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       HauntedHallway.mp4
   DIR By: TheGenericDerek
       Date: November 9, 2016, 3:21 pm
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       Go ham with the critques!
       я хочу
       умереть я
       душа
       дробильно
       депрессии
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       Re: HauntedHallway.mp4
   DIR By: JakeTheGreat
       Date: November 10, 2016, 1:24 pm
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       The image is very hard to discern and make sense of. While you
       could show it off as an abstract piece with great success, from
       a technical standpoint, the image suffers heavily from a lack of
       lighting anywhere but the ring of light that's obstructed in the
       center by the lampshade. I'm also confused as to where the light
       source would come from in-world, as it implies there's a
       spotlight shining from above and outside of the lamp. The
       textures are also very bland, although that is more of a
       personal complaint than a professional one, so take it with a
       grain of salt. Adding some ambient lighting or changing it from
       bright white to create some mood or drama would really add a lot
       to the image.
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