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1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: Malenki_Mitchi
Date: October 27, 2015, 10:00 pm
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This is what I have so far in my project. Does anyone know I
could add the moonlight beam effect coming in from the window?
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 27, 2015, 10:33 pm
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Some of the walls feel a bit empty, i would fix that by playing
around with the camera angle a bit.
also, increase the shadow quality, they look very pixely and low
quality.
Your models are very well done, and the lighting coming from the
phone and computer look very nice.
also, play around a little more with the position of the objects
on the table.
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: Saitama90
Date: October 27, 2015, 10:39 pm
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All your objects are placed very nicely. I like the light coming
off the laptop screen, and the laptop itself is modeled
perfectly. I would add some more background details to the room
wall. Keep up the good work.
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: Lee Belcher
Date: October 27, 2015, 10:40 pm
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I like the progress put into this picture and I feel like if the
screen wasn't so bright and had some sort of web page up it
would be even better.
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: MsGrantham
Date: October 28, 2015, 12:11 am
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One way you may be able to create moonbeams is by using a
spotlight outside the window. Aim it toward the window and turn
on the Light Fog in the attribute editor. The foggy light
should stream into the room through the window. Love the plate
of cookies! :D
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: NissaT
Date: October 28, 2015, 11:17 am
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I really like this scene! I think the objects look very nice and
my favorite part is the glow coming from the phone. I think the
cookies look very cute and I love the idea of that sort of
hanging fish tank. It's very cool!!
Something I've noticed is the shadows on the floor. It looks
like the shadows are coming from the legs of the table or chair
but the shadows aren't connecting with the objects. I would
double check that your objects are actually touching the floor
and not floating.
And I believe someone has mentioned something about the light on
the screen of the laptop, but I think it's sort of blinding. I
agree that dimming it a bit and adding a webpage to the screen
would work much nicer!
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: Raz
Date: October 28, 2015, 2:14 pm
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The laptop's screen is really bright. I would lower the
brightness enough to display a webpage of some kind, and maybe
have some light coming from the laptop screen interacting with
the other objects. Also, some of the shadows are kind of wonky.
Everything else is great.
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Re: 1st Year Still Life WIP
DIR By: Xendria101
Date: October 28, 2015, 3:19 pm
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Like
-Them Macaroons look good ta eat....yum!
-I like the coloring effects of the electronics
Dislike
-Inconsistencies of shadows. Some of them look great,
but some shadows in the back look pixelicated.
-The computer screen is a bit bright, and needs to have some
sort on the moniter
through out the lighting.
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