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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: coalheart Date: July 9, 2012, 4:14 pm
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[quote author=Lord Anubis link=topic=16.msg1300#msg1300
date=1341854496]
First fuzzy pony story is uploaded. Vanner, upload your stories
for today whenever you want.
Coal, upload your fuzzy pony image.
Remember to put them on Derpibooru as well. If you can't or
don't want to, let me know and I'll do it.
[/quote]
HTML http://coalheartguy.tumblr.com/post/26855049021/a-part-of-it-is-explained-here-lordanubis-wrote
HTML http://coalheartguy.tumblr.com/post/26855049021/a-part-of-it-is-explained-here-lordanubis-wrote
As for the derpobooru thing I prefer someone else takes care of
it, my schedule is better than a month ago but it's still a
pretty tight oe
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: coalheart Date: July 9, 2012, 4:32 pm
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I reworked it a bit, if it's ok to launch I'll even draw Cyan
for you ^^
>You own a blue fluffy unicorn with blond mane named Cyan
>You discovered you don't need to put her in the safety room if
you just leave the TV on
>Do so and go to fix some spaghetti for your little fluffy
friend
>"Be a good fluffy while daddy makes nummies ok?" you ask her
having no answer as usual when commercials are on
>While getting the pasta ready you think you heard a loud gasp
comming from the next room but only Cyan is there, must have
been your imagination...
>When you come back with a large plate of spaghetti with extra
sauce she's staring at you visibly excited
>At first you worry wondering if she has seen some news about
fluffy abuse, last time it happened she could not talk for
almost two days
>Leave the plate on her eating spot and before you can get up
she grabs you by your shirt with a strenght you can't believe
possible in small and soft cyan and she stares you into the eyes
>"WAN' GO CWEVEWAND"
>"B...but" you stutter
>"NAO"
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 9, 2012, 4:42 pm
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If you want to post it, go ahead.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 9, 2012, 4:56 pm
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This is way too funny a scene to pass up, but, if I may, I would
suggest the following grammar corrections and line breaks in
maroon at minimum, with the alternate lines in green being
suggestions that I would like you to consider but don't want you
to lose your own voice/style:
>You own a blue fluffy unicorn with blond mane named Cyan
>You discovered you don't need to put her in the safety room if
you just leave the TV on
>Do so and go to fix some spaghetti for your little fluffy
friend
>You are doing so now so you can go fix some spaghetti for your
fluffy friend
>"Be a good fluffy while daddy makes nummies, ok?" you ask her
>She has/Getting no answer as usual when commercials are on
>As usual, you get no answer when commercials are on
>While getting the pasta ready you think you hear a loud gasp
comming from the next room, but only Cyan is there.
>While getting the pasta ready you hear something like a gasp
from the next room
>You check, but Cyan is still alone, still staring at the TV
>Must have been your imagination...
>When you come back with a large plate of spaghetti with extra
sauce she's staring at you, visibly excited
>You come back into the room with a large plate of spaghetti and
extra sauce
>Cyan is staring at you, visibly excited
>At first you worry, wondering if she has seen some news about
fluffy abuse
>Last time it happened, she could not talk for almost two days
>Leave the plate on her eating spot, but before you can get up
she grabs you by your shirt with a strenght you can't believe
possible in small and soft Cyan, and stares into your eyes
>You drop the plate on her eating spot
>Before you can stand up, she grabs you by the shirt with a
strength you can't believe possible coming from small, soft Cyan
>She stares you down
>"WAN' GO CWEVEWAND"
>"B...but" you stutter
>"NAO"
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: coalheart Date: July 9, 2012, 5:14 pm
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Ok, corrected :)
Posting as is now. Get Cyan in pics as well to upload where they
should be ;)
>You own a blue fluffy unicorn with blond mane named Cyan
>You discovered you don't need to put her in the safety room if
you just leave the TV on
>Do so and go to fix some spaghetti for your little fluffy
friend
>"Be a good fluffy while daddy makes nummies, ok?" you ask her
>As usual, you get no answer when commercials are on
>While getting the pasta ready you hear something like a gasp
from the next room
>You check, but Cyan is still alone, still staring at the TV
>Must have been your imagination...
>You come back into the room with a large plate of spaghetti and
extra sauce
>Cyan is staring at you, visibly excited
>At first you worry, wondering if she has seen some news about
fluffy abuse
>Last time it happened, she could not talk for almost two days
>You drop the plate on her eating spot
>Before you can stand up, she grabs you by the shirt with a
strength you can't believe possible coming from small, soft Cyan
>She stares you down
>"WAN' GO CWEVEWAND"
>"B...but" you stutter
>"NAO"
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 9, 2012, 5:18 pm
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Much smoother. You've got my green light.
I've said it before, but I'll say it again: I am immensely
impressed at the extent this group has expanded their talents
during this collaboration.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 9, 2012, 5:23 pm
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All hyperbole aside, that is hands down the cutest fluffy I have
ever seen.
#Post#: 1343--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 9, 2012, 6:23 pm
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Gonna upload Cyan's story on Derpibooru and Fluffybooru
tomorrow, Coal, since Tuesday was a bit sparse. I'm also writing
up another story to fit in this week.
#Post#: 1356--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 9, 2012, 8:57 pm
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Tabula, if you can get your fuzzy story done by tonight, I'll
have it penciled in for tomorrow. No rush, though. Quality
first.
#Post#: 1372--------------------------------------------------
Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Giant_Neckbeard Date: July 10, 2012, 5:39 am
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I am 'polishing' the second part of the Uni story now, and once
you guys give it the Green Light, will post. Gaaaaaaaaaah, this
being 13 hours ahead sucks!
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