni ... UNI! Fwank wuv yuu .... wan gif Special Huggies." You
whimper softly, eyes glued to the television, and then it
happens!
>"Uni wuv to pway wit her fwieeeeeeeeeeeeegh!" Uni squeals as
her legs get tangled, and she falls onto her face ... and her
hind-quarters lift into the air.
>There's a tearing noise ... and then .... NAUGHTY PLACE!
>Uni's Naughty Place is right there! You can see it, a strip of
hot pink colour suddenly showing between her thick, soft white
Fluff.
>You stop humping the couch. Your whole body tenses.
>Uni .... you .... you......
>"FWANK HAF SPECSHAW HUGGIES!" You squeal in delight, propelling
yourself off the couch with a burst of lust-powered strength,
landing with a grunt on the coffee table then launching yourself
forwards again, slapping onto the Television and clutching
desperately with your legs.
>Uni must want it too! Fluff is all tingly, sticking to the
screen.
>"EENF EEENF EEEENF!" You groan loudly, thrusting for all you're
worth, but you can't seem to find her Naughty Place!
>"Frank, what in the ... FRANK! No! Bad Fluffy! Don't do that to
the Television!" Your Owner shrieks, coming running from the
kitchen.
>"Nuuu, Uni, Fwank hewe, Fwank hewe to gif Specshaw Huggies!"
You protest loudly as your owner tries to pull you off the
screen.
>"Frank, you're being bad, stop it!" Your Owner shrieks, her
fingers digging deep into your fluff, scratching your skin.
>"Nuuuu, Uni wuv Fwank, Fwank wuv Uni, nu take Fwank away fwom
Fwank's Wuv!" You sob as you are finally prised off the
television .... and placed into your naughty room.
>"Bad Fluffy, Frank, You are a Bad Fluffy!" Your Owner shouts,
slamming the door.
>You sob and cry.
>So close ... you were sure, just a few moments more, you would
have found Uni's Special Place and been one with her.
>Made her the happiest Fluffy Mare in the world.
>Sob and sniffle and drag yourself over to your Uni the Unicorn
Doll, and mount it, finding the silky hole that your Owner found
so hilarious when she bought it for you.
>'Lyra Doll' she called it.
>Silly Owner, Uni isn't called Lyra!
>Have the Good Feels, but it's not enough.
>It's not the real Uni ....
>Hug the Uni Doll to your chest and cry.
>Why? Why can't your Owner understand?
>You love Uni....
#Post#: 764--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Tabula_Rojo
Date: June 25, 2012, 6:22 am
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--- Quote from: Giant_Neckbeard link ---
>
> Right, as you guys may or may not be aware, my original tower
died in the ass, choking to death on Cat Fluff, so I'm having to
manually pull out what data I can.
>
> This is slowing me down somewhat, as I had work data on there
as well as private data, so it is taking time due to the fact I
have to extract the work data first, for obvious reasons.
>
> Now, excuses aside, in regards to 'Phase 2' (Part 1b) I was
thinking of the "Professional Puppeteers" who pilot the Uni the
Fluffy Unicorn Costume to be doing work on a 'Kids show'
designed for Fluffy Ponies, teaching Fluffies how to be good to
their owners and how to survive in the back-yard, and then get
told somebody has bought the rights to their character out from
under them. They are told that their 'Uni' character now works
for an up and coming themepark in the north....
>
> Obviously no explicit naming of Cleveland or Spaghetti Land,
and I was wondering if it would be too creepy to have Uni become
a 'Sex Goddess' to the Fluffy Stallions? I have this mental
image of Feral Herds worshipping her ass, and when the Cleaving
of Cleveland begins, the suit is abandoned and becomes an
'Religious Idol' to the Zombfluffies.
>
--- End Quote ---
Nah that is all fucking brilliant
#Post#: 765--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: Giant_Neckbeard
Date: June 25, 2012, 6:53 am
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Any obvious flaws with the snippets I posted? When I can get a
decent keyboard hooked up to the Laptop I will post out the
entire story, but anything obvious I'm missing or doing wrong
here?
#Post#: 766--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story Bits
DIR By: PhilSrobeighn
Date: June 25, 2012, 7:19 am
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Epic work so far, Neckbeard. Subtle kick to "the themepark up
North" and we have ourselves a damn good Phase 1b story.
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