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#Post#: 995--------------------------------------------------
Writers: To-Do List
By: Lord Anubis Date: June 30, 2012, 12:21 am
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The artists have one, it's only fair.
If you're looking for stuff to write about that hasn't been
covered enough yet, take something from the list. As has been
said before, it's totally okay for 2 people to write about the
same story.
[list type=decimal]
[li]Astroturf Playfield - It's a great idea that nobody's
written a story directly about yet.[/li]
[li]Abusers - we know they'll stay behind after evac, but
nobody's really written about them yet [/li]
[li]Nuclear Power Plant - it's what creates the zomfluffs. We
need stories of the fluffy's occupation of the plant.
#OccupyPerry[/li]
[li]Herd fights - they'll be battling for every inch of the city
they can get, especially Spaghetti Land [/li]
[li]Cream
HTML http://fallofcleveland.createaforum.com/general-discussion/story-bits/?message=1388<br
/>- Neckbeard is asking for assistance in tying up a loose-end
character; the subject is a fluffy who makes a heroic
sacrifice.[/li]
[li]Spaghetti Land Rides - not the games, the rides[/li]
[li]Sapghetti Tower - it's the central attraction of the park,
we need at least mentions about how fluffies stuff their fat
faces with overpriced spaghetti that just gets forced out of
them at the rides' manual evacuation booths.[/li]
[li]The first herds to arrive - we have a lot of before, a lot
of after, but not a lot of stories about what happens during the
first wave of fluffies hitting the city. [/li]
[li]The Journey - these herds are travelling across the country.
There's got to be some good material there.[/li]
[li]Sewer Fluffies - they're going to be overloading the sewer
with the smell of their feces, which is pretty flammable.[/li]
[/list]
Submit ideas here, put written stories in the story thread.
#Post#: 998--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: Giant_Neckbeard Date: June 30, 2012, 1:30 am
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Fluffy Bumper Cars would be hilarious. Just slightly faster than
a fluffy pony, with massive inflated-air padding, that move
about either at the Fluffy Pony's 'direction' (Ie they turn the
wheel, the car moves in that direction, slowly) or on a
automated path (if there aren't enough Fluffies), and the
ride-operator sticks Uni, Eddy and Pip dolls in the seats so
Fluffies can 'play' with their friends.
Since it has the potential to be automated, could be an
excellent prop for the Fluffy Fights as the Herds strive to take
the ruins of Spaghetti Land for their own, something goes wrong,
and the bumper cars 'smush' Fluffies in the ride itself, and
possibly get knocked out of the ring and rumble about for a few
minutes on their own power, crushing and rolling over Fluffy
Ponies.
ANOTHER thought, the 'ring the bell, get a prize' game strikes
me as something Feral Herds might use to punish Fluffies by
making them hug the bell. Either the fluffy lets go and is
launched into the air to splatter on the ground, of the little
fuzz-buckets cling desperately in fear and smush against the
'bell'.
Fluffy Para-Para-Dance? Fluffy Ponies jumping up and down on
single coloured light platforms to the music .... as the
Invasion winds down, the Ferals that have banded their Herds
together to dominate Spaghetti Land have pulled Uni's empty suit
to the 'platform' and dance on the pads to make her talk to them
again, shouting how much they love her.
Those watching are screaming abuse, that the Fluffies dancing
don't love Uni enough, she's still not talking to them.
Fluffy Ponies break their legs jumping so much, Foals being
forced to bounce and dance by the Smarty Friends, even those who
are just a few hours old, Fluffy Mummas start pooping babies out
as they or their attendents make them 'bounce' on the coloured
pads, Stallions are jumping up and down until they die of
exhaustion, pleading for Uni to love them once again.
Astro-Turf would be a lot of fun for the Tame Fluffies, but it
would become a sort of 'Bad Pwace' for the Ferals, whom are used
to eating grass and can't eat the Astro-Turf. Also it would
shred their little tongues something fierce.
Two options:
1) It gets set on fire and creates a tar-pit like mess that
Fluffy Ponies get stuck in.
2) it survives, but being so rough, the Feral Herds use it like
a giant cheese-grater to ritually sacrifice their enemies upon.
I know next to nothing about nuclear plants, so I am assuming
that, as the Invasion of Cleveland gets worse, a hundred
thousand fluffies all descend upon the Nuclear Plant as their
Smarty friends declare it to be a 'Wamm Safe Pwace' and slowly
trickle into the plant via openings in the fence and faulty
ventilation covers.
Plant Workers are bemused when they hear Fluffies tromping
through the vent pipes "Where Fwuffies? Dawk? DAWK!" and "Nuuu,
huufs, be quiet, nu noisy!"
Then absolute pant-shitting terror as the Fluffies cannot be
found until morning, where they have taken shelter near the
'Wammest Pwaces', ie under the cooling tanks, near the heat
exchange units ... and promptly combust.
Fat-Fires melt wiring and cook sensors, and the Plant starts to
malfunction. In desperation to avoid a nuclear explosion on
american soil, the plant shuts down immediately, cutting power
to Cleveland, and venting all the pressure they can ... with
Cleveland already starting to be evacuated, the radioactive
steam and smoke from the plant begins to settle onto Cleveland
and the nearby Lake .... and Fluffies start to change in ways
Hasbro never intended.
When I can figure out which roads are likely to be the 'safest'
routes to Cleveland, I'll start on the whole '40 years in the
desert' trip to Cleveland, but right now I can't seem to get
Google maps to work for me. Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah I spent
2k on this tower! WORK!
Sewer Fluffies would be much like Nuclear Plant Fluffies, trying
to find a safe place where they can rest and not get hurt by the
other 'Bad Fluffies' and then the 'White Munsta-Fwuffies'.
And then they can't get out .... starvation and despair as they
can hear the deafening cheers of delight coming from Spaghetti
Land, and the Herds pile and pile up in the sewers, with only
the 'magical tummeh skettis' to survive on, the exploded
intestines filled with grass and spaghetti of the previous
'victims' of the Sewers, plus trash. A few days of that, and the
Fluffies have gone completely bat-shit insane, hunting each
other down in cannibalistic orgies of despair, self-loathing and
near-religious devotion to Spaghetti Land.
Sewer Fluffies pushing the corpses of their own into walls to
block off the smaller sewers, and the corpses of those they have
eaten into the sewer itself, causing the blockages that will
drive the city workers underground to 'fix' and create the
Methane Overload that the Fluffy Pony Special Hugs Orgy, and the
resulting storm of static electricity, will ignite and set
Cleveland to explode.
First Herds I am assuming White-Horn, Bowser and Peach and other
'just a few miles away' Feral Herds will get to, plus the Tame
Fluffies. So we're looking around a half-half mix of Tame and
Ferals on the First Day.
Then on the second day, another 50-60 thousand Ferals show up,
and the Ferals from the First Day are quickly shuffled out ...
then spend the day milling around on the shores of Lake Eyrie,
wondering What the Fluff just happened. This can then bleed into
the Sewer/Nuclear Plant Fluffies as the Feral Herds start
fighting in earnest over who will stay and wait for Spaghetti
Land to open to them again, and who should go. Losers naturally
get driven off, Nuclear Plant Fluffies take a few days to reach
their destination, but the lion's share of the losers escape
into the sewer-pipes that lead under Spaghetti Land and
Cleveland itself, an illegal pipe that empties right out into
Lake Eyrie.
The same illegal pipe that our Mystery Abuser/Cleaver of
Cleveland used to access the sewers with his russian-bought
Briefcase Bombs to secrete at key places under the city he hates
so much.
*waggles eyebrows*
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Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: Lord Anubis Date: June 30, 2012, 1:42 am
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Good ideas all around.
I think the idea is that a few herds are there before even
Rogue, Bowser, and Mercury, and later most of the herds that
have been following the 3 arrive and have their Fluffy Moot.
Then Rogue, Bowser, and some other strong herds do recon in the
city as other fluffy herds show up and don't wait. They just
pile into the city without any sense of caution or restraint. In
the ensuing chaos, Bowser and Rogue's herd find themselves
separated. I'm assuming Bowser is a rural feral, so he'd just
get increasingly lost, but Rogue is an urban feral and so better
understands the new city, and begins making his way back. Then
the Fuzzies attack.
#Post#: 1040--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: fluff_n_stuff Date: July 1, 2012, 11:05 am
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[quote author=Lord Anubis link=topic=18.msg995#msg995
date=1341033712]
The artists have one, it's only fair.
If you're looking for stuff to write about that hasn't been
covered enough yet, take something from the list. As has been
said before, it's totally okay for 2 people to write about the
same story.
[list type=decimal]
[li]Spaghetti Land Rides - not the games, the rides[/li]
[li]Sapghetti Tower - it's the central attraction of the park,
we need at least mentions about how fluffies stuff their fat
faces with overpriced spaghetti that just gets forced out of
them at the rides' manual evacuation booths.[/li]
[li]Astroturf Playfield - It's a great idea that nobody's
actually written about yet.[/li]
[li]The first herds to arrive - we have a lot of before, a lot
of after, but not a lot of stories about what happens during the
first wave of fluffies hitting the city. [/li]
[li]Abusers - we know they'll stay behind after evac, but
nobody's really written about them yet [/li]
[li]Nuclear Power Plant - it's what creates the zomfluffs. We
need stories of the fluffy's occupation of the plant.
#OccupyPerry[/li]
[li]The Journey - these herds are travelling across the country.
There's got to be some good material there.[/li]
[li]Herd fights - they'll be battling for every inch of the city
they can get, especially Spaghetti Land [/li]
[li]Sewer Fluffies - they're going to be overloading the sewer
with the smell of their feces, which is pretty flammable.[/li]
[/list]
Submit ideas here, put written stories in the story thread.
[/quote]
I know a challenge when I see one. By the end of this week, I
will have a story for everyone of these topics.
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Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 1, 2012, 12:56 pm
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That's what I like to hear!
#Post#: 1046--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 1, 2012, 4:30 pm
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[quote author=fluff_n_stuff link=topic=18.msg1040#msg1040
date=1341158751]
I know a challenge when I see one. By the end of this week, I
will have a story for everyone of these topics.
[/quote]
Aw yeah. Love ya, Thor.
#Post#: 1421--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 10, 2012, 7:30 pm
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I edited the original post to add in a request by Neckbeard. I
got some details in the Story Bits thread but I'm not sure if I
will do it yet.
#Post#: 1669--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 16, 2012, 2:07 pm
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Added number 1 and reordered a bit.
#Post#: 1671--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 16, 2012, 3:36 pm
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I plan to write more about Marigold. Her hotel could be having
power fluctuations.
#Post#: 1866--------------------------------------------------
Re: Writers: To-Do List
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 23, 2012, 1:20 pm
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Neckbeard, did I read your request correctly to understand that
Bowser dies and a new Bowser is named leader of the Bowser herd,
and that is who Cream is saving?
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