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Ash's Still Life
DIR By: amberash
Date: November 4, 2016, 2:13 pm
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Re: Ash's Still Life
DIR By: MSchmidt
Date: November 4, 2016, 7:15 pm
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Ash, very nice image. Forgive me for commenting a project my
class hasn't gotten to yet. :/
If I may ask you politely, what were the references that you
used for the objects? I am unsure of the style you are going
for, but perhaps some further consideration for the texture and
design of the objects might add variety and help what vibe you
want. If your objective is to make a nice looking still-life,
then some more complicated details such as those from your
references on the objects and maybe even some more noticeably
designed lighting may help. If you are going for a simple, but
charming feel, then maybe some simpler forms of the objects and
subtler details that contribute to cutesy, pleasant objects may
work. As it is right now, it looks like a pretty good student
piece, but it could state a lot more using the design concepts
we learned in class. Great job with the modeling and color
choices and I hope to see more of your work!
-Micah Schmidt
Varga 1st Semester PM Class
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Re: Ash's Still Life
DIR By: Stayd
Date: November 6, 2016, 9:10 pm
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I really like the rounded forms of your objects, everything has
a soft, quaint look to it. Your color choice is also very nice,
the pastel blue and cream contrast really well with the dark
reds in the background.
I will say that the overall image is rather simple, but I think
increasing the detail of your objects would take away from the
bubbly aesthetic you already have going for you; I would instead
recommend playing around with the lighting to see what you can
come up with, in terms of accentuating your shapes and colors.
"Interesting lighting" is kind of a nebulous concept, but
there's really no wrong answers in the endeavor of it. You just
sort of play it by ear and see what you like. But be
experimental, and you're bound to stumble on something great.
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Re: Ash's Still Life
DIR By: 3DForumAKG
Date: November 7, 2016, 12:56 pm
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I believe you have a nice setup, although I do notice that the
edges are a bit too sharp, so maybe soften them up a bit. Other
than that, good start ;)
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Re: Ash's Still Life
DIR By: Raymond C.
Date: November 7, 2016, 1:10 pm
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I'm not sure, but are the three different light sources coming
from bot top corners and the bottom center? If so, why is their
only one set of shadows?
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