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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 7, 2012, 12:49 am
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Good idea. As far as I can tell, the story's good to go. Just
gotta figure out when to post it. Considering it takes place
only a month before Spaghetti Land's opening, it's probably
going to be later in the week. You down with that?
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Tabula_Rojo Date: July 7, 2012, 2:03 am
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[quote author=Lord Anubis link=topic=16.msg1198#msg1198
date=1341640149]
Good idea. As far as I can tell, the story's good to go. Just
gotta figure out when to post it. Considering it takes place
only a month before Spaghetti Land's opening, it's probably
going to be later in the week. You down with that?
[/quote]
sounds good, posted about getting an associated image done in
the artist to do thread, assuming it get done by friday I'll
have it be like in the story like off to the side or at the
bottom of the image
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 7, 2012, 8:12 am
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Great story, Tabula. L.A. already green lighted it, but I
wanted to add my approval as I really enjoyed it.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: fluff_n_stuff Date: July 7, 2012, 9:03 am
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These are the two angles of Spaghetti Land I've got ready. First
is the story of Mercury, the other is the Spaghetti Land
commercial.
The Tale of Mercury
>You are Mercury, fastest fluffy pegasus in the world.
>You can outrun any fluffy, no matter how fast they think they
are.
>Your mommy was fast too, but not fast enough to outrun that
stupid human munster that kicked her when you left your hidey
hole.
>Since then, you’ve done nothing but run.
>Got to keep running. Got to stay ahead of the munsters.
>Tonight, you’re running down the street with fresh nummies in
your teeth, when you see something from the corner of your eye.
>It’s a light box in some human’s house and it’s showing
mountains of the fabled Spaghetti.
>This is worth stopping for.
>As the Light box goes on and on, other fluffies start gathering
around you, plopping down on their fuzzy rumps to listen to the
light box talk.
>”Spaghetti land is the premier destination for all you fluffy
lovers out there!” says the human voice.
>”Litterboxes every fifteen feet!” he says. “Every ride fluffy
safe! All the spaghetti your happy fluffy ponies could ever
want!”
>There there’s a blue earth fluffy on the light box. “Fwuffy wuv
sketti wand!” he says. “Bwing you fwuffies to Sketti wand!
>”I say dat wite?” he asks, before the camera cuts back to a
mountain of spaghetti.
>”Come visit Spaghetti Land TODAY!”
>You look to the fluffies who are positively bouncing off the
sidewalk with delight.
>”Dere sketti wand?” “Dis weal?” “Wan Sketti wand!” “Wheh Sketti
Wand?”
>You feel as if it was your destiny to see this, and you run up
on top of a stoop.
>”Wisten up fuwffies!” you say. “My name Mecuwy! I nawt smawty
fwiend, but know dat Sketti wand is weal!”
>”Gweat Sketti Gawd choosed us to heaw dis!” you say. “We teww
aww fwuffies evey where!”
>”Gweat sketti gawd?” “Wat Gawd?” “Pway?” "Hungy!"
>You stamp a hoof to the ground to regain their attention.
>”Go fwiends!” you say. “Wun an teww aww fwuffies bout Sketti
Wand! Fwuffies be safe dere! Fwuffies no hide fwom hooman
munsters dere!”
>”What the hell is all that noise?” says a human voice from the
house. “Are those fucking fluffies? Where’s my shovel?”
>You jump down from the stairs, and start running. Running to
tell every fluffy.
>”Wun!” you yell back at them. “Wun an teww aww you fwiends!
Sketti Wand is weal!”
>The herd scatters as the human comes out of the house as they
run to tell other fluffies the good news.
>Now your running has a purpose. You’ll visit every herd of
fluffies and tell them the legend of Spaghetti Land.
>You may not be the smartest fluffy in the world, and your
memory may not be great, but you’ll never forget this.
>You are the fastest fluffy alive, fast enough to tell every
fluffy about the Land of Hugs and Spaghettis.
>You are Mercury.
>And you will lead fluffies to Spaghetti Land if it's the last
thing you do.
Happiness, thy name is Fluffy Pony
>You are a normal guy, watching TV with your fluffy, Jay-Bee
>Jay-Bee ate some Draino crystals last week and has been acting
weird ever since.
>He’s listless, tired all the time, and never wants to play.
>It’s quite sad, really. He was always such happy fluffy, and
you wish you could make him happy again.
>You’re about to turn off the TV when an avert catches your eye.
>It’s a green, red and yellow flag with a plate of spaghetti in
the middle.
>Jay Bee immediately takes notice of the swelling music in the
background and the cheerful voices of the fluffies singing.
>Well that’s good. That’s the most you’ve seen him move since
the accident.
>Gween is fow da gwassies
>Dat fow eat an pway!
>Wed is fow the wuv we gif
>to fwuffies evwy day!
>But yellow fow dah sketti
>What dis pwas do had!
>Oh pwease take us to Sketti Wand
>Pwomise no be bad!
>Jay-Bee is wagging his flowing tail at a mile a minute at the
enchanting chorus of fluffies.
>You didn’t even know his tail could to that.
>Pwease take us to da Sketti Wand!
>Take to da Sketti Wand!
>We wuv our mums an daddies
>Dat take us to the Skeeti Wand!
>The song ends, and the announcers voice follows.
>”That’s right, Spaghetti Land! The safest, most wonderful place
a fluffy could ever go!”
>The commercial pans to shots of happy owners and fluffies
walking around an amusement park
>As the announcer talks, the camera switches to show of whatever
he’s talking about
>”Toys!” Earth fluffy carrying a big stuffed hammer.
>”Rides!” Pegasus fluffies cheering on a tiny Ferris wheel.
>”Games a fluffy can win!” A unicorn knocking down “Munster”
teeth with a Nerf gun
>”And most importantly, SPAGHETTI!”
>The camera pulls back to reveal a truly impressive fiberglass
mountain of spaghetti.
>”So come join us in Spaghetti Land, here in the heart of
Cleveland, Ohio.”
>The camera cuts back to a messy fluffy in a pile of spaghetti.
>”You no wegwet it!”
>Jay Bee just stares at the TV even after you shut it off.
>You’re so pleased to see Jay Bee happy again that you come to a
snap decision.
>”We’re going to Spaghetti Land!” you say in your best happy
voice.
>Jay Bee does not move from in front of the television.
>”Do you want to go?” you ask.
>Nothing
>You tap Jay Bee on the shoulder. He tips over onto his side,
stiff as a board.
>Stone dead,
>But plastered on his face is the biggest grin and widest eyes
you’ve ever seen on a fluffy.
>Seems like he died from sheer joy of Spaghetti Land
>Well, at least he was happy again.
>Plus now you don’t have to go to Cleveland.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 7, 2012, 12:05 pm
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Those two are good to go. Mercury will probably be one of the
first, if not the very first, to be posted this week. JB, you
might want to post a little later in the week just to space out
your postings.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: PhilSrobeighn Date: July 7, 2012, 1:21 pm
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Agreed. Get Mercury out there fast.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: coalheart Date: July 7, 2012, 1:42 pm
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So far I have Bowser and Peach, Fuzzy pony, All day Spaghetti
Pass mare and Buddy the chubby unicorn.
When you need them posted say so and I'll post them on my tumblr
OOC blog with the text that goes with the pics crediting and all
that.
Just let me know.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 7, 2012, 1:49 pm
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[quote author=coalheart link=topic=16.msg1214#msg1214
date=1341686527]
So far I have Bowser and Peach, Fuzzy pony, All day Spaghetti
Pass mare and Buddy the chubby unicorn.
When you need them posted say so and I'll post them on my tumblr
OOC blog with the text that goes with the pics crediting and all
that.
Just let me know.
[/quote]
We'll be adding the pictures to the stories. If you see the
stories with your pictures posted, that'll be your green light.
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: coalheart Date: July 7, 2012, 1:51 pm
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Roger that
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Re: Story and Art Launchpad
By: Lord Anubis Date: July 7, 2012, 3:13 pm
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I know we have more stories than this. Come on, everyone, get to
posting!
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