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Haunted Hallway Project
DIR By: Sarah Nicolas
Date: November 4, 2016, 4:16 pm
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Re: Haunted Hallway Project
DIR By: MSchmidt
Date: November 4, 2016, 6:40 pm
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SN, good job with your mood lighting and texture choices! While
the emotion given off in the darkness of the piece is effective,
some more defining lights and photoshop adjustment would help
give a more believable sense of lighting and presence. Shadows
don't tend to spread out equally across a surface, but instead
catch and vary across the imperfect notches and faces. Its not
that the fact that its not realistic that's innately bad, but
its that the rules of the image are not defined in an
understandable way, and that its hard to get a sense of how this
scene could behave past the still image. Taking care to
acknowledge this makes an composition much more pleasant and
interesting to look at. If you can make an image that a person
would want to stare at for hours, you should attempt to do so.
The texture quality is fantastic enough as it is to invite this
feeling, so the lighting should behave the same way.
BTW, do you mind telling me where you got these textures or
maybe even made them? They blend really well together and have
an awesome pattern, and I would love to know how you managed to
achieve this.
-Micah Schmidt
Varga 1st Semester PM Class
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Re: Haunted Hallway Project
DIR By: gayfriend™
Date: November 7, 2016, 1:30 pm
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Really nice texturing! all i can say is to add a little more
lighting to really focus on one area or to bring attention to
one part of your hallway, overall really good job!
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Re: Haunted Hallway Project
DIR By: Star Guardian
Date: November 7, 2016, 1:40 pm
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The faded color scheme is really good in this piece. However, I
think the planks being revealed on the left could use a little
more texture. Otherwise, nice job!
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